Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-30953185-20180531223312/@comment-30498740-20180602174009

Luna: He could have made that story without demonizing us.

My thoughts on this fanfic that it sucks. The conflict is stupid and not to mention the whole stupid cliche of the nicer sister thing leading this dumb excuse of a fanfic just really symbolizes why I hate a majority of Loud House fanfics. The plot could have been done better, you don’t even need the other sisters to appear or you could have them be impressed instead of trying to push a dumb agenda. Sorry this review of this was so long, but I really hated this fanfic and shows me the reason I’m not a fan of the author. I don’t Hate Asylum117 though, but I can’t say I like him either.