User blog comment:AndrewBrauer/Re-Written Episode: Making the Case/@comment-24200891-20170718063118

I brought myself to read it. It's more an expansion than an alternate version. Most this story happens after the actual episode. It reminded my my Melancholinc. I like the soup thinking Lincoln is a loser because it presented Linc's insecurity very well. The idea with comic book contest was simply brilliant. This makes the story much better than the actual episode. Still the scene of the sisters slaming doors was even sadder. I think I endured it because I watched mtc few times and got used to. However the joke of them still being angry was cruel.