User blog comment:CircularBoat742/Fanfiction - A Near Death Experience/@comment-26302585-20170306220223/@comment-31323774-20170306222122

Thanks for the criticism, so let me what it's all about. I was already working on another handful of fanfics when I was working on this one. I was also overloaded with school work so I had a lot of pressure on me when I was making these stories, escpecially this one. All of what you said, I already knew about those errors, but I didn't have a lot of time to add those details, so I just had to focus on the main story. Don't worry though, I'll add those details soon. I would right now, but i'm working on this big story that I need to work on so in the meantime, just sit back, and i'll edit the story with these details, and i'll put a little "updated" mark next to the title, so keep your eye on that. Overall, i'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's nice to know that people actually enjoy my creative work. :)