User blog comment:Thomperfan/Lynner takes all (my version)/@comment-26302585-20170809055455

This was nice. The epilogue was a neat addition. The only other thing that stood out was the dream sequence. It was pretty suggestive, and the kiss was kind of a shocker, but you said it wasn't meant to be Loudcest. Still, I'm just not sure about it. Overall, this was nice.