User blog comment:TMNT1987Dude/Fanfiction - Louds Down Under/@comment-FirstDrellSpectre-20170701060915

Half of Louds having other plans was preety convinient coincidence that helped avoid conflict. I felt like it was Phineas and Ferb.

Lynn again caused troubles with her balls. Bringing them reminded me Space Invader.

Lynn and Lana as roommates because both are tomboys, Lincoln and Lisa because they are nerds, Leni and Luna because they are nice girls.

It was nice to imagine Leni and Lincoln at pool. Poor Luna, she had such unofortunate accident. Lynn again earned respect by playing sport. Lana got troubles because she doesn't know how to have good table manners. Lana was the funniest even if the grossest.

Scuba diving was cool. I liked Lincoln kissing a dolphin.

This is a great travel story and I liked that the siblings had no friction. You did awesome job.