User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 6

The 6th part is now here, we are now 3/4 of the way through, and in case if you missed the other parts...

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Part 4

Part 5

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OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Lori and Lynn are now back in their own bodies, and are back to wearing their usual outfits.

Leni (see part 2’s overview)

Luna (see part 2’s overview)

Lincoln (see parts 2 and 4’s overviews)

Lana (see parts 3 and 4’s overviews)

The rest of the Loud family remain the same.

The Story Continues Here
(The story continues with somebody’s hand being shown up close, with the fingernails being painted a light shade of green.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): With this nail polish put on your nails, it makes you look totes pretty, just look at how it shines in the light.

(It is then revealed that Leni is painting Lincoln’s fingernails, or in that case, her own fingernails. Leni and Lincoln are at the living room.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Don’t you mean your nails being painted to make yourself look pretty? I must say, it looks amazing.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Now just let it dry up, and you’ll soon be ready to go to the mall.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): The mall?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Like yeah, didn’t Lori or Luan tell you?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): They never did tell me, when did they decide to take me to the mall?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Yesterday after Lori got back from her date with Bobby.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, I don’t know about this, I mean, we’re still stuck in each other’s bodies.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Hey relax Linky, it’s not like someone out there is going to hear a girl sounding like a boy.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Hmmm, perhaps my voice is getting a little deep, maybe I should go through most of the day without saying anything at all.

(Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lily all enter the living room.)

Lori: That’s the same idea we’ve also had as well.

Luan: While Lincoln being out with us, he won’t have to say a single word.

Lynn: Just leave most of the talking to us.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Oh thanks!!!

(Later that day Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), Lola and Lily were all boarding on Vanzilla.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): It is great and all that you’re taking me out to the mall with you, but I don’t really think that you have to.

Luan: We’re just doing something nice for you, after what you did for us in the last few days.

(The six said siblings are all on Vanzilla, and are now on the road. While driving, Lori notices Lincoln feeling worried.)

Lori: Hey Lincoln, I see something’s the matter with you.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Oh, it’s about that other day last week.

Luan: Hmmm, I think I have a feeling about what you’re talking about.

Lola: I sort of have the same feeling too.

Lynn: It must be Ronnie Anne isn’t it.

Lily: Wah nie!!!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Yeah, you all know about that one joke I told Ronnie Anne, and Ronnie Anne didn’t laugh, she just looked at me like she was confused. (Sighs) I think it’s over between us.

Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lily: What?

Lynn: Oh, Lincoln, don’t say that.

Luan: Yeah, that joke you told Ronnie Anne was a week ago wasn’t it? Maybe Ronnie Anne finally got the joke, but wasn’t able to tell you yet.

Lori: And speaking of Ronnie Anne, we’re tagging her along with us.

(The six siblings arrive at the Santiago’s house, where Ronnie Anne was waiting in the front.)

Luan, Lynn, and Lola: Hi Ronnie Anne.

Ronnie Anne: Hey guys, thanks for asking me come with you to the mall, I definitely need fresh air around here.

(Ronnie Anne boards on Vanzilla and the seven kids were soon on their way to the mall.)

Ronnie Anne: So Lori, Bobby told me you’ve been working out so much.

Lori: Oh, I sure have.

(Lori flexes her right arm while driving.)

Lynn: I… heheh… taught her so much about working out, that she really pulled all of it off.

(Lynn winks at Lori, Lori winks Lynn back.)

Luan: So, heard any jokes lately Ronnie Anne?

Ronnie Anne: Lincoln did tell me a joke last week, but I didn’t find it funny at first, I’ll not go in any detail.

Lola: No need to tell us, Lincoln already told us anyway.

(Ronnie Anne notices Lincoln all quiet at the front passenger seat, and is unaware that he is in Leni’s body.)

Ronnie Anne: Hey Leni, you seem to be very quiet over there.

Lori: Oh, uh, “Leni” here has lost “her” voice, but it’s not that bad.

Luan: Yeah, “she” soon is getting “her” voice back, right “Leni”?

(Lincoln nods his (Leni’s) head for yes.)

Ronnie Anne: Oh, sorry to hear about your voice.

(Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), Lola, Lily, and Ronnie Anne arrive at the mall.)

Lori: Alright everybody we‘re here.

(The seven said kids exit Vanzilla and enter the mall.)

Female Employee: Well well well, if it isn’t Leni.

(Lincoln waves hello in a little nervous way, giving a little nervous smile.)

Luan: “Leni” here has lost “her” voice.

Female Employee: Oh, that’s too bad, are you feeling okay Leni?

(Lincoln nods his (Leni’s) head for yes.)

Lori: “She” should be able get “her” voice back soon, maybe tomorrow or the day after.

Female Employee: Well okay, get well soon Leni.

Lori: Well I’m off to get myself a tennis racket.

Lynn: And I’ll help pick the best tennis racket that’s suited for you.

(Lori and Lynn head off to a sports shop, with Lily being carried by Lori.)

Luan: Come with us “Leni”, we can shop for clothes for us and our other siblings.

Lola: You too, Ronnie Anne.

Ronnie Anne: Okay, might as well.

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body), Luan, Lola, and Ronnie Anne all walk to a clothes store, and they look at some of the finest clothes that they like.)

Lola: Ooooh, now this looks promising. (To Luan, Lincoln (Leni), and Ronnie Anne) What do you all think?

(Lola reveals a golden dress and a silver dress.)

Luan: Now those dresses will definitely look good on you.

Ronnie Anne: Very amazing.

(Lincoln gives a thumb up.)

Luan: Ah, this dress looks good on me.

(Luan reveals a yellow dress with flowers all around the skirt.)

Lola: Now that’s a good dress.

(Lincoln nods his (Leni’s) head in agreement, and gives a thumb up.)

Luan: Hey “Leni”, any kind of clothing that will look good on you?

(Lincoln looks at a big selection of clothing, then he sees a dress that’s in white and blue and picks one up.)

Luan: Now that dress looks perfect.

(Lincoln then whispers to Luan’s ear.)

Luan: Oh, you want to get something for “Lincoln”?

Ronnie Anne: I know what you should get for Lincoln.

(Meanwhile Lori and Lynn (with Lily) were deciding on a good tennis racket, then Lori sees one colored completely in light blue.)

Lori: Now this one literally calls me.

Lynn: Good choice, even matches the shirt.

Lori: Did you also remember to pack my gym shoes?

Lynn: Sure did, they're back at Vanzilla.

Lori: Great, now to purchase this racket and meet back with the others.

(The scene cuts back to Ronnie Anne, Lincoln (Leni), Luan, and Lola at the clothes store, and Ronnie Anne pulls out a pair of pants.)

Ronnie Anne: I think this should look good on Lincoln, what do guys think?

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) takes a closer look at the pants, and then gives a thumb up.)

Luan: It’s perfect for “Lincoln”.

Lola: Oh yes, “Lincoln” will definitely like it.

(Lori, Lynn, and Lily join back with the rest of the group.)

Lori: There you all are.

Luan: And just in time too.

Ronnie Anne: We just picked this pair of pants that Lincoln would like.

(Lori and Lynn look at the pants.)

Lynn: Hmmm, that actually does look good for Lincoln.

Lori: Ah, and you know what else would look good on Lincoln.

(Lori pulls out a white shirt with a big orange diagonal stripe as well as dark blue text on the shirt.)

Lori: This shirt saying “The best kid on the block”.

Luan: Oh yeah, “Lincoln” will love that one.

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) gives a smile and thumbs up.)

Lynn: Yeah “he” will. (Stomach grumbling) Ooh, looks like all that riding and shopping is making me hungry.

(Later after purchasing clothes, the 7 kids are at a table having lunch.)

Luan: Well that was some great shopping wasn’t it?

Lola: You know very well that was great shopping, I have two new dresses that I can wear for the next pageant coming up.

Lori: And I have myself a new tennis racket so that Lynn and I can play a nice game of tennis.

Luan: And let’s not forget the white and blue dress for “Leni” here.

Ronnie Anne: Yeah it was good shopping for all of you (sighs) and at least I hope Lincoln will like that comfortable pair of pants.

(The 6 Loud kids can see that Ronnie Anne was feeling a little depressed.)

Lori: Hey, Ronnie Anne, how about you buy all of us smoothies. (Gives Ronnie Anne 40 dollars)

Ronnie Anne: (Gives a little smile) You got it, Lori.

(Ronnie Anne walks off to get smoothies.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Phew, finally… I do appreciate that what you’re doing for me by taking me with you to the mall is really nice of you.

Luan: It’s like we’ve said, it’s our way of saying thanks to you for what you did in the last few days.

Lori: After helping me get ready for my date with Bobby yesterday…

Lola: And after keeping me in comfort when I was in pain…

Luan: And after convincing Dad to switch bodies back with Mom…

Lynn: And getting Dad to let Mom back to their bedroom…

Lori: We knew there had to be some way to repay you.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Wow, I never thought all those things I did would get all of you to do something nice for me.

Lori: Well only half of us to carry out our thanks to you, while the other half of our sisters have to stay at home.

(Ronnie Anne returns with 7 smoothies.)

Ronnie Anne: Alright everyone, I’m back with smoothies, even one for you Lily.

Lily: Foo thee!!!

(After Ronnie Anne and the 6 Loud kids all had their lunch and smoothies, they all exit the mall.)

Ronnie Anne: It’s been great coming with you guys to the mall, (sighs) I wish Lincoln would have come.

Luan: Still feeling down about that joke Lincoln told you?

Ronnie Anne: Yeah, I felt like I’ve hurt Lincoln’s feelings, all because I didn’t get the joke he told me.

Lynn: Aw, we feel you.

Ronnie Anne: Then the next day, I thought again about Lincoln’s joke, and then I finally got the joke, and it just had to be funny that I cracked up so much.

Luan: Ah see, I knew you’d find Lincoln’s joke to be funny.

Lola: So does that mean you’re not breaking up with Lincoln?

Ronnie Anne: What, break up? No, well at least not after those two times.

Lori: You don’t have to remind me.

Ronnie Anne: At least you know now I found Lincoln’s joke to be funny, (sighs) if only Lincoln knew, but he thinks I don’t want to talk to him anymore.

Lynn: Aw, poor Ronnie.

Ronnie Anne: If you see Lincoln, please tell him I’m sorry for hurting his feelings.

Luan: Well actually, we don’t need to tell Lincoln at all.

Ronnie Anne: You already told him?

Lola: No, more like you just told Lincoln right now.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Because Lincoln is right here, and I forgive you Ronnie Anne.

Ronnie Anne: Lincoln? Is that really you?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Yes Ronnie Anne it’s me, stuck in the body of one of my sisters.

Ronnie Anne: What has happened to you?

Lori: Well, let’s just say another one of Lisa’s experiment mishaps.

Ronnie Anne: Wow, such a crazy sister obsessed with science that you have.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): I thought that after I told you that joke, you’d never want to see me again, and I feared our relationship would be over.

Ronnie Anne: Lincoln, our relationship will never be over, we will always be together no matter what, all of your sisters believed that somewhere inside of me is a heart that’s two sizes greater, (to Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lily) and you were all right about me, even you Lily.

Lily: Hahah!!!

Ronnie Anne: (To Lincoln) there is nothing that will ever tear us apart; you will always have a place in my heart.

(Lincoln was flattered, some tears come out from his (Leni’s) eyes, and he hugs Ronnie Anne.)

Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lily: Aaaaaaaaaawww.

Lori: I always love these moments.

Luan: We’re all glad that both of you have worked it all out.

Ronnie Anne: Thank you for taking me along with you.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): And me along, I couldn’t be able to ask for the best time, and you all made it the right time.

Lori: It’s all that we’re able to do for you.

Lola: Cause you’re our brother, and we’re all family.

Lynn: Now let’s get to the tennis courts, Lori asked me for a game of tennis yesterday.

Ronnie Anne: I didn’t know Lori can play.

Lori: Well actually, this is literally my first time playing, and after all the exercise “I’ve” made, I want to put my newly shaped body to the test.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): I don’t know guys; I was thinking we should head back home, I think I’ve gotten enough being out here while in Leni’s body.

Luan: Oh come on Linc’, you don’t want “tennis” all the fun, hahahahahahaha.

Lynn: Besides, we have plenty of time before Lisa’s body switchimajig gets fully charged.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, I suppose I’ll see you and Lori play.

Lynn: That’s the sprit.

Lori: Then it’s off to the tennis courts.

(Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (Leni), Lola, Lily, and Ronnie Anne all get on Vanzilla, and they ride off to the tennis courts. The scene transitions to the tennis courts, where Lori is in her gym shoes, and bouncing a tennis ball.)

Lori: Let’s get playing.

(Lynn is at the opposite side of the tennis court, spinning her tennis racket.)

Lynn: I’m ready when you are.

(Lori starts by hitting the tennis ball, and for a long time Lori and Lynn have been hitting the tennis ball back and forth until Lori began to lose her footing before reaching to hit the tennis ball. She managed to hit the ball to Lynn’s side of the court, Lynn got the high advantage as Lori was on one far side of the court, and Lynn hit the tennis ball at the other far side of the court, and scoring a point.)

Luan: And Lynn scores a point.

(Luan was holding a scoreboard with the names Lori and Lynn on it. The scoreboard changes from 0 to 1 for Lynn, with the scoreboard saying “Lori: 0 Lynn: 1”. The game keeps going, and after some time Lynn scores another point. The scoreboard now reads “Lori: 0 Lynn: 2”. Lynn scores again, and now the scoreboard reads “Lori: 0 Lynn: 3”.)

Luan: After 3 rounds, Lynn is holding a pretty good lead, but will Lori get herself on the board? We shall find out.

Lori: This time, I will get this.

(Lynn hits the tennis ball, and after so many hits from Lori and Lynn, Lori hits a very fast one, causing Lynn to miss the shot.)

Luan: And Lori finally scores.

(The scoreboard now reads “Lori: 1 Lynn: 3”. As the game continues, Lori scores another point, with scoreboard now reading “Lori: 2 Lynn: 3”. Lynn scores the next point, and the scoreboard now reads “Lori: 2 Lynn: 4”. Lori then scores two more points in the next two rounds, and the scoreboard is now tied “Lori: 4 Lynn: 4”.)

Luan: After 8 rounds we’re now tied 4 and 4, and this is the final round, someone’s going to win this.

(Lori and Lynn go hitting the tennis ball back and forth for a long time, but after many hits, Lynn misses the shot, and Lori wins the game, the scoreboard then reads “Lori: 5 Lynn: 4”.)

Luan: And that’s the game.

Lori: Now that was such great game was it, I guess all that working out “I’ve” done literally paid me off.

Lynn: Maybe, too much, it would’ve been better for me if Lincoln played, but I can’t with Lincoln stuck in someone else’s body.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): But overall, you both played great with lots of effort, and it is true about one thing, I couldn’t play tennis while in a body of one of my sisters.

Lynn: Which is why, I want the old Lincoln back.

Lola: I want him back in his old body too.

Luan: So do I.

Lori: Same here.

Lily: Ah me.

Ronnie Anne: And even me.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): After all that I’ve done for you, and what you’ve done for me, I greatly appreciate how desperate you all are in wanting what I originally looked like since the day I was born, the Lincoln you all know and love.

Lori: Well, let’s get back home.

(The scene transitions to the 7 kids riding on Vanzilla, the sun was setting, and Ronnie Anne is getting dropped off at her home.)

Ronnie Anne: Well, bye everybody.

Lori, Luan, Lynn, and Lola: Bye Ronnie Anne.

Lily: Bye!!!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): See ya Ronnie Anne.

Ronnie Anne: I’ll see your real face when you get back to your old self, smell ya later lame-o.

(The 6 Loud kids continue on, back to their home, and the scene cuts to Lisa and Lily’s room, where the body switching machine is 99% charged, and then moves up to 100% charged.)

Lisa: The machine is once again at full charge.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well it’s been fun being out of the house, and I had a good time, and now is the time to get my old body back.

Lisa: Are you sure? What about letting Luna change back?

Luna (In Lana’s body): It’s alright dudes, as Lincoln’s big sis, I’ll let him switch back to the old Lincoln we all know.

Lynn: And besides it wouldn’t be fun for me to play with someone who’s in a different body, and there’s only one kind of Lincoln that I want.

Lori: The one kind of Lincoln we all want.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Aw, thank you, thank you everyone.

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) and Lori hug eachother. Leni (In Lincoln’s body), Luna (In Lana’s body), Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lola, and Lily join in to hug Lincoln.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Well, I guess I’ll be going in one of those cubicle thingies.

(Leni goes into one of the pods.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, see you all on the other side.

Luan: You definitely deserve it Linc’.

(Lincoln proceeds to the other pod.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Oh, and guys, thanks again for a great time while we were out.

Lori: All part of repaying you for all you did for us the past few days.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Alright, time to get my body back.

(Lincoln enters the pod. Lisa pushes the red button on the small device. Mist covers the bodies of Leni and Lincoln, Lincoln closes his (Leni’s) eyes, and the entire scene fades into white. Then the voices of Lincoln’s sisters, and his parents, echo, and a faded close up of Lincoln’s eyes are shown in the white background, closed up.)

Lola’s voice: You’re the best brother that we’ll ever have.

Luan’s voice: Even when we’re down you always make a way to make us feel bright again.

Rita’s voice: We’re proud to have called you our son.

Leni’s voice: We love you Linky.

Luna’s voice: We all love you bro.

Lily’s voice: Brah ver!!!

Lori’s voice: We wouldn’t trade it for the world.

Lynn Sr.’s voice: You will, and always be a part of our family.

Rita’s voice: Lincoln Loud.

(The faded close up of Lincoln’s eyes open and then disappears from the white background, the scene fades back to Lisa and Lily’s room where one of the pod doors was being opened by Lisa, followed by somebody coming out of the pod, revealing to be Lincoln’s body.)

Lincoln: The old Lincoln Loud is back.

Lori, Luna (In Lana’s body), Luan, Lynn, Lucy, and Lola: LINCOLN!!!

(The sisters gather up on Lincoln.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Our brother’s finally back in his body.

Lynn: Welcome back to the old life Lincoln.

(Lori lifts Lincoln then gently hugs him.)

Lori: Oh how I miss the old Lincoln, I never want to see him change again.

(Lincoln hugs Lori.)

Lincoln: And I’ll never will, because I’m here remain as the Lincoln you always know and that I’ll always be, and nobody can think otherwise, because I am, Lincoln Loud.

(Lily crawls up to Lincoln, and Lincoln picks up Lily, and they both hug. Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Leni, who is now back in her body, and Leni exits the pod.)

Leni: (stretches) Oh yeah, I feel 16 again, and I feel so comfortable in this pants, oh, I see Lincoln is dressed entirely like the way I normally dress like, well except for all the white hair.

Lincoln: (Rolls his eyes in a happy kind of way) Well, there’s the old Leni we all know.

(All siblings laugh including Leni (Lana (In Luna’s body) is not there). The scene then cuts to Lincoln in his room, as well as showing four things on Lincoln’s desk that he had just taken off: The long extensions of white hair, the pair of red hoop earrings, the sunglasses, and the fake eyelashes. Lincoln is also shown that he is no longer wearing the dress that Leni usually wears.)

Lincoln: (To the viewers) Well, I’m finally back in my body, and everything between me and Ronnie Anne have worked out very well thanks to my sisters, and if it weren’t for them, I would still be thinking Ronnie Anne didn’t want to see me again, now all of my troubles are all over, and it’s good to be the Lincoln Loud everyone knows I once was and the Lincoln Loud I’ll always will be.

(Lincoln may be back in his body, but this story is not over yet.)

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 7

Other parts
Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 7 (Coming soon)

Part 8 (Work in progress)