User blog comment:RoniX2D/Does Fanfiction need to be heartwarming? Do the episode need to be how we want it?/@comment-2175012-20170214185404/@comment-2175012-20170216015810

Though the more I think about it, the more I think that the fic is melodramatic. While for the most part it's a tearjerker, some scenes felt tacked on to add onto the pile of feels. There's several to choose from. There's Adrien, that patient that Linc met, the whole bucket list, Lily not remembering Lincoln when she gets older, Lincoln giving Lana full custody of the tree they planted together....really it got to the point that I nearly said "Oh my god, just kill him already." While I'm not saying UnderratedHero is making a story for the sake of darkness (as there is still some point to it as I've mentioned earlier), but it's just coming off as mean-spirited as Lincoln is made to suffer with his limited existence, the sisters are wrecks. Even if Lisa manages to get a cure, chances of Lincoln surviving are slim.