Thread:Metool Bard/@comment-31541999-20180316192449/@comment-31541999-20180316210053

Listen, I really enjoyed your story a lot with the Loud siblings pretending to be on a quest to stop two villains.

But can you please get rid of the twerp nickname in Lori's statement? It's just she only said it in two episodes and the pilot, and after Season 1 she stopped saying that. A lot of users have been using this so much, and it's getting very annoying, not to mention getting overused. But I'm not really annoyed at you, I know you're still new to making fanfics here. But can you try not to use that nickname too much in your future fanfics?

I'm not saying this to sound mean or anything, I'm just stating my honest opinion, that's all.