User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Jungle Babysitting/@comment-31358352-20180210083521/@comment-31358352-20180210085854

Okay, I'm here again with the second half. Here it is.

Now with "Part 2", my clones will arrive in the Hidden Sand Village and find out everything I can about the hidden evils the village has and expel them. By that I mean the corrupted officials in the village council and that means fixing Chiyo and Ebizo so that they get with the times and they become better people since Chiyo really showed how strong and reliable she really was during the rescue mission in Shippuden. I do mean the one where Team 7 and Team Guy worked to save Gaara from the Akatsuki. I want to find proof about not just the council and have them removed, but to also get the Sand Village to tell their shinobi in the Leaf to see that they were duped by Orochimaru. That the alliance with the Sound was nothing more than a fake move to get them to be his puppets and that their leader was murdered by that literal snake in the grass. This will help them to not cooperate with the invasion and surrender before they actually attack or they can help against the real enemy. Of course, I also plan to find the 4th Kazakage to get the truth early before the Sand Shinobi do. I plan to use my own life-restoring powers or one of the revival seals to return Rasa back from the land of the dead. This way he'll want to redeem himself once I plant his butt in the sand and tell him what he's done to his baby boy. Of course, he'll realize what's he done and of course despite being overwhelmed with anger at himself for doing this and sadness that he treated his son as an animal and weapon rather than a human being. But what I came up with is that he only acted his way because of the council who got the need to make the Sand Village theirs and have the Kazakage be nothing more than a figurehead. Greed and Lust are powerful sins, indeed. They will also have Danzo to help them since it will only benefit him in the end since he wants the Leaf to stand on top as the dominant force in the land and on the planet. To this end, they will seek out the best way to do by having the next jinchuriki of the One-Tailed sand tanuki be their secret weapon. They must have gotten knowledge, surprisingly, from witnessing how other villages like the Stone and Leaf do to their own jinchuriki. So, in order to make the Kazakage become their obedient pet along with their own jinchuriki, a plan needed to be made. The first step involved removing Rasa's rock, his wife, Karura. Probably after Rasa became the 4th Kazakage, the civilian council got their hands on mind-altering seals that changed him, personality, actions, and all, into becoming what he became. Of course, I'll bet the council also tricked or bribed the Wind Daimyo to cut down on the Sand's budget and gave away the village's intended missions to the Leaf for a lesser fee, driving the village to the brink of extinction. Because of this, the brainwashed Rasa will focus on increasing the quality of the ninja in the village by ordering Chiyo, who will no doubt be temporarily manipulated, to seal Shukaku within Gaara. Of course, Karura, will no doubt be pushed to the brink of death after Gaara's premature birth, but would have survived if medical experts were prepared for such an emergency on Rasa's part if he gained some of his willpower over himself to prevent his wife's death. No doubt the CC (Civilian Council) will have had poison on hand if Karura pulled through. Not long after and giving her chakra to baby Gaara to protect him even after her death, she died but not from childbirth complications, but from poisoning. In my mind, that's a plotted murder if I ever thought of it. From then on, Yashamaru will become Gaara's caretaker and Shinki being the boy's adoptive father down the line. Of course, Yashamaru would be given his reluctant test of Gaara's powers that would be turned into a suicide mission and his last one as a shinobi. Oh, and since he was brainwashed in this retelling of the Chunin Exams saga, he also sent Pakura to die in the Hidden Mist Vilage as part of an unfair peace treaty between Suna and Kiri, which would cast blame on the Stone Village. Years down the lane, Orochimaru would come and make the deal with Suna to attack the Leaf during the Chunin Exam's finals. Of course this would involve a now mentally unstable and emotionally wrecked Gaara to unleash Shukaku on the village. Before the finals, though, Orochimaru killed Rasa by impaling him through the chest with his sword along with his guards dying at the Sannin's hands and used his ability to disguise himself with his victim's face to pose as Rasa, making it easier to manipulate the Sand Village. Afterwards, Rasa will no doubt have been broken out of his control after he died and no doubt believes the civilian council, the imbeciles they are, still believes that the Rasa they believe is their Kazakage, but it's really Orochimaru in his disguise, still has him under their control. He no doubt wants to apologize to not just his people and his family, but most importantly, wants to say sorry to Gaara for failing him as a parent. With that said, I'll tell him that he can help by saving the Leaf from his own ninja and help cure Gaara of his problems. This will mean that Gaara's seal will need to be upgraded so Shukaku doesn't take control should Gaara fall asleep. Then there's helping Gaara, which I can do with Naruto helping me. To get through to Gaara, though, I will have to resurrect Karura and Yashamaru with my powers or the seals. Once alive again and reunited with husband and brother in law individually, I'm certain they will be ticked that Rasa did all of this to his son. Of course, I will have evidence of the CC's crimes of treason and murder in hand to make Karura and Yashamaru see the truth and though they will be upset at this revelation, they will understand that Rasa was not himself and it were the seals that caused him to turn into a monster. Of course, womanly wrath will ensue since though Karura is a caring, kind, and loving woman, she will need to make Rasa feel her might for doing this, no freewill of himself or not. The same goes for Temari and Kankuro for not helping their little brother during the years he was growing up. Afterwards, we will need to return to the Leaf Village to get things set up for the counterattack against Orochimaru. I'm pretty certain if you get the gist of what's next, then I'm sure you know what to include with your storytelling. For one thing, I plan to find Naruto either by myself or with a shadow clone and help break the seals on him so his true self and power come to the surface. The rest is history and I'll take Naruto through a dimension opening done on Lisa's behalf through the control room to the Hyperbolic Time Chamber for some long overdue training to get him truly ready for the finals two days from now with help from not just me, but your OC, Varie, Jiraiya, Minato, Kushina, and Mito. I'm pretty sure you will know why they can help train Naruto if you think about it. Oh and if Pakura's dead, then she'll come back to life thanks to me to fight once more as a proud kunoichi. Don't want to leave her nor anyone else out. Then comes the day of the exams and of course, through the simulator and while the Leaf Shinobi stay to monitor things, your OC, Varie, the Louds, and their buddies come through the simulator to join me to watch the fights at the stadium while still waiting for the true battle to begin. But throughout the whole story, I will be able to talk with you and the others with a communicator ear piece linked to the control room so I can let you all know everything that's going on. Either that or a communicator in the style of the Shock Vox from Static Shock. I'll also inform the Third Hokage to secretly warn those of Jonin Rank or above to prepare for a fight at the stadium and in the village. That means some booby traps need to be set up inside and outside the village. Non-lethal to the Sand ninja that don't want to fight against an ally of theirs and lethal to the enemy. Once the invasion begins, my plan will go into effect and while Orochimaru does battle with Sarutobi (with the real you and Varie disguised as Anbu to guard and fight alongside Hiruzen), the Louds and their chums with super powers will aid in the battle against the combined forces, including that giant three-headed snake summon Orochimaru gave to the ninja forces to level the village a bit. While the others will do crowd control and lead the innocents to safety. As for me, I'll go with Naruto, Kushina, Rock Lee (Who will be healed once Naruto's transformation is unleashed just like in your previous chapter you did a bit of time ago and use Chakra in the same story), and Sakura to battle Gaara while Sasuke (who will be a bad guy like most often in your stories) follows them, Kankuro, and Temari. The two older siblings are involved since it's canon and they stall the good guy ninjas while Gaara heals from his battle with bad Sasuke and his emotional outburst after getting a Chidori strike to the shoulder. Of course Rasa, Yashamaru, and Karura follow in the shadows to help the poor jinchuriki and save him from his own personal heck. The revived shinobi will lead the counterattack and fight alongside the shinobi of the Leaf. As for Hashirama, Tobirama, and Mito, they will join you, Varie, and Hiruzen in the main battle against Orochimaru who might have something of a Plan B to keep the inevitable from happening to him. Meanwhile, the battle with Gaara will take place and me, Naruto, and those accompaning us face him and beat up a deranged Sasuke who wants not just Naruto's head, but mine too and it'll be a cold day in the underworld before he'll get that pleasure. Soon enough, Gaara's parents and uncle shall appear to help Gaara regain his humanity and heal his fractured heart after years of suffering a neverending nightmare brought on by not his uncle nor his father's hands, but by the corrupted Civilian Council's. Of course, Gaara will resist and will unleash Shukaku. Knowing that something else is making not just Gaara, but Shukaku go mad sans Gaara's treatment over his childhood, I will go and make a mental link to go into Gaara's mindscape and find the true cause of why Shukaku's hosts go mad while using his power. From what I know of thanks to my sources, perhaps in other stories of Naruto fanfiction, Shukaku could have been possessed after his first jinchuriki host died. But how about this? That priest had an evil brother who was the opposite of his brother so he hated demons like the plague but saw fit to keep himself from going to the Netherworld by attaching his spirit to Shukaku after he died. So he decided to intensify Shukaku's hatred toward humans by driving him insane. Once that happened, Shukaku became worse until he was sealed in Gaara and the rest was history. With that said, I'll go and deal with Bunpuku's satanic brother, Saki, and exorcise him from both Shukaku and Gaara and end him like Lucy did to Father Kane.

After that, Gaara is a free man and will be hesitant since his mindset had been changed by me and Naruto. I mean, he used to believe that fighting and killing those worthy to face him is the only for him to feel that he does exist and does matter in life. Though, not long after, he'll accept our helpful advice and gestures along with extending our hands in friendship and peace. And of course, Gaara old boy will be running to hug his parents, siblings, and uncle whom he's happy to have alive again and back in his life. Of course, the truth will need to come out but Gaara will know that he won't hate his father nor Yashamaru and will say that all is forgiven. The same happened during the Fourth Great Ninja War but with Gaara and Rasa only. Now this moment has all of Gaara's family there to make that moment happen and give Gaara all the happiness, love, and attention he badly needed after all he had been through. Afterwards, Shukaku will see Gaara in the same light as Bunpuku but of course will help his new little brother out and form a strong bond between host and Tailed Beast. Hopefully Gaara will wind up with the same power up Rin and Naruto have with forging a bond with their respective Tailed Beasts. That would rule, man. The rest is pretty much written out by you yourself and a good ending is a guarantee. As for Orochimaru, he's dead as a doornail like always along with Kabuto and Hiruzen will not have to kill himself with the Reaper Death Seal at all. I'll do the same thing Goku did to take out Naturon Shenron in Dragon Ball GT: slug Orochi-pedo in the stomach, toss him up in the air, and blast him to the Netherworld with a powerful Kamehameha Wave. With all that done, the rest of Naruto done your way is simple as pie. Anyway, hope you like this idea and want to put this into your next chapter. Thanks and take care of yourself, Jimmy, my boy.