User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - lost on the open ocean/@comment-24669562-20160715175216/@comment-24200891-20160715205438

Boy, this is a wild zone, survival of the fittest is the only law here. The siblings also ate the eggs, you didn't expect them to eat seaweed, did you? Octopus tastes like a bitter sponge. At least octopus doesn't have bones. Do you know how annoying and hurting are the tiny fish bones?

They all are grounded because they all made their parents worry. The parents didn't watch carefully who exacly caused this and it didn't matter to them. Loud House episodes always have bitter sweat endings. My previous fanfic also had such ending. I can edit their penalty if it bothers you.

Can you edit posted fics on fanfiction.net? I check if in my fanfics are some mistakes or something requires explanations. I edited my previous fanfic.

Wasn't Lincoln too useless in this fanfic? I considered adding his feeling that he's useless compare to his sisters but if he tried he would make bad situation worse. I don't like when this happens. My favorite moment is Luna comforting lamenting Lincoln, it's so heartwarming. But doesn't the kiss make it too sweet? Would this be out of Luna's character?