User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: Lori's Birthday/@comment-4618045-20170710221533

Thank you for taking the time to read and look at my story. It means a lot from a writer like you, someone that I deeply respect.

I was surprised you chose "Lori's Birthday", given how I wrote it back in October when I was just getting into the show. It started off as a weird thought ("What if one of the Louds was a stillborn?") and then things just happened. Even now, I think of other ideas that pivot off that one concept (I'm a weird person). But I was surprised in a good way.

About prose, I was surprised you said that it was succinct. I'm flattered you feel that way and I thank you for the compliment. There are times where I feel like I'm being too tell-y and holding the reader's hand too much. It was interesting to hear.

Finally, about Adherence to Canon, I honestly feel like I dodged a bullet. I was surprised that the score in that category was as high as it was (then again, I was surprised at how high all the scores were).

Overall, you have made my day with this. I don't know how I can repay you for this generous act. The first thing I can do is say thank you again. I hope you keep going on to do great things

As for suggestions, I wouldn't want to say any in a place where everybody can see them (I don't want to call a writer "bad" without an explanation. This comment would be longer than necessary for me to explain why.).

P.S.: Weavillain (if you're reading this), thank you. You're another writer I greatly admire (I love "Popcorn Flick" and "Babysitter from Heaven"). I didn't realize that my own attempts at writing had caught your eye and it means a lot to me that you put in a good word for me. I wish you well going forward!