User blog comment:CircularBoat742/Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention/@comment-31168536-20170320072855

It's great..But why did I think it almost have a similiar plot like trustworthy? (Maybe you could change a bit) :D

Well...Keep writing, maybe you should make Lynn felt guilty, because all this superstitions is because of her

Also maybe you can make Lincoln is hard to find, and Lincoln himself doesn't want to go back to his family

Also maybe you can add the part where Lincoln goes pop pop, he tells Albert everything he through, all the bad luck his family thought about him, which make Albert in rage

Anyway good work!