User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Tokyo Louds/@comment-26901681-20161116062000

I'm glad I finally came around to reading this, it may have taken a while but it was worth it. Great job to you both, I hope to see more collaborations between you two in the future.

My only complaint with the story is that Lana seemed a bit out of character. I don't think she would say that the best part of the trip was no Lola. Lana and Lola seem to enjoy each others company despite their differences.