User blog comment:AnimationFan15/Fanfiction - Bun-Bun Bonanza/@comment-26901681-20161116180537

Nice dedication to be able to write the story whole story in about seven hours. Turned out great for the amount of time put into it. It was a very sweet story and I'm glad to see a story revolving around Bun-Bun for a change.

Not sure if I agree with having Lisa and  Luan  part of the meaner side. Lisa hasn't had any real bad moments with Lincoln. Unless you consider her using them as test subjects, then she would qualify for being on the meaner side. I put her relationship as neutral with Lincoln as of now, so I'm not sure which side she would take. If Funny Business hadn't aired yet or the episode showed us how mean Luan really is, then I would have agreed with her position. I probably would have just left these two characters out of the plot altogether to avoid possible controversy. Everyone can (or at least should) agree with Lola, Lynn, and Lori being on the bad side. But I understand that you probably just wanted to make both sides have an equal amount of supporters. I'm not at all trying to tell you how to write your story, this is just my opinion.