Thread:MrAnimatedToon/@comment-31647719-20181003235719/@comment-32807753-20181009054350

Lori: I loved it!

Luan: Amazing!

Lucy: Such beauty!

Lisa: Spectacular. Despite the lack of conflict and verb tense changes, I'd much rather prefer a simple story with well-contructed sentences over a story with jumbled up conflcits and many grammatical errors.