User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Bad Parents Get Their Just Desserts/@comment-32202721-20180828210344

Dude... this is ''psychotic. ''Your obsessive hate for the Griffins here is nothing short of disturbing and creepy, and you expect us to see you as the hero when you and your friends inflict Hostel-caliber torture on two people who haven't done anything to you.

That, and the first part of the story is completely pointless, given that it has nothing to do with the rest of the story. Bunny doesn't even show up to your prolonged sadistic torture fest (not that she would do anything like that). On that note, the idea that God would decide to bring someone back to life just because He saw her loved ones mourning her is laughable at best and insulting at worst. I mean, if God can just do that on a whim, then why can't I have my grandparents back? What, am I not important enough?

Here's my advice to you: stop spamming the wiki with these incoherent self-insert mega crossover script fics and try writing something... accessible. Focus less on bringing your self-serving fantasies to life and more on just, you know, telling a story.