User blog comment:ColinMiller1989/I Meet The Louds/@comment-32346268-20170622190517

It would be better if you said you are 14 in this and not 21, because an adult having a crush on a teenager sounds pedophilic. Also, you decided to make Lynn have a crush on an adult!? That's like Blossom from the PPG reboot somehow having a crush on some self-insert writer despite him being older than her. This has got to be one of the worst fanfics I've seen...