User blog comment:AlexKawa/About the Character of Greg Kroeger/@comment-32807753-20180807072838

I feel like I might be making a mountain out of an anthill, but I wouldn’t have as much of a problem with Greg calling everyone idiots if it was executed in a more joking manner instead of coming across as teaching a message.

There are cartoons that do poke fun at things people like (like how Teen Titans Go made fun of soccer in that one episode), so I know what you were trying to go for. The thing with joke stories like this is that you have to make it clear to the reader that you are just poking fun and making jokes or else people will get the wrong idea.

I think you’re fine as a fanfic writer to be honest. Just maybe work on how you execute jokes.