User blog comment:LittleAlex619/Too Many Fanfiction Ideas/@comment-32202721-20170721172201

"(It turns out, all of those mistakes Lincoln made were actually his family's fault, MOST of them.)"

Wait, which is it? All of them, or most of them?

Because I see at least three instances where... gosh, I don't even think you could argue that any of Lincoln's sisters were at fault. Specifically, his actions in Making the Case, Out On a Limo, The Waiting Game and Picture Perfect. And I don't think any of the examples listed can be blamed solely on the rest of Lincoln's family.

Cut out that last sentence and the premise can potentially work. But the moral should be, "Everyone makes mistakes, but it's okay as long as you learn from them and vow to improve yourself, and we'll still love you regardless." Not, you know, "Screw the Loud sisters, St. Lincoln dindu nuffin."