Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-28872366-20160929020800/@comment-24200891-20160929041416

In my HW stories Lola, Lincoln and Luan met their demise. When I was writting the stories I relieved myself remembering they don't happen for real because the story tellers are alive and well. I tried to reduce blood and gory details.

If you don't want too dark then try to reduce scary details and give the chosen main character scary end but the least painful. Bad ends are part of scaring the audience in scary story telling contests. To me it won't be too dark.

I will read Gone Twins Gone and leave comment.

Now I have some questions. How would you find such concept that Linc has fun with Luna and Lucy feels jealous because she also wants to have Linc as fun-giving big sibling? We mostly see Lucy as sitting alone and reading and writting her poems but I think she gets lonely sometimes.