User blog comment:AndrewBrauer/Whipped - Alternate Version/@comment-32346268-20170705030539/@comment-32055298-20170705032705

Look I don't agree that it's better but at least it was trying to be different, while this story was cliche and gave blind favoritism to 2 sisters, is booboo's worse overall probably but it's mean spiritedness didn't feel anywhere near as cruel here, the sisters aren't actively hurting Lincoln in it at least as well as most of the characters (still unlikable), here there written rather sadistically, also it had a rushed happy ending frankly but that's not even the main problem.