User blog:Movie&TVfan000/The worst Fanfiction on this wiki

I'm really nervous and anxious. I am expressing an opinion on a fanfic that isn't really good. I'm worried that I'm going to get hate and controversy from this user's friends. That user I am talking about, is AngryBirdsaao1. He wrote a fanfiction called "One Cousin, Eleven Siblings"

This fanfiction, as you can tell by the photo, is a crossover with the Christian animated cartoon, Veggietales. It's about a talking cucumber named Larry and a tomato named Bob. They get messages from kids asking for advice and they play a segment where they have a story that has the same problem as the kids have. It has the wierdest logic for a cartoon show EVER, since the cucumber can play the friggin Tuba and drive a car. It's a mediocre show, but has spawned some funny as hell memes.[https://twitter.com/Veggiefact?ref_src=twsrc%5Egoogle%7Ctwcamp%5Eserp%7Ctwgr%5Eauthor  It spawned this really funny twitter page. Check it out it's gonna make you pee your pants of laughter.] So back to this fanfic, it's revealed that Larry the Cucumber is the cousin of the Loud family. So that means that Lincoln's aunt/uncle had a baby with a CUCUMBER. Let that sink in for a moment...

Doctor : Congratulations! It's a.......Cucumber?

What the actual literal god darn fu.......

So that's basically this story in a nutshell. Angrybirdsaa01, if you're reading this. I'm sorry if this hurts your feelings. You need to practice on your story writing. The writing and dialouge is good, but the story has plot holes. The reason the crossover "Jimmy Timmy Power Hour" works is because both shows are similiar in a way. Both are 10 year old children who have special powers (Timmy's fairies, Jimmy's intelligence). This crossover makes no sense since TLH and Veggietales have two different premises that are nothing alike, unlike FOP and Adventures of Jimmy Neutron : Boy Genius. Veggietales is about christian singing vegetables, while TLH is about a boy having to deal with his 10 sisters and his every day lives......

But hey, this story fell into obsecurity until now, so it's not entirely bad.

This is Eric, sigining out...