User blog:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - The Great Louddoors

My 11th fanfic. Work in Progress. I give credit to THELOUDHOUSEFANATIC  for the title and original idea.

Vanzilla arrived in Michigan Woods. The Loud family  left the vehicle.

- Children, the drive is over. - Mom announced

- Fresh forrest air, far from city smog. - Lincoln commented sniffing

- One of the rare times I agree with you. - Lola commented

- This place is too clean. - Lana complained -    I hope there are some animals to pet

- Out of the field! - Lori complained - How will I chat Bobby now?

- This silent place is perfect for writting new poems. - Lucy commented

- Not so silent, I hear local birds singing - Luna commented enthusiastically

- Let's find a new beetle species. - Lisa commented

- Speak for youself. Bugs are no attraction. - Luan commented and then a mosquito landed on her troath and bit her - Auch! Blasted  mosquito! I can't talk, my throat pains! - complained Luan suffering pain in her speaking organ.

- At least we won't suffer her terrible jokes. - Lisa commented

- Lisa! That was cruel! - Lincoln yelled

- I'm telling the truth. - Lisa said

- Keep your brutal honesty for yourself! - Lincoln replied

- Don't worry, Luan, I have a slave for mosquito bites. - said Leni giving Luan a tube of the salve

Luan couldn't speak so she replied with smile. She used the salve immadiatelly. Lynn left the van and commented " So much of free space. Prefect for my martial arts training." She  began making her fighting poses jumping around and suddenly her ponytail sticked to tree. She tried to jump but she felt such great pain that sshe creamed and tears appeared in her eyes.

- Screaming in the forrest is prohibited. - Lori yelled - We hoped this place will make you calmer.

- Stop yelling and help me remove my hair! - Lynn yelled - This pain is hell!

- That's a resin. - Lori commented - I have to cut off the lowest part of your pony tail.

- Great! I have to wait some months until my hair regrow. - Lynn complained while Lori was cutting off her hair sticked to the tree

- That's not a good start. - Lincoln commented

To Be Continued