User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Loud Lost Memory/@comment-6062841-20161114072830

Good plot, but Leni is like a mouthpiece, and is WAY too smart and aware of the situation. She's supposed to be the bubbly, dumb character. You should have made Lori the main focus. She's older, so she has more memories of taking care of Lincoln, she's smarter, she's already portrayed as a mouthpiece in the show, and it would have been nice to see her good side again as she defended Lincoln's original personality.