User blog:LongNick20/Fanfiction - Nick Meets The Loud Family

Hey guys, LongNick20 here, this is not only my first blog, but also my first fanfiction. I worked really hard on this fanfiction so please no rude comments and I'll only accept criticism if it's constructive.

''[It was a beautiful moring in Royal Woods, Mochigan. There were birds chirping and kids playing around in the neighborhood. On Franklin, Avenue, there is a teenager walking on the sidewalk, humming quietly and enjoying the fresh air, the teenager's name is Nick.]'' Nick: "What a beautiful day it is, the places around this town are nice, and I would like to meet new friends here." [As Nick walks around on the neighborhood, he comes by a house that is very noisy and filled with explosions, loud music, and shouting.] Nick: "Whoa, that's a very noisy house, maybe I should go check it out." [As Nick approaches the house, he then meets Lincoln Loud, who has white hair, a chipped tooth, and is very surprised to see someone who he has never seen before like Nick.] Nick: "Hello, who are you?" Lincoln: "I'm Lincoln. Lincoln Loud. Who are you?" Nick: "I'm Nick. Nick Kane. It's a pleasure to meet you Lincoln." [Looks at the house] "And I gotta say, that is a pretty noisy house you live in." Lincoln: "We call this house, "The Loud House". Anyway, what brings you here?" Nick: "I just moved to Royal Woods, Michigan, and I live not too far from this place, and I wanted to make new friends since I miss mine at my old hometown." Lincoln: "Interesting. So, would you like to meet my family?" Nick: [delighted] "Yes please!" [Lincoln and Nick enter the house and into the living room where Lincoln's parents, Rita and Lynn Sr. are on the couch watching TV.] Rita: "Hey Lincoln." [She notices Nick] "Who's this?" Lincoln: "Hey Mom and Dad, this is Nick, he just moved into Royal Woods." Lynn Sr.: [He shakes Nick's hand] "Welcome to our neighborhood sport! I'm Lynn Loud Sr. and this is my wife Rita." Rita: "But you can call us Mr. and Mrs. Loud." Nick: "Nice to meet you Mr. and Mrs. Loud." [He turns to Lincoln.] "So, Lincoln, do you have any brothers or sisters?" Lincoln: "I don't have any brothers, but I have sisters, I have 10 of them." [Nick was very shocked] Nick: "10 sisters?! Dang, that's crazy!" Lincoln: "I know, but it's true. I have 5 sisters older than me, and 5 younger than me. So I'm basically the middle child in the family." Rita: "Lincoln, would you like to take Nick to meet your sisters?" Lincoln: "Sure Mom." [He and Nick walk upstairs to the hallway] "Now Nick, I'll have to warn you about my sisters, they are a bit crazy, but hey, aren't we all?" Nick: "I guess now that you say that. So, can we start from the oldest to youngest of your sisters?" Lincoln: "Sure, follow me." [The two walk over and go to the sisters' rooms, and first they went to Lori and Leni's room where Lori is texting on her phone while Leni is reading fashion magazines.] Lori: "What are you doing here Lincoln?" Lincoln: "I came to tell you guys that we have a visitor in our house and he is new to Royal Woods, and he wants to meet you girls." Leni: "Who's the visitor Linky?" [Nick enters the room] Nick: "That would be me. Who are you two?" Lori: "I'm Lori. I'm literally the oldest sibling, and I liked to text on my phone and talking to Bobby." Lincoln: [whispers in Nick's ear] "And she is also bossy to all of us, and has a nasty temper." [Lori was angry on what Lincoln said] Lori: "What was that?!" Lincoln: [neverously] "Nothing..." Nick: [thinking to himself] "Whoa, Lori does have a nasty temper." "So, Lori, who's Bobby?" Lori: "My boyfriend, why?" Nick: "I'm curious. BTW, you look pretty from all that makeup you're wearing." Lori: "Thanks whoever you are." Nick: "Oh, I forgot to introduce myself, my name is Nick. And it's a pleasure to meet you Lori." [They both shake their hands and Nick walks over to Leni] W.I.P.