User blog comment:BatSam247/Oneshot- Over The Edge/@comment-26302585-20170801031143

Okay. I'm in the first part, and I already have questions.

1. You say that Lincoln threw the 3DS which caused a chain reaction involving his sisters' stuff in the hallway which led to Lori's dress getting ruined. What was the chain reaction? What happened when Lincoln threw his 3DS? You didn't explain what exactly happened in the chain reaction. No offense, but that's kinda lazy.

2. How did Lori's dress get ruined? Did it get torn up? Is it stained? Again, you didn't explain.

3.Why was Lori's dress on the outside of the door? What was wrong with putting it in, you know, her closet?

4. Lori whipping Lincoln with a belt... What 17 year old, in this day and age, whips her younger sibling with a belt? I know some parents, even today, do it to their kids, but a 17 year old? I just don't buy that.

5. Where the heck are the parents when this is happening? I'm pretty sure they have the right to know that their oldest daughter pretty much abused one of her younger siblings. I know having the parents involved would be too easy, but come on, there's no way Lori can just whip her siblings and the parents don't know about it.