Thread:XxSkilletSaviorxX/@comment-24200891-20170516215130/@comment-24200891-20170727065539

Congratulation for prediction about Lynn Sr. and Lisa's device.

I had plan for bigger epilogue of Aqualouds but I thought some would be OOC. How would it look? After water gun battle all siblings detect the backyard got muddy. Lisa and Lola leave because they have no interest and find this too gross respectively. Luan throws mud in Lynn's pants like snow in Lincoln's pants in snow bored. Leni takes a mud mask. Luna tries to sliding on the muddy ground and asking Lincoln to join her. Then Luna, Lynn and Lincoln play bounding ball. Lori refuses to stay there until she gets hit by mudball. Because nobody wants to admit who did this, this starts a mud fight. Paresnts are mad at them for making whole mess. They order them to clean. They do and feel bad but claim it's totally wroth it. Tell me what would be wrong or good from those ideas for expansion.

I don't write fanfics now because I hardly find time on this on my vacations. I have 2 concepts. 1 Lynn and Lincoln arguing for hanging out with Luna, as both of them. 2. Tabby is jealous for Sam because she thinks she's hogging Luna from her.