User blog comment:Dragonzako/Fanfic: Two Holes, One Stroke/@comment-32173189-20180602180712

Sorry for reading this a bit late, but you did a good job for your first try. You did well portraying Lori and Lynn and I liked the referee and how he went from not caring to actually taking the tournament seriously. Also some of Lori's flashbacks to previous tournaments she competed in and how she lost (especially nailing a referee with a club by accident) does seem like something that could happen in the show. So keep up the good work!