Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20171125024142/@comment-32202721-20171126033110

It was a decently executed whodunit story, aside from the fact that Lori is just awful for the first quarter of it, and the resolution after she finds out who the culprits were felt really rushed. That, and there's a pretty major problem with the story plot-wise; why wouldn't Lori take her phone with her on her date with Bobby?

Now, here's my question; why did you want me to read this fic so badly?