Thread:AndrewBrauer/@comment-24200891-20170214182441/@comment-24200891-20170214191706

To be honest I need some ideas for plot progress of MelanchoLinc. Here Linc becomes an emo because he lost confidence and thinks he's forever inferior to his sisters.

http://theloudhouse.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction_-_Melancho-Linc

First I thought Linc walking around and brooding about how bad his life is would be fascinating but now I think he could become annoying. Lincoln expresses his pain through drawings and depressing monologues. I thought when his sisters try to talk to him he only says to them "You can't possibly comprahend my pain" but now I think he might become unlikable. I already put in trivia a spoiler that Maggie appears there. They will talk like emo with emo.

What plot elements would you suggest for this story?