User blog comment:Metool Bard/Fanfiction: Where There's a Will/@comment-31022739-20180617191153

Seeing as how you told me how this story was gonna go, nothing really took me by surprise. That being said, this was still a good story. I still had a sense that despite dealing with a situation we’ve never seen any of the characters face in canon, that Lori was the one speaking to me. Nice work.