Thread:TMNT1987Dude/@comment-24200891-20160831210824

Hello, I expanded my 9th fanfic but I need to reedit it. I try to make their talking as sweet as his talk with Leni but it's hard to avoid repetetivity. I always wanted to write a fanfic with Lincoln and Luna but I needed inspiration for a story. This fanfic is the darkest because they are far from home and face poverty so they need to work hard to return home. Luna realises she's not responsible and mature enough and life is brutal. Lincoln also needs a character development in this story.  