Thread:XxSkilletSaviorxX/@comment-24200891-20170516215130/@comment-30458740-20170605153302

For a first time writing a song, this was very well done.

Though, I will point out that the s should be removed on the word "worse" for it to be wore. Also, I'm not so sure about this part of the lyrics; "We work together and feel our stocker."

Now, after looking through words that rhyme and almost rhyme with rocker, I've come up with two different words.

1. "We work together and make everyday proper." 2. "We work together and it's truly an honor."