Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-30953185-20180509163856/@comment-32807753-20180509165037

Honest thoughts:

Your stories can usually be hit or miss. Sometimes, they can be really cute and sweet (like with your Loud, Random, and Heartwarming series), and you do have some cute interactions with the Loud Family. However, there are two big criticisms I have with most of your stories:

1. Nolan can be too much of a Gary Stu. He feels too perfect and flawless, and a perfect character is a boring character. In my opinion, if you want to make Nolan a more interesting character, give him some negative traits, like how I suggested you would be jealous of Tristan in my idea of your version of Fandom Pains.

2. Nolan's roles feel to miniscule. I feel like most of the time when Nolan is put into your versions of the episodes, he feels shoehorned in. He doesn't often have too big of a purpose in your stories and just kind of tags along with Lincoln and making comments and pointing out the obvious. Try coming up with clever ways you can integrate Nolan into the episode that actually affects how the story goes.