User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Gender War/@comment-26302585-20170316181109

This was pretty great. Though there is one thing that doesn't make sense to me. What exactly was stopping Lincoln from disagreeing with them or not doing all those activies? What would've happened if he disagreed with them? He already seemed miserable enough when this started, so what did he have to lose? Lori: "I think from now on, you should agree to whatever we say, and stop trying to change us."... Or else what? What if he doesn't want to, what are you gonna do then? Lola: "What happened to your promise?!" Uhh, he didn't "promise" anything, he just said he would do whatever you wanted. I'll be fair though, it was probably fear of going against ten sisters with no one backing him up, which also upset him. This might have made Lincoln feel helpless. But that's really my only nitpick. Other than that, I enjoyed this. I guess the sisters let this whole "ten against one" thing get to their heads and not think about how Lincoln was feeling. It was nice when Luna, Leni and Lily noticed Lincoln was upset and stood up for him.