Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31647719-20180227005801/@comment-32202721-20180227010956

''[The last sentence made Lincoln feel a tinge of fear. Lynn leaves the house and the sisters look at Lincoln with surprised looks on their faces.]''

If this story was on PTTFW, what do you think Lisa would say about this line in particular?

''[Lynn tried to win the game 85 times, and she failed miserably every single one of them. Behind her back, there were some preteens laughing at her, which she took notice.]''

Which she took notice of.

''[Lynn thinks about the offer. She thought it was pretty weird a girl she just met would try to help her just like that, especially since the first thing she did was challenging Gwen to a video game match. But after thinking about it, Gwen didn’t seem like a bad person, and she really wanted to put Lincoln on his place]''

Put Lincoln in his place.