User blog comment:TMNT1987Dude/Fanfiction - Depths of Darkness/@comment-FirstDrellSpectre-20170319203607

This is awesome story. I like how you used the documentary style. Lincoln is such a good brother for the twins and Leni. It was great how they defeated their fear to save Lincoln from drowning. Nightmares are creepy good and well writen. Lynn as always proove she's the meanest sister. Like you say Lola is getting better. She had character development when Lynn is static in bad way.