Thread:RoniX2D/@comment-24200891-20170121161649/@comment-24200891-20170213204434

You wrote I put lot of efforts in writting Lucy's birth. I read lot about prematurely born babies to write the story. For months I tried to make a theory why Lucy is pale, I thought maybe she's sick or avoids sun or takes specific baths. I read that paleness or grey skin can be a result of failed respiration system, blood has problems with transporting oxygen and pale skin is a result. Then I found babies born too early can have underdeveloped lungs and even blood viens. They also can mature mentally in an incorrect way. I deduced this could explain why Lucy is pale but I could hardly imagine an emotionless baby so I didn't include this in baby Lucy. I read how parents need to take care of preterm babies after they leave hospital, there weren't many details, just to give them lot of love and care after months in incubator where they are touched by doctors in platic gloves and robotic arms and needles. After reading this I tried to imagine carefully how would baby Lucy react, I thought she would panic at first because all at home would be new for her and she'd really love feeling bodyheat and soft touch.

In MelanchoLinc I'll give sad mood but I;ll need to make sure Lincoln doesn't become a jerk. Typical emo keep brooding and complaining about how sad all is. Emo sing sadly, write sad poems and draw sad drawings, they feel misunderstood and overhated by all. In this fanfic Lincoln became an emo because he lost his self-confidence. I already wrote in trivia that Maggie appears, few is shown about her but I guess she's not a nice person and better if she doesn't recognise Lincoln who unintentionally became her enemy.