User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Vince's Journey P4/@comment-31358352-20180219065706

Well, this is fun so far. I like how you did including lightning horses called thundermares and a dragon which looks like it was from Warcraft or maybe another fantasy game with a Marianas dragon. Good thing you also rescued Karin and found Kin to join the group. Then there was the two on one fight with me and Naruto kicking Sasuke's moldy butt all over Valmorg with some fight material used in Goku vs Frieza and Super Saiyan 2 Gohan vs Cell from DBZ. I'm also happy that Sasuke's a normal human now that I took away his power and sealed it away. You even did well using a mesh of what Goku told Frieza during the climax of their battle on Namek from the original DBZ and Kai. Then there's Sakura and Ino's fight taking place on the forest world Criam. Good job with using a fairy alien race for the inhabitants of Criam. I can imagine the planet would be perfect for Swamp Thing and Poison Ivy due to them being lovers of Mother Nature not to mention its defenders though on opposite sides, of course. Good touch with adding little sisters who are of my family. To tell you the truth, I do indeed have siblings in real life here in Desoto. One older brother and one older sister, both born separately by a couple of years. My brother's name is Brian who was the first born and Melissa is my sister who was born a few years after Brian. They are both in their 30s but as I said, Brian's the older sibling due to him being born long before me and Melissa. That would make me the third oldest of the family. But I will say you did wonderfully with giving me two little sisters in your story. I always wondered what it would be like to be the older sibling of those younger than me. Thankfully I got my wish thanks to Brian and Melissa being the parents of their own kids. One niece from my big brother named Celina (By the way, they have done martial arts training in the fighting style of Tae Kwon Do a couple of years ago and though they haven't done as much as they did as far as I know, they are practically capable of kicking butt in self-defense and clocking out some pitiful fool out on the floor. Thankfully it didn't happen to me but they did show me a few basic moves to practice on and a means to do a little exercise.) The other members of my family belong to Melissa and their names are Sabrina and Tyler. Anyway, can't wait to see the rest of Vince's Journey and see how great of a brother I am to Megan and Sarah. That and the rest of the Chunin Exams up to the invasion and beyond. I'm also looking forward to when I send Orochimaru to the Netherworld and before the end of this series featuring me in Naruto, probably during the month long break before the f perhaps you could have me restore Hiruzen Sarutobi to his prime so he can have a better chance against Orochimaru should they cross paths during the invasion. With all this said and done, I'll see you around, Mr. Knudson.