User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Pride in Her Chest/@comment-4618045-20170722163341

I felt awkward reading this. Then again, I think that's the point.

Once again, you have impressed me with your understanding of these characters. I never really thought Lynn would have been self-conscious about how "endowed" she is, but after seeing your spin on it, it makes sense.

Lori and Lynn's relationship is really nice. It goes to show that sisters can really talk about anything and look to each other for advice.

And then of course there's Leni. I see what you did there, suggesting that she's an early bloomer. Again, I don't normally think about that because it does get uncomfortable (especially considering I'm a man) but it's a nice touch. However, I can't help but think if the roles were reversed and she were the one to have this conversation with Lynn. That would have been hilarious!

Anyway, great job!