User blog comment:Aartistboy714/HISHE (How It Should Have Ended) - Part 1/@comment-18700030-20170528032913

I feel like "Save the Date" as well as "Brawl in the Family" are two episodes that could so easily be fixed. I'm going to try and do this "How it Should Have Ended" type thing.

-I'll start with "Save the Date" since it's the one that has the least amount of problems. For starters, remember how those kids in the beginning that show up at the restaurant in the middle of the episode? Yeah...I think that was a very big mistake. Not only does it interrupt the flow of the episode (in the sense that there's too much emphasis on avoiding them), but it also turns Lincoln into a jerk by being rude to Ronnie Anne (sadly after they've got along so well). I feel like while the two of them were talking, Lincoln could explain why he said those things about her in school. She would've understood, I think.

-I feel like one of the biggest problems with "Brawl in the Family" is the fact that it does not follow the rule of "show don't tell". Yes, they did technically show why Lori and Leni were fighting to begin with, but the scene was a little too short and did not really justify their fight. Remember when Luna and Luan claim that Lori and Leni told them their side of the story? Yeah, I think we should've seen that. The very end when they tell Lincoln that every thing was fixed. Well...how? How was everything fixed? What exactly happened in those few hours Lincoln was out of the house?