Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-30953185-20171028213414/@comment-30953185-20171028234504

Here's how I would re-write it.

SpongeBob's friends would still be mean to him, but in this order (Squidward, Mr. Krabs, Sandy, Patrick and Gary), then it would go the same as the original episode, but when SpongeBob finds himself in that other town, he DOESN'T lose his memory and ecides to say, because he remembers how his friends treated him. Meanwhile in Bikini Bottom, Patrick and Sandy feel bad about how they treated SpongeBob and go to his house, find the note, and go to show this to Mr. Krabs and Squidward. Then we show the main cast regreting and showing legit concern for what they've done. Patrick and Sandy feel the most guilty, Mr. Krabs doesn't regret driving SpongeBob away, just because he makes him money, and Squidward tries to act like he doesn't miss SpongeBob, but deep down, he really does. So then Patrick and Sandy decide to go find him, Mr. Krabs decides to tag along too, Gary is also coming, and Squidward agrees to come along, but says he's not gonna be happy about it. So then we cut to SpongeBob, who's made it in the new town, he has a new job and he's made a couple of friends. He sorta misses the gang, but he still remembers how mean they were to him. Later SpongeBob's old friends find him and beg him to come back, but SpongeBob is still angry at them, and rejects them. Then Squidward does something really surprising and admits that he likes SpongeBob (but not in a romantic way.) SpongeBob realizes that his friends do really care about him and miss him and decides to go back to Bikini Bottom. He says goodbye to his new friends and the gang heads back. WHen they get back to the Krusty Krab. The 6 main protagonists have a very touching exchange, they have a nice hug and the episode ends.

So what do you think?