User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's FanFiction Reviews 9: The Worst FanFiction Ever!

Not a joke. Well yes I know people each have their own opinions for what they think is the worst, but what I have just read was so...bad. No bad is not the right word to describe it. This fanfiction is a combination of awful, poor-writing, and an inexcuseable writing based on the Loud House.

Now I know you were all expecting me to do the No Such Luck Alternate Endings, but we all know that would work as a finale to my reviews for the season. This fanfiction has to be talked about now and only now before it is quickly forgotten to rot away in the thousands of fanfictions.

And of course the fanfiction that I have gave the title as the ABSOLUTE WORST, is none other then the fanfiction titled, "Her baby brother," written by Codymitchell1 on fanfiction.net for 10 chapters from January 19th-28th of this year.

Now I am assured at least one of you has read this fanfictions or at least enough to know how it could deserve the title of, "Worst FanFiction Ever." In case you don't know why it would deserve the title of the worse, well then I have to grudgingly ask you to go read it with the following link. However, I say grudgingly because this fanfiction will make you feel like you wasted your time and definitely creeped out, but in case you truly want to see the whole fanfiction before I review it, here is a link for you to read it before seeing the review, though I still warn you in doing so and just remember to come back when you are done.

Her baby brother Chapter 1, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction

Now that you are done with the story, or skipped it since you took my advice despite the fact you could be waiting for me to get done with the review first before you go on to the story. And in the case of that then just skip the link cause after you see this review you would not want to see it.

Now for those who have no idea why this story could be the worst since you skipped the link, "or click the link and read the story, but in that case how could you think this story could in any possible way be good," let me tell you now that you are about to find out why.

Now this author's previous stories were not that good. They had a poor style of writing, very short, and not memorable. But at least, at the VERY LEAST, the story could have been at least tolerable. This story? HECK NO! He flopped this story more then Bobbybooboobear's, "The Boy Who Cried Idiot!" That is a fact to know in the process of this review. The fact it is worst then, "The Boy Who Cried Idiot," should tell you right now and there you are in for some crazy stuff. If you are looking for a rant, then you my friends are about to get one!

So let's officially began the review of the worst Loud House fanfiction ever.

The Story
There is honestly barely a story. This might as well just be the best example of a fanfiction with almost no story. Sadly, there is a plot to this sad excuse of a story. What does the story say as its plot? (Sorry in advance for the background color of the text I copied and pasted from the actual story)

(Lincoln tells Lori a secret that changes both of them for the better. ps. You can guess but i guarantee you'll be wrong)

Ok we already know that the writer of this is being a straight up "king" to us since he is somewhat making fun of the fact that what Lincoln's secret is going to be is in no way what it actually is. It's just too out of line for his character.

The actual story starts out with the whole family except for Lori and Lincoln going on vacation to the beach for a week since it is summer break.

Excuse me...?

Now the biggest issue so far is why on earth did the family leave Lori and Lincoln for a week? Why didn't they just take them on vacation with them? This story is already forced due to the extreme lack of detail into why this happened.

Also before someone calls me a hypocrite since BFoE and That Engineer, "plus a critic on Fanfiction.net," told me that I needed to put details into Naked Lincoln 2, let me stop you right there. I will admit that they were right in their statements, but however they all only criticized the way that Lincoln got naked which on my part was flawed and how everyone screamed at Lincoln instead of Lincoln, "which honestly that isn't a mistake I just made it so nobody laughed cause I didn't want everyone reading to put hate on everyone who laughed." They didn't critize anything else and BFoE said the story was just, "eh." Plus that was 4 months ago and I made a better story, "A New-Dist Friend," but that only has 1 comment so I don't think many people noticed, and in case you didn't go check it out at least once.

Anyways, that night Lori sees something Lincoln is reading that makes him happy and dreads to having a conversation with him about it.

The first chapter was short as heck and ends with another statement from the author saying if he wonders is we think he is a terrible writer. What the heck don't try to make us think that despite us knowing this story was already pretty bad to begin with!

The next chapter is Lori confronting Lincoln about what happened last night by trying to have small-talk with hima nd discovers him and Ronnie Anne broke up with Lori comforting him. This was the closest thing to decent in this fanfiction. Lincoln then decides to finally get to the main plot based on the description for the story and tells Lori that he wants to tell her a secret with her though just between them. She agrees and after some awful hype to the secret, we finally hear it. What could this secret be that will bring them closer? It's this...

"have you ever heard of an adult baby?"

...what? No what? Excuse me writer but are you kidding me!? Why would Lincoln want to tell Lori about adult babies. The author then tells us he knows he lost a lot of readers but it is ok and then he smiles. Why? That's not good. It's like the big secret is that Lincoln is an adult baby despite he was already shown before not to be like one. But that's EXACTY what the author was going for.

Well in the next chapter, "because these 10 chapters are so short they are around the size of my entire fanfiction Chipped Off Loud," it's confirmed and Lincoln reveals Ronnie Anne left him because she thought he was a freak. No writer that would make Lincoln have a serious condition or a fetish. Adult Baby Syndrome is used as a fetish or could even be an actual mental disease from what I believe.

And guess what Lori thinks? Really guess what? Does she try to help him by calling a doctor, or at least tell the family, and no this is fine to tell the family since this is screwed up as it is since I saw Lincoln act fine already so this is forced as heck. NOPE! She allows Lincoln to act like a baby and becomes Lincoln's......mommy. Oh my god...why? Lincoln then immediately regresses to a baby with apparently the mind of a 2-month old despite being able to speak like a 2-year old.

After that from Chapters 4-8...it gets very uncomfortable with Lori shopping for baby things, Lincoln wetting and also POOPING himself, Lori being incredibly comfortable and enjoying this lifestyle, and even going as far as to....breast-feeding him. GOOD GOD WHY!?

In Chapter 9 the family comes home and you would hope, YOU WOULD PRAY that the family would get Lincoln and Lori both some serious medical help. But...this author doesn't give a dang as we already know. Lori shows Lincoln to the family as her baby sleeping and wearing diapers and guess what the family does. They all, "AWWW," like a family who lost sense of reality and Rita even wanting to hold Lincoln. REALLY!? Lori and Lincoln also refer to the family as grandparents and aunts which is very uncomfortable.

And in the final chapter the family is fine by living like this from now on with Leni even baby-sitting Lincoln and the story ending with Lori continuing to be Lincoln's mom despite still technically being his sister.

That's it.

(0/10. This person forced everything with no detail whatsoever and ends with the most uncomfortable ending I have ever seen. Call out, "The Boy Who Cried Idiot," all you want but at least Bobby had a reason. He was inspired by SML and he actually spaced out his sentences instead of clustering them up together with at least a select few good moments. Heck he made a good alternate ending so he learned people. He LEARNED! This author on the other hand? He knew what he did, and he didn't care. The story bombed!)

The Characters
Really? There is only the Loud Family and that's fine for a story. But this guy kept 11/13 of them out of the entire story until the last 2 chapters and that is disgraceful. They left due to contrived reasons and didn't care what happened when they came back!

Ronnie Anne is only mentioned and she did nothing but call Lincoln a freak. But do you blame her with this writer's contrived reasoning!? Someone reviewed the story saying they want Ronnie Anne as an adult baby. That better not happen so help me! We don't need another godawful story!

This writer only wants you to care for Lori and Lincoln. And we do at first only a tiny bit interested and tolerable enough. But beginning with Chapter 3. HECK NO! If you like what happened after that I want to see your argument. How can you argue for a contrived baby-fetish Lincoln and a Psycopathic-motherly Lori!? Really if you think that I would like to know!

(No excuse for such godawful characters! These characters are too OOC to be compared to the characters they were based off. Heck these ARE NOT the same characters! These are the author's toys! 0/10!)

What is Missing?
Everything. I don't understand how someone can be this forgetful! This fanfiction doesn't feel like the Loud House at all. It feels like a joke to be honest. But I know, I KNOW, this writer didn't make it as a joke. He made it very clear and understandable. How the story should've ended was the family getting Lori and Lincoln getting medical/physical help from pscycologists! But NOOO! The author had to end it will his true vision despite him probably knowing a lot of people would hate him.

(We all know the score. 0/10. This story is truly a title worthy being considered the worst!)

Final Thoughts
Screw this story. And I pray to God it won't get a sequel. That would honestly suck. However, you want to know what's just as horrible? Practically all the reviews for this poorly written, bad punctuation, short, forgettable, hateful, and unexcuseable example of being considered a story actually mostly had good reviews! What the heck? How could stories like mine get worst reviews then this one. It just blows my mind! The people who reviewed the story either had to be this guy's friends or they liked the fetish without seeing how messed up this story is.

This story in my opinion deserves the title of being considered the worst Loud House FanFiction ever and I hope people like MrTyeDye and AustinDR give this story its just-deserve as a way you should NEVER make a Loud House story and I hope this story will be considered as one of the worst FanFictions based on a cartoon to ever be made!

Story: 0/10

Characters: 0/10

What is Missing: 0/10

Final Rating: 0/10

Well I hope you all enjoyed this edition of Lucas's FanFiction Reviews and I hope to see you in the season finale where I tackle the No Such Luck alternate endings. Goodbye!