User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-30458740-20161220075600

I just read through part 1 and part 2 of this emotional, dramatic, depressing and heartwarming story.

In part 1, I was disappointed in the sisters' actions towards Lincoln at the convention. All the teasing and the finger pointing, pushing Lincoln to the point that he runs away from his own home. To be honest, this actually brought up old memories where I thought about running away at one point when I was at that age. But I was going through a difficult time at that point, and I could never abandon my family. I'm glad that all the sisters recognize how badly they treated their brother and apologized to him when they found him. Though, it's understandable why he told them he hasn't forgiven them all yet. Very great speech.

In part 2, it was nice of all the sisters to spend quality time and be nice to Lincoln while apologizing to make up for their previous actions to earn his trust and forgiveness, which they almost did... had it not been for the mocking about his dream jobs. Just when they were about to get a certificate, too. And then the fire... certainly explains the photo I saw. The fact that Lincoln put the safety of his sisters above his own despite everything really shows how much he truly loves them. I was happy that they all survived that crisis and the sisters finally earned that certificate. And, it's very true what Lincoln said. In the end, family matters the most. Another great speech.

I don't cry often, but I'm not ashamed to admit that I got a little choked up at one point reading this and even shed a tear. I really enjoyed reading this. You did a very awesome job writing it.