User blog comment:Harvey Beaks Number 1 Fan/Shattered Innocecne (Continued)/@comment-26521507-20170506201132/@comment-31563773-20170506214745

Considering that he's the only person you talked with on this, it's not hard to see why. Like Austin said, turning a dark fic into something more cartoony doesn't help the overall tone. I think it would have been better if you asked someone who has experience writing such fics, no offense to Tom.