User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: Lincoln is Done/@comment-32937716-20170824131939

The story was delivered so badly that all the suicide attempts in it made me LAUGH! You know something's wrong with your story when what was supposed to be sad and edgy made me giggle like a maniac.

I also hated the whole *insert the author's favorite sisters* missed Lincoln the most thing, how does LILY miss him more than say Lori and other sisters? Even though Lily loves him, it just feels weird to say a baby misses Lincoln more than the majority of her sisters. It shouldn't be a competition.

And the whole having the sister's guilt trip themselves over an insignificant moment in an episode made me roll my eyes. There was an entire paragraph about Lori hating herself over calling Lincoln 'twerp,' like wtf? Also the whole 'everyone acting like Lola deserved to be beaten' was really annoying. We get it, author, Lola is your least favorite. Geeez.

Don't even get me started on how Leni was potrayed...