Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31022739-20170804152352/@comment-32202721-20170804212627

Thanks! The grammar problems in this fic weren't as numerous or egregious as the last one, but I still found other aspects of the story for Lisa to snark about. I do love writing her dialogue.

And good catches; I completely forgot about those moments. I should probably take out that chemistry line from Episode 1, but I think I'll keep the Lola moment in. You know, Rule of Funny and all that jazz.