Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-30953185-20171123003339/@comment-30953185-20171202213911

I handled it well when we came up with dialogue for the actual thing, I can handle it well here.

(Cut to a montage of Wretched making everyone's lives miserable. First, Lori and Leni were doing their regular daily routines, until...)

Wretched: (bursts through the door) Mind if I come in!

Lori and Leni: (in unison; startled) Lincoln!

Wretched: (aggravated) It's Wretched!

(He grabs Lori's phone from her hand, and Leni's unfinished dress. He throws Lori's phone on the ground and stomps on it, breaking it. He tears up Leni's dress to shreds.)

Lori: (to Wretched; shocked and scared) W-Why did you-

POW!

(Lori gets punched right in the cheek, and is now lying unconscious on the floor.)

Wretched: (shakes his hand off) Serves you right for those petty threats of yours.

Leni: (to Lincoln; shocked and scared) L-Linky, how could y-

POW!

(Leni gets punched right in the eye, and is now lying unconscious with Lori on the floor as well.)

Wretched: (shakes his hand again) Not like you could feel anything with that thick head of yours.

(Just then I walk in)

Me: Hey, what's going on in here-(I scream to find Lori and Leni lying on the floor unconscious) Lori!! Leni!! (to Wretched) What did you do to them?!