User blog comment:ADragonNamedKingGhidorah/Don't Ask Why I'm Asking This Either.../@comment-24200891-20170706071514

I can detect what's wrong with my style. I use drama instead of comedy because I am better at drama. I use dark tone, thinking it makes stories interesting. I use sequel fanfics to fix what happened in eps I dislike but that makes them predictible. I flanderize flaws like Lynn's bullying, Lori's anger issues, Lisa's superiority complex, Lola's misandrism and meanness, Lincoln's inferiority complex, Luan's sharp tongue, Luna's protectiveness, Leni's ditziness. Perhaps I also try too much to be realistic in my stories that aren't dreams.