User blog comment:Disneydude94/Loud Buddies/@comment-26302585-20170619055548

Interesting so far. I didn't like how Rita signed Lincoln up for football without his consent just to get him to exercise. W=It's fine if she wants himto exercise, but what parent does signs their kids for a sport without their consent? And she really didn't think about the possibilities of Lincoln getting injured? Wow. Amazing parenting, right?

Even though I made an alternate ending to "The Loudest Yard", I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

If you want to check out my alternate ending, here's a link.

http://theloudhouse.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:BigFanofEntertainment/The_Loudest_Yard_-_Epilogue

But don't let this stop you from continuing your story. I think it's good so far. Keep it up. :)