User blog comment:Thomperfan/Pasture Bedtime (my version)/@comment-31563773-20180710003838/@comment-31563773-20180710021417

Yeah, it's a cartoon, but I read tons of fics daily and most of them are written pretty well so everyone can understand the plot and in some cases they feel like they could be episodes. Not trying to be rude, but you could make better effort to take everything into consideration when forming a plot for your stories. But, from you though...it doesn't mean much because you're still copying already established plots and not actually building off of them. At that point, saying it's a cartoon goes out the window; it comes down to good story telling.

I don't have much of an issue with him liking Nolan, but I do feel he'd put Leni in the same situation Lori was in with Bobby during A Fair to Remember. You have to make compromises somewhere.