Thread:Veenster7/@comment-26212090-20161026083112/@comment-26901681-20161026155228

I am not mad for you asking me this, I know that you just want to know how you can improve as a writer. To be completely honest I liked your runaway fanfic I thought it was great. The only issue I had with it was that it tended to drag a bit when Lincoln was meeting the circus family. I think there was too many to keep track of. YoshiRocker13's fanfic Trustworthy was just all-around a basically perfect fanfic in my opinion. Every sister was true to their personality from the show, all the characters in the story were from the show which makes it easier for myself as the reader. The ending where Lincoln doesn't totally forgive his sisters for what they did and has that memorable line, is what makes that fanfic so amazing.