User blog comment:IronRaphRa/Shortfic: A Holiday to Remember or Poor Lincoln/@comment-31022739-20180205042641

I get what you were going for, but I just coudn't find this fic funny. The reason is that your overall description didn't make the affairs out to be fun. Am I supposed to find it funny when Lincoln is "widening his eyes in fear", screaming at his sisters to stop pinching him, and looking like a complete mess by the time it's all over?