User blog:Funnyman12/Word of advice

If an episode does something that you don't like then don't make a response/sequel fic as they are for the most worse and a lot more mean spirited and unnecessary drama/ filled.

Instead do a re-write Where you change the scenes up to make the  episode itself work or fit into your story better really. Heck make a better episode even. But you don't have to be dramatic all the time as well. Not saying it doesn't work as it did for Andrews re-write for making the case which was pretty good really.