User blog comment:AnimationFan15/Fanfiction - Hearts of Gold/@comment-29866170-20190313192249

Sorry if this is old news, but I've got a change of opinion on this fanfiction. While there was some generally sweet moments throughout the story, I have one kinda-major problem. I thought the reason why Leni was sad was kind of like forcing in some of your least favorite episodes into the story. Thus; while re-reading this (DON'T ask me how I ignored this back in late 2016 when I made my first comment), I just thought it wasn't truely "genuine" enough to invest my emotions much.

On a bit of side note; I don't know if this is due to the situations that've appeared after this, but reading lines such as "You can't let some bad memories overwhelm your thoughts on a specific person.", kind of feels like uninentional foreshadowing in a way.