Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-30953185-20180315050927/@comment-32807753-20180416182844

I can see what they were trying to go for with Billy, but it was not executed well at all. Instead, Billy came off as more obnoxious than a character who works.

If I could, I'd write Billy's apology at the end like this:

Billy: "Thomas. Thank you for helping me with my jobs today, even after I called you a bosy boiler."

Thomas: "That's what friends are for, Billy."

Billy: "I'm sorry for being so silly. I thought I could do everything by myself, and I didn't realize you were trying to help. From now on, I'll be more patient and listen to my friends."

What do you think?