Thread:PB&Jotterisnumber1/@comment-32466135-20170915024924/@comment-32466135-20170916050801

Well it was where I added a scene where it shows Lynn going to run away because in the canon version of the episode we just already see Lynn immediately being a criminal with Lola without a small scene with showing Lynn preparing to run away, we saw Lola preparing to run away on screen but we did not see Lynn preparing to run away on screen. Before we did see Lynn become a criminal along with Lola during Lincoln's fantasy. The last seen Lynn was seen in before that was when she got upset that she got kicked off her sports team then we just see Lynn immediately taking life of crime with Lola in her second scene of the episode without a third middle scene of her that shows her going to runaway which kinda lead it to a gap plot hole. So for the rewrite I added in a scene right after the Lana being in a bubble scene of showing that Lynn is going to run away which helps fill in why Lynn took life of crime with Lola.