User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy/@comment-24669562-20161223082433

I enjoyed this fanfic. Yeah, it was a depressable fanfic but I enjoyed it! One thing that was mean of the girls to do was make Lincoln answer nature's call outside (The Loud House needs a second bathroom!) I'll bet Lincoln was humiliated but at least males don't have as much of a problem going to the bathroom (provided all they have to do is Number 1), also hoping no one had to see him, like that old man next door that yells at the Louds.

I was prepared for this to go bad and sure enough it did. Lincoln's sisters were really mean to him. Now I almost want to say they were encoragably mean to him but I guess that's not true. Good news is, at least Lincoln made it to the ACE SAVVY convention this time, but just as he gets there, he makes a fool out of himself and the sisters don't miss it, video it, and did they cause everyone to laugh at him?

What was really, really low was that they blame him for the broken remote and, kind of like on Drake and Josh, the boy [Lincoln] gets blamed for what his sisters did.

I don't blame Linc for running away, although I cannot condone it, well at least not in real life.

I didn't expect him to go to Bobby and Ronnie Anne's house, and I didn't expect him to stay there that long either. I thought he was going to go somewhere else (I don't know where, I just didn't expect him to go to his girlfriend's house.)

I wonder how Bobby and Ronnie felt about lying to Lincoln's sisters, I would have felt funny for fibbing if I was put in that position. I don't know what I would have done, I mean I don't want to betray Lincoln but I don't want to be dishonest either and when I lie nowadays, it eats me up until I tell the truth.

I admit Lincoln meant well when he wanted to make sure his sisters missed him and then later they finally do. It's almost a tear jerker that all of Lincoln's sisters cried over his absence.

Oh that reminds me, I laughed when Leni confronted Lisa for using "Invisible thingy on Lincoln" That Leni! I love her! I don't love her love her but, heh heh, I'm glad she exists and is part of the show!

Then Lincoln overhears Bobby talking to his girlfriend Lori, who is crying and so do the other girls.

Then Lincoln decides to be known by his sisters and the come. And Lincoln glares at them? I was not expecting that but hey, how he reacts is how he reacts! But his sisters are all happy to see him.

It was also nice of them to come to their senses and admit they're wrongs. I also wondered if Lucy would admit her wrong, and Lily shows what she did too.

But after the Loud kids are all reunited, and it would feel so good, right? Wrong. Despite the apology of all his sisters, Lincoln is still upset and unforgiving toward them. Well that's a bit mean, they realised what they did and they were really sorry about this.

But on the other hand, I can see why Lincoln refused to forgive his sisters. It probably would have been hard for me to do too if I was in Lincoln's place. And Lincoln had a really good point and I liked the analogy he used! Well, at least he was honest. And hopefully he'll forgive his sisters eventually but I can understand why and how he's not ready to do just so.

I look forward to reading Part 2, that's what I intended to read but I decided I should read Part 1 first as I don't like watching the sequel before the prequel.

One final note: Reading this fanfic, I was thinking of that Static Shock episode "Jimmy" http://dcau.wikia.com/wiki/Jimmy. To watch http://kisscartoon.me/Cartoon/Static-Shock/Season-02-Episode-011-Jimmy?id=8842 Being bullied to the point of crying and to the point where it becomes the last straw.

Great story!