User blog comment:Thomperfan/Pros and cons fan fictions/@comment-2175012-20171215134433

Actually disliked "The Diary of a Loud" more. Look, I get that what Lola did was wrong, but Lincoln very well could've killed her by punching her off the stairs, causing her to fall unconscious. The fact that Lincoln did not feel remorse for that disgusted me. Yeah, they made up at the end, but still, what the (bleep), Lincoln? I also didn't like how Ronnie Anne broke up with Lincoln over the most flimsy of reasons, as well as the fact that Lincoln didn't get punished for punching Lola. I know that Animat15 did explain away why they weren't present, but it was just bad.

"Whitewashed" I found I liked it more. Though it had its problems like the sisters destroying Lincoln's comic book, even though they should've probably let Lincoln explain himself more. While I don't mind the Lincoln mistreatment, Lincoln getting beaten up for saying some swear words was almost as bad a reason as in The Engineer's story. I did like how Lincoln socked Lori, though. Love you, Lori, but you deserved it.