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And another huge problem I have with Syngenesophobia is that it's downright preachy and the actual phobia is unbelievably downplayed in terms of impact to the plot. I mean, if you wanted to make a story about the sisters getting therapy, that's fine; more power to you, but leave a deteriorating fear out of it if you don't mind. But even from the perspective of the sisters, it just keeps glossing over everything and it just seems like this whole phobia thing was just a front in order to have a reason to give the sisters their "just desserts". I mean, with every session, they barely even touch upon why they went rapant with beating Lincoln to a pulp. No, they decide to go with every OTHER time where they were supposedly "unfair" to him. Because of that, I can never bring myself to care about any of them because with this disturbing lack of the sister's inner psyche in the fight that caused the whole shebang, I just can never take pity on the sisters because the author has yet to show even one redeeming quality about that would make me even come close to forgiving them for blowing up for an immature reason. If you thought that the sisters were immature in BITF, good God are they friggin babies in Syngenesophobia.