Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-26212090-20161126072300/@comment-24200891-20161127140818

The story is nearly end but I need to know if my idea isn't too cliche. The siblings build sandcastles but all for nothing as storm happens. Lynn and Ronnie are surfing so they got caught in storm. Bobby saves them but because of the storm the beach is ruined so no party. The Louds invite Santiagos to make own night party in their yard. Are those ideas good or would you suggest something else?