User blog comment:CartoonFan14/My NSL Rewrite Checklist/@comment-31802240-20170812064742

I guess more instances of there being bad luck. For instance, maybe every time Lincoln tells the sister that he can't go to their event because of bad luck, they dismiss it as him trying to get out of supporting them, and he goes along anyway. At the event, say Leni's, she trips and falls, ruining her garment. And when she passes or walks by Lincoln, he says that he tried to warn them..

With that in mind, the parents become concerned, but at first they are hesitant to do anything because thats their son and they do not want to kick him out..And then maybe when Lynn Sr cooks dinner, a few of the girls get sick, making the parents fearful that lincoln really is bad luck...