User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Lock 'N' Loud (Done My Way)/@comment-31358352-20180406174533

Hey J.D. I thought I let you know that you rocked it with these versions of Lock N Loud and White Hare. You did splendidly with Lock N Loud and of course I am well aware that locking the door is the simplest and most important task you should take care of. Especialy before bedtime. But what I am wondering though is why we didn't use our powers in case of an intruder or two or three. I mean, remember, we have powers in this story. Not just our respective abilities, but we have training in martial arts (Ki, Chakra, and Spirit Energy included) and we can use magic from the respective worlds of stuff like Harry Potter and the anime Fairy Tail. Sometimes I guess we forget the simple things we have until we remember later on. Oh well. The whole episode went the same way it did except for the inclusion of the big safe in the basement and the actual intruder being an old enemy of Naruto, Sakura, and you as well, J.D. Well, I hope that Yamanaka guy likes trips cause he's on a one way trip to the Moon Prison for escaping jail, commiting more crimes, terrorizing, wanting revenge, and disrupting the peace no less. Well, aloha to you, jerky boy. We certainly went overboard here in this revamped telling of the episode, but I thought it was a blast to do. I just wish Leni could have realized that she was flirting with a dummy and not seeing that Ed's feelings were hurt and his trust almost lost after what Leni was doing. But I know things were resolved after the chapter. Just thought I point out one pesky tidbit that was on my mind. Just remember this though. Although we adhere to the "Great Power, Great Responsibility" moto, we shouldn't be afraid to use our powers as a warning to any idiots that want to rob or threaten us since we'll just scare them with our abilities. Just a little bit. That's all. And if they foolishly continue with their imposing, well then, they brought it on themselves. White Hare was fun too. Certainly explored the possibility of alternate realms and what life is like there. In the Loud House, the likelyhood of a rabbit version of the Louds isn't out of the realm of possibility. I didn't expect, though, for the rabbit Louds and the beaver version of Clyde to get sucked into a dimesional vortex that warped them and their house to your universe. I think that things are going to different and interesting with the Loud rabbits now apart of the family. If you ask me, though. I more than fine with the numbers in my family as a family the size of a family of rabbits would drive me nuts. But that's my opinion and I'm not being insensitive here or anything. Still though, good version of White Hare, James. I certainly can't wait to see what you've got ready for release next because it's going to be a blast to read. I'm certainly going to like how Shinobi of the Cosmic Storm is going wrap up after the Chunin Exam Finals and the rest of the Naruto series. Anyway, have a stupendous day, J.D. Adios!