Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-26825223-20170829002306/@comment-32202721-20170829015523

Write well, and write often. Never stop trying to improve yourself. Proofread your work at least twice before posting it, or find someone willing to beta read your stuff if you'd prefer that.

I stress that last part because, from what I've seen of your writing, your spelling and grammar leave a lot to be desired. And that's an especially big problem in your case, because you have an OC who uses formal, business-like language. If you're constantly making grammar mistakes while writing a smart character's dialogue, it kind of makes them sound... well, not so smart.

I'd also shy away from OC stories for now, if I were you. I tried reading your latest story, and as soon as I saw Kevin enter the scene, my first thought was, "Wait, who's Kevin?" If you're trying to get people to read your story, it's not a good idea to force them to go through your catalogue just so they know who everyone is.