User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews 2: Opposite Attraction

Ok today I am going to review a Fanfiction that really got me when I first read it. Here is Opposite Attraction! The 26th Fanfiction made by TMNT1987Dude. So let us begin!

Part 1: Storyline

The storyline for this fan fiction starts with the entire loud family going to school just before we then cut to the four older Loud Sisters Lori, Leni, Luna, and Luan walking home until they see a boy by the name of Rodney being bullied so Leni, being the nice person she is decides to stand up for him, which she does. Although it ain't until Lori talk that the bullies leave. Rodney thanks Leni for standing up for him before she and the others leave. After this encounter, Rodney falls in love with Leni.

The next day Rodney watches Leni from a far but due to his status of being a nerd he doesn't talk to her at school or when she is going home. Later he writes a love poem about Leni just as Lincoln comes and after telling him he is Leni's brother,  Rodney asks for Lincoln's help to which Lincoln tells him what he needs to do to win Leni.

After getting the stuff he needs Rodney and Lincoln head over to the Loud House where Lincoln introduces Rodney and Leni to each other and Rodney finally asks Leni out for a date to which Leni says yes and they agree to go Friday. Rodney then thanks Lincoln before leaving.

That Friday Leni and Rodney go on there date and during their date they learn more about each other such as lend learning that Rodney is like Lincoln a lot while Rodney learns that Leni is afraid of spiders.

At the end of the date Rodney tells Leni that he ain't the first choice for a boyfriend and appreciates Leni for giving him a chance to which lent tells him label don't matter and after that they agree to go on another date tomorrow. They say goodbye to which Leni kisses and hugs Rodney and Rodney leaves with the happiness that Leni likes him. The story ends with Leni thanking Lincoln for introducing them.

[So the storyline flows smoothly which I really enjoyed and to be honest  didn't really see anything wrong so I give this a 10/10.]

Part 2: Characters

The characters in this story are Leni, Rodney, Lincoln, the other Loud Sisters, people at school, and the bullies. Everyone fits their descriptions pretty good and I love the character of Leni and Lincoln in this story. Now lets talk of the OC TMNT used which is Rodney. Now Rodney is a good character that I really enjoyed as he is kinda like an older Lincoln but still his very own character who learns by Leni that anyone can find love and labels mean nothing which is a beautiful lesson!

'''[I am going with a 10/10 for this one you guys! The characters are just perfect with everything!]'''

Part 3: Style

Now the style for this story is a love story. Now usually a love story feels good to me and this is no exception as it is a good love story! The lightness in this stories definitely outshines the dark parts which are only when Rodney is bullied by the bullies. And as I said before I like how this flows although I have one small problem. it is nothing important it is just I feel like the other Loud Sisters should have helped Rodney too as don't they like to meddle whenever someone is going on some sort of date or if one of them has a crush on someone. But it is a small problem and it doesn't really mind me that much as Lincoln alone can still do it great!

[Imma give this a 9/10 since everything is perfect although the sisters should've had a bigger part in helping Rodney win over Leni.]

Part 4: Does the story have anything missing?

Well other then the others sisters helping Rodney I don't think there is anything missing. Maybe in the future there might be, but right now I can't see any!

[So I guess this deserves a 10/10 so just good job TMNT1987Dude!]

Part 5: Final Rating

'''[Ok my final rating is a 39/40 which is an A and really close to an A+! This story I feel is a tiny bit better then my last review of the Fanfiction, "In Memory of a Mascot," although it is really close and my opinion can change any times. Anyway TMNT1987Dude has done Amazing to me as he is a really great writer here in the wiki. He is definitely in my top 3 writers here on the wiki. This fanfiction is one of my favorites and I hope TMNT deserves praise for this and good job for his nomination to Admin Rights proposal!'''

'''I hope you all enjoys my 2nd review! Comment down below what you thought and what fanfiction I should review next and tune in next time to Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews!'''