User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 2

Hello everyone, here is the 2nd part of my fanfic.

For those of you who haven't seen the first part of my fanfic, here is Part 1. You can read this part first before reading the 2nd part.

For the rest of you who have followed along, enjoy reading.

OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Lynn Sr. and Rita, who are in each other’s bodies, still wear the same usual outfits.

Lori and Lynn, who are in each other’s bodies, still wear the same usual outfits.

As seen in the previous part, Leni, who is in Lincoln’s body, has changed from Lincoln’s usual outfit to her own usual outfit with long extensions of white hair (hairstyle is similar to Linka’s).

Luna, who is in Lana’s body, has changed from dirty overalls and green shirt to a clean plain purple shirt and faded light blue shorts, she also has Lana’s hair changed from pigtails to a ponytail, and is not wearing the usual red baseball cap.

Luan and Lola, who are in each other’s bodies, still wear the same usual outfits. Later on, Lola takes Luan’s scrunchie off Luan’s hair.

As seen in the previous part, Lincoln, who is in Leni’s body, has changed from Leni’s green dress, to a pair of blue jeans and a white shirt with a pink oval in the center, and does not have Leni’s sunglasses.

Lucy, who is in Lily’s body, is wearing Leni’s sunglasses that Lincoln, in Leni’s body, gave her.

Lisa is the only one who hasn’t switched bodies with anyone, so she still wears the same usual outfit.

Lana, who is in Luna’s body, is still wearing the same usual outfit Luna wears.

Lily, who is in Lucy’s body, has to wear a diaper.

The Story Continues Here
(It’s morning time, and all except Lisa are downstairs having breakfast.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Ugh, I literally cannot believe this; my date with Bobby is in a few days, and I cannot let him see me like this.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I sure hope Lisa knows whatever she is building can truly get us back to our own bodies.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): If Lisa says this plan of her’s that she is doing will cure us all after what had just happened yesterday, we should all trust her.

Luan (In Lola’s body): Speaking of Lisa, here she comes.

(Lisa comes to the table feeling exhausted and looking drowsy.)

Lisa: Good morning all you fellow men and gentleladies.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Uhhh, Lisa, are you feeling okay?

Lisa: Why of course I’m okay, I’ve been up all night getting the first half of my plan all well-constructed.

FLASHBACK

(A montage shows Lisa working on her new invention all night, during this montage she is seen using a wrench to tighten the bolts on her new invention, a screwdriver to tighten the screws, and wires for the invention to work.)

END OF FLASHBACK

Lisa: Very soon by tomorrow, I’ll get my second half of my plan complete, after that all will get their bodies back, and all of us will live happy everly after.

(The other siblings are worried about Lisa.)

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Whoa, Lisa, you are not feeling okay.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah Lis’, you really need shut eye to regain your energy.

Lisa: NO, I will not rest until my new invention is at 100 percent completion.

(Lola (In Luan’s body) takes a bite of cereal, when…)

Lola (In Luan’s body): OOOWW, I can’t eat cereal with Luan’s braces getting in the way.

Lisa: (To Lynn and Lucy) you see what I mean? I will get my sleep when it‘s time for me to sleep. I’m going to get myself a bagel.

(The other siblings look at each other now feeling worried for Lisa.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Okay, now I’m starting to think that getting our own bodies back may end in a not-so-good kind of way.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I hear you bro, I don’t think Lisa should be working on her invention in that kind of condition.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): I should speak to Lisa.

(Lori (In Lynn’s body) walks in to the kitchen and sees Lisa sleeping next to the refrigerator.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Umm, Lisa?

Lisa: (wakes up) AAH, I’M UP, I’M UP… oh, it’s just you Lynn.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): It’s Lori; I’m stuck in Lynn’s body, remember.

Lisa: Oh, right, now I’m forgetting my siblings are in different bodies, and forgetting to tell by the different voices.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Listen Lisa, I know you’re trying so hard to getting done with whatever it is you’re making, but don’t you think it should wait until you get all your focus back?

Lisa: I still have… (Begins to close her eyes) all my focus, thank you… very… much. (Falls asleep again) (Lori snaps her (Lynn’s) fingers at Lisa, waking her up) GYAAHH!!!

Lori (In Lynn’s body): You see Lisa? That’s the thing we’re talking about.

(Lisa pours orange juice but misses the cup, spilling orange juice on the floor. Lori helps her pour the orange juice in the cup.)

Lisa: I appreciate your concerns, but nothing you do will slow me down or stop me from finishing… (Yawns) my work… completion of my invention that will get all of you your bodies back is my top PRIORI… ty. (Was about to close her eyes again, when…)

Lola (In Luan’s body): (offscreen) OOOOWW, IT’S GETTING WORSE!!!

(Lola’s yelling got Lisa entirely open-eyed.)

Lisa: Right, I’ll be back at work after breakfast.

(As Lori (In Lynn’s body) returns to the table, Luan was helping Lola eat her cereal as slow as she could.)

Luan (In Lola’s body): There you go Lola, just keep chewing slowly, that way, your mouth, or, my mouth won’t hurt so much, that’s what I do when I feel my teeth hurting.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): (To Lori) any luck on getting Lisa to stop what she’s doing and relax for a few hours?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): I’m afraid not, no matter how were going to try, Lisa’s not going to back down.

Lana (In Luna’s body): Well even if her new machine is completed, I’d still rather keep this body that I am in right now.

Luna (In Lana’s body): You are not keeping my body Lana; I had to shower due to the smell coming from this body, and have your smelly overalls be tossed in the washer.

Lana (In Luna’s body): YOU WHAT… Uhh, I mean, fine with me, I don’t care how short your hair is, or how much purple shadow you put on your eyes, and no matter what you say, I’m keeping this body.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Are not!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): Am too!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): Are not!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): Am too!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): Not!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): Too!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): NOT!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): TOO!!!

Lynn (In Lori’s body): You two stop it. Lana, it’ll not matter if you want to keep Luna’s body, soon you have to give it back to her and change back to your own body.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): That is once Lisa’s new machine is done, you may want it to be fair to keep someone else’s body, but to the rest of us it’s not.

Lily (In Lucy’s body): No feh. (Translation: No fair.)

Lana (In Luna’s body): Says who?

Lynn and Lincoln (In Lori and Leni’s bodies): SAYS US!!!

(Lynn and Lincoln (In Lori and Leni’s bodies) attempts to grab hold of Lana (In Luna’s body), but Lana avoids them and runs to the living room.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): HEY!!!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): STOP!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): You won’t get me now.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): No? But we can!!!

(The parents were able to grab hold of Lana (In Luna’s body) and restrained her to the floor. Lincoln (In Leni’s body) then reveals a roll of duct tape.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): You leave us no other choice Lana.

(Everything goes black, and then Lana (In Luna’s body) is revealed to be duct taped to a two-wheeled dolly. Everyone except Lisa is in the living room.)

Lana (In Luna’s body): GGGRRRRRRRR LET ME OFF OF THIS DOLLY.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): No can do.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): From now on we’re keeping you duct taped to that dolly until we get you back into your proper body.

Luan (In Lola’s body): Yeah, and soon you’re going to “stick” with your own body, Ahahahahahahaha.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): So, can anyone tell us how Lisa’s new machine is coming along?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Um, well…

(Scene cuts to Lisa in her room getting the rest of the materials and parts to complete her machine, but due to lack of sleep, she was building her machine wrongly, she was using the wrong tools, and placing wires and cords in the wrong places, and Lisa did not realize any of this while working. Lisa, thinking that her machine is done, was about to fall asleep, until...)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Lisa Marie Loud!!!

Lisa: (Wakes up and stands up) GAAHH, LISA MARIE LOUD REPORTING FOR DUTY… uh… MA’AM… wait no, I mean, SIR… or... MA’AM? Or is it sir?

Rita (In Lynn’s Sr.’s body): Lisa, we’ve been told by the other kids that you haven’t gotten any sleep last night.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): And that we’ve been told you were working on your new invention all night.

Lisa: Truth to be told that I did work on my new invention all last night and as you can see I have managed to get it all to 100 percent comple… AAAHH!!!

(Lisa finally realizes she messed up a lot on her new machine, some parts for the invention were twisted and dented, other parts were filled with holes, and a few wires and cords were cut.)

Lisa: My invention, RUINED, I did all of this, and I never… realized… any… of this.

(Lisa falls unconscious. Everything goes black.)

Rita (In Lynn’s Sr.’s body): Lisa… Lisa!!!

(Lisa wakes up and sees her parents the rest of her siblings except Lana and Lola (Luna and Luan) all looking at her.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Lis’, are you feeling okay?

Lisa: Ugh, no I’m not feeling okay, this was my best chance at getting you all your bodies back, and I blew it.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Now you see why you should’ve gotten sleep?

Lisa: Yes, you were all right, I should’ve listened to you guys and put my work aside, and instead I’ve tried a lot to get caught up that I really did lose my focus after all.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): And now you’ve learned that these things just have to take time, and you got to know when to break from all the hard work.

Luan (In Lola’s body): Lincoln’s right, we all have to take “breaks” sometimes, hahahahaha.

Lisa: Okay, I’ll break from my work, but first, we have to get rid of some parts that I’ve done terribly on, and replace them all with new ones, will you please help me.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Of course we’ll help Lisa, so, uh, where do we start?

(All the siblings except Lana and Lola (In Luna and Luan’s bodies) got to work on getting rid of all broken parts, some new metal parts and new cords were given to Lisa to rework on the new machine, and by nighttime all was ready to redo the invention.)

Lisa: This time I am confident that I will get my new invention assembled the proper way, and get it running like it must. (Yawns) But first, I’m going to really regain all my energy by getting sleep.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): We never thought you’d take one.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): You so deserve it.

Lisa: After all that I have been through, I’m glad to have my siblings look out for me.

(Next scene shows the house at night, and the night transitions to morning. Lincoln (In Leni’s body) is shown at the hallway about to go down the stairs, until…)

Lola (In Luan’s body): (offscreen) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHOOOHHHOOOHHHHOOOOOOOWW!!!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): LOLA!!!

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) immediately runs to Lola and Lana’s room.)

Lola (In Luan’s body): Aahahooww, ooooooooowwwww!!!

(Lola kicks her (Luan’s) legs on her bed, crying due to Luan’s braces causing a lot of pain in the mouth. She had also taken Luan’s scrunchie off of her hair, or in that case Luan’s hair.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Lola what’s wrong?

Lola (In Luan’s body): It’s these braces; the pain in Luan’s mouth has become worse and worse ever since I got stuck in Luan’s bo… OOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW!!!

(Lola kicks her (Luan’s) legs on her bed again, and continues to cry in pain. Lincoln walks over to Lola and begins to comfort her.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Hey hey, easy there Lola, it’s going to be okay, Lisa will soon get her machine done and we’ll get you back to your old body.

(Leni enters Lola and Lana’s room)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): I heard screaming in here, is there something the matter?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Lola’s crying in pain.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Lola? I thought that’s Luan.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): It’s Lola stuck in Luan’s body.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Oh, okay.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Come on Lola, I’ll help you downstairs.

(Lincoln helps Lola out of her room and downstairs to the dining table, where the other sisters were having breakfast.)

Lisa: Thanks once again guys for bringing new parts for my invention.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Let’s hope you’ll not mess this up again little sis.

Lisa: You don’t have to worry about me anymore, thanks to your advice of getting sleep before continuing further on work, I have a lot of confidence that I’ll not make a single error on my invention.

(Lincoln and Lola (In Leni and Luan’s bodies) come up to the dining table.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): That’s great Lisa, because we really need that new invention of yours to be finished fast.

(The rest of the sisters see Lola crying.)

Lola (In Luan’s body): Oooowhooow!!!

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Lola!!!

Lori (In Lynn’s body): What’s wrong with her?

Luan (In Lola’s body): Oh no, guys, I know why Lola is crying, it’s my braces, they’ve been making Lola suffer in pain ever since we started to get stuck in different bodies.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): What Luan is saying is true; we can’t keep Lola suffering in pain any longer.

Lisa: And now that I’m back to my full focus and concentration, it’s time I redo all construction and undo all errors I had caused when I really lost my focus due to falling asleep on the job, (To Lola) hang in there for a few hours Lola, we’ll soon get you out of Luan’s body and back to yours.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Make it quick Lisa; we’re all counting on you.

(After Lisa got done with breakfast, she immediately fixes the rest of her mistakes she had done with her new invention and began to assemble her machine with newer parts, it took the rest of the morning to mid-afternoon, but with all mistakes fixed and all construction of Lisa’s new machine complete, Lisa can finally give herself a rest, as she was tired from all the construction and her arms were all worn out. Lisa lays herself on the floor.)

Lisa: Ah, it’s finished, I finally have it finished.

(Everyone else were in the living room, and Lana (In Luna’s body) is still duct taped to the two-wheeled dolly.)

Lisa: Everyone, my invention is done.

(The parents open their bedroom door.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Did Lisa just say her new invention is finally done?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Quick let’s go.

(All except Leni, Lincoln (In each other’s bodies) and Lola (In Luan’s body) quickly run up the stairs and enter Lisa and Lily’s room, with Lana (In Luna’s body) on the dolly being pulled by Lynn (In Lori’s body), Leni and Lincoln had to slowly escort Lola up the stairs. In Lisa and Lily’s room are two rectangular pods, each with a switch saying “on” and “off”, there is also a small cubicle device that has a red button and charging bar to indicate how much is charged for the rectangular pods, the charging bar right now shows that it’s 100% fully charged.)

Lisa: With these two body-switching pods, it’ll be able to switch you back into your own respective selves.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): That’s great Lisa, alright, let’s go in.

Lisa: Not so fast, only one person in each pod at a time, and as a side note, they can only work one time…

Luna (In Lana’s body): What? You’re telling us this just now?

Lisa: I would either make more pods or make a fuller version of this machine, unfortunately, there weren’t enough of the right parts to do so, and I could’ve if I haven’t messed up on my invention the first place.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Well, as the parents in this house, your father and I shall go in those pods.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): But my date with Bobby is in a few days, I should be getting my body back.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): But I don’t want to be stuck in the body of a baby; I should have my old dark self back, and I know that Lily wants her old adorable self back, don’t you Lily?

Lily (In Lucy’s body): Yah, I wah bah baa. (Translation: Yeah, I want body back.)

Lana (In Luna’s body): Is it wrong for me to say that I still want to keep this body than to have my old one back?

Luna (In Lana’s body): You’re dang right it is, you ARE NOT keeping my body.

Lana (In Luna’s body): Am too!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): Are not!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): Am too!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): NOT!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): TOO!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): NOT!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): TOO!!!

(Everyone in Lisa and Lily’s room began arguing except for Luan (In Lola’s body) and Lisa; they kept arguing about which two people should have their own bodies back until Leni (In Lincoln’s body) came in to stop the noise.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): EVERYBODY SSSSTTTOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPP!!!

(Everyone looks at Leni (In Lincoln’s body), then they see Lincoln and Lola (In Leni and Luan’s bodies) coming in the room. Lola was being comforted by Lincoln, as she was still crying due to all the pain in Luan’s mouth caused by Luan’s braces.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): (gasp) Oh my gosh, we’ve forgotten about Lola!!!

Lola (In Luan’s body): Oohoh, Aahohoow.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Can’t you all see how sad Lola is? That she has to go through all of Luan’s pain that’s happening in her mouth?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Oh dear, our poor Lola.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): There there Lola, it’s okay, we’ll let you go in that pod first, don’t you girls agree?

(Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, and Lily all nod their heads in agreement)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Let’s make way for Lola.

(The sisters make a clear pathway for Lola (In Luan’s body), and Lincoln (In Leni’s body) takes her to one of the pods. Lola (In Luan’s body) is placed inside one pod, and Luan (In Lola’s body) goes in the other pod.)

Lisa: And now to switch them back to their proper selves.

(Lisa presses the red button, activating both pods containing Luan and Lola. Mist in the pods cover up Luan and Lola until they couldn’t be fully seen. The charging bar reaches 0%, which means the body-switching process has come to an end.)

Lisa: And now for the moment.

(Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Lola’s body, and a silhouette of Lola’s body slowly comes out of the pod.)

Lola: Whoa, I’m feeling a bit dizzy, and I don’t feel pain in my mouth at all, (gasps) no pain in my mouth.

Lisa: I told all of you this plan will work, and it has worked, has there ever been any doubt? Lola: Thank you thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU, I can’t believe you’ve given up your chance to get your bodies back for me.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): It’s all the best that we could do.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): What matters more is caring for others who are in pain and whatever area they feel hurt in, and that I know is what must come first.

Lola: Thank you Leni, thank you all.

(Leni and Lola hug each other, and then Lincoln, the parents, and the other sisters, minus Luan and Lana (In Luna’s body), hug Lola too.)

Luan: (groans) can someone get me out of this pod now?

Lisa: Oh, Luan, I just remembered.

(Lisa opens the pod door to get Luan out. Luan, now back in her own body, comes out of the pod, red in the eyes, feeling weak and sleepy.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Luan, how do you feel?

Luan: (groans) like my eyes ran dried and my brain is beating so hard it could burst.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Looks like what you need is nice long sleep.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): And perhaps a glass of water, here Luan, we’ll take you to your bed.

(The parents carry Luan to her bed. Lola then shows a worrying expression.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): What’s wrong Lola? Aren’t you glad you have your own body back?

Lola: Yes, I am, but, what I’m worried about is… well, you, all of you. It’s the only time that two of us get our own bodies back, and now I’m worried the rest of you won’t get your bodies back.

Lisa: Well, not exactly!

Luna (In Lana’s body): What do you mean Lis’?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Didn’t you say those pods can only work one time?

Lisa: Yes, that’s what I said! One time, every 24 hours!

Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, Lola, and Lily: OOOOOHHH!!!

Lisa: Every 24 hours, when this bar shows at it’s at 100 percent full charge, it’ll be ready for another body switch reversal.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Then that means we all still have a chance to get our bodies back.

(Lori, Leni, Luna, Lynn, Lucy, and Lily all cheer, hearing they will soon have their bodies back.)

Lisa: Until then, I think I’ll rest a little more before dinner, because I am all poofed.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): I cannot wait to be out of Lily’s body and back in my own dark mysterious body.

(Lincoln and all sisters, minus Luan, proceed down to the dining room, with Lana (In Luna’s body) on the dolly being pulled again by Lynn (In Lori’s body). Cutting to Luna and Luan’s room, Luan is being tucked in to her bed by her parents and is given a glass of water.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Hope you’ll feel better tomorrow, Luan.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): She sure will feel better, now to get ourselves downstairs for dinner.

(Later on, Lisa joins the others for dinner.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Oh hey Lis’.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Great work on getting that machine of yours to full operation.

Lisa: It’s all the best I could do, and if there was two things I’ve learned in the past couple days, one, sleep is always important to keep my focus and energy up, and two, I don’t think the world is ready for teleporters, at least for the next decade.

Lola: Lincoln, thanks again for caring for me when I was in such big pain, I’m glad to have a brother like you, even if you’re stuck in a different body.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): It’s what family does, and no matter what, nothing will make me trade it for the world.

(Lincoln and Lola hug each other. Later the family was done with dinner and all went towards their bedrooms. The scene transitions to Lola and Lana’s room, where Lola is getting ready for bed.)

Lola: (to the viewers) Ah, it’s so wonderful for me that I have my precious beautiful self back, being in Luan’s body, that was an absolute nightmare. My whole family showed how much they cared for me, and I couldn’t be happier, I hope for something like switching to different bodies does not happen to me ever again, and I hope the same for the rest of my family once they get their old selves back. Now I can go back to enjoying my life with my sweet beautiful self, and I can enjoy it starting with a nice beauty sleep.

(Next scene shows the window, outside of Lola and Lana's room, Lola turns off the light, and goes straight to sleep.)

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 3