Thread:Harburton81/@comment-31910437-20190513073822

Hi. I had an idea for some scenes of a fanfiction and maybe you wanna write it.

The plot:

Lola gives a tea party, but not for her cuddle toys this time, but for her friends. She needs butlers and engages Lincoln and Clyde. But at first she must teach them good manners. At the party they're very clumsy. But that's not all, because Luan want to take advantage of this with her pranks...

Some scene ideas:

(Lola is with Lincoln and Clyde in her room)

Lola: "Well, at first: how would you greet a lady like me?"

(Clyde takes the underside of his sweater and it looks like he make a formal curtsy)

Lola: "Wrong."

(Now Clyde makes a handstand)

Lola: "Absolutely wrong! You must give me a kiss..."

Clyde: "Okay."

(He kisses Lola on her cheek)

Lola (blushes): "On my hand! You must give me a kiss on my hand!"

Lincoln: "Now it's my turn..."

(He takes Lola's hand. We see Lola's face. She looks surprised and show her hand. We can see that it's blank. Lincoln has her glove in his mouth)

Lola (sighs): "A kiss on the hand will be just indicatet."

(The party is in the living room. Lincoln and Clyde wear tuxedos. Lincoln brings the cold punch from the kitchen. Luna is standing upstairs and let something fallen into the bow. All girls drink a glass. Lincoln serves it, than he see something in the bow)


 * Lincoln (to himself): "Hm; that's a weird ingredient... (to the guests) Excuse me, but must be that rat in the punch?"


 * (The girls are horrified and some of them look like they would puke)


 * Lola (takes the rat): "It's okay! It's just fruit gum!"

(Clyde brings the cake from the kitchen. Luan let fallen a jumping jack into the cake)

Clyde: "He, Lola; can I serve the cake now?"

Lola: "Yes, but are you sure that it's big enough? Do you think that everyone will get a slice?"

(The cake exploses and everyone gets a part from the cake into the face)

Lola: "Okay, forget me question... everyone have gotten something from the cake..."

(Lola get an outburst and yells at Lincoln and Clyde. Than she looks to her friends)

Lola: "I'm so sorry. That party is a complete desaster, because my friends are such GROSS BONEHEADS!"

Girl: "We've no idea what you're talking about. Your friends' manners are blameless. But you're acting very indecent."

So what do you think? Do you wanna write a fanfic based on this here? 