User blog comment:Thomperfan/Nolan's birthday/@comment-32318818-20171124062413

Awesome stuff, man! Awesome stuff! :D Noli moment was great, the Luan subplot was great and had an adorable resolution, the only thing I'd change is have Lucy's poem say something about you being a 2nd brother, it feels weird hearing her call you "friend." Other than that, 5 stars, good sir!