Thread:AnimationFan15/@comment-32807753-20170929062847/@comment-24364245-20170929064841

After reading both parts, I can definitely say that it's a pretty good story. Everything about it was just fine.

I think it's a good idea to make more character-focused stories, since it really lets you experiment with the characters, and try out what they usually say. Keep in mind, that since The Loud House is a comedy, try to at least have some of its humor in there, so it can feel like an actual episode.