User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Vince's Journey P3/@comment-31358352-20180218005348

Hello there, James Dean. I just thought I'd let you know you're doing great with Vince's Journey and it's going swell with Part 3 so far. But I put down that you should use an evil twin version of Bunpuku when you get to helping Shukaku and Gaara in Part 3 or Part 4 during the Chunin Exam Finals and the invasion. But dealing with it early on is good so no harm done. And I'm guessing that you used an alternate version to make things work with the evil spirit latched to Shukaku scenario. All things considered, nice job with this and for the record, you and I both know that Bunpuku is good in the canon series and the second person to see Shukaku as something other than a weapon and monster. Kinda like the father of the Tailed Beasts and the philosopher of Ninshu: Hagaromo Otsutsuki aka the Sage of the Six Paths. Anyway, taking time out of this and onto other matters, would you consider asking two people I know in the fanfic business to consider letting you use their OCs in your future stories since I believe they deserve to be friends you, me, and the rest of the Loud-Knudson family. That said, I'm thinking that you should politely ask Thomperfan and AndrewBrauer if they can lend you their OCs to use in your upcoming stories after Vince's Journey is finished. I just think since you are bringing me in on the fun, how about asking Thomperfan if he could join in and have a blast engaging in the everyday adventures of the Loud House. Plus, even though you and I know that he's got it bad for Leni, I'm sure that he's fine with Leni being with Ed in your stories since this is what you do, not how he does it in his stories. If so, then I'm sure they is no harm done with what you are doing. In this case, maybe if you could ask him to put Nolan Darden in your future chapters, maybe you could at least pair him up with Dawn since she's similar to Leni in plenty of aspects. But you will need to clarify with him first and see how he thinks on this before you do include him and make Nolan and Dawn a couple. But if you ask me, I think you could be doing Dawn some good and giving her a boyfriend and a friend to boot that will love her for being herself and can help mend her broken heart done to her by Team Rocket after her friends were killed. If so, maybe you could set up Nolan with some powers of his own like everyone else did and have him join you, Varie, me, Dawn, and anyone else that wants to go to the Pokemon universe, via the simulator, to get payback against Team Rocket and save another version of Ash and his friends (depends on which arc from the Pokemon anime you will do) from meeting the same incident the Ash and Brock from Dawn's universe suffered at the hands of those fools. Just consider it and think it over for a little while after you get done with Vince Journey. Then there's the OCs belonging to AndrewBrauer who go by the names of Sophia (the black brunette with some of her hair in a bun), Maria (the brown haired girl with tan skin), and Zoe (the blonde with a red bow on her hair) respectively. They were created by AndrewBrauer for a story Andrew did last year that debuted them with help from YoshiRocker13. They became friends with Luna during the story and in a sequel done by Yoshi, they became close friends of Lincoln and spent the day hanging out, seizing the day, and getting to know him. They also appeared in another story called Mr. Mature by Muppetshot (who has a few good stories he did but he mostly does his stories centered around Lincoln's friendship with his childhood toy, BunBun). These are some good stories so I recommend seeking these for some reading if you have the time. You won't regret it, believe me. Ask him and Yoshi if you can use them, too, since they deserve some time to shine and they could be good friends with Luna, Sam, Lincoln, you, me and the rest of our friends and Lincoln's family. Just consider it like with my request about Thomperfan and his OC, Nolan. Take your time with this and consider it before asking them. But if you want to not include them and leave it at that and drop it, that's fine since I was throwing some ideas around that could work with your story. No harm, no foul. Just passing some time here and thought they could work in your story, especially Thomperfan due to him helping get you the motivation to do your Loud House series featuring you. Anyway, I thought I'd toss some ideas that were in my head in the air, see if they get caught by you, and if you could do this one I came up with. With that out of the way, hope you do more of Part 3 tonight and I hope you have a good weekend. Happy President's Day, James!