User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-31199313-20170131211434

Lucy: Lily was the one who broke the remote, and I was the one who clogged the toilet.

(The other sisters all laughed at this)

Schizophrenic, aren't they?

Luan: And to make things better, I deleted that video I recorded of you at the comic book convention.

Wait, I thought Lori recorded and uploaded it:

''Lori: Oh, this oughta be good. (Lori starts recording with her phone as they walk inside the comic book store, but Lincoln doesn't notice them yet.)''

''Lori: And I got all of that on my phone! I'm about to upload it to YouTube!''

Yes, I know Lori already did something to make up to Lincoln, and it was Luan's turn, but you may want to fix that inconsistency.

Lori: Lincoln?! Wake up! (voice breaks) Please...Lincoln... If you can hear me... I want you to know, that we're sorry! We're sorry that we ever pushed you around, fought you, teased you, or the time we all made fun of you...(sobs) WE ARE SUCH HYPOCRITICAL SISTERS, AND WE MAKE YOUR LIFE HERE SO MISERABLE!

Sisters: (crying) LINCOLN... WE LOVE YOU! WE DON'T WANT TO DO THIS TO YOU ANYMORE!

(All the sisters gathered around Lincoln, and all began to cry harder...)

Yes, I did enjoy your story. I'm very proud of you writers' efforts to stick up for Lincoln when the show's writers won't, no matter how young this show is (makes me wish I could see more such efforts for Dexter from Dexter's Lab; how come more people aren't sticking up for HIM, I wonder?). It's reassuring to see stories that address the problems Lincoln faces at home, and now I can't wait to read stories which address his problems at school.