Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26330630-20170103063836/@comment-26330630-20170103150116

Jebarul wrote: Example please. The Luan Loud article is a decent example. I noticed that there is quite a bit of grammatical, structural, and inconsistency errors in this one. I'll copy and paste some of them:

(These are all unedited and directly from the article.)
 * Though Luan is typically one of the kinder siblings, she is unstoppable at pranking
 * She always has a positive and cheerful attitude. She is very optimistic, as she likes to support her siblings, and especially make them laugh and feel better.
 * In Hand-Me-Downer it's revealed that she has been wearing her braces from a younger age. Then she wore a sleeveless yellow dress with a square pattern, a black belt, white socks, and brown shoes.
 * However, he acts disrespectful toward Lincoln, mocking him when Luke (Luna) uses him to clean the toilet, when Leon (Lily) bites his thumb instead of kissing it, and when they tease him about Ronnie Anne.
 * In the minicomic Deuces Wild!, Luan interprets the superheroine called The Joker, who is also one of Ace Savvy's sidekicks. Her powers are not shown, as she's only seen mocking the gas monster. In the comic, she is summoned by Savvy (played by Lincoln) alongside the rest of Savvy's deck (played by the rest of her sisters) to help him and One-Eyed Jack (played by Clyde) to defeat the gas monster.

These are a few examples I found just from skimming the article. If you want me to explain what I see wrong with them I'd be happy to. (I'm in 11th grade and I take honors English III, so I'm not just nitpicking. All of the examples I've used do contain some sort of grammatical error.)