Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-30953185-20180629184018/@comment-31647719-20180701005315

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Lori: Anyways... I personally feel the alternate version to this is much worse, because is basically the textbook example of missing the point. People who disliked your story didn’t hate it because Luna and Leni are nice, they hate it because of how poorly portrayed the majority of us are.

Luan: We wouldn’t force Lincoln to do our bidding just because we want to. The only reason he served us was to repay us for taking advantage of us, and even then, he was the one who came up with that idea, not us.

Luna: And on top of that, the jerkass realization seems forced. There was no build up to it, and Lynn didn’t learn anything.