User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 3

Hello again everybody, here is the 3rd part of my fanfic.

Also here is of course...

Part 1

Part 2

In case if you haven't seen them yet.

OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Lynn Sr. and Rita, who are in each other’s bodies, still wear the same usual outfits.

Lori, who is still in Lynn’s body, has now changed from Lynn’s usual red and white #1 shirt to a black and blue short sleeved shirt.

Leni (see part 2’s overview)

Luna (see part 2’s overview)

Luan is back in her own body. In the previous part Luan was not wearing her scrunchie on her hair. In this part Luan is wearing her scrunchie again.

Lynn, who is still in Lori’s body, now wears a red and white headband and a pair of red and black gym shoes. She has changed from Lori’s usual light blue top to a plain red shirt, and still wears the same usual brown shorts that Lori always wears. Lynn also has Lori’s hair in a ponytail.

Lincoln (see part 2’s overview)

Lucy (see part 2’s overview)

Lana, who is still in Luna’s body, is now duct-taped to a two-wheeled dolly.

Lola is back in her own body.

Lisa remains the same.

Lily (see part 2’s overview)

The Story Continues Here
(The story continues with Luan jumping down the stairs to the living room where the rest of her siblings minus Lori and Lynn are at.)

Luan: Goooood morning everybody.

Leni (Lincoln), Luna (Lana), Lincoln (Leni), Lola, and Lily (Lucy): LUAN!!!

Luna (In Lana’s body): Glad to see you’re all better sis.

Luan: And I’m glad to have my own body back, part of helping Lola suffer in pain no more, and I thank you all for giving me and Lola the chance.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Had we not been able to switch Lola’s body back with yours, Lola would have to suffer another day in pain, and I’d imagine it would be worse than yesterday.

Lisa: Which is why patience comes first, and a time will soon come when two people stuck in each other’s bodies can finally switch back to their own.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): And if it has to take me the next two to four days until I get back to my own body, then I’ll keep waiting until that time becomes right.

(Lori and Lynn come down the stairs.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Lynn and I are heading off to run laps.

Leni (In Lincoln's body): Okay, see you when you get back.

(Lori (In Lynn’s body) opens the front the door and sees that Clyde is there.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Oh, Clyde, I didn’t realize you were coming over.

Clyde: Wait, your voice sounds all different, and it sounds exactly the same as Lori’s voice.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well that’s because I am Lori.

Clyde: Wait, what, L-L-Lori? (About to have a moment but stops.) No no no no no, I do not believe what I’m seeing is really happening, there’s no way Lori could be Lynn.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Oh she is… because we’re stuck in each other’s bodies.

(Clyde remains still for a few seconds, and then bleeds from the nose and faints. Everything goes black, and then Clyde opens his eyes and sees Lola. They’re on the couch in the living room.)

Lola: Clyde… Clyde, are you okay?

Clyde: Oh Lola, I had this weird dream, that Lynn’s voice sounded the same as Lori’s, and Lori’s voice sounded the same as Lynn’s, or was it Lori stuck in Lynn’s body and Lynn stuck in Lori’s, I don’t really know which it is.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): That was no dream.

(Clyde gets startled by Lucy)

Clyde: What in the… Lucy? You’re a baby now? Or is that Lily sounding the same as Lucy? Because that baby looks the same as Lily, who is wearing sunglasses now, even if it is Lucy, Lucy’s supposed to be dark, pale, and have black hair.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): What you’re seeing before you truly is the spirit of Lucy, trapped in the body of her baby sister.

Clyde: Does that also mean that Lily…

(Then Clyde hears Lily’s laugh, and sees that it was coming from Lucy’s body. Lily then looks at Clyde.)

Lily (In Lucy’s body): Hi! (Lily waves at Clyde as she is saying this.)

Clyde: Uhh, can someone please tell me what is going on here before I really go nuts?

Lisa: Glad you asked, originally I had a machine that could be able to teleport us from one devise to the other, and they could only be activated by correct sequence of numbers, just so nobody could hack into the teleporting system.

Clyde: A teleporter you say.

Lisa: Unfortunately, One of the teleporters I had invented gone haywire after the wrong sequence of numbers were punched in, and because I haven’t actually tested it properly, anyone who touched that teleporter and the person touching the person who had touched the teleporter while it was malfunctioning, they had ended up switching bodies, this has happened to everyone in the whole house, everyone but me, luckily I had that malfunctioned teleporter destroyed.

Clyde: But isn’t Lola still in her own body?

Lola: Yes, but what Lisa just told to you is true.

Luan: By everyone but Lisa having swapped bodies, it also includes me and Lola.

Lola: And it was a very painful experience for me being in Luan’s body.

Lisa: After building a newer machine, we’ve managed to get Luan and Lola back to their own bodies, and the same will happen to the rest of the family, once the machine is fully charged again for the next two people.

Clyde: Don’t tell me my best friend Lincoln switched bodies with someone.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): I was afraid you’d ask.

Clyde: Lincoln? You’re in Leni’s body?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Yes, which means you know by now that Leni…

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Oh hi Clyde, I’m guessing you’ve already seen Lincoln looking like me.

Lisa: How many times are we going to go through this Leni? Lincoln is in your body, and you’re stuck in Lincoln’s body.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): I know I’m in Lincoln’s body, uh, do I?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): (sigh) And I thought having to cover for all my sisters during our supposed spring cleaning was worse, not to mention all 11 of us covering for each other during video chat with Pop-Pop.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): But this… this is way worse.

(Luna (In Lana’s body) comes at the hallway at the top of the stairs from the upstairs bathroom.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Dudes, come quick, Mom and Dad are arguing again.

Lana (In Luna’s body): Does this mean I have to be pulled on this dolly again?

Lisa: For the rest of our sake, you’ll have to.

Clyde: So that’s why Luna’s taped up to that dolly, because that’s Lana, not Luna.

(The other 8 siblings and Clyde hurried up the stairs, Lana (In Luna’s body) is pulled on the dolly by Luan, Lincoln (In Leni’s body) is carrying Lily, who is in Lucy’s body, and Lucy, who is in Lily’s body, is carried by Leni, who is in Lincoln’s body. The story then cuts to Lori and Lynn at the park.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Okay Lori, around the park, 25 laps, are you up for it?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Oh I am literally up for it.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Ready?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Ready!!!

Lynn (In Lori’s body): GO!!!

(Lori and Lynn begin to run the first lap. During the first 5 laps, Lynn, being in Lori’s body, was already feeling a lot of shaking in Lori’s legs as though she was wobbling.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): (while running) Wow Lynn, I never thought you’d be in so much shape in this body.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): (while running and breathing heavily) I always… (Breathe) work out… (Breathe) everyday… (Breathe) but with… (Breathe) this body… (Breathe) I can… (Breathe) barely… (Breathe) keep up… (Breathe) when was… (Breathe) the last time… (Breathe) you had… (Breathe) exercise?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): (While running) I don’t know, I’d say it had been about… let’s see… two years.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): (While running) two years? (Breathe) and no exercise?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): (While running) Nope, not so cut out for everyday workout am I? But since I’m stuck in your body, I just have to make sure that this body of yours remains in shape, while you being stuck in my body, looks like there’s a whole lot of working out that you got to get through again like you did with this one. (Both complete lap 5) Only 20 more laps to go.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): (While running) Uuuunnngh!!!

(Back at the Loud’s house, Lynn Sr. and Rita are at their bedroom arguing about Lynn Sr.’s shirts.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): What do you mean I have too many shirts? I loved these old shirts since I was in high school.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): There are too many shirts nearly filling up our closet, even shirts that are on the floor. You have to get rid most of these shirts honey, look at these, some are even worn out and torn up.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Why are you so worried about tiny holes in my shirts that nobody will even notice? I could just wear a jacket over them no problem.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): But since we are stuck in each other’s bodies, I’m the one making the decisions on which shirts to give away. (Holds up a shirt) What is this, a shirt with a blue porcupine?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): It’s a hedgehog; I had that shirt a few years before we were married.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I see. Either way this one has got to go, so must other shirts.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): No, these shirts are not going.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): You don’t even wear most of them; some are also too small for you.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): It doesn’t matter how small they are, they still fit.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Even ones that are too tight for you? I don’t think so.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I don’t care how tight some shirts can be, you think you can just go into my side of the closet and just take out whatever clothes you think I don’t need anymore, just because we’ve switched bodies caused by… well… whatever it was that Lisa built. Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Oh so your side of the closet, when most of your clothes are taking up a bigger fraction of the closet? I need room for my clothes too.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): It still does not give you the right to touch my clothing and try to take them to the giveaway basket.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): As I’m stuck in your body, I will.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): But as the father and husband in the house, I demand you NOT.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Says who?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): SAYS ME!!! YOU ARE NOT GETTING RID OF ANY OF MY SHIRTS, AND THAT’S FINAL.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): HOW DARE YOU MAKE SUCH A DEMAND TO ME.

(The scene transitions from the parents’ bedroom to the upstairs bathroom where the 9 of the 11 siblings and Clyde heard everything from the vent.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): (Off-screen) How dare me? HOW DARE ME? GET OUT!!!

(A door slam is heard off screen, as Rita is kicked out of the parents’ bedroom.)

Luan: Wow, looks like Dad is really mad about Mom trying to get rid of his shirts.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Let’s go see if Mom is okay.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): In the meantime, I really have to use it.

Lisa: And I’m going to check on my body-switching machine, to see how far it’s charged.

(Everyone but Lucy (In Lily’s body) gets out of the bathroom, with Lana (In Luna’s body) being pulled on the dolly again.)

Clyde: I never thought your dad could get that angry.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): You should stay up here Clyde.

Clyde: Whatever for?

Lola: Um, well, a, uh, family moment?

Luna (In Lana’s body): Uh, yeah, you know, relative to relative.

Lola: You know what we mean.

Clyde: Okay, I hear you.

Lisa: You can come with me and see my machine Clyde.

Clyde: Now the machine I heard that you built, I really got to see.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): (Off-screen, in the bathroom) I need help sitting on the toilet.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I got ya Luce, I’m coming.

Luan: Come on Lana, off we go to the living room.

Lana (In Luna’s body): I prefer to stay up here.

Lola: Still, you’re coming down with us, and we’re making sure at least one of us keeps watch on you.

(Lana grumbles at Lola’s statement. Clyde and Lisa enter Lisa and Lily’s room, and Clyde sees the body-switching machine.)

Clyde: Whoa, so this is meant to change everyone back to their own bodies?

Lisa: Exactly, this machine has already been used once to switch Luan and Lola back to their own bodies, and once the charge bar you see on the small device is at 100 percent, that means it’ll be ready for use again. This will go five more times until the whole family is back in their respective bodies.

Clyde: Why not all of them to go in that machinery?

Lisa: Doing so will result in switching them into the wrong bodies instead of their own, which is why only one person at a time can enter one pod, and another person in the other.

Clyde: Oh, I see your point, but couldn’t you build it further to be used for infinite amount of times in a single day?

Lisa: That was a plan that I had all drawn out after the whole body switching mishap, but after having no sleep, I messed it up completely, so I had to restart on building the machine, and at that point there wasn’t enough parts to make this machine to work infinitely, luckily, I did have enough to make this little device. After use of the machine, it’ll recharge for another 24 hours before next use.

Clyde: That long? This means it’ll take another five days until the whole family is back in their own bodies.

Lisa: Indeed, and in a couple hours the machine will be at full charge, so we must get ready.

(Lori and Lynn return home after 25 laps at the park, Lori, being in Lynn’s body, felt very energetic, and while Lynn, being in Lori’s body, felt very exhausted.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Woohoo, that was some excellent running, wasn’t it Lynn?

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah, (Inhales) it… (Inhales) sure… (Inhales) was. (Continues to breathe heavily, and then faints.)

(Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body) was at the living room along with all the other Loud kids except Lisa.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I can’t believe your father kicked me out of our bedroom.

(Lori and Lynn notice their mom in their dad’s body sitting on the couch with the other 8 kids.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Now I don’t have anywhere to sleep at.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Don’t say that Mom, maybe you can sleep in one of our room’s.

Luna (In Lana’s body): And one of us can sleep down here.

Luan: Or at another room with someone else.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Can someone tell us what is going on?

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah, what’s with the whole Dad kicking Mom out of their room going on?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): We were arguing about all the shirts he had in the closet, I tried to get your dad to get rid most of them but he refused, some of them were old and had small holes, but no matter what I thought, he won’t give them away, then he got so angry at me, he decided to push me out of our room.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Dang, that’s almost like you kicking Dad out of your room, cause of course you’re both stuck in each other’s bodies like most of us here.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I don’t even know if your father does want to switch bodies back with me anymore.

(All kids except Lana and Lisa gasp. (Lisa is not with them.))

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): What, no.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Are you kidding?

Lola: That’s nonsense.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Really?

Lily (In Lucy’s body): No no!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Don’t think that.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): That’s crazy talk.

Luan: Dad has to.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): You can’t be serious.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I wish I was kidding, but it’s sad to say I’m not.

All kids except Lana and Lisa: NO!!!

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Please kids, I need time alone.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Come on everyone, let’s leave her be.

(The kids leave the living room, but Lucy, who is in Lily’s body, crawls to the door of her parents’ bedroom.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): (off-screen) Ugh, I felt like I kicked myself out of my room…

(The scene then shows Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body) in his bedroom. Lucy knocks on the door, which startles her dad.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Go away Rita, I made myself clear.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Dad, it’s Lucy, I can’t reach the door knob.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Oh, Lucy, why didn’t you say so?

(Lynn Sr. opens the door for Lucy, picks her up, and brings her in his room. In the parents’ room, Lynn Sr. was refolding his shirts that Rita tried to throw out.)

Lucy (In Lily’s body): This is a lot of shirts you have here.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Yeah, your mom wanted me to get rid of these shirts, but rather than letting me do it myself, she just decides that it’s okay to it for me, and these shirts are going nowhere, I can give away whatever shirts I have that I feel I don’t want, however and whenever.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Don’t you think you’ve become too harsh on Mom?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Not as harsh as she was to me, for making a mess in our room by taking most of my shirts out of the closet, my shirts, and not hers, that is why I had to kick her out of our room.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): That’s almost like kicking yourself out of your room.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Yes, (about to go mad, but remains calm) I know, unless Rita truly regretted her decision, I never want to see her fa… GGRRRR… I mean, hear her voice ever again.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): But Dad, your bodies…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I can keep Rita’s body, we can forget about switching me and Rita back to our own bodies.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Gasp!!!

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): You should go join the others; you do want to get your old body back don’t you?

Lucy (In Lily’s body): Yes, I do, but…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Good, off you go.

(Lucy exits her parents’ bedroom and climbs her way up the stairs. The scene then cuts to Lisa and Lily’s bedroom where the body-switching machine has reached 100 percent full charge.)

Lisa: With the machine fully charged we can now get the next two people two switch back to their own bodies.

Clyde: Now I can finally get to see it working.

Luna (In Lana’s body): I’m still worried about Mom though.

Luan: Yeah, so am I.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): We’re all worried, but I’m sure they can both work things out.

(Lucy (In Lily’s body) comes in Lisa and Lily’s room.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Lucy, there you are, (picks Lucy up) c’mon, you and Lily should go next; we know how much you don’t want to be stuck in a baby’s body forever.

Lucy (In Lily’s body): If you say so, since Dad is still mad.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Here you go Lily, in you go.

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) puts Lily (In Lucy’s body) in one pod, and Lynn (In Lori’s body) puts Lucy (In Lily’s body) in the other pod. The machine activates after Lisa presses the red button on the small device. Mist in the pods covered Lucy and Lily for an amount of seconds. The machine then comes to a full stop.)

Clyde: So did it work?

Lola: It has worked once before, and it should work again.

Lisa: Now we release them.

(Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Lucy’s body, and out comes the body of Lucy.)

Lucy (back in her body): Thanks guys, really appreciated it, now I can get out of this diaper.

Clyde: Wow, it did work.

Lola: I told you it works.

Lisa: Now to get Lily out.

(Lisa opens the door of the other pod containing Lily, and Lily, who is now back in her own body, crawls out of the pod.)

Lily: Hahaha, yayah.

(Lily was still wearing Leni’s sunglasses. Lincoln (In Leni’s body) picks Lily up, takes Leni’s sunglasses off of Lily, and puts them on his head (Leni’s head) where it truly belongs on.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Aren’t those mine?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Yes, they are yours put on to your head that is, besides you have another pair of sunglasses on my head.

(Leni remembers about the sunglasses on Lincoln’s head.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Oh that’s right.

Lisa: Another success of switching two more people back to their own bodies.

Clyde: That was very awesome Lisa, switching Lucy back to her body and Lily with hers. Well, time for me to head home. Lincoln, I’ll see you when you get your body back.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): You know I will.

(Lincoln (In Leni’s body) and Clyde fist bump, and Clyde exits the house. Then final scene transitions to Lucy in her room. She had just changed from her diaper back to her own legwear.)

Lucy: (To the viewers) well, it is great and all that I’m back in my body, but now my dad not wanting to switch bodies back is my biggest concern. I’m sure he’ll turn up soon and Mom and Dad will get back together. We’ll just have to see about tomorrow.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 4

Other parts
Part 1

Part 2

Part 4 (coming soon)

Part 5 (coming soon)

Part 6 (work in progress)

Part 7 (work in progress)

Part 8 (work in progress)