User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Second Loud Brother/@comment-26651799-20170319040753

It was pretty good, interesting about Lincoln finally getting a brother. However there's some things that bothers me.

I was expecting Lola and Lori would reconsider it's a blessing to have another brother, and Lincoln would talk to Lynn after he overheard her thoughts about him. I would see this as plotholes.

Then again, it wasn't that bad.