Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-36760434-20180922194507

Thomperfan, I really want you to read my upcoming fanfiction, Again I don’t know if you read it but, it’s called “Sister Showoff. Hope you enjoy. ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— (It starts out with Me, Leni, Luna, and Luan walking to Royal Woods Elementary. A few seconds later Lincoln, Lana, Lola, Lucy, Lisa, My sister and My brother see us and run to us)

Me: Hi Guys.

Leni: How was school?

Kelcy: It was awesome, Me and Lola made it to the Big Time Pageant A.K.A B.T.P.

Me: And I made it to the final art compition.

(everyone gasps, exept kelcy

Luan: Really, I heard that some of those prizes are foriegn!

(Everyone starts talking at onece about the art compition, In hearing this, Kelcy, Gets Upset)

Kelcy: Umm... Did you know the B.T.P. has... ummm... a huge trophy.(She smiles Nervosly)

Lola: (whispering) Psst, Kelcy the B.T.P Dosen't have a huge trophy.

Kelcy: I know.

Lola: You get to bring a partner though.

Me: I dont have any one to go with.

Leni: Me neither.

Lola: (sigh) You don't have to bring someone guys.

(Leni and I sigh)

Lincoln: I guess we should be heding home.

(We all say goodbye to everyone; Cuts to me and my 2 younger sibling walking home)

Me: It's such a beautiful da-(I notice my sister is upset) Kelcy, whats wrong this time.(I roll myy eyes)

Kelcy: You always take my spotlight!

Me: How?

Kelcy: With your stupid art thing! Thats How!

Me: Kelcy, Its not my fault my talent is better than yours.

Kelcy: YES IT IS! And my talent is way better!

Me: Oh yeah!

Kelcy:YEAH!

(My younger brother, Danny, Is crying beacause of the yelling)

Danny: Make it stop!

Me:Look what you did!

TO BE CONTINUED ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— So, how was it, please be honest so I could give it the work it needs. Anyway, please please please respond, you can respond anytime. Hope you liked it. 