User blog:CartoonFan14/Ways Out on a Limo could've been better

Well, I'm a man of my word, if you read my review, I said I knew of two ways this episode couldve turned out better, one of them changes the plot, the other keeps the plot in tact, just does it differently. Lets start with the one that changes the plot.

Way 1: The Plot Changer
So, I did applaud Lori for letting Lincoln have the limo to himself, but what would happen if she never said that?

The way I envision it is Lincoln wants to got to a certain place, but one of his sisters asks him if they can go to a place they'd like to go, and Lincoln accepts, saying he'll have time to go where he wants to later. Said sister spends a lot of time at said place, and another sister asks Lincoln to take her someplace, not wanting to seem like he favors one sister over another, he reluctantly accepts, and the cycle continues, with each sister spending more time at said place than the one before her. Finally, all the girls are satisfied, and Lincoln tells Kirby to go to the place he wants to. Unfortunately, Kirby informs Lincoln his time is up, and he can only give them a ride home. The girls head in happy, but realize Lincoln never got to go to his place. The girls feel guilty, and try to make it up to him. The next morning Linc wakes up to the sound of a limo horn. Lincoln looks outside to see Kirby and the sisters outside, and the girls explain they felt bad about him not being able to go to his favorite places, and they pulled a few strings to get him a limo for a second day, which they will spend together doing things he wants to do. Touched, he races outside to thank his sisters, and they all get in the limo to go out for another day of fun.

Way 2
Like I said, I really disliked Tetherby, so I would stop at the part when he got the free flippy, and start re-writing from there.

Throughout his ride, Lincoln is treated exceptionally well, being treated to free things, given liberties such as being able to cut in lines in stores, and even DairyLand, and have people essentially bending over backwards for him, Lincoln goes home feeling satisfied, and goes to bed.

The next morning, Lincoln, begins thinking he's entitled to everything, and expects the treatment he got yesterday, when he doesnt get it however, he becomes a jerk, and continues to be a jerk for awhile. After insulting an innocent person for doing nothing, a sister that Lincoln really cares about remarks how much of a jerk Lincoln has become, this gets Lincoln to realize how much he's changed since the limo ride, and apoligizes to evryone he had wronged in jerk mode, the sisters appreciate this, and say they are glad to have their bro back, the episode ends with Lincoln being offered another privilge, but fearing what might happens if he accepts, he declines.

So those are two ways I feel Out on a Limo could've turned out better, what do you think, are my ways better, are they worse, which one did you like more? Be sure to let me know in the comments.