Thread:Weavillain/@comment-33413713-20171019094818/@comment-31022739-20171019154408

It's a story that started off well, but now feels like a shell of its former self. The latest chapters have been a chore to read because the indivisual sister therapy sessions are just glorified fanon showcases, which really don't tie into the established narrative of Lincoln's phobia very well and are kinda boring by their own merit. So for now, I'd have the say that the story is about half-decent; technically, the writing is sound but with the focus taken away from where it should be, I find it hard to stay invested with the story, and I won't go back to reading it until I'm sure that the sister chapters are done for good.