User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - 5 Bundles of Energy/@comment-31199313-20170207073005

(At the spa, Lincoln and the younger sisters are in the sauna, wearing towels, Lincoln blushes, but he's happy his younger sisters ​with him)​

Ah, a callback to Mount AvaLoud. BTW, you should add the word 'are' in between 'sisters' and 'with'.

(It shows them in a jacuzzi, relaxed. Lincoln put his arms around Lana and Lola)

Really? I don't know. In the picture, it looks more like he's between Lana and Lisa. Also, capitalize 'Jacuzzi'. (Lola looks better without the earrings.)

And speaking of callbacks:

LISA: In a container of water that is over 104 degrees.

It's over 104!! :P