User blog comment:Thomperfan/Episode 2 is here!/@comment-32202721-20180219205830

Not bad. I agreed with most of your assessment, though I think you were taking Lola and Lana's hall monitor bit a little too seriously. They're kids who were given a little bit of authority and wanted to milk it for all it was worth; that was the joke.

Also, I'd suggest trimming down your intro. A video intro should rarely be more than thirty seconds.