User blog comment:AndrewBrauer/Fanfiction - Whipped/@comment-26302585-20170520053443

I thought this was... okay. My main gripe with this is the sisters, minus Leni, Luna, and Lily, being so manipulative and blackmailing Lincoln into being their slave. I mean, I'm not surprised for Lola, but everyone else? I don't know if I'm down with that. Also, and this is probably just be me, but I think they were forgiven a bit too easily. If it was me, I probably wouldn't talk to them for a week, or a couple days at least. But that's just me. I am glad they got their comeuppances, though. And I did like Leni and Luna standing by Lincoln's side.

Again, I thought this was okay. Nothing great, but decent enough.