User blog comment:TheMaximumMatt/Fanfiction - Leni See, Leni Do/@comment-24669562-20171115055230

If I had a laugh meter, it would have gone off the charts because I was increasingly laughing harder throughout the story, at least until I got to the part about Lily (that's just me).

The part about Leni acting like Luna reminded me of the Arthur episode "Ladonna's Like List," and what she's been doing to George (you should see it yourself if you like Arthur and never seen the show or that episode of the show before, it's in Season 20. Only Leni was even worse, and much sillier! Too bad she made her siblings go deaf! ..at least temporarily.

Then when she tried to tell those jokes. When we get to the pea soup part, I said "WHAT?" in a high voice, not at you but at Leni. I also found it funny that Luan would give Leni a ticket. I was like, "Luan might as well have been a cop..." or something like that. I also thought she was giving her a ticket to one of her comedy shows so she could learn to be a better comedian.

Then she tries to act like Lucy and... and Lily? Seriously, Leni? Did like the part where Lily expressed her anger and threw her toy at Leni! Smooth move! I mean "great choice!"

As I was reading this, I said "Not only is Leni not winning over her brother, she's losing her sisters!" or something like that.

Much of this made me laugh, until it started to get a little more serious (from the time Lori and Lincoln were talking about Leni to the end of the story.) Some of this also shocked me (I cannot remember which parts. Poor Lincoln getting his retake picture worse than originally (kind of reminds me of that Spongebob episode where Spongebob tries to stay clean.)

This would make a good Loud House episode, I mean it may be rewritten if it becomes an episode but this would make a good episode. And this is way better than anything I would have done or tried to do!

Excellent work! I busted out laughing through this! Would have been better if I didn't cough during my laughs!