User blog comment:MrTyeDye/What's Up, Y'all?/@comment-4618045-20170604220959/@comment-4618045-20170605215733

Thanks!

I've read some of your work as well and I am quite impressed. I must commend you for three stories in particular I have seen.

"Mall Rats" is an extended look at Leni and Lincoln's relationship. Through cute and heartwarming interactions, we see Lincoln learn just how kind, sociable, and multi-skilled Leni truly is. We see how much of an impact Leni has on the lives of the regulars at the mall while Lincoln garners a new level of respect for her big sister.

Also, "On Our Backs" is a cute one shot that gives Luan a chance to shine. Usually it's Luna that takes the lead at promoting Lincoln's happiness, so it's nice to see that his other sisters are willing to give him a cheer up. Plus the different signs are cute and are perfect descriptions of each of their characters. And I think it's an important lesson for Lincoln to learn: people are great at viewing the traits of others but cannot truly or clearly see that of the one that matters most, themselves. Well done.

Finally, I was blown away by "Sour Spot". Most fix fics center around a small number of episodes (No Such Luck, Brawl in the Family), so it's quite refreshing to see one for an episode that isn't discussed very often. Needless to say, you have a powerful vision from this episode and you used it to craft a well-written, creative one shot. Great job!

These three stories are all great demonstration of your writing. I hope that you'll keep up the great work