User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Fanfiction - Chipped off Loud

Ok guys here is my first fanfiction and maybe the only one I will do in a while. Anyway I want to be just like the big top fanfiction writers so give me advice that could help me improve. Anyway enjoy my first fanfiction, "Chipped off Loud!" (This is a work in progress)

We are in the Loud House in the room of Lincoln Loud where he is just reading a comic book.

Lincoln: Come on Ace Savvy come on, get through this one! Come on! (Flips the comic book page) YES HE MADE IT OUT! (to the viewers) Ah Ace Savvy can get through almost anything can he? He's kinda like me in some ways as you all know I usually get through everything. I get through the funny stuff, the happy stuff, the hurtful stuff, and the horrible stuff.

(Lincoln puts his comic book down and walks out of the room still talking the the viewers)

Lincoln: For example one horrible and at the same time hurtful thing that happened to me was when my tooth was chipped. Although, I don't really like to talk about it since the details most likely would shock someone. So the only people who know are Clyde, my sisters, and mom and dad.

(Just as Lincoln was talking Luan walks out of her's and Luna's room and notices Lincoln so she walks up to him)

Luan: Hey Lincoln!

Lincoln: Oh hey Luan!

Luan: Lincoln I want to know how you think of this joke. Why did the man run around his bed?

Lincoln: I don't know?

Luan: To catch up on his sleep!

(Lincoln groans at the joke just as Luan leaves to do her usual day to day activities)

Lincoln: (to the viewers) Speaking of my chipped tooth, that's the sister who caused it. Yes my sister Luan the jokester and prankster caused my chipped tooth. It's not hard to believe it once someone tells you as in case you all know, Luan can go far on her pranks at times. I can still remember the day when I first got this chipped tooth...

(Flashes back to 6 years ago when Lincoln was just only 5 years old)

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 * The inspiration I got for this story is me thinking how Lincoln got his chipped tooth? And so I thought of a story that would show that how Lincoln got his chipped tooth from one of his sisters, which the sister I picked was Luan since her pranks could hurt someone, such as Lincoln with his chipped tooth.
 * This is my first fanfiction and the one I am currently working on.