Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20171103005527/@comment-32202721-20171103012738

It's pretty friggin' bizarre.

I mean, the grammar is fine, and it's written decently well, but in every other respect the story's kind of a train wreck. The sisters are horribly unlikable, their motivations are really confusing, and when it comes to plotting, the author seems to just act on any whim that comes into his head.