User blog comment:The Twelvth Loud/Fanfiction 4 - Lincoln's 14th Birthday/@comment-33694397-20190128194542

So if Lincoln is now fourteen, that would mean at least three years have passed. So that would make Lori either ninteen or twenty. So why is she still living with them; shouldn't she be going to college in the city? While I do think she would come to visit her brother on his birthday, you should mention that so it would fit in with the setting you made.

Also, is Lily going to show up, or is this fanfic finished?