Thread:Harvey Beaks Number 1 Fan/@comment-32318818-20180509212514/@comment-32318818-20180608200415

Here are a couple errors that I have found so far: You referred Lincoln as a she instead of a he once. Lori: "Hey, I hears whats you guys are talkibg a about." The error hwre is obvious. Lincoln: "Hey, I realized something, maybe it's time that we train Lilly to use the potty. " It should be "Hey, I just realized something. Maybe it's about time that we train Lily to use the potty. Lana: "Now, we're can let the training begin." Another obvious mistake Besides those grammar and spelling mistakes, you're looking pretty good plot-wise.