User blog comment:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's FanFiction Reviews 7: No Such Love (Parts 1 and 2)/@comment-32055298-20170716034953/@comment-26302585-20170716072017

You know something else. Why was Luna the only one spared? Why just Luna? She was no better than everyone else in the episode, so why is she the only one who gets spared and Lincoln reconciles with while the other sisters have to be miserable living in a foster home? Lori is really demonized in this story and... it just doesn't work in my book. Why demonize Lori? Sure she can mean in the show, but this is just overkill. And Lynn's suicide. I thought it was totally unecessary. Sure, she was being a sore loser... but she did not deserve to die. She could've learned from her mistake and become a better person, but no, she goes and kills herself. I just facepalmed at that. But, it's not finshed, so maybe things will look up. These are just my gripes with the story. I don't think it's terrible, but it's not that good either to me either. The one thing I do like is how Lincoln and Luna reconcile and bond in the story, but it doesn't fix my gripes with the story.

If your reading this, MuppetSpot, please don't take offense to this. I do not mean this as an attack.