Thread:DPSII/@comment-26521507-20171027111427/@comment-30158554-20180310160430

Tell me if you think this would be a funny running gag in my gang story, it's a bit of adult humor like The Simpsons and Family. A man keeps getting into bad luck and/or injured (similar to Hans Moleman) such as Axe accidentally crushing him with a big rock while the man is driving his car. While watching Lynn play baseball, the guy is sitting at the very top and gets hit by a baseball and falls off. Also when Axe's buds play basketball with Lynn and her friends at an outdoor basketball court, one of them throws a basketball at the guy who is birdwatching from a tree and he falls out. Third is when one of them tries to throw a molotov cocktail at Mr. Grouse for his rude behavior but is stopped by Axe and he tells him to get inside and he replies "Whatever" and throws the bottle away and offscreen, the bottle breaks and then the man appears on fire running and screaming like crazy.