User blog:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Louds of the Renaissance

My thirtieth fanfic. Commentary is acceptable, plus, AnimationFan15 gets credit for the title.

Plot
(It shows Lincoln's school, he and all of his classmates are lined up in the auditorium, trying out for a play)

LINCOLN: You may be wondering why I'm trying out for the school play? I love the Renaissance Era, not those old paintings and sculptures. I'm talking about good ol' knights, kings, and queens.

(Their drama teacher, Mrs. Crowley, walk to the stage)

MRS. CROWLEY: Alright, class, you're trying out for the school play. - Mrs. Crowley said - Bring your A game on, and act like a true king.

LINCOLN: (excited) I'm gonna ace these tryouts. - Lincoln said, confident

ONE WEEK LATER

(Lincoln and his classmates are gathered around a bulletin board)

LINCOLN: Here we go! - Lincoln said, determined

(Lincoln looked at the list of students who made the tryouts; Unfortunately, he'd didn't made the cut, making him depressed; Later, Lincoln is walking home with Lana, Lola, and Lucy)

LOLA: So, Lincoln, you made the tryouts? - Lola ask

LINCOLN: No, I didn't. - Lincoln said sadly

LANA: Dang, I'm sorry about that, Lincoln. - Lana consoles

LINCOLN: It's okay, Lana. - Lincoln said - I been waiting six months for this play, I can't believe I didn't get in, I wanted to be the prince.

(The four siblings reach their house)

LUCY: Don't worry, Lincoln. - Lucy said - It would've been better if you were an executioner.

(Lincoln rolls his eyes and the four walk into the house)

TO BE CONTINUED