Thread:AnimationFan15/@comment-24200891-20160923172356/@comment-24200891-20160923183113

I considered "Loud Road of Pain" but it sounded quite plagiaristic. Here Luna messed up spectaculary and does her best to keep her bro safe and return home. The tone of the story is very dark as it shows harsh reality - dangerous clubs, unhelpful and selfish people, poverty, collecting cans for money, people not appreciating street performances, unhealthy competition, side effects of charity. Luna and Lincoln can count only on each other. I put sweat memories as contrast to this bitter reality. "Luna the guardian sister" sounds too cute. How about title "Responsibility Issues" or "Luna's Responsibility"?