Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31541999-20180313145009/@comment-32202721-20180313162335

Well, first of all, this is pretty obviously a takeoff of Quagmire's rant against Brian in the Family Guy episode "Jerome is the New Black". Now, I have a few problems with that scene, but it worked in that context, because Brian - at least post-cancellation - is legitimately an awful person (or, rather, an awful dog). Lori isn't, and it really seems like Trash Creature is grasping at straws when it comes to painting Lori in a bad light.

We have a few legitimate examples of Lori acting unethically, selfishly or irresponsibly - Get the Message, Driving Miss Hazy, Change of Heart, Study Muffin - but the rant is padded out with a whole lot of nothing. Blaming your flatulence on nearby objects is a little silly, sure, but it's not worth getting that angry about, and it's not fair to single Lori out for the Sister Fight Protocol, a system that all the sisters designed and agreed on. And Garage Banned? All she wanted was a little bit of space and some experience living on her own. It's likely she just assumed her siblings could handle themselves.

Maybe this rant could have worked if it was shorter and took place before her development throughout Season 2, but as it stands, it just sounds like you're dumping on a character you don't like.

Also, this isn't the first time I've seen you do something like this. I still remember that three-parter you wrote about Lincoln spanking Lori, which was just cut-and-pasted from the FG episode "Once Bitten". See, there's something you've gotta understand; you can't just take a scene from one show, plug in characters from The Loud House, and expect it to work just as well. In "Once Bitten", it made sense that Peter would be so cowed by Brian, since he's a cowardly manchild. It doesn't make sense for Lori to be so cowed by Lincoln, nor does it make sense that he'd be strong enough to pin her down and spank her.

Dig?