User blog comment:Amerifreedom32706/The Louds Are Seperated/@comment-24200891-20160729055201

The story shares some elements with my 2nd fanfic - separated family, checking if "ghost" is alive by touching her hand, trying to find the rest, being grounded for being lost. Lori's apparent death was scary but I think she should have reunited earlier with Luan, Lincoln, Leni and Lisa as they both made a very long way and Lori would have a lot of effort to track her siblings alone. I find the story not bad however.