Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-28872366-20160903214819/@comment-24200891-20160904054841

THELOUDHOUSEFANATIC wrote: When will you throw that joke in, before they go their separate ways, or after they reunite? Of course I'll write that the original idea belongs to you.

They take waterfall shower together after they reuinite of course. Also everyone of them will realise they can't return alone because parents will kill them for missing others. I ask if it's inappropriate because I read an adult fanfic in which Lincoln saw naked woman first time and got trauma, more precisely Lori. Because of this he can't look at girls with no fear anymore. That's his puberty problem and beginning of erotic fascinations. I won't go that far with shower scene.

I appreciate your help with titles but I already have ideas "Sister Rivalry" or "Competting Sisters, Helpful Brother".