Thread:AnimationFan15/@comment-27264989-20170309181658/@comment-24364245-20170425230848

Your most recent addition to No Such Luck:

"with Rita revealing she have sold all of Lincoln's furniture"

The word "have" makes this sentence feel broken. The more correct word is "has".

There are also times where you forget an apostrope "s", like you say "much to Lincoln shock" instead of "much to Lincoln's shock". When you write your text, look over it make sure you avoid missing something minor like this.