Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-31541999-20171213000314/@comment-30953185-20171221062443

I know it wasn't really my place to, but I made some more dialogue.

Wretched: [confused] Huh? Who said that. Eh, it was probably nothing.

Voice: [a little louder] Hey, I’m talking to you!

[Wretched then turns to see a reflection of his old self on the mirror, looking very stern and concerned.]

Wretched: Hey, what are you doing here? Lincoln’s no longer in control, remember?

Lincoln: [stern] Just because I’m not in control doesn’t mean I’ve disappeared. I’ve seen all the terrible thing you’ve been doing these past few days.

Wretched: Hey, those jerks deserve it for how they’ve been treating you. If anything, you should be thanking me for doing what you could never do.

Lincoln: [stern] Dude, even though everyone gave us a hard time these past few weeks, that doesn’t give you the right to just get revenge on everyone like that. Especially the ones who tried to defend you.

Wretched: Well, they all would’ve turned on me eventually, they always do. No matter what it is, they’d always find some way to turn on them.

Lincoln: Yeah, but have you ever heard the saying 2 wrongs don’t make a right?

Wretched: Enough! I’ve had enough of this. I’m going upstairs to lay down.

[Wretched is about to go upstairs, when… ]

Lincoln: Are you really happy with this new lifestyle?

[Wretched stops and turns around]

Lincoln: I said, are you really happy with this new lifestyle?

''[Wretched looks at him with an angry glare, before growling a bit and heading upstairs to take a nap. However, his sees that his subconscious is standing right inside his bedroom.]''

Lincoln: You can’t get rid of me that easily.

Wretched: [aggravated] Listen here, bub! You better get out of here and leave me alone or, or… [notices his subconscious isn’t scared of him.] Hey,why are you not scared of me?

Lincoln: Two reasons. 1. Because I’m intangible, and cannot be touched or harmed. And 2. Because I’m you.

Wretched: [snickers] Don’t make me laugh. We are not the same person.

Lincoln: Eau the contraire, my dear alter ego. I am in fact you.

Wretched: [groans] Listen, would you do me a favor and buzz off. I’m too tired to deal with this.

Lincoln: Oh, trust me. I’m not going anywhere.

''[And with that Wretched’s subconscious disappears. Wretched is glad but a little irritated and nervous too. He scoffs it off and goes to sleep. Then cut to the Loud sisters inside the Casagrande's living room waiting anxiously.]''

Lana: Lori, do you know why we’re here.

Lori: [sighs] To be honest Lana, I literally have no idea.

''[Just then everyone else shows up. (Bobby, Maria Santiago, The Casagrande Family, Lori and Leni's friends (Tad, Joey, Chaz, Dana, Teri, and Becky), Luna's friends (Tabby and Sam), Luan's friends (Giggles and Benny), Lynn's friends (Francisco, Polly Pain, and Margo), Lucy's friends (Silas, Haiku, and Rocky), Skippy, Winston, and Lisa's friends (David and Darcy). They all give them disapproved looks, as they all sit down and get ready to talk.]''

Bobby: OK, before you girls say anything. We all know what you did to Lincoln and what it caused. Like how you kept criticizing him over things that didn't matter, and wouldn't cut him a break.

[The sisters get more nervous and even overwhelmed]

Lori: [nervously] H-how did you all find out about that?

Familiar voice: [off-screen] Because I told them.

''[They turn around to see it's Ronnie Anne who told them. She also has a look of anger and disappointment. All the sisters are surprised.]''

Lori: [nervously] Ronnie Anne? How did you find out?

Familiar voice: [off-screen] I told her.

''[They look behind Ronnie Anne to see it's Clyde who told her. He too has a look of anger and disappointment (even towards Lori).]''

Clyde: [to the sisters] I told Ronnie Anne because of how bad I felt for Lincoln, and how upset I was to see him turn into what he is now. And how upset I was in you.

Ronnie Anne: [to the sisters] And then I told my brother and the rest of my family about what happened too. That should explain why Bobby wanted Lori and the rest of her sisters to invite themselves and their friends to come to their house.

[Their friends also look at them with disappointed looks.]

Lori: Look everyone we can literally explain.

Leni: Like, all of it.

Luna: We were just so focused on all the bad stuff Lincoln did.

Luan: That it made us forget us that we already put him through so much.

Lynn: And all the good stuff he’s done for us.

Lucy: We’re monsters.

Twins: And we’re really sorry!

Lisa: Agreed.

[After they explain, they still have a bit of disappoint on their faces.]

Darcy: [breaking the silence] Oh, I can’t take it anymore! [runs to Lisa and hugs her] I forgive you Lisa!

[Everyone then looks at Darcy with shocked and incredulous expressions.]

Darcy: That’s right! I forgive Lisa, because she’s sorry for her actions. Plus Lisa’s my friend, and that's what friends do, forgive each other.