Thread:LittleAlex619/@comment-26253276-20171206175532

http://theloudhouse.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:IronRaphRa/My_Second_Fanfic:_The_Godsisters

So, you say you like that story...

Sudden disneed for money after being obtained = Sudden game loss

Lori takes Lincoln's game + Luna invading Lincoln's room + Lisa takes Lincoln's comics + Lola takes Bun Bun = Lincoln's stuff being taken AND SOLD

Lynn punches Lincoln in the EYE + Leni hits Lincoln = Lynn threatens Lincoln WITH A BAT

Sisters NOT GETTING PUNISHED WHATSOEVER = SISTERS NOT BEING PUNISHED WHATSOEVER + LYNN NOT BEING PUNISHED FOR BEING MEAN

Lincoln has to get help to regain trust = Lincoln has to do something to regain trust

Sorry, but I am just livid with that author. Compare their story with AnimationFan15's Whitewashed. You'll see. 