Thread:XxSkilletSaviorxX/@comment-24200891-20170516215130/@comment-24200891-20170926041155

Good writing with what if scenarios. However don't get too far with idealisation of the story.

With this change nsl should have a different name like No Free Time. You can write a different story, mentioning in trivia that Linc's problem in nsl inspired you.

This fanfic can be "Cold and Convention". It's a completelly different story, it doesn't have to be connected.

If Linc catches the theif, this would put him in bit better light. Still he has to explain himself to Lynn. Main biggest problem with the ep was Lincoln as family thief and that the sisters didn't bother to give him tips what to do with hand-me-downs. I mentioned Luna's hand-me-down in "Brother in the Band".

Sorry, but this sounds like deus ex machina for SoS.