User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-26302585-20161205062254

Hey YoshiRocker. I really loved this fanfic (both parts 1 and 2). I've imagined a scenario where the sisters push Lincoln to far and cause him to run away, then realize what they've done feel guilty and try to make it up to him. Lincoln's speech to his sisters at the end of part 1 was really powerfull.

I only have one minor nitpick. I think you should've had Lynn Sr. apologize to Lincoln for grounding him for the things Lucy and Lily did. Overall, this is easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Great job to you and the co-writers. Keep up the good work.