Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31647719-20171129024154/@comment-32202721-20171130000610

Sure, I'd be willing to proofread your stuff. In the meantime, here are a few general pointers:

A good way to gauge if a character is acting OOC is to ask yourself, "Would [insert character name here] do this?" Ask yourself if the character is acting in the manner you'd normally expect them to.

If the answer is "no" then the next question is as follows: "Is there an adequate reason why the character is acting that way?" Characters aren't static, after all. Extenuating circumstances can make them behave in ways they don't normally. There's a difference between a character acting OOC and a character acting justifiably OOC.

OOC: Lynn just brushes Lincoln off when he offers to shoot some hoops with her.

Justifiably OOC: Lynn just brushes Lincoln off when he offers to shoot some hoops with her, because her team just suffered a humiliating loss and she doesn't want to think about anything basketball-related.

As for the other thing, what exactly do you mean when you say you don't want the conflicts to be one-sided?