User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Tokyo Louds/@comment-26489974-20161108080416/@comment-26489974-20170129102902

I didn't have any problem with the Jacuzzi part, but the Dutch oven thing was a little too much for me to handle. Also the reason I wrote "It didn't seem like something to come out of The Loud House" is because the part where Luna says that she was mistaken for a boy because of her short hair and deep voice. It just felt so awkward and out of place for me, almost like the dance scene from Come Sale Away. Without that, I would have liked the fanfic.