User blog:Hollyy/TLH Fanfiction 2: The Quiet House

This is my second fanfiction. Feedback would be great.

The Quiet House
(In The Loud House Living Room, The Loud Kids are fighting over the remote, as usual.)

Lincoln: (To the Audience) In a Family Like mine, things can get pretty Loud. We are the Louds after all!

I was here first! First born, and first to come into the living room!

Lynn: But a really big football games about to come on!

(The Loud Kids continue fighting, and Lynn Sr. comes in.)

Lynn Sr: Kids! You're too loud!

Luan: But we are the Louds! Heh heh!

(Everyone except for dad moans)

 Lynn Sr: Nice one!



 Lana: How about we play the quiet game! We can be competitive while being quiet!



 Everyone: Ohh! That’s a great idea!



 Lynn Sr: Okay, you guys get to it!



 Lana: Alright, speak of anything you need to say before we begin. Speak now or forever hold your silence. I will give a thumbs up when the game is over.



 (Everyone is silent.)



 Lana: Last call!



 (Everyone stays silent.)



<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lana: Alright, then we shall begin…… Now!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Everyone becomes silent, and everyone will mouth what they are saying..)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Everyone goes to their rooms.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Leni: (Runs out into the Hallway) Eeee! I saw the cutest outfit online! (Covers Mouth)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Luan: (Can’t resist making a pun) Guess it’s Silent Sound around here? Get it? Instead of Sonic Sound, Silent Sound? (laughs) Okay, I'll admit, that one was pretty baaddd.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Time passes, it is now night and nobody else has spoken a word.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: Goodnight Everyone-Oops!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Only Lori, Luna, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, Lola, Lisa, and Lily remain.)

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Morning Comes)

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lori: Good Morning Everyone! Whoops! Oh well, I didn’t care about this stupid contest anyway. Atleast now I can video chat with Bobby.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Leni, Luan, Lincoln: Good Morning Lori, Glad to have you join us losers!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (At Breakfast, Luna, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, Lola, Lisa, and Lily don’t say a word.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lynn Sr: Wow, they sure are committed to this, aren’t they?

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lisa: I’m out, I need to be able to laugh maniacally when I do experiments.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (For the Afternoon, The Losers sit and talk while watching tv and the current Louds remaining go through with their daily activities without saying a word.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lucy: (Sigh) I can’t come up with an idea for a poem. Oh, I’m out of the competition, Oh well.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lily: Poo Poo!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: Well, Lily’s out, come here Lily! Come join us!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (It’s Dinnertime now, and it’s almost the end of the second day of quiet.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Luna: I’m out! I need to be able to sing! Gotta keep my voice sharp in case I have a big break!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: Welcome to the Loser Team!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Bedtime)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lincoln, Lucy, Lisa: Goodnight Guys! By the way, you have to go to school AND stay quiet.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (Only Lynn, Lana, and Lola remained.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (The Next Day in The Morning.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: I’ll make sure Lynn doesn’t say a word.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lynn:(Mouths) Oh, you can trust me not to say a word, I need to win this! Gah!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> (After School.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lucy: Lola’s out, she yelled at some kid for looking ugly.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lola: Ugh! It’s not fair! Ughhhh!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: Welcome to the Loser Club!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lola: Shut Up Lincoln! Nobody cares about YOUR opinion.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lincoln: Geez.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lola: Ugh! I’m going to my room! (Stomps upstairs.)

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lynn: (Mouths) I’m not giving up anytime soon!

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"> Lana: (Mouths) Me either!

Lori: You're gonna have give up someday.

(A week later)

Lana: (Gives Thumbs Up) The Quiet Game is Officially over! Me and Lynn are tied!

Lynn: Hey! I won because I stayed quiet for the whole time! You gave up!

Lana: It was a week of being silent. I thought it needed over with!

(Lana and Lynn continue to fight over who won The Quiet Game.)

Lincoln: I have a great idea! How about All of the people who gave up and talked won because we’re supposed to be loud! We’re The Loud Family!

Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lucy, Lola, Lisa: I like that idea!

Lisa: So technically, Leni won because she talked first.

Leni: (Gasps) Wait?! I won something?!? Yay!!!!

Lori: Congrats Leni.

Lincoln: Yeah, great job!

THE END