User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Pretty Fly for a White-Haired Guy/@comment-4618045-20170708025253

Ah snap!

I knew I could count on you to spin this concept into something exciting. I chuckled when Lincoln started calling himself "Linkin Logg" (and then you broke the fourth wall).

My heart goes out to Leni. I wish I could reach my hand out and hug her and make her feel all better. It breaks me to see her cry (but I bet it breaks you as well).

Finally, I'm glad it didn't just end with Linc- I mean Linkin Logg getting humiliated. I'm glad that Lincoln and Lucy get to work together and come out on top.

Overall great job!