User blog:Thomperfan/My thoughts on Whitewashed

Hi, guys, it's me Thomperfan. Now, you've seen some of my thoughts on posts, and they were on episodes, but today, I'm gonna try something all different and give my thoughts on a fanfiction. Today, I'm gonna be looking at a fanfiction called Whitewashed by Animationfan15. In it, Lincoln creates a comic book based on his life. His sisters get a hold of it and assume he made it to make fun of them. They go to Lincoln and destroy it in front of his very eyes. Lincoln, of course upset about this, calls them something so offensive it leaves them all shocked, the sisters don't take the isult well, because they wash his mouth with soap, and beat him up so badly he can't move. So, Lincoln deccides that he's not gonna speak to his sisters again.

Now, I like and respect AF15, he's a good friend of mine and he's written some great fanfctions. But this one is the only one I wouldn't reccomend reading. I'll explain why.

The problem I have with this fanfic is the sisters, they were 10 unlikable jerks. First off, Lincoln clearly put on his comic DO NOT TOUCH, but none of the sisters ever acknowledge this and just read it anyway. Second, the fact that they just made assumptions and wouldn't listen to Lincoln's side at all and just demolish the work he did right in front makes them look even jerkier. I say Lincoln had every right to call them whatever that word was he said. And don't even get me started on the next scene. That just made them look like even bigger jerks, and like BFoE said, what kind of sisters beat up their own brother? Even Lily was in on all of this and she's just a baby!

And then there's the scene where Lori gets mad at Lincoln because she thinks it's his fault that Bobby broke up with her, that just felt like a rehash of Save the Date and you know how much I don't like that episode. But Ronnie Anne sticking up for him was nice, I will give him that. And then the scene, where Lincoln punches Lori, I think Lori desserved that, in fact I would've like to see Lincoln punch all the sisters. But that's just me.

And is it just me or did none of the sister's seem to feel guilty or regret what they did. At least in Sygenesophobia and The Last Linc, the sisters showed legit concern, guilt and remorse for what they did and also Lily wasn't apart of the group. In this one the sister, don't show any concern and just say he'll get over it, and later when they're having a meeting, Lori just says Lincoln's turned into a phsycopath and the rest of the sisters blame Lola. Yes, I know Lola was the one who started this because she did find the comic, but the sister's should've also acknowledged that they were just as guilty for reading the comic, destroying it, and beating up their brother. And at the end, while the apology comic was nice, I couldn't feel sympathy for the sisters after everything they did.

So overall, this fanfic just made the sisters look like jerks, and made me feel SO sorry for Lincoln and wish that the parents were involved so the sisters could get punished. And to Animationfan15, sorry if this comes off as offensive, I wasn;t trying to offend you, I love your work, this one I just didn't like at all. If you like this fanfic that's fine, It's just my personal opinion, and I'm glad you can enjoy this fanfiction when I can't. So take this review with a pinch of salt.