User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Protocol Practice/@comment-26981664-20170206124142

I found some errors:

LANA: (bitter) Yeah, they gonna pay for this for what they done. - Lana said - Messing with our brother like that.

LUNA: Yeah, Lincoln, we were wrong yesterday, we should've explained the sister protocol more clearly, we're sorry. - Luna said

You got your words and your past tenses wrong.

Anyway, when they get back home, and the meaner sisters, or Five Deadly Venoms (is who I like to call them) sees Lincoln like this, they're gonna regret it BIG TIME!