User blog:Aartistboy714/Test Fanfiction - The Secret Package

This is my first test fanfiction, I hope you all enjoy!


 * Lori: (as she walks upstairs to her bedroom) Leni! Are you all ready to go to the mall? (Leni comes out of the bedroom with a package, doing a cartwheel trick and making a pose)


 * Leni: Totes!


 * Lori: Good, don't forget your shopping bag. (Leni glances at her package) Well, hurry up, Leni! Before all the sales close.


 * Leni: Okay, but first, I have to put away my secret package.


 * Lori: Secret passage? You never told me that you had a... secret package! (Lori tries to peek in the package, but Leni pulls it away)


 * Leni: Hey, don't touch, Lori! This here is my secret package! Besides, if I showed you what's inside, it wouldn't be a secret anymore. Duh! (opens the package, squeals with excitement, and shuts it as Lori tries to peek it) Oh, Lori... if only you could see what's inside my secret package, it would change your life! (Lori gets behind Leni to see what's inside the package, but Leni holds it to herself)
 * Lori: Big deal, Leni, I know all about secrets.


 * Leni: Really?


 * Lori: I've literally got a gazillion secrets!


 * Leni: Like what?


 * Lori: Well, it's not a secret that the best thing about a secret is secretly telling someone your secret, thereby secretly adding another secret to their secret collection of secrets. Secretly. (Leni falls fast alseep as the top of her lower lip has drool coming out of it, showing that she got bored of listening to her sister's whole sentence)
 * Lori: So, do you wanna hear one of my secrets?


 * Leni: Yes, I'd love too!


 * Lori: Uhh... Let's see... (she runs up to Leni) Did you know that you're wearing your sunglasses all the time? (she runs away)


 * Leni: No... way. Oh, let's hear another one!


 * Lori: Okay. Uhh... Secretly... I'm a little bit insane.


 * Leni: WOW! I'll never be able to look at you the same way again, Lori. Amazing. (Lori clears her throat and taps on Leni's package) Tell me some more of your secrets!
 * Lori: Okay. I love spending time with my boyfriend, Bobby, I snore really loudly when I go to sleep, I'm not really fond of red shoes, my fingers start hurting everytime I'm still texting on my phone, I'm not sure if our couple name should be Bori and Lobby… (transition to Lori still telling secrets as Leni lays her head on the package) ...braces. I've never told Mom and Dad that it was me who scratched the car, I've said the word "literally" in almost every conversation, I only like to dress in white blue, I still owe Great-Grandma Harriet the broach that I gave to Bobby's mom. I still think Dylan would be way happier with Marisol. And nobody literally knows that I have double chins. (she shows her double chins to Leni)
 * Leni: OMG. I never would've figured it all out.


 * Lori: Great! Now can you show me what's inside your secret passage?


 * Leni: No, Lori! It's for me to know and for you to never find out. You may like gossiping, Lori, but I'm a bit more smarter than that. The inner thoughts of my mind are a mystery. (Leni imagines a carton of orange juice spilling itself)

WORK IN PROGRESS