Thread:DPSII/@comment-30158554-20161223182259/@comment-24200891-20170103062433

In park. Rita takes the babies to park and she meets Billy's dad with him. They talk while their children play. Still by asking "do you want" you sound like you were dependent on me and in fact you are not. Be creative and feel free in your story writting. I ask others for opinion only if I begin to ask myself is a certain idea isn't too controversial.