User blog comment:THELOUDHOUSEFANATIC/Fanfiction - Sewer Scavengers/@comment-24200891-20160905185930

Scene of the sisters kidnapped by rats was terrifying, all separations were scary. Lana's shadow friend reminds me Slash from TMNT of 2012 who told Raphael he's his only true friend and with him he has no need of bros. The shadow tried to manipulate Lana in same way, Lana even scolds the shadow like Raphael scolded Slash after discovering he's a bad guy trying to kill his brothers. I think the shadow is a personification of Lana's sense of individuality and desire to be alone. She's not so different from Lincoln then as he also often wants to be alone. Both Lincoln and Lana quickly get lonely once their wish of being alone is made real. However Slash was corporal when the shadow is product of Lana's imagination.

As for the story, it's not as good as Dueling Duo or Two Sour Notes but you explored Lana in quite interesting way as she doesn't have a lot of screen time.