Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-30953185-20180531223312/@comment-31647719-20180602174522

(I don't think it's necessary, but okay.)

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 * The dance game Luna mentioned is a referance to Dance Dance Resolution and also the game name that Luna said is from Gravity Falls

Luna: Which makes me wonder what would it be like if we had someone like Bill Cipher in our lifes.

[Everyone looks at Luna in confusion.]

Luna: What? Just because I'm a teen doesn't mean I don't watch cartoons.

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 * I didn’t want to include Lucy in part of the other sisters who mocked Lincoln, because Lucy wouldn’t do that towards the person who stood up for her, especialy her older brother

Lisa: Here's a better idea. Instead of having Lucy being one of the "mean sisters," you could have had her supporting Leni in making the costume for Lincoln as a thanks for saving her from our mockery... which now makes me feel bad for her.

(I thought it was pretty generic. I mean, I thought the beginning was interesting, but then it turned into another story of how Luna and Leni are saints and all the others are heartless monsters. If I made a SoS sequel that's a runaway story. But instead of Lincoln, is Lucy the one who runs away.)