User blog:Aartistboy714/Review: No Guts, No Glori

This is my first review in the wiki, and it's about the season 1 episode "No Guts, No Glori",
 * Even though I liked watching this, I still hated Lori in this episode. I know why she likes being in charge, and I know why she does it, and I know that's the moral of the story, but I don't think that excuses her for taking away her siblings daily routines. And all she does is talk to her boyfriend "Bobby" all day. I wish that there was a fanfic of this episode with an alternate ending: With Lori's parents coming home and seeing the way Lori treats her siblings when she's in charge, then she gets a stern talk by her parents about was it really means to be in charge, and she starts to guilty and ashamed of herself. Then when she comes out of her parents bedroom, she is stopped by her siblings giving her an angry glare. Then Lincoln says "Well, look who came to ruin our fun!", then Lori sadly agrees in response, with shocks and surprises her siblings (especially her little brother). then she apologizes to her siblings, that she didn't that her being in charge would make them feel all uncomfortable, instead she was doing it for her own needs. She tells them that she was way too hard on them, and hopes that they can find it in their hearts to give her a second chance to make it up to her siblings. Then they think about it, and they all agree to give Lori another chance, but only if she gets rid of her military attire. Because they still think Lori should be, a little less bossy, and a little more caring. Then Lori thinks about it for a second, and says "Okay, from now on I'll never be sergeant-type person in charge, I'll just be a responsible, but caring person in charge!". Then her siblings cheers for her redemption.