User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Breakdown on the Beach/@comment-26302585-20180113002858

This... this right here, is awesome. I never would've expected you to write one of these fics, and I have to say, you did a great job. Though I would expect nothing less from you my good friend.

I do have one thing to say. Now, maybe I'm just sensitive, but I didn't Rita's "joke" was funny. In fact, I don't think it's even a joke. I mean, who in their right mind tells their kids they sold their furniture, and after locking them out of the house, no less? That's not funny. I do have a sense of humor, but I think there's a limit. If I was Lincoln, I would've said this to Rita. I also think Lincoln should've asked Lisa how she fell for the bad luck lie, despite being the smart one and not wanting to believe Lucy's fortunes were true during their trip at that park.

But enough about that, this is one of the best NSL fics ever made.