Thread:Weavillain/@comment-32799780-20170818230237/@comment-31022739-20170818233035

Hmmm...I dunno about this one. While I do like the story, it just doesn't leave much of an impact on me. Clyde is one of the show's most eccentric characters, and it's a shame that the author doesn't try to show more of that side of him. I'll admit, the Clynn stuff is cute, but I really don't feel like I'm reading Lynn and Clyde. They both sound like idealized versions of their canon counterparts, almost like they're written that way to make their chemistry work (although Clyde's portrayal is a lot more egregious than Lynn's).

The Haiku/Francisco subplot? Meh. I guess it's nice that they're getting along but it's kind of a chore to read about their interactions. I get that they don't have much character to work with, but they seem way too..."down to earth" to be interesting. They're a tad bit mundane for my tastes, quite frankly.

I enjoy the Sam/Luna section of the story, though. It's the strongest written part of the story, and I yearn to see the author write about them while they're in the focus.