User blog comment:Weavillain/Fanfiction Advice: I Need Help Writing Lucy Loud/@comment-32202721-20180318211032

Oh, hey, thanks for the shoutout, Aartistboy!

For writing Lucy's dialogue, I have a couple of pointers:

1. Use exclamation points sparingly. Lucy almost never raises her voice unless she's under a great deal of stress.

2. Lucy tends to speak in short, direct sentences. For example, here's a line from Back in Black:

"Thought you might want a clean shirt. Just to be clear, it's my brother's."

Whereas someone like, for example, Luna, would say it like this:

"Sorry about the mess, dude! Here's a clean shirt for you. Had to borrow one of my bro's 'cause I didn't think that one of mine would fit you."