Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-33694397-20180513211531/@comment-33694397-20180513220531

(Suddenly, loud speakers can be heard and sent him flying, he put on his clothes and walk in the hallway to see it's Luna)

LUNA: Hey, dude! - Luna said loudly - You wanna jam with me?!

LINCOLN: Maybe later, Luna. - Lincoln shouts - Can you keep it down?

LUNA: Nah. - Luna said

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IRR: Well that first sentence is filled with gramatical errors, and that format seems to be continuing. Look, you can't do both script format and story format, especially at the same time.