User blog comment:BigFanofEntertainment/Dance, Dance Resolution - Epilogue/@comment-31022739-20170502225030/@comment-26302585-20170502234130

Thanks for the criticisms. I just think Lincoln having one last talk with the sisters at the end would've made the a little better. We didn't really get any closure between them. We don't even know what happened to the sisters at the end. Did Lincoln talk with them and make up with them? We never really see it. I know we can assume it (especially given the episodes that follow), but I would've like to have seen it. I'm sort of new at writing, so I still need to work on getting the characters right as I possibly can. I understand your point about the lack of humor. Humor isn't really my strong suit. I try to think of a joke for what I write if I can, but I'm not the best at jokes.

I appreciate the criticisms. You're the first person to look at one of my works critically.