User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Request a Re-Write/Alternate Ending!/@comment-35372235-20180422031214

Could you do a re-write of Gender War? I honestly love that fanfiction, it was pretty good, but I want to know what would've happened if Luna, Leni, and Lily never heard Lincoln cry in his room, and the sisters go to the Women's Paradise Island and leave Lincoln home alone for spring break. One idea I had is since Lincoln was feeling depressed, it made sense (to me at least) if Lincoln spent the whole spring break crying in his room non stop (not even able to get any sleep without crying). I tried thinking about how it would end like for example, after the girls return home from spring break, Luna checks on Lincoln, notices he's been crying and she feels bad for him so she shows the sisters how miserable they made Lincoln and they start feeling bad and regret their actions, that's just one example of an ending, no it's not the best but it's just an example, if you have a better ending that would be okay (Plus, I can't think about what've happened if Charles's flees came back whether before the girls leave or while the girls are gone so I just leave it out of the story unless you have a better idea)