User blog comment:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's FanFiction Reviews 7: No Such Love (Parts 1 and 2)/@comment-32055298-20170716034953/@comment-26302585-20170716150609

You want to know what I think would make Lynn's suicide a bit more believable? If we saw the other sisters show resentment towards Lynn. But we don't see any of that. We don't even know if they have shown resentment towards Lynn during their time in foster care. If the sisters blamed Lynn to drive her to this, I would buy it, but we got nothing, we just see the parents get arested, the sisters go to foster care, and then we skip to later where Lynn kills herself. There was little develpoment for it.