Board Thread:Fun and Games at TLH/@comment-26302585-20160821175048/@comment-26302585-20160821185342

FirstDrellSpectre wrote: Lincoln the Caretaker is short but the problem shown there is very serious. Luna got pregnant because of her carelessness. I think her parents would adopt her child as their own. It would be scandalous if Luna revelated she's a teen mom without husband. Lori and Leni probably no longer live with their parents but still Luan and Lynn are older than Lincoln so why did Luna ask him instead of them for taking care of her daughter? Does Luna think Lincoln is more responsible? I agree it's short, but it's only the first chapter. The writer is probably working on the next chapter as we speak. Hopefully, the next chapter will be much longer. Maybe Luna wanted Lincoln to look after Lyra because of how close they are. Maybe she trusts Lincoln the most. He must have become more responsible and more mature as time went by. That's what I think anyway. My one problem with the story is that it lacks detail. Did Luna ask Lincoln, or did Lincoln offer looking after her child? How are the parents or other siblings involved? Again, hopefully the next chapter is longer and has more detail. Other than that, I still thought it was a nice read.