User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/The Re-Write Fanfics/@comment-26302585-20161230083150

Huh. Interesting. I can't wait to read these.

How about a re-write of "Sound of Silence"? That one definitly needs a re-write. For "The Green House", I got a few ideas.

1. Lincoln explain his situation to Mrs. Johnson and she understands.

2. Mrs. Johnson encourages Lincoln in a nicer and more supportive way (I really didn't like how she was portrayed in this episode, and I normally like her, so she should be nicer overall).

3. Right before he starts his game, he thinks about it, and then tells the boys he can't do it and shuts the game off.

4. Lincolns confesses to his sisters before they find out, they forgive him.

5. Lincoln and Lynn switch between the powering bike.

That's all I've got.

Anyway, good luck YoshiRocker. I'm looking forward to these re-writes