Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-30953185-20180407173640/@comment-32807753-20180409003442

LINCOLN: Who is it? - Lincoln ask

LORI: It's us, bro. - Lori said

LINCOLN: Go away! - Lincoln yells - I don't want to speak with any of you!

LUNA: C'mon, bro. - Luna said - We just wanted to talk.

LINCOLN: (sighs) Okay, I'll come out. - Lincoln said

(Lincoln walk out of room and meet up with sisters)

LORI: Lincoln, we're really sorry for how we acted today and yesterday, too. - Lori said - We shouldn't been that mean nor malicious to you.

LUNA: We should not been that violent or brutal at you. - Luna said

LYNN: We were being selfish, our greed got the best of us. - Lynn said - And took our frustration out on you, little bro.

LENI: We hope you find your heart and forgive us, Linky. - Leni says

LUAN, LUCY, LANA, LOLA, LISA: We're sorry, Lincoln! Please, forgive us! - the girls said sadly

(Lincoln was touched by this and he hugged them, they hugged him back)

LINCOLN: Thank you. - Lincoln said - I forgive you all.

LUAN: Let's never fight like that ever again. - Luan said

LANA: Agreed. - Lana agreed

(They release Lincoln, Rita walks up)

RITA: Lincoln, good news, the doctor said you can remove your neck brace. - Rita said

(Lincoln removes his neck brace and toss it away, he hugs them once more. Later, the girls are in the living room)

LORI: It's great that Lincoln is in good spirits again. - Lori said

(The others agreed to that)

LINCOLN: (from outside) Hey, girls! - Lincoln called - Come to the backyard!

(The girls all come out to the backyard through the kitchen and see a large trampoline, Lincoln, with his shoes off, is jumping, he jump to his siblings)

LINCOLN: Hey, gang. - Lincoln said

LORI: Where did you literally get this trampoline? - Lori ask

LINCOLN: I was touched by your apology earlier today, and to make it up to you, I use my $45, (quietly) and half of my allowance, to buy this trampoline, for us to share. - Lincoln said

Lincoln: ...Was this the thing you wanted to show your sisters from before? I'm so confused on what's going on. If not, are we just not gonna bring that up again?

(The girls were all touched by Lincoln request and embraced him in a group hug)

LORI: Thanks, bro. - Lori said happily

LYNN: What are we standing here for, lets jump in it! - Lynn said excited

LUAN: Lets bounce! - Luan laughs

(The girls eagerly run up to the trampoline, but Lincoln stopped them)

LINCOLN: Wait! You have to take your shoes off first. - Lincoln said - It's brand new.

(The girls all remove their shoes and they all jumped on the trampoline)

LOLA: This is so much fun! - Lola said happily

LINCOLN: (to the viewers) I learn that my sisters can be greedy, but they later regret it. - Lincoln said - It's like what they said, "Money is the ultimate form of power", and greed, but at the end, we all made up.

(The eleven of them are having fun jumping on their trampoline)

THE END

Lana: Man! I wish we had a trampoline to jump on!

Lincoln: [rolls eyes happily]

Lori: Why are you looking away like that?

Lincoln: Oh nothing... so? What did you think of that? Personally, it could use a lot of work. I really didn't like how it made me look all petty, whiny, and victimized like that.

Lucy: Not to mention the whole conflict of us mistreating you and not understanding our mistake dragged on for too long, and the repetitive dialogue didn't help. You might as well replay the same scene over and over.

Lana: And I don't like how it felt so mean even though we had a happy ending of finding the treasure.

Lincoln: Yeah. What was with that?

Lola: I'm still bugged by how I'm the reason for Lincoln's neck brace. I know I'm cruel but I'm not deadly.

Lisa: And you can't have a fanfic on this series without the numerous grammatical errors.

Lincoln: Any pros? Anyone?

Leni: Well, the ending was nice, I guess.

Lincoln: Can't deny that.

Lynn: And hey, at least it didn't do that "nice or mean sister" thing like most fanfics do.