Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20161107090427/@comment-24200891-20161110075319

I don't know if Pop Pop is Rita's dad or Lynn Sr. If he's Rita's dad then he couldn't possibly see Lynn Sr. as a baby. I added some dialogue with Pop Pop.

I think of resolving problem with fear of thunder by showing that thunderbolts strike in high things. Not striking in same place twice is a myth. Pop Pop could say how he dealt with fear of storm.