User blog:Moose513/Fanfiction - The New Car

The New Car is my fourth fanfiction. Enjoy!

Story
It was Lori's birthday, and everyone at the Loud House was celebrating.

"Come into the living room kids", Rita said, "almost time for the presents."

Lori squealed and turned to the audience.

"I love my birthday", Lori said, "my siblings show appreciation for me in the best possible way."

Lori sat down and opened the gift from Lana.

"A $10.00 gift card for Yotally Togurt", Lori said, "how nice."

"It's only half of what it says", Lana said, "I wanted to make sure it was legit."

"It's the thought that counts", Lori said.

Lori then opened the gift from Lucy.

"Buffy the Teenage Vampire", Lori read.

"A little something I wrote up", Lucy said, "I even modeled the title character after you."

Lori then noticed that the character on the title page did look like her.

"It's the thought that counts", Lori said.

The rest of the gifts were unappealing to her, but she just put a smile on her face and said "Thanks".

"Oh, only one left", Rita said.

It was from Leni.

"This ought be good", Lori said.

She opened it up and it turned out to be a 8x10 framed picture of Bobby.

"Wow", Lori said, "I love it."

"It's also from Bobby", Leni said, "he helped."

"Wait a minuet", Lynn Sr. said, "what's this in our front yard?"

Rita blindfolded Lori and lead her outside.

"Alright Lori", Rita said, "take the blindfold off."

Lori took the blindfold off and saw a new car that was the same color as her shirt parked in the driveway next to Vanzilla.

"Is that for me", Lori asked.

"Yep", Rita said.

"Thank you", Lori said.

"Don't thank us, thank Lincoln", Lynn Sr. said, "he had to eat 100 boxes of Zombie Bran just to win it for free."

Lori went upstairs to Lincoln's room and knocked on his door.

"Yes", Lincoln said, "who..."

Lori then hugged Lincoln tight.

"Thank you so much for what you did for me", Lori said.

She hugged him tight, refraining him from breathing.

"Can't breathe", Lincoln said.

Lori then released him.

"Sorry", Lori said.

Later that night, Lori was talking to Leni about the car.

"I can't wait to take it for a drive tomorrow", Lori said, "now that I've got my own car, I can drive without a time limit."

Leni was jealous, as she wanted her own car.

"Lori", Leni said, "did you ever think that maybe I'm not interested in hearing what you have to say about your car?"

"Sorry", Lori said, "still a little exited."

Lori turned out the lights and went to sleep, while Leni turned to the audience.

"It's not fair", Leni said, "I deserve a car just as much as she does."

Then, she had an idea.

"Maybe if I get my driver's license, she'll let me drive", Leni said.

The next morning at breakfast, Lori was talking to Lincoln.

"You really had to eat 100 boxes of Zombie Bran", Lori asked.

"Yep", Lincoln said, "when I saw the ad on the back of the box, it seemed like the perfect gift."

Leni then walked up to her parents, who were sitting on the couch.

"Hey guys", Leni said, "I just wanted to ask you something."

"What is it", Rita asked.

"I wanna take my driver's test again", Leni said, "I've learned some things since my last attempt at getting my license, and I'm sure I'll do good."

"I don't know", Lynn Sr. said.

"Please", Leni said, "I won't let you down."

"Okay", Lynn Sr. said.

"Great", Leni said, "I'll go get my special driving outfit."

Leni put her special driving outfit on and got into Vanzilla with Lynn Sr.

WIP