User blog comment:Nflemingful/Down with the Fat Girl and the President Impostor/@comment-31358352-20180811193235

Hi, Nick. It's Vince or Vinjedi1995. I just wanted to talk with you about this particular story you've done recently. First off, kudos to you and great job with this one. South Park is a favorite show for me to watch on Comedy Central and I think it's the best thing Trey Parker and Matt Stone came up with. As for the story, I'm just glad Mr. Garrison's gone for a long time and hopefully will get some help since the man's not alright in the head. I mean, he thought he was a woman trapped in a man body and got a sex-change operation that turned him into a he-she with a mutilated you know what. Then, he just got worse until the more recent seasons where he became a spoof on future U.S. President Donald Trump after he killed the real Trump who was Canadian since this is South Park we are talking about. Now, as for Heidi, I sympathize with her and wished she was brought to her senses prior to the season 20 finale and our intervention since she was warped into what she became in season 20 due to Cartman's influence. Now, you have your opinions and I'm fine with that, but I will never see Eric Cartman as nothing more as a villain with nothing but hatred towards whatever he loathes with all his clogged up heart. I mean, Cartman's actions in the show are inexcusable and unforgivable. This kid pretended to be retarded to participate in the 04 South Park Special Olympics alongside a roided Jimmy and Timmy who was doing the Special Olympics the right way and without using any shortcuts to get an advantage. And I'm speaking from experience due to having been apart of the Missouri Special Olympics for Grandview for a few years from 6th grade to early 9th grade. Still, it was satisfying to see him with last place since Cartman is not what you would call athletic, let alone physically healthy. Not to mention Cartman also became mesmerized and inspired by Mel Gibson's Passion of the Christ to where he dressed up and acted like Adolf Hitler Jr. If you've watched the episode, then you would get what I'm talking about. The little fatso also got revenge against Scott Tenorman by making him eat chili with the secret ingredient being his dead parents who were murdered earlier before the chili carnival and grinded them up into the fixings to make his chili he gave to Scott. And boy I tell you what, that Eric is a plain psychopath with no hope and no means of a future. Now if the situation were reversed, Cartman wouldn't be let off the hook for his actions unless he actually felt remorse for everythiing he did in his young life and how it affected the people who might still give a dang about him. But that's pretty pointless after the end of season 20. I think it should have been Cartman who got punished for his past deeds and either joins Mr. Garrison at the nut house or gets sent to a maximum security juvienile hall institute since I think Cartman's a little too young to get a death sentence just yet. Let alone actual prison time unless he got sent to the correctional institutes in the Loud House Revamped. But oh well. Que Sera Sera. Plus PC Principal should have been held accountable for what he did in season 18, but that's something to be left up for future discussion. Anyway, you got your opinion and I have my own. Still, I think you did great with your story and I'm sure James would agree. Oh, and if you get this, James, I hope you do a South Park related chapter of your own sometime soon so we can deal with whatever's wrong with the small Colorado town and be done with it. Also, Nick, I hope you don't mind, but I would have been fine with Clyde being paired with Lynn rather than Cartman or Clyde getting an ordinance like J.D. and Lincoln got since I know Clyde's got enough love in his heart for someone else since Lori and Bobby will be getting married in a few years in the Loud House Revamped. So with that said, I think Clyde would be better off with Haiku and Lynn since I've read some stories where Lynn has a relationship with Lincoln's best friend, preferably Vincent Starman's stories. And if I'm being honest, Heidi would have been fine with either Lincoln or Clyde in another version of this story where Cartman is the bad guy and she turns her life around and gets to know either of the boys which later leads to a new relationship with either of them. But that's my opinion. Anyway, that's all I wanted to talk about with you and I think you did good with this chapter in the Loud House Revamped. I hope you understand my attempt at criticism as I was just ranting about Cartman and not your chapter. Anyway, I hope you get around to asking James if you want your OC in his series at a later date. Now in the oh so wise words of Eric Cartman, "Screw you guys! I'm going home!" Just kidding with you, man. Have a good day and I'll see you around. Vince out.