User blog comment:Rageman82/Extended Epilogue - It's a Loud (4X) House/@comment-26253276-20180609031000

Rating: 7/10 (Crashed 9-2)

Stars: ⭐⭐⭐☆☆ 3 of 5

Rank: B+

Room for Improvement: Slight

Suggestions: James and Normand do not have tk be in every one of your fanfictions. One of the Louds could have been reminded of their fortune in the midst or even before the fight.