User blog comment:AustinDR/Well, This is New/@comment-32202721-20170629021020

As I said, the plot-related problems were pretty minor and easy to overlook. The biggest problems I had with the fic were the grammar and formatting; in most other respects, Luan's Problem got a big thumbs-up from me.

You've got a lot of potential as a writer. Just remember to proofread your work and keep your tenses consistent and you'll be golden!