Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-26302585-20180113012538

I just read your fic "Breakdown at the Beach", I thought it was nice. But there is a couple things that I think should've been adress though. Even though Lincoln wasn't right in lying, I think the parents should've felt more remorse. They're the parents, they should've known better than falling for the lie and locking him out. I'm surpised Lincoln didn't bring up the moment in "Ties That Bind" were the parents said they would never kick out their children. I knew you weren't going to bring in legal stuff, there's probably enough of that in fics, but still, I think you should've had Lynn Sr. and Rita realize that they were being bad parents. Falling for the luck thing and letting it go as far as locking out one of their own children, which they said they would never do. I also think you should've had Lincoln question Lisa for believing the lie, since she's supposed to be the smartest one in the family, yet believed in superstition with little evidence to convince her. And maybe I'm just being sensative, but I think them revealing that selling his furniture was just a joke followed by them laughing like it's no big deal was just mean-spirited. Why would anyone tell their kids they sold their furniture, especially after locking them out?

That's all I have to say. I'm not trying to come off as rude, I just wanted to give my thoughts. I hope you take what I said into consideration. 