Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-1650307-20180205064148

I would like to give you some pointers on your first video. I made a similar reply to your original "I Did It!" thread but I am doing the same thing here so you would absolutely get it.

Pretty good overall, but I would suggest working on your vocal performance. Maybe it's your accent or drawl or something but your speaking voice is a little garbled and slurry and hard to understand at times. I would suggest talking more plainly as that could get you some Internet mockery.

Also about seven-eighths of the way through your video, the audio from the episode got really loud and it hurt my ears. I would suggest fixing that. Also your final summation I could not hear at all because the music drowned out your voice.

Other than that, pretty good for a first attempt. I am really impressed. I also have some videos on another website that I made talking about Loud House episodes if you want to check them out.

https://www.vidlii.com/watch?v=GAzup0VYNoI

https://www.vidlii.com/watch?v=O4sPi_dnknR 