Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-31231137-20180913233617/@comment-31231137-20180914113105

Yeah, I see what you mean. It starts off pretty good, but then gets a little too edgy. I might consider doing it how you suggested, but I do have another fanfic idea on my mind that I think will work. It’s kind of a rewrite of Net Gains (even though I did love the episode, I had envisioned specifically how I initially wanted the plot to go), but while the idea of Lynn ending up on a terrible sports team still remains, how she handles it will be much different, so I’ll probably retitle it. Thank you for the advice, though.