Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-32318818-20171014213937/@comment-32318818-20171014220951

Instead of "Lori: Nolan, what is your sister doing at our house?" It should be "Lori: Oh, hey, Sophia!" The rest of them pop up and say the same, and then notice what she and Lincoln are doing. And maybe instead of rushing by Sophia game of hopscotch and saying nothing, maybe they should rush by and say "hey, Sophia! Bye, Sophia!" With Lincoln adding a quick "Sorry!" As they have ruined the hopscotch field, and Then giving her the flower. Also, maybe they should say "Sophia, as much as we'd love to have you here, you need to let go of Lincoln." Just some ideas.