User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 20)/@comment-31647719-20180825144100

Really nice chapter! I thought the sisters were kind of annoying with the whole Ronnie Anne thing. It kinda makes me wish the parents were there to listen what happened when they met. But either way, it was a really funny and enjoyable episode.

As for the story itself, I thought it was... meh. As a fan of Regular Show, I think the biggest problem is that the episode the author took inspiration from, Think Positive, works better in the context of that show rather than The Loud House. For one, Mordecai and Rigby weren't annoying Benson on purpose, it was all inconsecuential. And secondly, Pops just wanted Benson to be nicer to them, after all, he is technically his boss.

I think the story would have worked out much better if the author focused on the flaws of the Sister Fight Protocol rather than Lincoln's (non-existent) anger issues.