User blog:J.D. Brony/Story Time - The Loud House Shorts: Cellphone

It's been a while since I posted here, guys.

Well...I'm back. And this time, with a new story. But, it's short. Also, this works best if you're imagining the scenario while reading it. :)

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(Scene opens to Lincoln and Lori, who is on her phone, in the back of the car with Dad driving the van.)

Lincoln: Dad?

Dad (off-camera): Yes?

(Lori turns her head to Lincoln as he asks the question.)

Lincoln: Are cellphones bad?

Dad: What do you mean?

Lincoln: Well...I don't know. I mean, does using them result in bad effects?

Dad: Hmm...not usually, son.

(Lori then turns back to her phone.)

Lincoln: Really?

Dad: Well...there's some instances where it can be bad for your eyes if you use too much. Sometimes, you might get headaches from the same reason. And other times, you can-

Lincoln: Turn into a mindless zombie?

Dad: What?

Lincoln: Can you sometimes turn into a mindless zombie?

Dad: No. No, that's garbage.

''(As the conversation continues, Lori's phone flashes an aura onto her face.)

Lincoln: Are you sure?

Dad: Of course, I am. Where did you even get that idea, son?

(Then, Lori's face soon turns pale blue, and starts to become wall-eyed.)

Lincoln: I don't know. Probably just a wild thought.

Dad:  Trust me, son. It's not like that at all. That can't happen from using your cellphone too often.

(Lori soon makes a monotone moan, then the aura from her phone disappears.)

Lincoln: Okay, Dad. If you say so.

(Lincoln turns to Lori.)

Lincoln: Hey...Lori. You look pale.

Lori (as a mindless zombie): *moans*

Lincoln: Are you sick?

Lori: *moans*

Lincoln: Well, if you're not, then...can you...close your mouth, please? You're starting to drool saliva and it's making me comfortable.

THE END

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Other Thoughts

 * Well, this is one of the first short stories I've ever thought of.
 * Most of the inspiration for writing these are from Aardman shorts like "Angry Kid". (Although, that one is for adults.)
 * Should I make more of these? Let me know. I might have some more ideas in this little old noggin of mine.

'''POSITIVE thoughts go best in the comments section. Thanks! :)'''

- J.D. Brony