Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-33694397-20180513211531/@comment-33694397-20180513233806

IRR: I guess you're right, but I do think he'd be more annoyed by a pie than angered.

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(He use the knob to open the door and see's the inside, it has a few of his posters, a stack of comics, and a chair to sit on. He sits on his chair and starts reading, a knock on the door is heard)

LINCOLN: Come in. - Lincoln called

(Leni and Lana come into Lincoln tree house)

LANA: Told ya Lincoln be in here, Leni. - Lana said

LENI: Hey, little bro. - Leni said - Loved the tree house.

LINCOLN: Thanks, Leni. - Lincoln said - I hope everyone don't found out, because the house is too noisy.

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IRR: So many tense changes in these sentences.