Thread:DandyAndy1989/@comment-26212090-20161116213955/@comment-28183553-20161117025730

Well, I don't think we need the moment where the kids are looking at Lincoln and each other through the cracks in their doors to tell them they're watching them. But we should keep one of the pics of Lincoln panicking over the possibility of losing the sweet spot to one of his sisters.

As for the moment of Lincoln trying to stay awake so he can get to the sweet spot, I say keep the moments of him doing things, but take out the time on his clock.

When the girls charge for the Sweet Spot, keep the image of Leni pushing Luna and the images of Luna feeling the impact from Leni pushing her.

As for the brawl for the Sweet Spot, I suggest you look at the characters' gallery indexes first. I think the first image of Lisa on the car roof and wailing is the image for the episode on her gallery's index. And I also think the one of Lana about to throw a beet at her is also that for her index.

Keep the image of Lori and Lynn fighting each other on the ground, not the one where they're rolling on it. And also the one of Lynn biting down on Lincoln's head.

As for the end of the fight, keep the fight cloud at its highest level and then the image of the scarp heap the van had become after the fight came to an end.

Keep one of the images of Rita and Lynn Sr. having seen the whole thing and cancelling the road trip. And finally, the group shot of the kids groaning over Rita grounding them.