User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 8 (the final part)

Fellow Loud fans, I give you the final part, and in case if you have to catch up...

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

And now here is the final part of my 8-parter fanfic.

OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Leni (see part 7’s overview)

Luna (see part 2’s overview)

Lana, In Luna’s body, has now escaped from the two-wheeled dolly, and has pieces of duct tape remaining on Luna’s clothes.

The rest of the Loud family remain the same.

The Story Continues Here
(The story continues with 8 of the Loud siblings looking for Lana outside at the front and back yards.)

Lynn: Lana!!!

Lola: Come out wherever you are Lana.

Leni: We’ve looked in the garage.

Luan: Still no Lana.

(Lincoln comes out the crawling space under the house.)

Lincoln: Crawl space here is clear, no luck on finding Lana.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I looked in Charles’ dog house, Lana isn’t there either.

Lori: Let’s not give up, we have to keep searching.

Lola: But where else could Lana be?

Mr. Grouse: Hey Louds, you’re not gonna find that rocker girl anywhere around your yard.

Lincoln: Do you know where our sister is Mr. Grouse?

Mr. Grouse: Of course I do, if you’re wondering where she went, she ran off that way.

(Mr. Grouse points to the direction on their left.)

Lori: Thank you so much Mr. Grouse, everyone to Vanzilla.

(The 8 kids board on Vanzilla, but as soon as Lori starts Vanzilla up, Vanzilla breaks down.)

Lori: Uh oh!!!

Lynn: This is really bad, isn’t it?

(Lynn Sr. comes out from the front door of the house.)

Lynn Sr.: I can hear Vanzilla breaking down again, and I can tell it is not pretty.

(The 8 siblings exit Vanzilla and Lynn Sr. opens the front cover of Vanzilla containing its engine.)

Lynn Sr.: (coughs) yep, this is bad, looks like it’s going to be another trip to the repairs for this old girl.

(Then all 4 of Vanzilla’s wheels fall off.)

Lola: Well typical, Lana must have known we were going take Vanzilla to look for her quicker, so she made all the wheels fall off.

Lori: It looks like we’re going to have to travel by foot, let’s go.

(Meanwhile Lisa starts getting the damaged pod repaired, with Lily watching.)

Lisa: I knew these spare parts can be able to come in handy, and by the time Lori and the others have found Lana, this pod will be fully functional once more for the final body switch. The only problem is, how long until they find her?

(Back to the other 8 siblings running off to find Lana, going the direction Mr. Grouse told them where Lana went. Clyde is outside the front of his house and sees the 8 siblings running.)

Clyde: You guys!!!

Lincoln: Clyde, I have a feeling you saw Lana?

Clyde: Lana? But wasn’t that Luna running by the… oh wait; she’s not back in her own body is she?

Lynn: So you did see Lana then?

Clyde: By talking about the Lana that’s still stuck in Luna’s body, yes I have seen her. By the way, good to see you back in your own body Lincoln, and I’m guessing everyone else is back in their own bodies.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Everyone but me and Lana, and Lana’s refusing to change back with me, which is why we’re trying to find her.

Lincoln: Any idea where you saw Lana running off to?

Clyde: I don’t have any real clue where Lana could be, but she did leave a trail of duct tape while she was running off.

(Clyde shows them a piece of duct tape.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): So then that means…

(The 8 Loud kids notice a few more pieces of duct tape lying on the road and more on the sidewalks.)

Lori: We just found our one way of finding Lana.

Leni: Our way of finding Lana is by all this duct tape?

Lori: Exactly, let’s follow this trail and see where it leads us to.

(The 8 kids continue on to find Lana, finding wherever the pieces of duct tape could be found that Lana had peeled off from Luna’s clothes, eventually the trail of duct tape ends at a park.)

Leni: Well that’s all the duct tape we could find, but still no Lana.

Lori: No, this is just where the trail ends; Lana is somewhere here at this park.

(The 8 kids split up to find Lana, first group is Lori and Leni, second group is Lincoln and Luna (In Lana’s body), third group is Luan and Lola, and fourth group is Lynn and Lucy. Lori and Leni searched at the women’s restroom.)

Lori: No sign of Lana here.

Leni: Not here either. You think she could be hiding in those sinks.

(Lori face palms. Meanwhile, Lynn and Lucy searched at the fields.)

Lynn: I can’t see Lana anywhere, Luce, can you see her?

Lucy: I don’t see Lana either.

Lynn: Ugh, where could she be?

(Luan and Lola were searching at the playground.)

Luan: I’ve checked all the slide tunnels, no Lana.

(Lola was asking some kids about Lana.)

Lola: Did any of you see a teenage girl with short brown hair and wears purple clothing?

Kid 1: I don’t think so.

Kid 2: Me neither!!!

Kid 3: I might have seen someone like her.

Lola: Really, where?

Kid 3: I saw her go past here like I think 10 minutes ago, but I forgot where she walked off to.

Lola: Grrr (face palms and walks off), where has that dirty girl gone?

(Lincoln and Luna were at the tables.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): She’s not anywhere at these tables.

Lincoln: This row of tables is clear here, no Lana, we should meet back with the others.

(The 8 siblings met back.)

Lori: So nobody found Lana at all?

Luan: No luck on finding her.

Lynn: Not a tiny clue.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Oh, this is hopeless; we’re never going to find her.

Lincoln: We will find her, don’t lose hope now.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Just go further on without me dudes, I’m gonna sit at a tree.

Leni: Okay, if you say so.

(Luna sits at a tree.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): (Sings) is this the real life, is this just fantasy…

(Luna is unaware that there’s another person sitting at the other side of the tree, singing along to the same song.)

Luna (In Lana’s body) and Unknown Person: (Sings) caught in a landslide, no escape from reality, open your eyes, look up to the skies and see…

Unknown person: Wait, Luna? Is that you I’m hearing?

(Person reveals to be Tabby. Luna tries to imitate Lana’s voice.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Oh, um, uh, no, you must have heard somebody else.

Tabby: Luna, I know that’s you, I know that singing voice once I hear it.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Okay it’s me, you got me Tabby.

Tabby: What happened to you? You look more like one of your sisters now.

Luna (In Lana’s body): It’s kind of a long story, let’s just say one of Lisa’s experiments had gone wrong and caused me to switch bodies with Lana.

Tabby: Now that is bogus.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I know right.

Tabby: So somebody that I just saw that looks like you, is actually one of your sisters stuck in your body?

Luna (In Lana’s body): You saw Lana?

Tabby: If that’s who it really was, then yes, I saw her.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Where is she?

(The scene cuts back to the other siblings.)

Luan: Well, we searched everywhere in the park.

Lynn: And we still haven’t found Lana.

Leni: So that duct tape led us nowhere then.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Not exactly dudes.

(Luna and Tabby walk up to the 7 other siblings.)

Tabby: I have just told Luna here where I saw your sister at.

Lincoln: Tabby? Where did you see Lana?

Tabby: At the music store.

Lori, Leni, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, and Lola: THE MUSIC STORE?

Tabby: Yeah, I just got this new guitar from there.

(Tabby shows them her new guitar.)

Lori, Leni, Luan, Lynn, Lincoln, Lucy, and Lola: Ooooooooo!!!

Tabby: Ooo indeed.

Leni: So what does Lana have to do with music? We never have seen her play an instrument or anything.

Lucy: Except the time where we formed that family band for the talent show.

Lincoln: We may have to see and find out, Tabby you know the way, take the lead.

Tabby: Right on it.

(Tabby leads the 8 Loud siblings to the music store.)

Tabby: Here we are mates, the music store; you’ll be able to find your sister in there.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Let’s hope you’re right about this Tabby.

Leni: Still, I don’t see a reason why Lana has got to do with music.

(Just then a buff guy exits the music store, the person is revealed to be Chunk, Luna’s roadie.)

Chunk: Oh, hello, did you see your sister in there; she’s got some mad crazy drum playin’ skills.

Lincoln: Looks like there’s our answer to why Lana has something to do with music.

Lori: Well, let’s go in. Chunk, take us to our sister.

(The 8 siblings and Chunk enter the music store; there they can see a few people cheering on for a person who’s playing the drums at a very fast pace.)

Chunk: Your sister should be over there surrounded by that crowd.

(The 8 siblings looked further, and they see that it’s Lana (In Luna’s body) playing the drums.)

Lynn: There she is.

(The siblings watched as Lana kept playing the drums, Lana then stops, and the people around her continued cheering.)

Lincoln: Lana!!!

Lana (In Luna’s body): Oh, you guys? how did you find me?

Lucy: Luna’s friend Tabby told us where we could find you.

Luan: We didn’t know you could actually play drums.

Lana (In Luna’s body): I’ve been practicing on drums ever since we formed that family band, and after months of practice, I finally seem to get the rhythms right, but even so, I still want to increase my skills in drum playing, and ever since switching to Luna’s body, I thought it would make me better at playing the drums, after all, Luna does have good instrument playing hands.

Leni: So that’s why you wanted to switch bodies with someone.

Lana (In Luna’s body): By switching to one of older sister’s bodies I wanted to see what it was like, to be the oldest child, or to have better musical instrument playing skills, or to wear braces, or to be much fit and athletic, and I certainly have accomplished in having better skills in playing the drums, I just want to stay in Luna’s body forever.

Lincoln: We understand now that you want to, but answer this, do you really want to miss out on 9 years of your childhood?

Luan: Is that what you really want?

Lana (In Luna’s body): I never really thought about that, missing 9 years of my life, that doesn’t seem fair to me, OOOOHH, you had me there, I don’t want to miss 9 years of my childhood, I want to be younger for as long as I want to be.

Lori: Then now is the time to get you and Luna to switch back to your own bodies, let’s get back home.

(The 9 kids return to the house, and the body switching machine is fully repaired.)

Lisa: Well, this is finally it. Lana, are you ready to give up Luna’s body, and go back into your own?

Lana (In Luna’s body): (breathes deeply) I’m ready now, (Turns towards her other siblings) and everyone, I’m sorry for running off like a maniac and stopping you from trying to switch me back to my own body, at least you all now know why I wanted to change into a different body.

Lincoln: But now, you’re finally willing to give it up for your own.

Lana (In Luna’s body): Yeah, will you all forgive me?

Leni: Of course we forgive you.

Luna (In Lana’s body): And maybe one day, in the next 9 years, you might grow to be like me, but that is only for you to decide, whatever you truly wish to be.

(Luna and Lana hug eachother.)

Lana (In Luna’s body): Well, here we go.

(Luna and Lana enter the pods, and Lisa presses the red button, activating them one last time, with mist covering up the bodies of Luna and Lana, then the machine stops and Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Luna’s body, and out comes Luna, now back in her body.)

Luna: I’m back dudes!

Luan: Welcome back to your old self.

Lynn: We finally have the old Luna back.

Luna: Oh dudes, it’s so good to be back to my old body, I never want to part from it again.

(Tears begin to shed from Luna’s eyes.)

Leni: Aw, come here.

(The other sisters and Lincoln gather around Luna and they all hug her, Lana is still in the pod.)

Luna: Thank you dudes, thank you for helping me get back to where I belong; it wouldn’t have been possible without all of you.

(Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Lana, who is now back in her body. Lana comes out, looks at her own hands, and gives a sad expression.)

Lana: (Sighs) well, it’s done now; I guess there’s no changing back to a different body that I was happy with being in.

Lincoln: You’ve done the right thing, letting Luna have her body back.

Luna: Thank you for letting me be myself Sis.

Lana: But now I don’t know if I’m anywhere near as good at the drums as I once was while in your body.

Luna: Well we’ll just have to see if anything on your drum playing skills actually have changed or not. Tell you what; I’ll look at your best drum performance tomorrow morning.

Lola: In the meantime, you got some serious business to take care of with Vanzilla.

Lana: Oh, right, those wheels, I’ll soon get them back on Vanzilla, I’m quick at getting 4 wheels on a vehicle.

(Lana went outside of the front house with a toolbox, and gets straight to work on getting all 4 wheels back on to Vanzilla, and after less than 2 minutes, all wheels were back on Vanzilla.)

Lana: See, like I told you.

Rita: That was brilliant Lana.

Lynn Sr.: Still, we have to get Vanzilla to the repairs; the engine’s been worn out again.

(Lana opens up Vanzilla’s front cover, and hits the engine a couple times with the wrench, making it work again.)

Lynn Sr.: Whoa, I don’t believe it, so all it took was to hit the engine.

Rita: Looks like Vanzilla doesn’t need to be taken to repairs after all.

Lana: Now that that’s out of the way, I got other business to take care of tomorrow.

(The nighttime transitions to morning, Lana is already at the garage, and is also back to wearing her usual outfit. Luna enters the garage.)

Luna: Good morning Lana.

Lana: Good morning.

Luna: As promised, I’m here to see how good you really are at the drums.

Lana: Well, I was good at them yesterday while in your body.

Luna: But that was just you in my body, and besides you did say to me that you practiced the drums a lot since our family band, right?

Lana: Right!!!

Luna: And I know for certain that nothing on your skills should have changed on you since we changed back.

Lana: I suppose so.

Luna: So you think you still got what it takes?

Lana: Well let’s see for ourselves.

(Lana sits behind the drums, grabs a pair of sticks, and breathes deeply.)

Lana: Let’s do this.

(The scene cuts to Lisa and Lily’s room, where Lisa was walking up to the body-switching machine with a big tarp.)

Lisa: Well, the time of reversing the switching of bodies ends here, there’s no need for this machine to be used anymore and now’s the time to cover this up, safe and secured, and wait ‘til there might be a day to come where it may be needed once more, my work here is finally complete.

(Lisa covers the body-switching machine with tarp, and then a letter slid under the door into her and Lily’s room.)

Lily: Huh?

Lisa: Hmm, what’s this?

(Lisa picks up the letter to read it. 6 other letters were sent to 6 other rooms, one for Lori and Leni, one for Luan, one for Lynn and Lucy, one for Lola, one for Lincoln, and one for Lynn Sr. and Rita. They all picked up the letters to read them. Lori text messages Bobby, and Lincoln calls Clyde with his walkie-talkie. Later in the night, the 9 siblings and their parents are at the front of the garage, where a stage once used by Lola is placed in front of it. Lincoln is seen wearing his new “best kid” shirt, and Leni is back in her usual outfit.)

Lincoln: So, how do I look with this shirt?

Leni: You look totes amazing in that shirt.

Luan: Perfect fit.

(Bobby, Ronnie Anne, and Clyde arrive.)

Ronnie Anne: Very nice on you I gotta say.

Clyde: Hey there old pal.

Lincoln: Clyde, Ronnie Anne!!!

Ronnie Anne: So you’ve gotten back to your old self.

Lincoln: That’s right, and better than ever.

Bobby: (To Lori) so babe, any reason why we’re here?

Lori: I think I have a feeling of why we’re here.

(The curtains of the stage open to reveal Luna, Lana, Chunk, and Tabby.)

Luna: Hi everyone… so you all wonder why you’re out here tonight? Well this is a very special night for me, and for Lana here, we along with Chunk and Tabby are here to play two songs for all of you, we hope you’ll enjoy our performance.

THE FIRST SONG STARTS HERE

(The first song is “Hero” by “Nickelback,” Lana starts the first song with a drum roll.)

Luna: I’m so high, I can hear heaven,

I am so high, I can hear heaven,

Luna and Tabby: Whoa, but heaven, no, heaven don't hear me,

And they say that a hero could save us, I'm not gonna stand here and wait,

I'll hold on to the wings of the eagles, watch as we all fly away,

(As the song is played, the rest of the Loud family, along with Bobby, Ronnie Anne, and Clyde, move along to the song with their phones held out and lighted up in the air. Other people join in on the crowd, and even Mr. Grouse opens the upstairs window.)

Luna: Someone told me…

Luna and Tabby: Love would all save us,

Luna: But, how can that be,

Luna and Tabby: Look what love gave us,

A world full of fighting, and the hurting that world never came,

And they say that a hero could save us, I'm not gonna stand here and wait,

I'll hold on to the wings of the eagles, watch as we all fly away,

Luna: Aaaahhaaaaaahh,

(Guitar solo)

Luna and Tabby: Now that the world isn't ending, it's love that I'm sending to you,

It isn't the love of a hero, and that's why I fear it won't do,

And they say that a hero could save us, I'm not gonna stand here and wait,

I'll hold on to the wings of the eagles, watch as we all fly away,

Luna: And they're watching us (Tabby: watching us)

They’re watching us, (Tabby: watching us)

As we all fly away,

And they're watching us (Tabby: watching us)

They're watching us, (Tabby: watching us)

As we all fly away, yeah (Tabby: Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah)

And they're watching us, (Tabby: watching us)

They're watching us, (Tabby: watching us)

As we all fly away, yeah yeah, whoa whoa.

THE SONG ENDS

(Everyone in the crowd cheer for the performance.)

Mr. Grouse: Great song Loud!!!

Lana: For our second song we like to bring one person up to the stage.

Luna: Will our brother Lincoln Loud please come up to the stage.

(Lincoln comes on the stage.)

Luna: Lincoln, will you sing this next song with me?

Lincoln: I’ll be glad to sing with you.

Luna: Then let’s do it bro.

THE SECOND SONG STARTS HERE

(The second song is “Runaway” by “Sunstroke Project,” Lana starts the song with the drum cymbal roll, and then Luna with the violin solo.)

Luna: Ohhh, forget--let me breathe, let me live,

Just run away from my mind,

Ohhh, forgive--I don’t need, I won’t breathe,

Just get away from my life,

(Chunk does the saxophone solo.)

Luna: You lost one-and-all, so fly away, over the clouds, under the sky,

Never come back, no, run away, with all your might, give up, you,

Luna and Lincoln: I don’t believe anymore your shallow heart,

I know that it’s you, who chose to play this trick,

I'll never forgive you, not for anything, and now you are left with nothing,

Ohhh, forget--let me breathe, let me live,

Luna: Just run away from my mind,

Luna and Lincoln: Ohhh, forgive--I don’t need, I won’t breathe,

Lincoln: Just get away from my life,

Luna: Ohhh, forget

Luna and Lincoln: Let me breathe, let me live,

Luna: Just run away from my mind,

Luna and Lincoln: Ohhh, forgive--I don’t need, I won’t breathe,

Lincoln: Just get away from my life,

(Chunk does the Saxophone solo again, and the crowds of people are shown dancing along to the song and even Mr. Grouse from the window.)

Lincoln: There’s no other time to make, in happiness you have mistaken,

We have no progressive future; I know your lying nature,

There’s no other time to make, in happiness you have mistaken,

We have no progressive future; I know your lying nature,

Luna and Lincoln: Ohhh forget--let me breathe, let me live,

Just run away from my mind,

Ohhh, forgive--I don’t need, I won’t breathe,

Lincoln: Just get away from my life,

Luna: Ohhh forget…

Luna and Lincoln: Let me breathe, let me live,

Just run away from my mind,

Ohhh, forgive--I don’t need, I won’t breathe,

Just get away from my life.

THE SONG ENDS

(The whole crowd cheers loudly for their performance, and Luna, Lincoln, Lana, Chunk, and Tabby all bow to the crowd.)

Luna: Hey dudes, let’s all take a picture.

(The rest of the Loud family, plus Bobby, Ronnie Anne, and Clyde come up to the stage for a group photo. Agnes Johnson, Lincoln’s school teacher, takes the picture of the entire Loud family, plus Bobby, Ronnie Anne, Clyde, Chunk, and Tabby. In the house, the picture was hung on the wall in the living room by Luna.)

Lana: That has been the best night of my life.

Luna: I knew you still had those skills, you have proven that you really have become a great drum player, and with that, you made yesterday night’s performance the best night for all of us.

Lana: Thank you Luna, thank you for everything.

(Luna and Lana hug eachother, tears shed from Lana’s eyes. Lincoln is seen from up the stairs in the hallway seeing Luna and Lana hugging, and then he enters his room.)

Lincoln: (To the viewers) well everybody, this is where our whole adventure ends, and now it’s time for all of us to go home, just like where me and my family are at. Farewell everyone, farewell to you all.

(Lincoln begins to read the recent issue of Ace Savvy, which is the very comic that was seen in the first part. The final scene shows the picture of the Loud family and their friends shining in the light.)

THE END

Songs and References

 * The first song sang by Luna and Tabby is "Hero" by "Nickelback".
 * The line "A world full of fighting, and the hurting that world never came" replaces the line "A world full of killing, and blood spilling that world never came." This was done to keep the fanfic a little more PG like.


 * The second song sang by Luna and Lincoln is "Runaway" by "Sunstroke Project".


 * Luna (While in Lana's body) and Tabby were briefly singing the first part of song from "Bohemian Rhapsody" by the band "Queen".


 * Luna's line "Whatever you truly wish to be" is a reference to the song "Pure Imagination" from the movie "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory."


 * Luna's line "Thank you for letting me be myself" is a reference to the song "Thank you" by "Sly and the Family Stone."


 * Lincoln's final line in the ending is a reference to Mr. Conductor's final line in the ending of the movie "Thomas and the Magic Railroad."