User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Golf Siblings/@comment-30458740-20170428214717

This was a good story with Lincoln and Lori bonding over golf.

I like how you threw in Lincoln's reaction to the word "luck" as a reference to the whole "luck incident". I also like how even though they ended up banned from Hole in One-derland, they still had a great time together in the end. Nice work.