Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-28872366-20160903214819/@comment-24200891-20160911200857

I'm glad you like prologue of my 11th fanfic. Now I need to write about how they get separated. How about this? Lana finds a rare beetle and tries to catch it. Lisa chases her so she could study it. They go too far so Luna follows them. Luna realises there is an echo so she decides to sing but it's a bad idea as it causes the cliff to break so they go down. Lincoln and Lynn go to catch them but they all fall down.

I start to feel I overuse Lynn. I wondered about replacing her in this story with Ronnie as they have similar personalities. But this is a family trip. Another matter is number of tents. Do you think they all would have 10 separate tents or 5 tents for pair? In the latter scenario Lincoln would need to decide with which sis he should have to share tent. Lynn, Lola and Lori would be the worse choices. I think he would have nothing against sharing tent with Leni, Luna or Luan.