User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Request a Re-Write/Alternate Ending!/@comment-31490681-20170502183844

Also, a rewrite for Out on a Limo. Instead of Lincoln going to places by himself, he takes the girls, but they only get to go to places the girls want to go because Lincoln wants them to have fun. When its finally his turn, Time is up and Krby can only take them home. While the girls r happy, Lincoln is upset because he couldn't go to the places he wanted to go.