User blog:Asylum117/Fanfiction - Leni's suprise

''My 6th fanfiction heavaly inspired by the episode Slueth or Consequences. I don’t actually hate the episode, and I feel like it was pretty good, but I didn’t like that Leni and Luna were out of charater in the episode, so in this fanfiction, Leni feels bad for Lincoln that his other sisters made fun of him again about his Ace Savvy costume, so Leni decides to make a suprise for Lincoln after seeing one of his comics.''

After the cloged toilet incident with princess pony book, Leni remebered hearing the conversation between Lincoln and Lucy, after she forgot something in the living room.

Leni’s flashback:

Leni: I forgot my purse in the living room, I’ll be right back.

Leni was casualy walking towards the front door, until she stopped and was hearing the conversation between Lincoln and Lucy.

Lucy (suprised): Why did you do that?

Lincoln: Cause you’re right. I can handle the teasing. I am quite comfortable for who I am. Obviosly. But don’t worry, someday you will be too. Until then, your big brothers got your back.

Lucy (smiles): Thanks Lincoln.

Leni took a while to process the conversation, but then she finally realised that Lincoln took the blame for Lucy and her heart sank for being mean to her brother.

End flashback

Leni then thought of doing something nice for Lincoln, to make up for her behaviour towards him that day. Leni got out of her room and noticed all the girls, except for Lucy, making fun of Lincoln again. Lincoln was wearing his Ace Savvy costume again. Lincoln tried to keep it cool and not minding his sisters teasing. But the teasing didn’t stop.

Lola (laughing): Oh wow Linclon. I thought you could have learned your lesson last time. You seriously going in public like that?

Lori (laughing): You litrerally look like a joke.

Luan (laughing): Maybe we should call you Captain Underpants?

Lisa: Unfortenatlly that name is taken, but who am I to judge?

Everyone except for Leni continued laughing at Lincoln. Lincoln unfortenatlly began to feel worse. Leni wanted to stood up for her brother, but was afraid to be laughed at. Then Lynn came behind Lincoln and gave him a wegie.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn (laughing): WEGIE!

<p class="MsoNormal">The girls, except for Leni laughed even harder at Lincoln and now was in tears. He removed the underwear from his head and took off the costume and throwed it on the floor with anger and sadness. He ran towards his room crying and slammed the door shut. Leni saw this and now was very angry at her sisters.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn (laughing): Man, what a baby!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (laughing): I know right? So much for being able to handle our teasing.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori and Lynn hive fived each other, when the other sisters turned around, then were startled by Leni’s angry glare.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (angry): I hope you are happy now! You like, made Lincoln sad.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna: Oh comon Leni! You of all people should know how bad that costume is.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (angry): It doesn’t matter. Why can’t you just accept Lincoln for who he is?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn: Because he’s a looser?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori: He’s a twerp?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola: He’s a snob?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (angry): You guys are mean. I am like, especialy dissapointed in you Luna, I thought you cared about Lincoln. But it seems I was wrong.

<p class="MsoNormal">After hearing what Leni said, Luna then was starting to feel bad.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola (livid): Whatever Leni. Now if you will excuse us, we will go back doing our own things.

<p class="MsoNormal">Everyone, except for Leni were going back to their respective rooms. Leni was going towards her brothers room to comfort him. Before she knocked on the door, she heard Lincoln crying. Leni then started to feel bad and even worse, when she heard about what Lincoln said in his room.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (crying): I thought I could handle my sisters teasing, but this was too much. I hate this so much. I should just stop doing things I like forever.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni was in tears of what her brother said. She was heartbroken. She rubbed her eyes and tried to stay calm. She then got up from the floor and knocked on Llncoln’s door.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (crying): GO AWAY!

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (behind the door): It’s me Linky. Please open the door.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln opened the door and saw Leni in front of him. After a while Leni was hugging Lincoln and rubbing his head in comfort. Lincoln was still sad of how the other sisters treated him.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (sad): Leni. Be honest. Am I really a looser?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (shocked): No Lincoln! You are not a looser. You are the greatest brother I ever know. If like, other sisters see you as a looser, then they have no heart.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (chuckled): Thanks Leni. You always know when to help me.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (smiles): Of course Linky! That’s what big sisters do.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni kisses Lincoln on the forhead and let Lincoln rest in his room for a while. She then stepped on something and saw one of Lincoln’s Ace Savvy comics. She took a closer look on the comic and then got an idea. She quetly got of Lincoln’s room and ran towards her own room. She grabbed her fashion gear and also picked up Lincoln’s old Ace Savvy costume and decided to make a suprise for Lincoln.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (happy): I am going to make Lincoln a new Ace Savvy costume. He is going to be so happy!

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni started to working on, but unlike making new dresses, making a good superhero costume was a allot more challenging for her. She also tries to keep it a secret from other sisters, so they wouldn’t ruin the costume she is making and also so that they don’t embarrass her. It was hard to work in secret. Especialy when Leni shares a room with Lori. Leni asked Bobby to spend some time with Lori, so she can finish her work for Lincoln’s suprise. Leni also had to buy new materails for the costume, so she checked online to find some stores for the materials for the costume. Rita helped Leni to pick them up in some stores and Leni was back on making the costume. Unkown to Leni, Lola was getting suspicious of Leni, but ingores it for now.

<p class="MsoNormal">1 week later

<p class="MsoNormal">A week has passed and half of the costume was done. Leni was proud of herself that she makes something for her siblings, especially for her favorite brother Lincoln. Lincoln was still to upset of what happened a week ago. Leni would do anything, just to see her brother happy.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni: Well, it’s been a week, but the pants and shoes are done. And now I have to work on the shirt, cape and the mask and Lincoln will be so happy for my hard work.

<p class="MsoNormal">Then a knock on the door was heard in Lori’s and Leni’s room.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni: I’ll get it!

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni opened the door and her cheerfull smile, sudenlly turned to a dissapointed look, when she saw that Luna was in front of the door. Luna was nervous and she rubbed her arm, because Luna was actualy scared to look at Leni. Never in her life she saw Leni this angry before. Last time it happened, was when she and Lori were fighting over the same dress.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (livid): What do you want Luna?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (sad): Look. I thought about what you said and you are right. I am sopose to be there for my bro, but after what you said, I feel shame. I know you are still mad at me and my sisters, but I wanted to apologise to Lincoln and I wanted to apologise to you first. So, are we cool?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (smiled): Of course we are Luna. Just remeber to apologise to Lincoln, ok?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (smiled): Ok Leni. (Luna notices the costume behind Leni) Is that Lincoln’s Ace Savvy costume?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (nervous): Um, nnnooo?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni sheepeshly smiled. Luna knows that Leni stinked at lying. So Luna entered Leni’s room and saw some red pants and stylish shoes. Luna was impressed and she turned and saw Lincoln’s old costume. Luna then came to a sudden realization.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (gasped): Leni, are you –

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni quickly covered Luna’s mouth with her hands and quickly closed the door and locked it. Lola noticed this and decided to ease drop on the conversation. She put her ear next to Lori’s and Leni’s room.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (shushed Luna): Please be quiet. Yes, I am making Linky a new costume. After like, what I saw what you girls did to Lincoln, when he wore his old costume, I felt really bad for him, so I decided to make Linky a new cotume instead. But I want to keep a suprise for him.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (made a zipping mouth animation): My lips are sealed.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (worried): Oh my gosh Luna! You mean you won’t be able to speak?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (facepalms): No Leni, I meant that I won’t tell anyone about you making a new Ace Savvy csotume for Lincoln.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (sighed in relief): That’s good. I just want to make Linky happy.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna: Speaking of Lincoln, I should go apologise to him.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (smiles): Ok, bye Luna!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola quickly ran towards her room and acted like nothing happened. Luna was walking towards Lincoln’s room and knockd on his door.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln: Who is it?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna: It’s me bro.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln was mad that it was Luna, so he opened up the door, but when he opened it, he saw how sad Luna was. Luna entered his room and Lincoln closed the door.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (sad): Listen, Lincoln. I wanted to apologise of how I treated you, when you wore your cosume. I acted ver selfish and I understand if you are still mad at me. I just want you to know, that I still love you bro. (sniff) I don’t want to you loose your trust in me.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna now getting depressed and tears started forming in her eyes. Lincoln understood how bad Luna fealt and even tho, what Luna did was wrong, it wasn’t on purpose. So Lincoln feeling bad for her spoke up.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln: Listen Luna. I forgive you. And I accept your apology. I can’t stay mad at you forever. Besides, I stll care about you no matter what. So, are we cool?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (smiled): We are cool bro!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna and Lincoln hugged each other and Luna got up from the floor, before she left Lincoln’s room, she got an idea.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna: Hey Linc? How about we go to Gus’ n Games Grub and play some Dancy Pants Revolution some day? Just the two us?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln: That would be awesome Luna!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (making a rock pose): Rock on dude!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna left and Lincoln closed the door. Unkown to them, Lola had a devilish smile.

<p class="MsoNormal">Another week later

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni finally finished Lincoln’s new Ace Savvy cosume. Leni was very happy of how it turned out and she couldn’t wait to suprise Lincoln with it.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (cheerfull): Linky will be so happy tommorow! I hope he will like it.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni put the costume in the closet and went downstairs to have dinner with her family. After dinner, everyone went to sleep, except for Lola. Lola called his other sisters with Geo. Like Lincoln did, when he was calling other sisters, when Lori was in charge. They all, except for Leni and Luna went to Lola’s room. Lola told other sisters of what Leni was up to for the past 2 weeks. Everyone was shocked, but at the same time tried to contain their laughter.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (snickering): That is litrellary the dumbest thing Leni has done, like ever.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn (snikcering): I know right? I mean, why would she make something dorky like that?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola: Exaclly! Leni will try to give Lincoln the costume tommorow, so how about we sabotage it?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lisa: I hate to say this, but you are a genius Lola.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori and Luan sneaking into Leni’s room, opened up the closet and grabbed the costume. They put it back into Lola’s room and there the sisters laughed and did stuff to the costume. The put the costume back and everyone went back to sleep.

<p class="MsoNormal">Morning came all the other sisters, except for Leni and Lincoln were downstairs eating breakfest. Lincoln woke and was about to head downstairs, when Leni stopped him.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (happy): Morning Linky!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln: Morning Leni! What’s up?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (cheerfull): I have a totes suprise for you.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (confused): A suprise for me?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni noded. Lincoln then shrugged and walked with Leni to her and Lori’s room.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (cheerfull):Ok now. Close your eyes!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (confused): Ok?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni opened up the closet where the costume was, but to her horror she screamed.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (worried): Leni, is everything alright?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (crying): Get out Lincoln! I don’t want you to see this!

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni pushed Lincoln out of her room and quickly closed the door and locked it. Lincoln opened his eyes and was knocking on her door. To his horror, he hears Leni crying.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (worried): Leni, what happened? Is it something about the suprise you want to give me?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (crying yelled): GO AWAY!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln was shocked by this and ran downstairs towards the kitchen and her sisters.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (worried): Guys! Something happened to Leni. You gotta help me!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (worried): What happened?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (worried): I don’t know. Leni said she wanted to suprise me, but after few seconds, she was getting upset and pushed me out of her room. Now she locked herself in and is crying.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (sad): Oh no! This is bad!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori: Oh comon you guys! Whatever happened she will just get over it.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola: Yeah, what Lori said. She propablly got upset over some stupid dress or something.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (angry): You did something again, didn’t you?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola (shocked): My word! I would never do that.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn: Even if we did, we wouldn’t tell you what it was.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (angry): WHAT DID YOU DO?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lana (lying): We didn’t do anything, we sware.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (angry): Stop lying! All of you! What did you do?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (annoyed): Cool it twerp. It’s not your concern.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna then grabbed Lori by the shirt and gave her a very angry glare: You spill it, or I will brake your phone!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (shocked): You wouldn’t!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (angry): Try me!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori then panicked and was explaining fast: Leni spend 2 weeks to make Lincoln a new Ace Savvy costume and we thought ruining it would teach Leni a lesson and we woukd continue making fun of our brother.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna and Lincoln were both shocked of what they just heard. Lola was angry at Lori and charged at her.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola (mad): You got the biggest mouth!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna then was shaking in anger and gritting her teeth: You dudes did WHAT?

<p class="MsoNormal">Everyone, even Lincoln was startled by Luna’s sudden outburst. Luna was never this angry, if something very serious happened. This was was no acception.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (mad): You are the most insufrable, idiotic, soulless people on Earth! Leni worked really hard to make her brother happy, but thanks to you idiots. You made Leni depressed and defenatly made Lincoln angry. When will you learn that sometimes doing stunts like that can go too far? WHEN?

<p class="MsoNormal">Every sistersin the kictehn were now feeling bad and understood what have they done. Luna walked upstairs and entered Lori’s and Leni’s room. Lincoln was still standing in the living room, looking angry at his sisters.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (angry): You know what? I don’t care about the costume anymore. You better find a way to make up for what you did to Leni, otherwise I will never talk to you ever agian.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln angirly walked upstairs and to his room. He slammed the door and the sisters in the kitchen now were depressed.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (depressed): We litrelarry screwed up!

<p class="MsoNormal">Luan (sad): We made Leni cry.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn (depressed): We ruined her hard work.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lana (sad): And we lost trust of Lincoln and Luna.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola (depressed): I feel like such a fool.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lisa (sad): I am not immune to human emotions, but (she starts crying)

<p class="MsoNormal">The other sisters start crying aswell, until Lori gets an idea.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori: I have a plan!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori and the other sisters huddle up and whisper to one another.

<p class="MsoNormal">Night time

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori took Leni’s ruined Ace Savvy costume and her and the other sisters, except for Luna were in the garage fixing up the costume.

<p class="MsoNormal">Morning came and Leni was still sad about last night. When she got up, she saw a note at her front door. It said: „Come to the garage.”

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni, Luna and Lincoln meet each other with their regular clothes and asked each other: Did you get the note aswell?

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (annoyed): Something tells me, the others want to see us.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (sad): I just hope it isn’t as bad as last night.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (angry): Let’s just go and see what they are up to.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln, Luna and Leni all walk towards the garage. They see Lori and Luan in front of the garage door smiling. Lincoln and Luna gave them death glares, while Leni was angry and didn’t want to look at them.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori (sad): Leni, I know you are mad and we’re sorry. We did something last night and I hope it will be enough to get you trust back.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luan opened up the garage door with a remote and much to Leni’s suprise, everyone showed the Ace Savvy costume Leni was working on. It looked brand new, like it was never ruined in the first place.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (suprised): But, how? I thought it was...

<p class="MsoNormal">Lana: We were the one who ruined the costume in the first place,

<p class="MsoNormal">Luan: But after how Luna and Lincoln scolded us, we realised that what we did, was wrong.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lori: So we decided to fix Lincoln’s new costume.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn: We even borrowed one of Lincoln’s comics, just so we coukd fix better.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lisa: Well, techniclly you stole the comic from Lincoln, but considering how mad our only male sibling was, our sproty sibling didn’t have any choice to do so.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lynn (annoyed): Gee, thanks.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lola: The point is, we wanted to make it up to you guys, so do you fogive us?

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni, Luna and Lincoln looked at each other and smiled.

<p class="MsoNormal">All 3 of them: We forgive you!

<p class="MsoNormal">All of them went for a group hug and were happy once more.

<p class="MsoNormal">Back at the Loud House, Leni and Luna were waiting for Lincoln to change into his new Ace Savvy costume.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna (waiting): Are you done bro?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (inside his room): Ready!

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln bursted out of his room and said: I’m Ace Savvy. The saviest crime fighter.

<p class="MsoNormal">Luna and Leni laughed at this and Lincoln and joined in the laughter.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni: So Linky? What do you think of the costume I made for you?

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln (happy): Its awesome Leni! I love it!

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni (happy): Yay! I am happy, as long as you are happy.

<p class="MsoNormal">Leni hugged Lincoln tightly and not realising she is hugging him too hard.

<p class="MsoNormal">Lincoln: Leni. I can’t breathe!

<p class="MsoNormal">THE END

<p class="MsoNormal">Synopsis
 * I wanted to write a nice story about Leni making a new Ace Savvy costume for Lincoln
 * The dance game Luna mentioned is a referance to Dance Dance Resolution and also the game name that Luna said is from Gravity Falls
 * I didn’t want to include Lucy in part of the other sisters who mocked Lincoln, because Lucy wouldn’t do that towards the person who stood up for her, especialy her older brother
 * When I wrote this fanfic, I didn’t want the sisters who mocked Lincoln making Leni sad, but I wanted to add some drama and tension in the fanfic
 * I originaly wanted Leni making different kinds of Ace Savvy costumes for more comedic effect, but decided not to, because writing this fanfic would take forever
 * <span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:"TimesNewRoman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:LV;mso-fareast-language:EN-US; mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">I didn’t write exacly what the other sisters who mocked Lincoln did to Lincoln’s new costume, because I want to leave it to the readers imagination as to what the sisters did do to the costume
 * <span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"; mso-ascii-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-fareast-font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-latin;mso-hansi-theme-font:minor-latin;mso-bidi-font-family:"TimesNewRoman"; mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;mso-ansi-language:LV;mso-fareast-language:EN-US; mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">There are many The Loud House episode referances in this fanfic