User blog comment:007Jamesdean/A Spy's Adventure./@comment-31358352-20180226090725

Wow dude, you are the man! I like what you did here and made me an awesome babysitter. This chapter has been a blast. I personally think the James Bond franchise is great and I even liked seeing that stupid Alec meet an outrageous death in the climax of Goldeneye. I saw that clip as a part of a top 10 over the top deaths video from WatchMojo on Youtube. But seeing him get shot to death by Mr. Bond, Lincoln, and Natalya was a good way to wrap up the exercise along with taking and hiding the Goldeneye stuff in a nice safe place no one's going to get to. Then there's the historical exercises. Carol kicked butt in saving Joan of Arc. If someone like her or me was there, either one of us would have saved Ms. Joan from her death sentence and put an end to the Hundred Year War sooner rather than later. Lucy also did some sweet work in her exercise trip to the Salem Witch Trials. I think the witch trials were ridicoulous and horrible since a lot of innocent people were judged and killed by bigoted, stupid, and ignorant people who wouldn't begin to comprehend the mysteries of the unknown, let known about magic. Lucy did a service in her exercise by not only saving Lori's and the Loud family's ancestor, Lorriane, but also rallying up the people persecuted during the whole ordeal and striking vengeance on those not so self-righteous morons. That was pretty fun to do for you and fun to read, too. Laney even did something historical and gnarly in being the Guardian Angel sent from Heaven to come in the nick of time to save the life of Marie Antionette from the guillotine. She definitely didn't deserve what became of her during the French Revolution. So kudos to Laney for doing her civic duty for the day. Next, Lola Loud in Bram Stoker's Dracula. Instead of Lola Loud, how about Lola Van Loudsing since she beat ol Abe Van Helsing to the punch in not only putting down Vlad Dracula, but permanently making sure he's gone forever. I think it's also great that Catherine's a daywalker now and has not only vampire powers, but they've been improved with Dracula now a dead vampire. She's going to fit in just fine in the rest of your story. Personally, I think Count Dracula serves a better role in DC Comics (preferably in The Batman vs Dracula), Marvel Comics as an enemy to Spidey, the X-Men and the Avengers, and in Castlevania. Of course, Alucard from Hellsing is more radical than Drac due to anime reasons. Of course, his origin story in Dracula Untold as Vlad the Impaler was cool, too. Anyway, the rest of the chapter was a sweet read and I've never heard of Within Temptation nor the song Jillian, but it sounds like a great goth song and if there's music video, then I'll bet it's scary but cool to watch. I have no doubt Lucy's singing voice is great. Maybe you could have her sing more with more songs from two other bands I know with female lead singers: Evanessence and Halestorm. Also, Skycycle's It's Terror Time Again was a nice song to play when it was my turn and I do have a good singing voice. I can sing like the Beatles with Let it Be, Here Comes the Sun, and Come Together and Johnny Cash with I Won't Back Down, Hurt, and most famously, Ring of Fire. I'm a little out of practice so my singing could be a little off. But with a little fine tuning and vocal training by listening to those songs again, I'll be back, baby. Of course if you're wondering if I work at a restraunt, I do not. I'm just a stay at home high school graduate. But I plan to take up online college, instead, since that way I won't leave the house, I can stay and keep my mom and my dog company while doing some chores at home, and not have to deal with all the troublesome business that takes place in attending college. I do, however, have a part time job at my dad's work where he makes artificial teeth and dentures for his clients. Mostly a category under dental work employment. I mostly come in to spruce up the place along with other odd jobs that need to be done and I can make some delivery runs up to not just doctor offices nearby, but up to the nearby Walgreens or Quik Trip gas station to supply me, Dad, my brother who also works there, or anyone else employed by my dad with some sodas or anything they are craving. Plus the pay is good and I've got a little over a $1000 in a banking account I have thanks to my Dad. Of course I do know how to cook with frozen foods, such as kicking up a frozen pizza up a couple knotchs like Emeril Lagasse. Just do a few baby bams and a good size BAM! with some cheese (shredded is best), normal, peeled onions or French fried onions, chopped peppers, bacon bits, a little spicing with some garlic powder (regular, salt, or pepper), onion powder, and Italian seasoning (need the necessary ingredients, first) and you've got a pepperoni, bacon cheeseburger, or supreme pizza that's been improved. Of course, you should follow the instructions and make sure you do the rest when preparing a pizza. Of course when it comes to burgers, I help myself to putting onions and barbecue sauce on mine. But in your universe, if you want to make me a human version of Spongebob who makes awesome Burpin Burger like hamburgers, then go with it since I can only imagine how good my burgers would be with some help from my mom since she or Melissa handle cooking up burgers and french fries for dinner when we have them on the evening menu at home. To sum it up, I think it's fine with me that I'm an excellent fry cook in your universe. Swell job as always, James. Hey, maybe you could do a near-future chapter on Hocus Pocus for Shannon now that we've found out she's related to the Sanderson sisters so maybe she could bring honor back to the Sanderson family name and hurt those three witches something fierce. Or maybe a Scooby Doo: Zombie Island or The Witch's Ghost themed chapter for next time since both of those Scooby Doo movies are my favorites alongside Scooby Doo and the Alien Invaders. Anyway, put these down on a piece of paper that says "do these stories at a later date" since you've got other chapters you want to do and a life. So no problem for me. I've got my own stuff to do to keep me preoccupied so I'll wait and see what your next fanfic chapter is going to be about. Have a good night and I'll see you around, James. Later!