User blog comment:AnimationFan15/Fanfiction - Pony Up/@comment-31647719-20170508162047

This was a really cute story, the interactions of the siblings with the ponies was really nice, and the ending is adorable.

But if I had any criticism to make... the part were Lincoln cuts Lynn's forehead, it really necessary? It seems like pointless violence in an otherwise cute story, and makes Lincoln look like a sociopath who can hurt his sisters any minute they piss him off.

But other than that, it was a really nice story.