Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20180321021259/@comment-32202721-20180321163500

Just read it. I do appreciate the author's attempt to give Derek more of a personality, but there's not a whole lot of build-up before his suicide attempt. I think a story like that really needs to be longer, so we can see the effects of his depression firsthand (instead of just hearing about it from Luna and Sam).