Thread:PB&Jotterisnumber1/@comment-32466135-20170830034415/@comment-32466135-20170830205732

Well in the rewrite it was with the several changes.

Lori does not disown Leni, instead she just breaks up with Bobby because she was not happy about the picture.

Leni when she became smart did not acted selfish.

Lisa gave up science because she thought it was all her fault for the experiment blow up instead of giving up science for Leni being smarter than her.

Lynn just failed her school test instead of failing all of her school making her get kicked out of her sports team.

Lola ran away because she does not want anyone to look at her ugly new self instead of running away for giving up her career after getting injured.

Lana still was her same personality self when she wanted to stay safe in a bubble instead of staying in a bubble that made her worry too much of injuries.

Luna just wrote and down loaded a song about downfalls instead of a song about her family falling apart.

and Luan just became an activist because of realising that jokes and entertainment are a waste of time in life instead of watching tv that made her an activist in the Canon version of the episode.

I did not do any changes for Lucy and Lily since they were the only ones that did not tell into falling apart situations in the Canon version of the episode. But one extra thing I did remove from the rewrite was that Lincoln did not get eaten by Lily since he did help fixed everything back to normal.