User blog comment:IronRaphRa/My Sixth Fanfic: Game Crashed/@comment-26302585-20180621170447

I discovered this fic thanks to Thomperfan's Fanfiction Failures. Let me just say, that everything about this fic is messed up. Like REALLY messed up. Let me explain.

For starters. Ronnie Anne pantsinng Lincoln in front of someone he respects. I know Ronnie Anne embarasses Lincoln sometime, but I don'y buy that she would embarass him in from of someone he respects. And as for Lincoln's blow-up, one thing I'll say is that I don't think he would call her the "worst human being". An annoyance or a nuisance, sure. But "worst human" being is stretching it a little. That being said, him blowing up at her is justified. Now we got to the really bad. So because Lincoln yells at Ronnie Anne for embarassing him in public, now everyone suddenly hates him? Those people saw what happened. They saw Ronnie Anne pants Lincoln, and now their disgusted with him for sticking up for himself? What logical sense does that even make?

“Dude, that was uncool,” “that’s no way to treat a friend.” Oh, so pantsing someone in front of a lot of people is totally fine, but calling them out on their crud, oh you monster you're a terrible person.

And his sisters hate him too? What the heck? Those text from the sisters at home were completely unecessary. None of them even bothered asking why Lincoln said those things to Ronnie Anne. Because if they knew what she did, then they wouldn't be as hard on Lincoln as they were. But no, Ronnie Anne is an angel to them and can do no wrong but Lincoln's a bad boy who needs to be taught a lesson. And Lincoln doesn't even tell them that she pansted them. He's just saying that they "had an argument". It was more than that, Lincoln, and you know it.

What is the message of this fic? That if someone pranks and humiliates in public you that you, shouldn't call them out? That you should just take whatever they give you even if you don't like it? That everyone will hate you if you call them out for humiliating you even if it's justified? That's. Messed. Up.

(sigh) I'm sorry, if I came off as rude, I really am. I don't hate you. I'm not gonna hate someone because a fic of their's irked me. No hard feelings?