User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews 1: In Memory of a Mascot

Hello everyone and welcome to my 1st Fanfiction Review! A place where I review fanfictions that you all can suggest to me! For example I might review a lot of fanfictions of AnimationFan15, TMNT1987Dude, Harburton81, FirstDrellSpectre, YoshiRocker13, THELOUDHOUSEFANATIC, and much more! Today I will review the most recently released fanfiction made by AnimationFan15, "In Memory of a Mascot!" So let's begin!

Part 1: Storyline

Ok let's start with the storyline, in the story, "In Memory of a Mascot," Lincoln wants to by a brand new video game but since he doesn't have the money for it he, and someone else, will be paid handsomely for portraying the Royal Woods school's mascot known as the Wildebeest during football games.

Now Lincoln and the other person, who is called Maddie, both get the part and both are chosen to be the mascot, which is good for them. However Lincoln decides to keep this a secret from his sisters, since we all know they would laugh at him for wearing a costume, like the time they laughed at his Ace Savvy costume. But of course as Lincoln tries to leave the sisters convince him that they should go with them and Lincoln decides to let them come despite the probability of what could happen.

When they arrive and take their seats Lincoln quietly leaves and with Maggie they get in the mascot costume and go out on the field to do their job, where at this moment the Loud Sisters realize that Lincoln is gone and decide to look for him, except for Lisa who stays with holograms, and for some reason as I believe they go on the game field without security stopping them until they bump into the mascot, where after Lincoln yelps they chase the mascot until they unzip it revealing Lincoln and Maddie, on the field, in front of everyone.

The Loud Sisters then make fun of Lincoln like complete jerks and Lincoln, the gentle and emotional boy we know, runs away crying and then Maddie runs to get him after yelling at the Loud Sisters. The announcers then cancel the game and in response, everyone in the crowd boos at the loud sisters. Meanwhile Maddie finds Lincoln just as the Loud Sisters come after being chased out and despite the fact that they were just booed at by everyone laugh again causing Maddie to throw a pebble at Leni and then Maddie finally talks some god dang sense into the Loud Sisters who finally realize their mistake and despite them trying to apologize, Lincoln refuses and Maddie lets Lincoln stay at her house to sleepover and they leave.

Once the Loud Sisters get home the parents tell them that they found out and punish them by taking away all their favorite things and the loud sisters go to their rooms not saying any words. Meanwhile at Maddie's house, Lincoln starts to feel better and they play a video game while back at the Loud House, the sisters finally realize what they must do to fix everything.

Lincoln and Maddie are called back to the the football field where the sisters let them continue their game with the guarantee that they won't mess with them, and so they continue their game as the mascot which makes their team win thanks to the enthusiasm that they had. Lincoln and Maddie are then finally paid and agree that they will see each other anytime soon. The story ends with Lincoln finally getting his game console.

['''So my thoughts for the storyline are well, AWESOME! I mean just wow! The storyline is fantastic with very minimal details that would mind me! So for this category i give it a 10/10!]'''

Part 2: Characters

The characters are all the ones we really know, Lincoln and his Sisters, their parents, the coach, the crowd, and Maddie. Now Lincoln's description in this is pretty good cause, well he is Lincoln he is mostly written good and this is a great example of it. The loud sisters are all portrayed as the antagonists but at the end learn a lesson. Finally let's talk of the new character, Maddie! Maddie is a great character that AnimationFan15 has made! I mean she a great example as a new friend Lincoln meets who will most likely be featured in Lincoln's future adventures so I just hope that in later stories we get to learn more about her.

'''[Ok my thoughts on the characters are pretty good although the sisters antagonist status kinda makes me sad for Lincoln but even as Antagonists they are great so I hope they learn a lesson from this. I'll give this a 9/10!]'''

Part 3: Style 

The style of the story is all good such as the relationship between Maddie and Lincoln works perfectly but there is one tiny dark part and that part is only at when the loud sisters embarrass Lincoln and the only reason is that they did it in front of A LARGE CROWD! I mean that's just cold, although not as cold as burning a comic book like in one of AnimationFan15's more darker fanfictions called, "Whitewashed," or maybe it is colder just that after this time Lincoln ran away while in Whitewashed Lincoln flat out cussed at them, which i am most likely 100% believing he did. So this story has a dark tone at that part but at that part only as we can all think of darker stuff that could've happen.

[I will give this a 10/10 based on how good the style is overall!]

Part 4: Does the story have anything missing?

To be honest nothing is really missing except for one thing I think should've happened which is that the sisters should have been shamed by their friends and at school and such as what they did was just horrible, but I feel for AnimationFan15's time for how long it is to write so it's ok for him not to do it although I still feel as if that should've happen but it really doesn't bother me much really.

[I guess a 9/10 cause everything is good, just the loud sisters should have been shamed more.]

Part 5: Final Rating

['''Ok my final rating for this is a 38/40 so an A rating! This story is a good story for everyone to read so everyone should read this wonderful masterpiece by AnimationFan15, a great inspiration to all fanfictions everywhere! And despite the fact this is his 13th fanfiction, this is no unlucky fan fiction but rather one of the best i ever read!'''

​I hope you all enjoy this first review and tune in next time to Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews!