Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-30953185-20180624040536/@comment-31647719-20180626222429

“Of coarse,” Lincoln said as he grinned evilly, “you owe me a hundred bucks.”

“I do?” Leni asked.

“Yes,” Lincoln stated, “and if it’s not too much trouble, I would like it back now.”

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Lisa: Okay, first of all, “of coarse?!” How do you get wrong something that easy?! Darcy doesn’t make that mistake! Secondly, nice try on making the readers be against Lincoln. But it doesn’t work because thirdly, you gave him a reasonable excuse to do the stuff he’s doing right now. He’s being pressured to give back the money we gave to him. So if you want to make Lincoln the bad guy for enduring this much abuse, well congratulations! You made ya root for the bad guy! Bravo. [claps sarcastically.]