Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-33694397-20180513211531/@comment-33694397-20180514235723

IRR: That is true, a lot of people are distancing themselves from the bad cliches.

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(Lola was horrified when she heard that, she went to Lisa's room, only for an explosion goes off, sending her flying)

LOLA: Maybe not. - Lola declined

(Finally, she went to Lana's room, but her twin is enraged ans she turning to the other cheek)

LOLA: Not you too, Lana! - Lola begged - C'mon, please!

LANA: You hate Lincoln, which is not cool! - Lana scolded - You always fight me as well!

LOLA: True, but that's what twins do, Lana! - Lola said - I don't want you to ignore me!

LANA: Leave, Lola. - Lana said, furious - Now!

(Lola leaves and Lana shuts her door, she opens it again, Lola smiles thinking she'll forgive her)

LANA: Oh and FYI,  you'll be sleeping on the couch tonight and you're uninvited to my birthday party. - Lana said

(She shuts her door again, Lola is incredibly guilty of this ordeal and sighs in defeat)

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IRR: I feel like I'll just be repeating myself if I talk about the problems with this scene. But how do you uninvite your own twin to your birthday party? Usually at this age twins celebrate their brithdays together.