User blog:WNH74/(Fanfic) The Tragedy of the Black Sheep

(NOTE: If you've read any of my previous fanfics, this uses a new format.)

The Tragedy of the Black Sheep is yet another typical Loud House fanfic that treats Lincoln as if he was a 100% innocent angel who deserves sympathy, likely along with Leni and Luna, too, ignoring the fact the rest of the sisters can be nice as well; but there is this trope where authors may be like, "let's flanderize them because we don't care about their redeeming qualities!"

Overall, nothing else can be described due to the cliches that are featured in this story. The nature of the story will also be rather basic. However, criticism is fully welcome.

Now, let the fanfic begin as it shall start with a tale of a normal day in the Loud house...

Story (script)
''[it is currently 2 PM. Lincoln, with the view of his face obscured, slowly wakes up. He yawns, but it sounds...off.]''

Lincoln: [sighs, then talks to the reader(s)] Yet another terrible day at the Loud house has begun...of course. It's such a shame that my family looked like they had a lot of potential, but were wasted with their shameful personalities. Especially Lynn...but does it really matter? Everyone at the Loud house always are as if they were born to make me suffer. ...but, well, guess it's time to go to school.

''[He then gets downstairs weakly to eat breakfast, as some of his sisters have mocked him for how late he got up for the day. On the way...]''

Leni: [gets her arm and puts it around Lincoln's back, confronting him as she's worried] Linky...it's okay. [optimistic] Everything's going to be fine, you'll see!

Lincoln: Why should you care? [crosses his arms] All you're talking to is a piece of crap.

Luna: Sheesh, dude! Cut it with the negativity!

Leni: Yeah! How many times have we talked about this? Everyday, you just talk about how-

Lincoln: [cuts her off] I don't care.

Leni and Luna: [worried] ...Lincoln?

Lincoln: [grumpy] I said; I. Don't. Care.

[as he said that, he then decides to walk away from them.]

Lori: Ugh... [irritated] he's literally still in that phase, isn't he?

Lola: Don't worry, he'll get over it... NOT!

[cue Lori, Lola, Lynn and Luan laughing.]

Luan: I guess you could say, we de-pressed his happiness button! [laughing] Get it?

[although they consider that pun to be cringeworthy, the rest of the sisters who were laughing before cackled again.]

''[He seems to do everything for the start of the day weakly; as if he feels like he didn't sleep much, and has suffered from an abusive family. And when he decides to come home...his mother is given his test results, and she's not amused.]''

Rita: Lincoln Loud, I still can't believe this! Do you expect us to have a smart boy like you, when you can't even get your answers straight?

Lincoln: If you're going to shame me for my intelligence and how I work...do it! ''Do it all you want! [suddenly shouting] Do I look'' like I'd care?!

Rita: LINCOLN!

Lincoln: I DON'T CARE! DO WHATEVER YOU WANT!

[he continued talking about how bad he was again, but not for some time.]

Rita: LINCOLN! Sweetie, it's okay to admit that you're bad, but when you do it several times, it won't help with your case!

Lincoln: [is tempted to slap her, but manages to resist] ...I-I... [in a gloomy tone] don't care anymore.

Rita: [attempting to confront him, so he could feel better] But I do.

Lincoln: No. [begins to walk away] Just leave me alone.

Rita: [concerned] What about your sisters?

Lincoln: [irritated] Shut. The hell. UP.

''[he gets out of the living room, and proceeds to go into his bedroom. There, he can relieve stress and try to make himself feel better...but to no success. Rita, saddened, walks away to find Lynn Sr. and discuss with him about what's happening. Meanwhile, the sisters saw what happened (peeking from somewhere), and entered the scene.]''

Luna: Dudes, we have to help him. He's been feeling like this ever since we were young, and he can't be happy from us!

Leni: No matter how hard we try, either! Does he not care about us, [holds up Lily] or Lily?!

[Lori, Lola, Lynn and Luan guffaw once again.]

Luan: Oh man! That's HILARIOUS! Just like my jokes!

Lori: You think you guys will make him smile, [in an excited tone] no matter how much suffering he literally had to go through?

Lynn: Dude, he even was willing to be a masochist when he accepted the offer to play sports with me! [smugly] Now that is unhealthy.

Lisa: And according to my calculations, those are official signs of depression; something we succeeded at as it influences over the rest of his feelings.

Lola: Besides, boys are gross and disgusting! He deserves it for all we care.

Leni and Luna: Hey!

Lily: [angry] Men! Men!

Lori: Aw, would you look at that. [mocking the baby sister] Lily can't even say "mean" right!

[More laughter from those four sisters are heard.]

Luna: [angered] Says who! [in British accent] You guys keep mocking us like we're a bunch of braindead wackos!

Lola: YOU'RE ALL BRAINDEAD! Especially you, Leni!

Leni: [furious] HEY! I'm not braindead, I'm AIR-HEADED! IF MY BRAIN WAS TRULY DEAD, HOW WOULD I FUNCTION?!

[Lori proceeds to slap Leni in the face with full force.]

Lori: OH, SCREW OFF! WE DON'T CARE WHETHER OR NOT YOUR HEAD IS FULL OF DAMN AIR!

[Leni seems to already be driven to the point of tears, especially cause of the physical pain she has felt.]

Luna: [in British accent] FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, STOP!

Lily: [angered] BAD WORI! BAD!

Lucy: Sigh... can we just get this over with?

Lola: WHAT DO YOU KNOW? All you do is write your stupid poems!

Lucy: I have a confession to make.

Luna: [who successfully attempted to pick up Leni, and now has hugged her] What?

Lucy: No matter how awful Lincoln thinks he is, I felt like I wanted to say something.

Lynn: What? [sarcastically] About how great Lincoln is compared to us "demon incarnates"?

Luan: I bet that!

Lucy: No. After all these years of sadness for him... I might as well say that, I was the one who clogged the toilet. I like Princess Pony, and it helped me to take a break from the usual gloomy and dark things I'm into.

''[Lori, Lola, Luan and Lynn gasp. They then break into laughter, as usual]''

Lori: SERIOUSLY?! THAT'S YOUR CONFESSION?! [continues cackling]

Lola: That franchise is so CRINGEWORTHY! I'd rather watch plastic surgeries gone wrong than that vile!

(WIP)