Thread:WillTheArthurandBusterFan5050/@comment-24200891-20160910114810/@comment-24200891-20160920174005

Thank you for feedback for Frigid Fever. You put the longest comments and that's what I like in you.

I thought it would be in Leni's style to go into sick Lincoln's bed in order to warm him with her own bodyheat. She really believed this would help. I guess you find her quote "To get rid of the fever you need a lot of warmth. Family warmth is the best, it's source is love and nobody loves you more than I do. " heartwarming.

How do you find Lincoln's dream? Sauna is a result of the warmth Leni delivered to him. I admit it's fanservice but it's also cute that Lincoln's sisters want him to be with them and feel like one of them.

I needed a realistic reason why Lincoln got cold. Choosing Lola was dificult and I was afraid her fans can be upset but not everyone can be pleased. Some readers criticized she was too brutal for Lincoln but I think it would be in her style. Somehow she herself needed to get a moral lesson, Lincoln isn't the only one who makes mistakes.

Lincoln was really poor in this fanfic, he got brutally treated by Lola, she made him get fever and he was stucked to his bed. He thought his sisters have fun and he's forced to lie in his bed. Because of his poor condition he couldn't focus on reading comics, he couldn't lie in comfort and had problems with sleeping. The worst for him was isolation from his family so they wouldn't be infected. Loneliness can be sometimes a torture. How can anyone not feel sorry for him? From all sisters Leni wanted to make him feel better and the best she think she could do is warming him by her own body. She loves him very much so wanted to be with him, she didn't want him to be alone in his pain. It was smart and silly at same time because she thinks with heart first.

You wrote "This almost should be an actual episode"  . What do you think would be changed to make it more actual episode?