User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Luck/@comment-26981664-20170417200045

Yoshi, that was the most powerful, emotional, drama-inducing fanfic sequel to 'No Such Luck' I've ever read!!! After Lincoln claiming to his family he is not bad luck, they still let their superstitic assumptions get the better of them as they still believe he's bad luck. They all took advantage of Lincoln wearing the squirrel mascot for their activities. When Luna used him for her concert, she was temporarily blinded by the party lights from Lincoln taking off the head of the suit. She was mad at him, but after some time, Luna began to grow concerned for Lincoln. Even at the picnic, Lincoln's family show zero concern to him except the good luck charm's squirrel suit. Later, Lincoln went for a walk around town, unbeknownst to his family, he threw out the suit in the dumpster. When Lincoln came home, his whole family was shock that he wasn't wearing the suit! He told the whole family everything he has suffered and been through since he wore the suit, they've been treating him like a good luck charm that a brother. He started to think they don't care about him anymore. When Lynn stated it was him fault, he then angrily pinned it on her for labeling him as bad luck after Lynn lost the baseball game. Lincoln in a blinding rage, punched Lynn in the face giving her a broken nose, and then Lynn viciously attacked Lincoln. After the fight, Lincoln ran away from his family. While the Loud Family went after him in search for Lincoln, he turned to the Tetherby Mansion and lived with Sophia. He told her the whole story and she felt much pity and sorrow for Lincoln. Meanwhile, the Loud Family were at the police station to find their son, the sisters were all worried about him, except for Lynn, who was too stubborn to admit she was wrong about the whole thing. Later at night, while the others were asleep, Lynn was struggling to get some sleep because of her guilty conscious. Lynn gave in and admitted that she was wrong about the whole thing. Lincoln's interaction with Sophia, Maria, and Zoe were quite heartwarming as they went to the arcade to cheer him up. I find that part where Lincoln asked Sophia to adopt him very cute. Sophia told Lincoln that it's better to talk to your family than run away from them. When Lincoln came back home, his whole family was relieved and happy he was back and apologized to him. Luna and Lynn were the ones more sorry for him. His whole family promised they will never take advantage or treat him like a good luck charm again. His family then went to the beach, but this time, for a do-over for Lincoln to join his family without the squirrel suit.

- My favorite part was when Luna promised to Lincoln to be the best guardian for him and the interaction with the three girls. I'm so glad you gave it your absolute best effort to write this sequel, YoshiRocker. Probably the best one next to BFoE's. 50/10