Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-33811096-20180525154841/@comment-33811096-20180607130150

MrTyeDye wrote: Thanks for checking out my latest fanfic!

I'd like to reassure you that I'm not turning into 8ACM. "Lincoln is Dumb" is a parody of the fanfics that vilify the sisters and expect us to sympathize with Lincoln when he throws a big, meaningless tantrum. One thing a lot of these stories have in common is a tendency to vilify Lola and put her through massive amounts of unwarranted punishment, which is precisely what I was satirizing with the scene at the end of the first chapter. Okay, but why the toadstool would you make Lola starve? She doesn't deserve to be punished; Lori does, since she provoked Lincoln, not Lola. In the third chapter, could you have the parents remove Lola's punishment please?