Thread:AnimationFan15/@comment-27264989-20170423214610/@comment-24364245-20170423220415

Try to have a little more originality with your stories. I noticed how some of your recent stories seem to have extremely similar plots to episodes of other cartoons or other fanfictions.

You also need to work on the characters. Treat them as friendly. Only make them unfriendly if it's meant for the plot.

If you ever make a sequel to an episode you don't like, try to make it consistent with episode it's based on. I mean, in IaLLLLH, the siblings worked together to find the money. This was never mentioned in your sequel. Another major flaw, which others have stated, is that Lily wasn't fighting with Lincoln to find the money, yet you made her do so in your story.

That's all I've got at the moment.