Thread:RoniX2D/@comment-25979382-20161231024403/@comment-25979382-20161231165513

Happy new year to you, too! Im fine with the sub-plot, i didn't really think it fit her personality that much, but that's just my opinion. If somebody suggested something and I put it in the fan fiction, I probably wouldn't take it out either. Some typos: Bobby says "blend" instead of "bland" Lynn says "A have these wigs" instead of "I have these wigs" She also says "I took accidentally vitamines" instead "I accidentally took" Luna says "Luan teached me" instead of "Luan taught me" Bobby says "sooner then me" instead of "sooner than me" Lincoln says "everyone you want" instead of "anyone you want" That's all I could find, I'm not picking on you for typing things wrong, honestly I'm terrible at it.