User blog:1jeffyfan/WHAT AM I DOING WRONG!!!

(I look throgh the comments for my first fanfic and people say it's not good)

Me: Not good? not good. Not good?! it's my first fanfic i'm trying my best here guys. WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME?! I (stammering) wh-wh-What is wrong with it? giuheshrghersgiuhesrihguhes Is that nonsense good is it? (screaming so loud) NOT GOOD!!! Oh i guess i Have to act good on fanfics yay yay (high voice) Yay i love fanfic's that are good. How about we talk about good stuff? uh video games Yay thats not terrible yay i love video games do you? Uh Pizza yay thats so yummy (normal voice) C'mon guys Lola's big spill what is wrong with it? Do you hate it because it's a ripoff of an sml video. Did Logan see this and said "Hey guess what Brody makes awful fanfics because he is stealing my ideas" Is it because the sisters got angry at Lincoln Oh ok so i guess no more fanfic where the sisiters hurt Lincoln actully i find the april fools episodes Bad now. What do you want, please message me and say "Brody this is what you're doing wrong and this is we want you to do right" if you want me to leave then tell me i'll make original ideas that we'll take me a whole year to finish. Anything to make you like my fanfics.