Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-26212090-20161126072300/@comment-26212090-20161127203738

I find it just great so far. I appreciate that you included the dialogue I added between the sisters, and practically identical to how I wrote it, but there were a few tweaks here and there, and that's just fine, as this is a joint effort after all. As for a final conflict I'm not so sure. The sabotaging of the sandcastles also seems like a bit of a predictable conflict, but I can't think of anything at the moment. I'll have to do some thinking, and get back to you.