Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-33694397-20180513211531/@comment-33694397-20180515012527

IRR: I guess that's what happens when you try to cram too many plotlines into one story.

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(Lola come back down and receive applause from the others)

LORI: That was really nice, Lola. - Lori said - We forgive you as well.

LUCY: It is, sister. - Lucy said

(The others hug Lola in gratitude)

LOLA: Thanks, guys. - Lola said nicely - I hope this will make amends with all of us.

(Lincoln come down the stairs and meet his siblings)

LENI: Your coming back, Linky? - Leni ask

(Lincoln nods and they hugged him)

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IRR: I think Lincoln should at least apologize to his family for abandoning them over something Lola did. But then again, this fanfic is almost over, so I don't really care.