User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Loud-O-Ween/@comment-24200891-20161015103526

Lighting effects were good idea. Skull convincing Lisa to stay is OK. Storm is a good reason to stay at haunted house. Joke with vacant and vacation was funny. Lucy gets punished for taking the siblings to the cmentary and Lincoln for lying. Why doesn't he punish Lori if she was in charge? Ending was nice. I think horror Lincoln would bare to watch is Van Helsing from 2004.