User blog:Vulture345/"My Erotic Sleepover" Review

This whole fiasco has been like weeks ago, but i know wanna do some review, and just wanna let you know, Don't target Thomperfan because of this, I respect his work, but out of his whole Library of fanfictions, this one is clearly a dud.

Now where do I start with this one? It's a story where Leni comes over to Thomper's house and they do things, I'm sure everybody reading this knows what "things" they were doing.

I give this story a 3/10, At least he tried, but Practice makes Perfect.