User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Frigid Fever/@comment-24669562-20160920000257

Good story. This almost should be an actual episode. Poor Linc getting sick. Cannot believe Leni intentionally got herself sick too but I can almost understand why she did it. I have a very sick mother and my health has been getting crazy too so I can empathize with her a little more, and she can understand me too.

Lincoln why on earth did you tell Lynn to drink the cocoa? Did you not know she would take that seriously?

The stress Lori was under, she has to been having to take care of not one but two sick siblings.

When I read Lincoln had a fever, I thought he should have gone to the hospital, I'm glad he didn't because that would have been too drastic. I thought that way because when I was 3 years old, I was very sick and my temperature was high and I had to go to the hospital. It turned out I had pnemonia (sorry for the misspell) and it possibly almost killed me! Well, hopefully Lincoln didn't have it as bad as I did.

I think this is one of the few times I agree with Lucy, I mean I don't agree with everything she did and she's still not one of my favorite characters but she was right in some of this. Lola was wrong to do what she did in the first place and she really needs to control her temper. I don't care if she's a beauty queen, but I do care if she's nice or mean. But it was nice that she turned herself around in the end.

I do wonder if Lincoln and Leni were able to go to the bathroom (don't answer that unless you want to)

Sorry it took so long to read this. This fanfic could use some spelling and grammatical improvements (for example: it's "sweet" not "sweat", "sweat is when you feel liquid developing on your body. "Sweet" refers to sugary food, and people who are nice. (Anyone reading this, please help me out. Thank you) But good story.