Thread:TMNT1987Dude/@comment-24200891-20160831210824/@comment-24200891-20160904164808

How do you find dark and mature tone of my fanfic and are the heartwarming moments too sweet? In this story I showed that life is brutal and most of people are unhelpful egoists, only on family you can count in hard situations. I wanted to write a story about Luna long ago but I had trouble with ideas for her character development. I also wanted to give Lincoln character development  by making him realise he's not as different from his sisters as he thinks and that to be happy he needs to remember his happy moments. He also needed to learn something about confidence. All I'm afraid that maybe Lincoln cries too much in this fanfic and if the joke on the start is inappropriate.