User blog:AngryBirdsaao1/Edward and Rocky

This is a rewrite of the 10th season episode, Edward Strikes Out, of Thomas and Friends. Hope you enjoy

(T-rated for heavy wounds and blood)

Year 2016

(Open to Lori driving Vanzilla with Lynn Sr. in the passenger seat)

Lori was driving her dad to the hospital to check on his broken arm

Lori: It's going to be ok, dad.

Lynn Sr.: I hope so. (a crack is heard) Ow.

(They stop at a level crossing to let Norman pass with cars full of pipes, Lori now has an unpleasant look on her face)

Lori: (in her head) Relax, Lori, it was in the past don't let Norman pulling pipes bother you.

(Cut to the hospital at the Royal Woods Search and Rescue Centre, Lynn Sr. is being taken care of and Lori was waiting outside of the waiting room which has train tracks laying out, shes sitting on a chair feeling upset)

a Female voice: Are you ok, Lori?

Lori: (frightened) AAAAAAAHHH!

(Camera zooms out to reveal Belle)

Lori: (breathing) Don't do that, you literally gave me a heart-attack.

Belle: I'm sorry, are you ok? Is something bothering you?

Lori: No, I'm fine, Belle, thank you.

Belle: You don't look fine, Whatever is bothering you, I can help you.

(Lori was thinking about what Belle said she quickly looks directly to the camera, then quickly cuts to a truck side breaking and pipes falling out and a little girl screaming was heard making the screen pitch black then cuts back to Lori)

To Be Continued