User blog:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Brace Bro

My 14th fanfiction. WIP

I give credit to AnimationFan15 for making the picture.



Louds had a famliy visit in dentist. Rita assisted Dr. Feinstein in checking dental state of all Loud siblings from the youngest to the oldest. After Lucy came to dentist room Lincoln spoke to the audience.

"Periodic examinations in a family as big as mine can take whole day. Mom always takes part in checking our teeth. I don't know which of us is  Dr. Feinstein's  favorite patient but surely that's not me. If mom wasn't employed here I would never visit this place intentionally. I never liked dentist visits. After each one I can't eat my favorite snacks and what's worse each of my visits is painful. I can't endure drilling or the disgusting substances  Dr. Feinstein puts forcefully into my mouth. Oh, my turn is coming, I hope it will end quickly."

Lucy left the dentist room and Lincoln approached her to speak with her.

- How is the visit, Luce? - Lincoln asked

- Why do you ask if you know the answer? - Lucy asked sarcastically - I spent several hours on blackaning my teeth and mom undid everything in half hour.

- It's Ohaguro and it was practiced on Japanese women to prevent adultery of arranged fiances. - Lincoln said

- I didn't know that. I just wanted to have black teeth. - Lucy replied - I don't have a black heart so I already feel pity you. There wasn't a time you came back home happy after dentist visit.

- Thanks for your sympathy, Lucy. - Lincoln said nervously - Now it's my turn, I hope it won't be anything serious.

- Lincoln, come here. - Rita called her son - Sit on the chair now, your older sisters also want to be checked.

- I doubt that. - Lincoln commented - Let's do it quickly.

- Good afternoon Lincoln. - Dr. Feinstein said - I hope your dental hygiene has been improved since our last meeting.

- I do my best to make my 11 children care for their teeth but its so hard to keep them all in check. - Rita commented

- I'm not pleased, young boy. -  Dr. Feinstein commented - Your upper jaw is so deformed that I need to take drastic method.

- What?! - Lincoln asked shocked - I don't want to have braces and I don't need it!

- Sorry, sonny, but I agree with  Dr. Feinstein  . - Rita replied -  I warn you it's going to be painful for several days but you'll adjust to it like Luan and Lori before you.

- I said I don't want it! - Lincoln protested -   I like my jaw like it is.

- For now but in few years you'll be afraid of looking in mirror. -  Dr. Feinstein warned - Rita, bring the album and show it to your son.

Rita showed Lincoln album called "British Smiles". After watching few pictures Lincoln got shocked and lost consciousness. Rita commented "It was supposed to encourage him not to scare him.  Dr Feinstein said "At least we don't need to use sleeping gas now. Rita, prepare braces". After several hours Lincoln woke up in his room feeling great toothache. After leaving his room he met Lola.

- Come on, say something. - said Lola smiling - I must hear it.

- What do you want, Lola? I just had a dream about tommorow dentist visit. - said Lincoln spitting

- That visit was today. - said Lola laughing - You sound so funny now!

- So it was no dream. - Lincoln commented - Give me a mirror.

- Here you are. - Lola gave Lincoln her compact with mirror - Just don't get scared.

- Dang it! - Lincoln reacted angry on sight of his reflection - I look terrible.

- Rather more terrible than usually. - Lola taunted - I am beautiful and I will never be a freak like you.

- Freak? You little... - Lincoln tried to make an answer in anger - You know, you look exacly like Lori in your age. She used to wear breaces. If you look like her then maybe you'll also have dental deformations like her and wear braces. So don't be so cocky!

- Mom! Lincoln insulted me! - Lola run away crying after Lincoln surprised her with such resonse

- I hope rest of the sisters won't laugh from me. - Lincoln said to himself - How could mom do it to me despite my protest?

- Lincoln come to me now! - Rita called Lincoln - How could you say such thing to Lola?

- She laughed from my agony. - Lincoln explained - How do could you do this to me?

- By neglecting your dental hygiene you brought it on yourself. - Rita explained - But don't change topic. Apologize Lola now.

- I will only if she apologizes me first for mocking me and laughing. - Lincoln protested

- Lola, your brother didn't bahave his best but you shouldn't have laugh from him. - Rita said to Lola - You should have known he's going to have painful days. You shall not laugh from it. Apologize him.

- I said the truth when he compared me to Lori with braces. - Lola protested

- You too apologize each other now or you'll be grounded! - Rita yelled

- I'm sorry. - Lincoln and Lola said in unison

- Lola, you can leave, Lincoln stay here. - Rita said

To Be Continued