Thread:AndrewBrauer/@comment-32055298-20170922124439

While I definitely have a higher opinion on the episode then, and it doesn't do anything plot wise wrong, it doesn't do much of the idea's it gave as it could, which I think unlike you are for the most part good but the problem is that they don't get explored enough as it should. Overall the biggest gripe I have with it thou as an episode is that it is repetitive. I feel like Luan when saying this but in comedy their is a rule of 3 for a reason. But it's a solid episode and fall into the second side of the coin of a typical Luan episode which is simply cute (the other side being hilariously over the top).

Anyways I was thinking we could do i rewrite on it together, and not because it was bad or it did anything wrong so much as there is more potential to be explored. Let me know I will send you a link to a google doc to work on it (or whatever other method you wanna do) and we can talk about it in discord. 