Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-25506832-20161018123831/@comment-24200891-20161018175249

Thank you for your opinion. Luna is my favorite sister of Linc so writting it was pleasant even if difficult. I had to think about a personal problem for Luna, after long consideration I picked responsibility for the fun-loving girl. Music is not my domain so I picked random songs for Lincoln to sing. I thought it would be in Luna's style to show Lincoln world doesn't end with video games by inviting him to karaoke and disco party.

The story is quite mature and complex because one bad decision caused a disaster. The story has dark tone because the siblings are far from home and have no cash, additionally all people are mean and unhelpful. That's a reality issue that nobody wants to help but family.

Some ideas come from observation, I detected Luna has no breasts, so I thought she might envy Lori and Leni they have their womanly valours. I made this innuendo joke on the start, Lincoln is so innocent and oblivious in this scene and that's funny even if bit adult.

The relationship between them was the best part for me. I put how I imagine their childhood. The cutest was that Luna sang for Lincoln so he could recognise her by voice. Because they are close I guess she was his personal guardian and mentor. I put heartbreaking scene of Luna punching Lincoln in anger for realism. Who wouldn't be stressed in such situation? Later she hugged and apologized him for this, she really was sorry for hurting him. Linc's devastation was quite natural, to be hit by beloved one hurts double. She does her best to support him and is ready to fight for his safety. I found it's cute that she would be with him if he's afraid of thunders or sing for him to entertain him as a small kid. I used to memorize songs from Disney and Dreamworks films so I incorporated this to my fanifc as well.