User blog:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Mount AvaLoud

My second fanfic, I expect comments. I like to thank FirstDrellSpectre for giving me the title.

Plot
(It starts with The Loud Family driving in Vanzilla in the snowy mountains for a week on vacation. They reached two cabins, one for their parents and one for the children)

LINCOLN: (To the viewers) Ahh, snowy days. We're up in the snowy mountains going to a cabin a week on vacation. Yep, all 11 of us.

RITA: Kids, were here! - Rita announced - Go have fun!

DAD: Check out your cabin! - Dad said

(The siblings excitedly runs out of Vanzilla and into their cabin, its a nice large cabin that have 11 beds, a TV, a fireplace, a sauna room, etc.)

LYNN: Oh. My. Goodness. - Lynn said in joy

LINCOLN: This. Is. AWESOME! - Lincoln praised

LORI: You said it, Lincoln! - Lori said in agreement - This is literally the best cabin I have ever seen!

LUCY: This vacation gonna rule. - Lucy said happily

LILY: Poo Poo! - Lily said in glee

LUNA: So dudes, what you wanna do? - Luna ask her siblings

(They all think for a moment, until Lincoln gotten something)

LINCOLN: Snowball fight? - Lincoln ask

LORI, LENI, LUNA, LUAN, LYNN, LUCY, LANA, LOLA, LISA, LILY: YEAH! - The girls eagerly said

(Outside, the siblings, except Lisa who judging, are split into two teams, the first one involves Lincoln, Leni, Luna, Lana, and Lucy, and team two includes Lynn, Luan, Lola, Lily, and Lori, the snow brawl starts as Lincoln begin throwing snowballs at Lynn, she gotten back up)

LYNN: Lola, Lori, go left! - Lynn commanded

(They do so while they pelt Luna with snowballs, seeing this angers Lincoln as he and Lana nod and pelting Lynn and Lola, respectively. Luan then pelted Lucy, she gotten back up and throw it at Luan)

LUAN: That was cold of you! - Luan laughed

(Luan got pelted by Leni; However, they stopped because of cold, harsh winds breezing in the air as they shiver)

LENI: I-Its s-s-so c-cold! - Leni says while shivering

LOLA: My h-hands are s-s-shivering! - Lola said while shivering as well

LINCOLN: Lets g-go inside! - Lincoln said while shivering also

(The cold siblings all go inside; Later, it shows Lincoln is in the sauna room with a towel around his waist, relaxed by the steam with his arms folding behind his back, sighing)

LINCOLN: Ahh, this is the life. There is nothing like a warm relaxing sauna after a cold winter day. - Lincoln say relaxed

LUNA: (off screen) You said it bro - Luna said - It's really warm.

LENI: (also off screen) Yeah Lincoln, it's really nice. - Leni added - Its feel good in here.

LINCOLN: Leni? Luna? - Lincoln ask confused -  Are you guys in here?

LUAN: (next to Lincoln and wearing a towel) Yep, were in here, Linc. - Luan quoted as she was next to Lincoln - You looked a little steamed!

(Luan laughs at her joke, which puzzles Lincoln)

LINCOLN: Wait, Luan? - Lincoln ask perplexed into why she was here

(It shows that all  ten  of his sisters, all relaxed, are in the sauna room as well, they wear towels as wells. Lincoln is clearly embarrassed that he in the same room with his sisters wearing just only towels)

LINCOLN: Are you girls actually in the sauna with me? - Lincoln ask as he blushed

LORI: Where else we were be, twerp, i n a cave ? - Lori said sarcastically - This is literally the best way to cool down from harsh winters, Linky.

LYNN: Yeah. - Lynn in agreement - You think we can let you be in here alone in a room full of hot steam?

LINCOLN: Well, yeah. - Lincoln said blushing - But with you girls?

LOLA: (without her tiara) Yep. - Lola said - Its not as bad once you get used to it, Linc.

LISA: Agreed. - Lisa said - In a room full of steam that is over 200 degrees fahrenheit.

(Lisa remove her glasses and polish them, then she put them back on)

LINCOLN: (sweating) This is so embarrassing, what make you guys come in here with me? - Lincoln ask embarrassed - We are wearing only towels.

LUNA: Well, Lincoln, since we all shared the cabin, we can even share the sauna room together. - Luna explained nicely - Thanks to this, we can all be in here regardless of what gender you even are, dude: male or female.

LENI: Yeah, gender does not mean we can't hang out with our only brother. - Leni said sweetly

(Leni kiss him on his forehead and rub his back, Lincoln is feeling a little happy)

LORI: Yeah, little bro, even in this place, we can still hang out with each other, as a family. - Lori said

(LIncoln is still embarrassed, but he smiles in appreciation)

LINCOLN: Really girls? - Lincoln said kindly - Even in this place. you still wanna hang out with me?

LANA: Uh huh. - Lana agreed - Its more fun with all of us.

LINCOLN: Even you, Lucy? - Lincoln questions

LUCY: Yep. - Lucy respond as she smiles - Even with my gloomy personality, I can still hang out with you, brother.

(Lily is mumbling and walking towards Lincoln)

LINCOLN: Lily, you too? - Lincoln ask

LILY: Poo Poo. - Lily says nicely

(Lily is being pick up and carried by Lincoln, he kisses Lily and she kiss him back)

LENI: You see, its actually more fun with all 11 of us, Lincoln. - Leni said joyfully - In our company, you're included.

LUAN:  Yeah, we're family, Lincoln. - Luan added as she playfully punches Lincoln - We all do things together, even if we're in a sauna, bro.

(Everyone agreed to that, Lincoln is touched by his sisters gratitude)

LINCOLN: Wow, thanks guys. - Lincoln said thoughtfully - I rather be here with you girls, instead of alone or with a bunch of strangers wearing only towels in a room full of warm steam.

LANA: We all feel the same way bro, now relax and enjoy. - Lana said relaxed, as she and Lincoln fist bumps

LYNN: You is one of us Lincoln. - Lynn said in a glad way - Get rid of your worries with your sweat.

LINCOLN: Thanks, girls. - Lincoln said gratefully - You guys are the best sisters ever.

LORI:  Thanks, Lincoln. - Lori said thankfully -  And your the best brother ever.

(All the siblings enjoyed the sauna, sighing; It at nighttime, it shows the siblings, wearing their PJs, are all near the fireplace drinking cocoa)

LINCOLN: Man, this cocoa rocks! - Lincoln praised as he sip his cocoa

LENI: You said it, little bro! - Leni agreed

LUNA: You know it! - Luna praised

LINCOLN: (raise his mug) To the best vacation ever! - Lincoln praised

LORI, LENI, LUNA, LUAN, LYNN, LUCY, LANA, LOLA, LISA, LILY: (raise their mugs) The best vacation ever! - the girls cheer

(They all drank their mugs and its nighttime; The gang all in bed)

LINCOLN: Good night girls. - Lincoln said

LORI: Good night, Lincoln. - Lori said - Good night, everyone.

(They all went to sleep, it cuts to daytime when the siblings are all outside, Lincoln sees Lisa on a very tall mountain that near a cliff)

LINCOLN: (uses a walkie talkie to contact her sister) What are you doing on that mountain?! - Lincoln yelled

LISA: (respond back) Studying polar air currents. - Lisa replied

LINCOLN: Its dangerous up there for a kid your age! - Lincoln said as he run up the steep mountain - You'll fall!

LISA: No, I won't. - Lisa said - Whoa!

(Lisa accidentally slips and falls. Luckily, she hangs on, Lincoln gasps in horror to see her younger sister hanging on a cliff for dear life)

LINCOLN: (reaches the top) Don't worry, Lisa! - Lincoln commanded - I'll pull you up!

(While trying to pull her up, he inadvertently slips as well and he hang on the cliff, while Lisa hangs on Lincoln back)

LINCOLN AND LISA: Heeeeeeeeelp! - yell the two siblings

(Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, and Lana see their two siblings in trouble and they ran to their location)

LUNA: Don't worry guys, we'll pull you up! - Luna said

(They successfully pulled them up to safety; Unfortunately, an avalanche started)

LUAN: WHAT GOING ON?! - Luan panicked

LISA: AN AVALANCHE IS STARTING!! - Lisa stated

(They all gotten engulfed with snow,  Lori, Lucy, Lola, and Lily sees the avalanche)

LORI: No way! - Lori yells - Back in the cabin!

(They quickly run back to the cabin. They sigh in relief)

LORI: (realizes) Wait, where Lincoln?! - Lori said, realizing her brother and sisters are missing

(The seven siblings, sans Lincoln, pop all up from the snow, they all look around to see giant piles of snow everywhere)

LUAN: Where Lincoln?! - Luan ask worried

(There mumbling the girls heard, it reveals Leni is sitting on Lincoln and she pulls him up and rub the snow off his coat; Lynn throw a snowball at Lincoln face and he falls on his back, Luna and Leni help him up)

LINCOLN: (incredulous) What is with you?! - Lincoln ask angrily

LYNN: (livid) This is all your fault! - Lynn pointed

LINCOLN: My fault?! - Lincoln protest - I was trying to save Lisa from falling to her death!

LISA: Yeah, I was hanging from a cliff! - Lisa added

LYNN: If you didn't cause that avalanche, I would of been sledding! - Lynn retorts

LINCOLN: You blame me, all because you wanted to go sledding?! - Lincoln said in complete astonishment - You kidding?!

LYNN: I wish YOU have never existed in this world, Lincoln Loud!! - Lynn screams as she throw another snowball at Lincoln face, point blank, the girls all gasp in horror - You are the worst brother EVER!!

(Saddened because of Lynn statement, Lincoln break into tears and run away to the forest; Luna tries to catch up to him, but fails)

LUNA: Lincoln, wait! She didn't mean to say any of that! - Luna yells

(The others are enraged at Lynn for what she did to their brother)

LENI: Why did you do that?! - Leni ask angrily

LUAN: Yeah! He was trying to save Lisa! - Luan yells, she angry that she couldn't tell jokes

LYNN: Whatever! - Lynn said - You guys would have done the same, anyway!

LENI: No, we wouldn't, Lynn! - Leni protest - We love Lincoln!

LISA: He save my life and this how you repay him?! - Lisa ask with great anger

LYNN: Who cares about him?! - Lynn say

LANA: (livid) Are you kidding me, Lynn?! - Lana bursts - He our only brother and you drove him away!

LUNA: I though you cared for him, but that ends up being --a lie! - Luna yells

(They walk back to their cabin while they glare at Lynn the whole way; Inside, Lori and Lucy are reading books and Lola and Lily are watching TV near the fireplace; The rest of the girls enter)

LORI: Girls! - Lori say eagerly as she reunite with her sisters, but was sad to see Lincoln not with them - Where Lincoln?!

LUNA: (still enraged) Ask Lynn! - Luna snarls

LYNN: I refuse! - Lynn refuses

LUAN: After Lincoln save Lisa from falling off a cliff, they cause an avalanche, Lynn blames Lincoln for it all because she didn't go sledding, she say that wish he never existed, threw a snowball at his face, and ran off in the forest crying. - Luan explained sadly as Leni consoles her

LORI: What?! Why did you do that?! - Lori yells

LYNN: I was frustrated, OK! - Lynn stated

LOLA: FRUSTRATED!?! - Lola interrupted as she punches her on her arm

LYNN: OW! What the matter with you?! - Lynn angrily yells as she holds her arm

LOLA: That the most ludicrous statement I ever heard! - Lola screams - How are you frustrated?!

LYNN: Because, I didn't go sledding! - Lynn explained

LORI: Are you serious?! - Lori retorts - He was trying to save our sister!

LISA: Yeah! - Lisa in agreement

LENI: I can't believe you! - Leni yelled

LUCY: Are only brother is out there and he is gone. - Lucy lamented as she cries and run to her bed

LENI: Lucy, wait! - Leni yells - He will come back!

(Leni angrily glares at Lynn and go to comfort Lucy)

LYNN: Lucy, I didn't mean to. - Lynn said sadly

LORI: I think you done enough. - Lori says bitterly

(Everyone else was too angry at Lynn and walk away and Lynn was a little guilty; Meanwhile, in the woods, Lincoln is still crying, as he next to a tree)

LINCOLN: I was only trying to help Lisa! - Lincoln weeps - And Lynn stab be in the back!

(The cold air is getting worse and Lincoln is shivering and he get up ans start walking)

LINCOLN: Its cold, I need to find them! - Lincoln shivers, he takes a long walk until he see's a cave - A cave!

(Lincoln see's a cave and run into it)

LINCOLN: I can sleep here for tonight and find the girls tomorrow. - Lincoln said as he went to sleep

(The next morning; At the cabin, Lynn wakes up, stretching)

LYNN: Good morning, Lincoln! - Lynn said, only to realize he not there at his bed and sighs - Oh, right.

LANA: You still miss him? - Lana ask

LYNN: Yeah, I miss him. - Lynn said

LUNA: We all do, dude. - Luna said

LOLA AND LANA: Yeah. - the twins say in agreement

LYNN: I was wrong! - Lynn admitted as she has tears in her eyes - It was a stupid thing and I shouldn't been mad at him!

LANA: So, you finally admitted it! - Lana said sternly

LORI: Its literally your fault he gone! - Lori replied angrily

LUNA: Yeah! - Luna added - Its not fun when we're on vacation with only 10 of us!

LUCY: With no brother, means no fun. - Lucy lamented

LYNN: I know! I know, I messed up bad! - Lynn complained - And that why I'm gonna find him!

(The girls gasp in shock of what Lynn said)

LOLA: That nuts Lynn! - Lola said - You'll die!

LENI AND LUAN: But what if Lincoln dies already?! - Leni and Luan said simultaneously

LUNA: There both right, Lynn. - Luna said - You can't do this alone, I'm going too.

LANA: (hops on Lynn head) I'm going as well. - Lana joined

LYNN: Thanks guys. - Lynn said - Lets go.

LENI: Wait! - Leni called - I go too.

LUNA: But why? - Luna ask

LENI: The time that burglar stole our stuff, I was only one who believe Lincoln was innocent and he help us catch the thief. - Leni explained - So, I want to owe him one for what he did.

(The three was touched by Leni story)

LUNA: (teary eyed) You can come Leni. - Luna said

LENI: Thanks. - Leni thanked

LORI: Good luck, girls! - Lori says

(The four of them run out of the cabin and in search of their brother;  At the cave, Lincoln wakes up and he hears roaring and its reveals to be a bear)

LINCOLN: What on earth? AHH! - Lincoln screamed as he runs out of the cave

(The bear gives chase and Lincoln ran through the forest as fast as he can and he reaches a dead end; The ferocious bear catches up to him)

LINCOLN: Crud! No, please! - Lincoln begged

LANA: Pick on someone your own size!! - Lana yell

(The bear is about to devour him, a snowball hits it in its face, it revealed to be Lana, Luna, Leni, and Lynn)

LINCOLN: Lana, Luna, Lynn, and Leni! - Lincoln say happily

LUNA: Dude, RUN! - Luna commanded

(The bear is enraged, it attacks Lincoln, while running, by slashing on his back, he screams in pain; This infuriates Lynn into throwing a rock at the bear nose, weakening it)

LYNN: This is for my brother! - Lynn said in vengence

(The four of them frantically throw snowballs, causing it fall of a cliff and into an abyss, Lincoln gets up and hugs Luna, Lana, Leni, and Lynn)

LINCOLN: Thanks guys. - Lincoln said - I'm really sorry that I ran away from you guys.

LYNN: No, I the one who should be sorry. - Lynn said apologetically as she in tears - I should of never been mad at you, I didn't mean to hurt you.

LINCOLN: Aw, thanks Lynn. - Lincoln says as he in tears as well and they hugged

LYNN: You're welcome. - Lynn replied

LINCOLN: If it wasn't for you four, I would have died. - Lincoln said

LANA: You would of done the same thing for us. - Lana agreed as they joined in a group hug

LENI: Yeah. - Leni also agreed - Now lets go back to our cabin.

LUNA: Yeah, the others are waiting for you, bro. - Luna added

(The five of them walk back to their cabin and its nighttime; Back at the cabin, Lori, Luan, Lucy, Lola, Lisa, and Lily were all excited that Lincoln back with them and Lynn gave a mug of cocoa to Lincoln)

LINCOLN: Thanks Lynn. - Lincoln say as he give a mug to Lynn - Here.

LYNN: Thank, Linc. - Lynn say as she hugged her brother

LORI: Aw, its nice to see you two made up. - Lori said

LINCOLN: Yeah, it is. - Lincoln answer

LUAN: Where you go, Linc? - Luan ask

LINCOLN: In the woods and at a cave. - Lincoln said - I also gotten attacked by a bear.

(They all gasp in shock, he shows them three large scratch marks on his back)

LORI: I'll get some bandages. - Lori said as she quickly run to get some and place them on his back.

LINCOLN: Thanks, Lori. - Lincoln gratefully

(Its morning; It shows everyone, except Lana, are in the sauna room again, relaxed)

LINCOLN: Aw, this is nice. - Lincoln said

LUCY: Where Lana? - Lucy questioned

(Lana comes in, sitting next to Lincoln)

LANA: Hey Linc. - Lana greeted

LUNA: Where you been, sis? - Luna ask

LANA: I was hiking in the woods and I just found a new pet. - Lana said - Oh, Claws!

(Claws is revealed to be the bear from earlier and Lincoln and the others sulks in fear. Surprisingly, Claws stroking Lincoln back)

LINCOLN: What gives Lana? - Lincoln ask her younger sister

LANA: (put her arm around Lincoln) Well, Claws wanted to say sorry for attacking us. So, I invited him into our cabin. - Lana explained

LINCOLN: Well, nice to meet you, Claws. - Lincoln gestures as he handshakes Claws

LOLA: (annoyed) What with you getting ridiculous pets? - Lola ask - First a snake, a lizard, and now a bear?

LANA: It's my hobby. - Lana said

LUAN: That unbearable to hear. - Luan laughed as the others, even Claws, groan

(It shows outside, the Loud Family are playing outside, even Claws playing with Lana, Claws rapidly launches snowballs at Lori, knocking her out)

LANA: Nice one, Claws! - Lana said as she high five Claws

LYNN:  Lets go sledding! - Lynn said

LINCOLN: OK! - Lincoln replied

(Lynn and Lincoln are on a large hill with their toboggans, they're about to go sledding)

LINCOLN: (to the viewers) I learn that my sisters will always have my back, and I also learn bear scratches hurt really bad on my back.

LYNN: Ready Lincoln? - Lynn ask

LINCOLN: Ready Lynn. - Lincoln replied

LINCOLN AND LYNN: WOOHOO!! - both of them scream

(The two sled down the hill and crashes into a large pile of snow, another avalanche started, engulfing them in snow once more, the two pop up)

LUNA: Guys, are you okay? - Luna ask as she and Leni runs to them

LINCOLN: That. Was. AWESOME!! - Lincoln praised ecstatically

LYNN: Yeah, it was killer!! - Lynn praised happily - Lets go again!

LINCOLN: Yeah! - Lincoln in agreement - Leni, Luna, you guys wanna go with us?

LENI AND LUNA: YEAH!! LET'S DO THIS! - they both say in excitement

(The four run back up the mountain; Leni is sledding with Lincoln on his sled and Luna is sledding with Lynn on her sled)

LUNA, LYNN, LENI, AND LINCOLN: WOOHOO!! - the four say while they all sled down the hill

LOLA: Claws is just stupid, he just a filthy bear! - Lola said as Lana overhears

(Enraged, Lana whispered into Claws ear and he tap on Lola shoulder and roars, making Lola run away; Claws carries Lana)

LANA: Best vacation ever! - Lana praised as she and Claws high five - YEAH!

THE END