User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfic: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 17)/@comment-30498740-20180508212959

Look I don’t want to say this bad since majority have said it since I don’t want to hurt your feelings, but it doesn’t work. Some of you guys do make it interesting, but one of you doesn’t work entirely and that person is Kirby, no offense Kirby. Also some of jokes feel repetitive and not exactly funny. It’s cool to try something new, I just think it could have worked out better.