User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Lincoln vs Lynn/@comment-30487355-20180816211958

This is confusing. I couldn't even make it passed the first line because of Lincoln's OOC and the way you write. You're wrtiing as if it's a script, and even then you're doing it wrong. It makes it more confusing and I lost what the point of this story was legitmately at the first character line.

I'm sorry but this is bad.