Thread:Harburton81/@comment-24200891-20170221195603/@comment-24200891-20170221210651

You read my Lucy's Birth and commented "nice". For long I wondered why Lucy is pale, after reading some medical articles I came to theory she's pale because her blood system doesn't properly transport oxygen because she's a preterm baby. I admit it was scary and bit dark but made the story interesting that newborn Lucy is sick and needs to spend some time in incubator. I read about how to take care with preterm babies after they leave the hospital. There weren't much details, only that they need lot of love and care. I came there with idea of Linc being afraid of Lucy initially but eventually getting fond to her. Baby Lucy here is crazy about Lincoln because he's the very first person she saw. It works like ducklings believe the very first thing they see is their mom. What more do you think about the story and how I presented baby Lucy?

MelanchoLinc has such slow progress because I'm quite busy, I wish to have more ideas for expanding dialogue between Linc and Maggie.