Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20180806043611/@comment-32202721-20180806173214

I didn't like it.

First, I've told you several times before that I don't like self-inserts, and I don't like it when real people put themselves in relationships with fictional characters.

But even putting that aside, the story feels uneven. You seem to have put a lot of thought and creativity into some of the dream sequences, and virtually none in others. Lana's, Lisa's and Lily's were somewhat interesting (and I did appreciate the shoutout to PTTFW in Lana's). And, okay, Lucy's got a laugh out of me. But other than that, the sequences are too short and unimaginative. Lincoln's is just a slightly altered version of the opening sequence to Pulp Friction, and the rest are just... boring. Lynn plays sports, Lynn Sr. cooks, Luan tells jokes on stage... hell, Lori's is just her on the beach with Bobby, and then it ends before anything interesting can happen.

You know what can happen in a dream? Literally anything. Have some fun with it. Let your imagination run wild.