Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-32807753-20180130225024/@comment-32807753-20180131002554

If I had to give it some credit, I’ll give it the honor that it’s probably the only fanfiction to feature Leni solely as the antagonist (at least as of now).

How I would’ve done it:

Begin with someone making a comment about Leni failing her driving test and being reminded of how she doesn’t have a driver’s license. This could then bring up many of other past memories where Lori has acted mean to Leni before, and slowly, rage start building up inside of her. Insert beginning of fanfic where Leni is angry at Lori and have it play out mostly similar to how it did. Lori does all of these nice thing, but through comedically inconvenient moments, fails to make Leni happy. All the while, Leni questions if she should really be doing this, but each time, he anger and unwillingness to admit being wrong to Lori sadly gets the best of her. Then have the scene where Leni remembers Lori sabotaging her test for her selfishness once last time to break the straw on the camel’s back.

This time however, Lori actually moves out of Leni’s room and is forced to stay with Lincoln, who suggests that maybe Leni needs sometime alone and that this will end eventually. Leni at first enjoys being by herself, but the same night, she ends up being bored and even feeling empty, not knowing why. She catches a glance of a selfie she did with Lori and admits she, deep down, misses her, but her anger still gets the best of her. Lincoln sees her being sad one day and asks why. Leni, reluctantly, gives in and tells her she’s mad at Lori because she doesn’t think Lori is a good sister and tells him about the mean things she’s done in the past, but at the same time, she says she feels lonely and bored without a roommate. Lincoln tells her the lesson(s) that we should forgive and forget and to try to remember the good times only (two morals for the price of one :D). Leni then ponders and remembers all the times, even from her childhood, she had a great time with Lori. Leni realizes she was wrong to hold a grudge against Lori like this and apologizes to her and tells her why she’s been so mean to her, making Leni cry and even suggesting that she’d move out instead of Lori. Lori, not before thinking about it, forgives Leni and the two hug it out, saying that it wouldn’t be the same without her. The two make up and insert the funny gag about Lori’s weight in the end.

What do you think?