User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: Lincoln is Done/@comment-31022739-20170816201853

Excellent review for a horrible story. You know your fic is bad when any one installment out of  the "Widdle" series, as disgusting and puke-inducing as it is, is a better, more coherent story than what you've written up.

Everything from the contrived ending, the forced melodrama, the stupidity of all of the characters, the tryhard edginess behind Lincoln's character, and the botchy grammar makes this the worst The Loud House fanfiction I've ever read. It's...truly astounding how there doesn't seem to be anything that the author pulls off in a reputable light, at least not to a signifciant degree. There's hardly anything salvagable to be found, and the littles bits of credibility that are present are marred by the encompassing incompetence that blots every chapter.

It's stories like these that make me wonder if the authors have any sort of love or respect for the show that they're writing for. Yeah, I get that no one's perfect, and that one is bound to make a few errant hiccups here and there, but at least that happens with an earnest attempts at trying to write for the Louds and the rest of the cast.

This goes way beyond "Ron the Death Eater" Loud sisters and Fanon/St.!Linc, two tropes that annoy the bejesus out of me when I see them in TLH fanfics without a good enough reason. This is truly a benchmark in a sheer lack of understanding, focus, characterization, presentation, and any other essential part of a competent story.

Simply put, "Lincoln is Done" fails as a The Loud House fanfiction and fails as a story in general.