User blog comment:Curious Poker Chip/"L is for Love": Alternate Ending/@comment-30498740-20180624013325/@comment-1650307-20180624050229

Yeah it is kinda silly in hindsight comparing it to the fart jokes. Wow, what was I thinking?

Maybe that is all correct. Maybe. You know, I always feel like I could easily rewrite most of the stuff that I publish online to make it 110% better. I should've included a little mention of the guitar thing. Maybe a scene where she actually did write a song about it. That could've been pretty alright. Maybe I will do a follow up of it one day.

I guess I had the thought process that we have no idea about how other people in their head and I thought that maybe she would have some sort of condition or was a bit too emotional or overreacted. I dunno. Again I wrote this whole in like 20 minutes. Honestly, I think that her reaction in Chapter 2 of Forbidden Love would be a more accurate emotion state for her if I were to reapply it to this scene. You know, maybe you were right.

I suppose that in my concept of how the episode would take place, Luna would be into the love letter mystery at first but the further that it went on and as the siblings talked more about the hopeful crushes, she started to feel glum about it. Yeah I think that might've been a more appropriate response. Oh well. Live and learn, I guess.

To me, in the story of "Forbidden Love", Luna is Sam's closest friend she has ever had. She helped her through tough times and loved how refreshing of a personality Luna had. Their mutual love of music helped too. Again, I am spoiling a couple of things but they both do start to feel things for each other, but Sam later is conflicted with her own personal demons and is not sure if it's actual infactuation or not. I won't say anymore but I am really excited to get to that chapter as I think it'll be one of the best things I will write in a fanfiction.

I suppose a mention of Sam could've been better if I had a chance to rewrite it. Good idea, man. Let's see what happens. I was initially just going to have this be a non-canon one-off, but maybe I will write another chapter later on. Thanks for your cool ideas!