Thread:Metool Bard/@comment-32318818-20180717231054

I made a story i deacribed L7na as accurately as I possibly could. If you don't mind, could you please read this paragraph and tell me how accurate I am? Thank you.

Luna Loud has a heart of gold, she cares about her music, but not as much as her family; Luna is sweet, but also assertive sometimes; Luna is mostly chill, but she could get angry if pushed hard enough; but even when she got angry or became too assertive, Derek could tell in her face that Luna regretted it immediately after doing it. It was apparent that even when it was necessary, Luna never liked being angry or assertive with anybody. In Derek's eyes, Luna Loud is an indepedent, music loving, sweet but assertive, mostly chilled out, family oriented young lady with a heart as big as the house she lives in.

So, accurate or not accurate? 