User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Sandy Situation/@comment-26981664-20170327174343

Very nice story! Lincoln's interaction with the Loud Twins was very charming. At the beach, Lincoln came across a flyer showing a sand castle building contest, winner with the best castle earns $1,500 prize. Lincoln enlist the help of the twins, Lana & Lola. As they were practicing, both the twins had a disagreement on several things to their castle and their personalities, which causes them to break their twin sibling bond with each other. Lincoln tries to reason with them, but it was no use. Sometime later, Lana and Lola both missed each other being twin partners, and when they reached home, they apologized to each other and agreed to work together, put their difference aside and be twin partners again. When they told Lincoln they made up, he was very impressed that they worked it out. When the day of the contest arrived, Lincoln and the twins worked their hardest to make the best sandcastle they can build out of the other competitors. After an hour of waiting, the judges made their decision, and the winners are '''​Lincoln and the Loud Twins! '''​The three jumped and danced around in a circle for joy as they won the prize money. After their victory, Lana & Lola took Lincoln to the ice cream parlor as their thanks for being a good brother and their peacemaker.

The lesson in this is that partners and siblings (like Lana & Lola) ​need to forgive each other and learn to work things out in order to help one another. My favorite parts were the Twins speaking in unison, Lincoln being the peacemaker to them, and when they said:

LANA: Even if we are different from each other and act differently...

LOLA: We always cooperated with each other, even if we argue.

LANA AND LOLA: And that was make us twin sisters.

Great job, Harburton.