User blog comment:Disneydude94/Straw and Order/@comment-31323774-20170807010809

A really good NSL story and honestly an underrated one. I can also tell you read a lot of other fanfics on NSL to help you with this because of the similarities. The entire fight with Lynn and Lincoln, the arrest and Ronnie Anne's part in the story, I can see you got it from That Enginner's NSL story, and for all of the other parts like them bringing him along for good luck, I see you got that part from YoshiRocker13 and so much more. Can't wait to see more of this!