User blog comment:AndrewBrauer/Whipped - Alternate Version/@comment-29928741-20170705030944/@comment-32346268-20170706020059

Yeah, Whipped is a whole bunch of cliches, especially with Luna and Leni being his "guardians". You, however, did a good job on trying to make your fanfics original, especially in The Sneak Out, where you made Lynn and Lucy be on his side instead of his "guardians" (you know what I mean) I feel like people made Luna and Leni his guardians only because they're the nicest and closet sisters to Lincoln.