User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Luck/@comment-24260217-20170416204253

Not really the biggest fan. It pushes levels of disbelief further then the actual episode did. Parents wouldn't keep up an act for that long. Moreover, Lincoln safely brought it upon himself. Lincoln running away from home is rather cliché at this point as well. Heartwarming endings are also getting a little cliché too, seeing as heartwarming endings are actually quite rare on the show. It wasn't bad, just not too original. Also, it isn't in Lincoln's best character to stay angry for too long. Though, the continuation of Sophia is nice, and Luna seemed to be in character.

I liked it, but it was too Cliché. 6.8/10