User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 1

Hey guys welcome to my very first Loud House fanfic, as well as my very first multiple-parter fanfic. Now this fanfic is rather similar to another fanfic that I saw weeks ago, but at the same time this is rather different.

So here is the first part of my fanfic, enjoy reading, feel free to tell me what you think about it and how I did on the 1st part my 1st fanfic. Part 2 will be up within a week from now, and after that, there will be 6 other parts coming up soon.

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The Story Starts Here
Lincoln: (takes a long sniff at an Ace Savvy comic) Ah yes, (to the viewers) it’s another day of reading another new comic of Ace Savvy, and with a day as peaceful like this one to read a comic, nothing can definitely go wrong, and now the continuation of another one of Ace Savvy’s adventures.

(Lisa enters Lincoln’s room.)

Lisa: Lincoln!!!

Lincoln: Oh, hi Lisa.

Lisa: I need you to be my test subject for my latest invention.

Lincoln: What kind of test?

Lisa: Come to my room, and I will show you.

(Lincoln follows Lisa to her room, and in Lisa’s room shows some kind of machinery that includes two circular pads, each pad big enough for one or two people to stand on and they each have a number keyboard for number combinations and a bright gray button to step on and press.)

Lincoln: Whoa, what is that?

Lisa: As you can see Lincoln, this is a teleporting machine, I have invented these machines to teleport us one at a time from the upstairs floor to the downstairs floor in the house without the need for us to take the stairs in under any short of circumstances. Once I take one of these teleporters downstairs, and once the right buttons are pressed to activate them both, we will soon have a new way to get to the top and bottom floors quicker and efficient, in addition, we won’t have any more incidents involving falling down the stairs, unlike some events.

FLASHBACKS

(First flashback is from “The Sweet Spot” where Luna and Lincoln were pushed by their other sisters and fell down the stairs.)

(Next flashback is Lynn giving Lincoln an RKO.)

Lynn: RKO!!!

Lincoln: LYNN, NO!!!

(Both fall down the stairs)

(Next flashback is from “Homespun” where Luna tried to make her way up the stairs but fell down after the rotting wooden handrail shattered.)

(Next flashback is Leni walking down the stairs, but before reaching halfway down the stairs, Hops, Lana’s pet frog, jumps on her head.)

Leni: AAAHH, GET IT OFF ME!!!

(Hops jumps off of Leni’s head, and then Lana is seen running after him.)

Lana: HOPS, COMEBACK!!!

(Lana bumps into Leni and both fall down the stairs.)

(Next flashback, Lori runs to the stairs, then one of Lori’s shoes comes off and Lori trips down the stairs.)

(Next are flashbacks of where Lynn attempts other wrestling moves on Lincoln, but on all attempts, Lincoln avoids them.)

(First was the spear move.)

Lynn: SPEAR!!!

(Lincoln dodges Lynn’s spear move, and Lynn falls down the stairs.)

(Next was the jump kick move)

Lynn: JUMP KICK!!!

(Lincoln dodges Lynn’s jump kick move, and Lynn falls down the stairs.)

(Next was the Superman Punch move)

Lynn: SUPERMAN PUNCH!!!

(Lincoln dodges Lynn’s Superman Punch move, and Lynn falls down the stairs.)

(And finally the power bomb move.)

Lynn: POWER BOMB!!!

Lincoln: LYNN, NO!!!

(Lynn lifts Lincoln and attempts to power bomb him down the stairs, but Lincoln evades by jumping over Lynn, feet off her shoulders, the impact of Lincoln’s jump pushes Lynn, causing her to fall down the stairs.)

END OF FLASHBACKS

(Lynn happens to have entered Lisa’s room during flashbacks; she is seen holding a tennis ball and a tennis racket.)

Lynn: Ugh, why must everyone be reminded of those attempts of me trying to land those finishing moves on Lincoln? That was so long ago, and I’m done with trying any more finishing moves that will just make me fall down the stairs again and again and again and again.

Lisa: That changes today; the last thing I need to do is test these teleporters before making a real good use to them, and Lincoln, this is where I need you.

Lincoln: Okay Lisa, I’ll help test this out.

Lisa: Brilliant, please step on one of these teleporters.

(Lincoln steps one of the teleporters, Lisa then presses a sequence of numbers on the buttons on the teleporter Lincoln is standing on.)

Lisa: This combination shall allow the teleporter to teleport people to the other, and now Lincoln, the last thing for you to do is press the bright gray button that is directly right below you.

Lincoln: I hope you know what you’re doing.

Lynn: Lisa, are you sure about this?

Lisa: I’m very sure.

Lynn: Well, I’m very worried, considering what happened with other experiments you put Lincoln into.

Lisa: Just relax, I guarantee you that all will go accordingly planned without any mishaps.

(With the correct number combination entered, and with Lincoln stepping on and pushing the gray button, electricity circulates all around Lincoln until Lincoln couldn’t be fully seen. Electricity also circulates on the other teleporter. The electricity then circulates back down to the teleporters and disappears, revealing Lincoln being teleported onto the other teleporter. Lynn sighs in relief.)

Lisa: Yes, the first one worked, now, from this point on there’s no need to enter the number combination on that teleporter you’ve just been teleported from, unless I have it turned off completely that is, all that’s just needed for this teleporter to be activated as of now is just by the push of that gray button.

Lincoln: Now that is some great work you’ve done on those teleporters Lisa.

Lisa: And now to enter in the number combination on the other one, and get it activated and working.

(Leni enters Lisa room)

Leni: I heard noises coming from this room, is there an alien invasion?

Lynn: Uh, what, no Leni.

Lincoln: The noises were coming from Lisa’s new machine.

Leni: Oh sweet, what do you call it?

Lisa: This here is a teleporting machine; I built this machine to teleport us from one place to the other, but one person at a time though.

Leni: Do you think it can teleport me to the mall?

Lisa: Unfortunately you can only be teleported from one teleporter to where the other teleporter is placed, I’ll be taking one of them downstairs once I enter the correct number combination for this one.

Leni: But surely it’s got to teleport me to the mall.

(Leni moves Lisa out of the way and to the teleporter that hasn’t gotten the number combination entered yet.)

Lisa: Hey, wait, Leni, what are you doing?

Leni: Relax, it’s not like I’m going to disappear into thin air and into a void or something.

Lynn: Leni I don’t think you should be doing that.

Leni: Teleport… (Presses 8) me… (Presses 6) to, the, mall… (Presses 8, then 8 again, then 6) Love, Leni (Presses 5, then 5 again), then I step on this circly thingy, right? (Leni steps on the teleporter as she is saying this.)

Lincoln: Leni that’s not a good idea to stand on the…

Leni: Oh, there’s another button that I can just press with my feet.

Lisa: No, Leni, DON’T…

(But it was too late; Leni already stepped on the gray button.)

Leni: To the mall I go.

(The teleporter that Leni is standing on begins to malfunction, and starts making a beeping noise. Electricity circulates around Leni, but because of the teleporter malfunctioning, Leni isn’t being teleported.)

Leni: Why aren’t I teleporting?

Lynn: What’s going on Lisa?

Lisa: The wrong combination, that’s what’s going on.

Lincoln: Can you try and turn it off?

Lisa: I could, but I can only turn it off when nobody’s on the teleporter, I can’t turn it off during the proshess of the teleporting.

Leni: Help, I can’t get out of here!!! (Leni repeatedly steps on the gray button) Why is this button not working?

Lincoln: I got to get her out.

Lynn: No, Lincoln, it’s too dangerous.

Lisa: We don’t know what will happen if you try to get Leni out.

Lincoln: But someone has to help her, and if someone has to do it, it better well be me.

Lynn and Lisa: LINCOLN!!!

(Lincoln runs up to the teleporter Leni is standing on.)

Lincoln: Don’t worry Leni, I’ll get you out.

Lisa: TAKE COVER!!!

(Lynn and Lisa look away from the teleporters, ducks, and Lynn uses her tennis racket to give her and Lisa cover. Lincoln and Leni grab hold of eachother’s hands, but once touching eachother’s hands the electricity that was circulating around Leni began to electrocute both Lincoln and Leni. After seconds of being electrocuted, Lincoln and Leni fall unconscious. Everything goes black. After two hours of being unconscious, Lincoln wakes up to see that all of his sisters, except Leni, were standing right in front of where he is laying. At this point where Lincoln wakes up, you (the viewer) are now looking in Lincoln’s view.)

Lincoln: (groans) my head.

Lori: Oh, uhhh, Lincoln, you’re awake and okay.

Lisa: So, uhhh, Lincoln, how do you feel?

Lincoln: Ugh, like my head feels all heavy. (Lincoln finds himself wearing a green dress) What the, why am I in a dress?

Luan: Uhhh, surprise prank?

Lincoln: Why do I look taller?

Luna: Um, maybe that’s the way all guys grow up?

Lincoln: But I couldn’t be this tall.

Lisa: Now Lincoln, remain calm.

Lincoln: I need a mirror, now.

(Lincoln proceeds to walk out of Lisa’s room but Lori blocks the door.)

Lori: Um, believe me Lincoln, you literally don’t need one.

(Lincoln moves Lori out of way and out of Lisa’s room)

Lincoln: But I have to, something’s not right with me.

(Lana and Lola get in Lincoln’s way)

Lana: Oh come on Lincoln, nothing’s wrong with you, honest.

Lola: I think you could be, uhhh, overreacting a little?

(Lincoln continues to the bathroom)

Lincoln: But I’m not overreacting, I’m starting to think that I’m not looking like myself.

(Luna gets in Lincoln’s way)

Luna: Don’t say that dude, you look yourself to me.

(Lincoln keeps continuing to the bathroom)

Lincoln: But looking taller than everyone else in this house and wearing a dress does not look like me.

Lynn: No, Lincoln, please don’t open the door.

(Lynn is behind Lincoln. Lincoln turns around.)

Lynn: Um, being taller than your usual self and wearing a dress may, heheh, uh, look bad, just, uh, change to your normal clothes? Seeing yourself in the mirror isn’t that necessary.

Lincoln: I appreciate that you’re all looking out for me, but stopping me from getting to a mirror is not.

(Lincoln turns around, sees Lucy blocking the door to the bathroom, and gets startled.)

Lucy: But you can’t, maybe a rest will ease your mind.

Lincoln: I don’t need to rest, let me in the bathroom.

Lori: Uh, trust us Lincoln, you do not want to.

(Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, and Lola grab hold of Lincoln, but the strength of 7 girls isn’t enough to hold Lincoln down due to Lincoln feeling stronger than he was, Lincoln manages to break free from his sisters and opens the door to the bathroom.)

Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, and Lola: NO!!!

(Lincoln looks at himself in the mirror, he gasps and touches his face, or somebody else’s face, revealing…)

Lincoln: I’M IN LENI’S BODY!!!

(From this point on, you (the viewer) are now out of Lincoln’s view.)

Lincoln: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!

Lisa: We told you it was a bad idea to look at yourself in the mirror.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): How could this have happened? All I remembered before waking up was…

(A look back to where Lincoln tried to get Leni out of the teleporter before being electrocuted.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Of course, the electricity from the teleporter caused me and Leni to switch bodies, and I think I need to change from this dress, I feel too exposed being in Leni’s body.

(Lincoln runs to Lori and Leni’s room to change from Leni’s usual green dress.)

Lana: Whoa what, is that what those circle looking things did?

Lisa: By entering the wrong number combination and then malfunctioning, yes, that’s what it did.

(Leni, now in Lincoln’s body, appears wearing the exact same outfit she usually wears when in her own body; additionally, as Leni is in Lincoln’s body, she is wearing white long extensions protruding from Lincoln’s scalp.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Hey guys, how do you like my new hair style? I was going to dye my hair back to blonde, but then I decided get these long extensions to go with all this white hair.

Lori: That’s because Leni, it’s not your hair.

Lynn: And do we have to remind you again that you’re not in your own body, you’re in Lincoln’s body.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): What? Oh of course, how do I keep forgetting?

Lana: Oh man, I wonder what switching into another body will be like; I think I want to switch bodies with one of my older sisters.

Lisa: No Lana, you are not to touch any buttons from that teleporter until I get it working properly.

Lori: And even if you want to switch bodies with someone, it’s not going to be me.

Lana: Pffft, who cares if the teleporter has to work properly?

Lola: If Lisa says we’re not supposed to touch that teleporter, then we are not TO TOUCH IT.

Lana: You can try to stop me if you like; I’m running straight to that teleporter.

Lynn: Oh we definitely are going to stop you.

(Lana runs towards Lisa’s room. She manages to make it through the doorway before Lynn and Lola were able to hold Lana down. Lynn, Lana, and Lola then notice Lily crawling towards the malfunctioning teleporter, Lori, Luna, Luan, Lucy, and Lisa notice Lily too.)

Luna: Oh no dude!!!

Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lola, and Lisa: LILY, DON’T!!!

(Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lola, and Lisa run after Lily. Lily looks at the gray button, and then pushes it before Lucy could take her off the teleporter.)

Lucy: Got you Lily.

(The malfunctioning teleporter activates.)

Lucy: Uh oh!

(With Lucy holding Lily, and one of her feet on the teleporter, she and Lily get electrocuted by the circulating electricity from the teleporter.)

Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lisa: LUCY!!!

(Lincoln, who is in Leni’s body, appears now wearing a comfortable pair of blue jeans and a plain white shirt with a pink oval in the center.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Now this is better. (Notices the teleporter is on.) Oh now what?

(The malfunctioning teleporter stops, and Lucy and Lily drop to the ground, Lily then looks at her hands, or in that case, Lucy’s hands, realizing she’s in Lucy’s body. Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), Lana, Lola, and Lisa all gasp.)

Lily (In Lucy’s body): Eesthih bah (Translation: This is bad)

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Groan; I’m not use to looking in the light with my eyes exposed.

(Lucy, now in Lily’s body, covers her eyes away from bright lights. Lincoln (In Leni’s body) still has Leni’s sunglasses on his forehead, or Leni’s forehead in that case, and gives them to Lucy.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Here you go Lucy.

(Lucy (In Lily’s body) puts on Leni’s sunglasses.)

Lucy (In Lily’s body): These sunglasses are too big, but it will do.

Lana: That is AWESOME, I want to go next.

Lola: Oh no you’re not, you’re staying away from that teleporter.

Lana: Says who?

Lola: Says me!!!

(Lana and Lola begin fighting.)

Luna: Dudes stop, you might cause the teleporter to turn on again.

(Lana shoves Lola and starts to press random numbers.)

Lisa: NO, you’re making it more worse.

(Lola then attacks Lana, and eventually pushing her on the teleporter, causing Lana to press the gray button with her head, activating the teleporter.)

Lori, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), and Lisa: NO!!!

(As Lana and Lola continue fighting, Luna and Luan run to the teleporter. Luna grabs hold of Lana, and Luan grabs hold of Lola to stop the fighting.)

Luan: That’s enough both of…

(Electricity circulating from the malfunctioning teleporter electrocutes Luna, Luan, Lana, and Lola.)

Lisa: Ah no, not again.

(Lori, Lynn, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), Lucy (In Lily’s body), Lisa, and Lily (In Lucy’s body) look away from the malfunctioning teleporter until all the circulating electricity runs down and disappears. For a brief moment, Luna, Luan, Lana, and Lola are all unconscious. Then Luna, or somebody who’s in Luna’s body, wakes up.)

Lana: Woo, I never thought my head would get so heavy after getting hit by all that electric.

Lori: Lana?

Lana: What is it? Did the body change work? (Then Lana realizes…) (Gasps) These are the same boots that Luna wears, which means, I’M IN LUNA’S BODY, YEAH!!!

(Luna, Luan, and Lola then wake up and realize they’ve also switched bodies. Luna is in Lana’s body, Luan is in Lola’s body, and Lola is in Luan’s body.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Oh no no no no no no no no NO, please tell me that didn’t happen.

Luan (In Lola’s body): Tell us that didn’t just happen.

Lola (In Luan’s body): AAAAAAAAHH, (Turns angrily towards Lana) THIS IS YOUR FAULT LANA, NOW I’M STUCK IN LUAN’S BO… OOOWW, my mouth!!!

Luan (In Lola’s body): Don’t you mean my mouth?

(Leni (In Lincoln’s body) enters Lisa’s room)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Hey guys, what did I miss?

Lynn: Oh nothing, except six more of our sisters switched bodies because of you.

Lola (In Luan’s body): Of course, Leni is the cause of this, not Lana.

Lisa: Indeed, we should be pinning the blame on her for making the teleporter go haywire.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Because of her I have to crawl everywhere now, and wear these oversized sunglasses to shield my eyes from the light.

Lily (In Lucy’s body): (Raspberries at Leni)

(Luna (Lana), Luan (Lola), Lynn, Lucy (Lily), Lola (Luan), Lisa, and Lily (Lucy) all turn against Leni, who is in Lincoln’s body, while Lori, Lincoln (In Leni’s body), and Lana (In Luna’s body) side with Leni.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Everybody please remain calm, I’m sure Leni didn’t mean for any of this to happen.

Lori: Yeah, I’m literally sure that Leni has reasons, don’t you Leni?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Yes, I do, can’t we all talk about this?

Lynn: Why don’t you talk on THIS?

(Lynn hits the tennis ball with her tennis racket at Lori and Leni (In Lincoln’s body). Lori and Leni quickly dodge the tennis ball, and the tennis ball is seen flying across Lisa and Lily’s room until the tennis ball hits the gray button of the malfunctioning teleporter. The hit was so hard that it damages the gray button.)

Lynn: Oops!!!

(Lynn runs to the now damaged teleporter to retrieve the tennis ball.)

Lisa: Lynn wait, don’t go near that teleporter.

Lynn: But my tennis ball, I have to get it.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): No Lynn, you can’t.

(Lynn gets the tennis ball off the damaged teleporter.)

Lori: LYNN, GET OFF THAT!!!

(Lori tries to pull Lynn off the teleporter, but she was too late, as electricity once again circulates and then electrocutes Lori and Lynn. The other 9 siblings gasp, and the electricity disappears back to the damaged teleporter leaving Lori and Lynn unconscious. The worst was thought to be over until the teleporter began setting loud sparks from the inside.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): I have a bad feeling about this.

Lisa: This is not good; this is not good at all.

(Lisa then runs out of her room.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Lisa, where are you going?

Lisa: I’m getting a hammer; I got to destroy that teleporter before anymore body swapping occurs.

(The parents walk up to Lisa and Lily’s room)

Lynn Sr.: What’s with all the noise we’re hearing up here?

(A ball of electric begins to grow from the inside of the teleporter.)

Luan (In Lola’s body): IT’S GOING TO BLOW!!!

(The damaged teleporter spits out a streak of electricity, hitting and electrocuting Lynn Sr. and Rita.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): MOM, DAD!!!

(The electrocuting stops, and Lynn Sr. and Rita fall unconscious, then strands of electricity coming from the damaged teleporter travels throughout Lisa and Lily’s room and out, traveling through the upstairs hallway and was about to make its way to the living room downstairs, meanwhile Lisa runs back upstairs with a hammer.)

Lisa: EVERYONE MOVE, EVERYONE MOVE!!!

(Lisa runs back into her room with the hammer, and uses it to destroy the malfunctioning teleporter.)

Lisa: RRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

(The malfunctioning teleporter was in pieces, and all strands of electricity disappear.)

Lisa: Is everyone okay?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, we wouldn’t say everyone, considering almost all of us are stuck in different bodies.

Lana (In Luna’s body): It feels GOOD.

Lola (In Luan’s body): No, it’s not good; I don’t want to be stuck in Luan’s bo… OOW, how does Luan stand this pain?

(Lori and Lynn wake up.)

Lynn: Ugh, why do I feel so weak and lanky?

Lori: Why do I feel so sweaty?

(Lori and Lynn look at each other, realizing…)

Lori and Lynn: (gasps) I’M YOU!!!

(Lynn Sr. and Rita wake up and realizes…)

Lynn Sr.: AAAHH, I’M IN RITA’S BODY!!!

Rita: And that means… (Looks at Lynn Sr.’s hands) I’M STUCK IN YOUR BODY.

Lisa: Gaaaahh, even Mom and Dad switched bodies?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Can someone please tell us what is going on?

(All siblings except Lisa were about to say something, but Lisa stopped them.)

Lisa: No no no, don’t say anything, leave all the talking to me. (Lisa turns her attention towards her parents.) Ahehehem, Uh, you see, Mom and Dad, I made a teleporting machine that could teleport us from one teleporter to the other, then one of them malfunctioned after SHOMEONE punched in the wrong number combination, and then that wash where it started to cause people to switch into different bodies, eventually I had it destroyed before it could cause anymore switching of other peoples bodies, which would not just be here, but possibly the whole town.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): So what you’re saying is we’re both stuck in each other’s bodies?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Not just you two, the rest of us are stuck in different bodies too.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well, all of us except Lisa.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Wait, Lincoln? Lori?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Yes, I’m stuck in Leni’s body.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): And I’m stuck in Lynn’s body.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): How did the rest of you get stuck like this?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Mom, Dad, the truth is... (Pauses for a moment) it’s my fault that we’re stuck in different bodies, I thought those circly thingies could teleport us anywhere else, not just from one circly thingy to the other, and Lisa you were right, I shouldn’t have messed with those numbers, if only I knew better not to touch what isn’t safe. I’m sorry I got you all into this mess, forgive?

(The whole family smiles at Leni.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Of course we forgive you Leni.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): We may be stuck in different bodies, but at least you learned from your mistake.

Lily (In Lucy’s body): Bih hah. (Translation: Big hug)

(The whole family hugs Leni.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Aaaaww thank you guys.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): So is there any way for us to get our old bodies back? I don’t want to be stuck in Lily’s body forever.

Lily (In Lucy’s body): Yah!

Lisa: No need to fret any further, for I can get you all back in your own bodies, just by the look at this blueprint here.

(Lisa reveals a blueprint that is scrolled up.)

Lisa: And now, time to take this plan into effect.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2