User blog comment:LongNick20/Fanfiction - Nick Meets The Loud Family/@comment-30498740-20180819021208

Meh story. I mean problem is that it’s like the other “OC/self insert meets Loud kids” and there’s nothing to differentiate it from the others ones except your name. I get you worked hard on this, but my suggestion is to make a more imaginative or different idea on meeting them.