User blog comment:CircularBoat742/Fanfiction - An Act Of A Loud/@comment-26302585-20170403004815

This was good. However, I have 2 criticisms.

1. You told off all the sisters for rudely rejecting Lincoln's help, but the only we see rejecte Lincoln's help were Lori, Lucy, and the twins. We don't see Lynn, Luna, Luan, Leni, and Lisa rudely reject Lincoln's help.

2. Why did Lola and Lana accept Adam's help, but not Lincoln's? It makes no sense. They were fine with Adam helping them, but not their own brother.