Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-24200891-20161021195957/@comment-24200891-20161022084907

So Lincoln comes to his jerk realization after he becomes persona non grata in town. Earlier you came to conclusion that antagonism between Linc and Leni would be bad. Linc can simply think that instead of telling Leni this. That would hurt her if that's your intention. I have a rule. If you plan to make someone hurt someone's feelings then prepare a solution for this.

About the urban legend the ghost boy needs to give the people reasons to fear him. Being a ghost is a simple fantastic racism. The ghost boy needs a background. For example when he was alive he was a victim of oppressors and returned as ghost for vengeance on the oppressors' deceasdants. The oppressors oculd be for example Ku-Klux clan members who kill even white people for befriending people of different skin colour and the ghost boy is also their victim. If revange stories don't interest you than the ghost boy could be simply a deliquent so bad that even hell didn't want him.

I also plan another HW story about demonic possession because Lucy irresponsibly played in occultism.