User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - lost on the open ocean/@comment-30158554-20161226171043/@comment-37279415-20190405182358

Yeah the story had a great execution good plot but bad ending with Rita & Lynn Sr punishing their children was a bad way to end the story just imagine if a story of a character in a movie like the good dinosaur that would be a bad ending to the movie if arlo got beraded by his mother and siblings for getting lost and getting punished for something that was not in his control that would be unfair or hiccup getting banished from berk in the first Httyd movie or elliot getting punished by the government for hiding an alien[E.T.]  plus wouldn't  rita and lynn sr be focused to be happy that their kids are alive and not dead really the Fanfic would of gotten a 10/10 if the ending wasn't that unfair but thanks to the end where the parents punish their elder children gives this in my opinion a 4/10 yeah not good ending