User blog:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Mount AvaLoud

My second fanfiction, I expect comments. I like to thank FirstDrellSpectre for giving me the title. Its in development,   so feel free to put any ideas down below.

Plot
(It starts with The Loud Family driving in Vanzilla in the snowy mountains for a week on vacation. They reached two cabins, one for their parents and one for the children)

RITA: Kids, were here! - Rita announced - Go have fun!

DAD: Check out your cabin! - Dad said

(The siblings excitedly runs out of Vanzilla and into their cabin, its a nice cabin that have 11 beds, a TV, a fireplace, a sauna room, etc.)

LINCOLN: This. Is. AWESOME! - Lincoln praised

LORI: You said it, Lincoln! - Lori said in agreement - This is literally the best cabin ever!

LUNA: So dues, what you wanna do?! Luna ask her siblings

(They all think, until Lincoln gotten something)

LINCOLN: Snowball fight? - Lincoln ask

LORI, LENI, LUNA, LUAN, LYNN, LUCY, LANA, LOLA, LISA, LILY: YEAH! - The girls eagerly said

(Outside, the siblings, except Lisa who judging, are split into two teams, the first one involves Lincoln, Leni, Luna, Lana, and Lucy, and team two includes Lynn, Luan, Lola, Lily, and Lori, the snow brawl starts as Lincoln begin throwing snowballs at Lynn)

LYNN: Lola, Lori, go left! - Lynn commanded

(They do so while they pelt Luna with snowballs, seeing this angers Lincoln as he and Lana nod and pelting Lynn and Lola, respectively. However, they stopped because of cold, harsh winds breezing in the air as they shiver)

LENI: I-Its s-s-so c-cold! - Leni says while shivering

LINCOLN: Lets g-go inside! - Lincoln said

(The cold siblings all go inside; Later, it shows Lincoln in the sauna room with a towel around his waist, relaxed by the steam)

LINCOLN: Ahh, there nothing like a relaxing sauna after a cold winter day. - Lincoln say relaxed

LUNA: (off screen) You said it bro - Luna said

LENI: (also off screen) Yeah Lincoln. - Leni added

(It shows that all ten sisters are in the sauna room as well, they wear towels around their upper bodies, Lincoln is embarrassed that he in the same room with his sisters wearing only towels)

LINCOLN: Are you guys in the sauna with me? - Lincoln ask as he blushed

LORI: Where else were be twerp. - Lori said sarcastically

LINCOLN: What make you guys come here with me? - Lincoln ask embarrassed

LUNA: Well, since we shared the cabin, we can even share the sauna room together. - Luna explained - We can all be in here regardless of what gender you are: male or female.

LENI: Its actually more fun with all 11 of us. - Leni said

LINCOLN: (touched by his sisters) Wow, thanks guys. - Lincoln said thoughtfully - I rather be here with you girls instead of a bunch of strangers in towels only in a room full of steam.

LYNN: We fell the same way bro, now relax and enjoy. - Lynn said relaxed

(All the siblings enjoyed the sauna; It at nighttime, then it cuts to daytime when the siblings are all outside, Lincoln sees Lisa on a very tall mountain that near a cliff)

LINCOLN: (uses a walkie talkie to contact her sister) What are you doing on that mountain?! - Lincoln yelled

LISA: (respond back) Studying polar air currents. - Lisa replied

TO BE CONTINUED