User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Breakdown on the Beach/@comment-31647719-20180221000229

This is a good story and all, but like I mentioned before, it feels too one-sided.

It makes it feel like Lincoln is was the one who wronged his family despite the fact that they kicked him out of his own house and probably tried to keep it that way just to avoid bad luck.

And the family tries to argue that Lincoln could have told the truth to his family instead of extending the lie. Which could be a good argument, if it weren’t for one flaw: he already did, twice.

Lincoln tried to tell the truth to his family, but they didn’t believe him because of Lynn’s superstitions. And when he managed to prove them he’s not bad luck, he was forced to wear a squirrel costume in the middle of a beach.

My point is, Lincoln should have had more arguments instead of just admitting he was wrong in everything.