Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20171125024142/@comment-32202721-20171125025937

That's not the point. The point is that you're still putting yourself at the center of the Loud House universe. And I'm sorry, but that's just not my bag.

On top of that, I did skim through your fic, and I found that a large chunk of it is just the Loud siblings going on about how amazing you are. That's exactly the problem I have with self-inserts; they're an exercise in personal wish fulfillment. I also noticed quite a few names I didn't even recognize. Who's Craig? Who's Jack? The story tells me that Sophia's your younger sister, but beyond that I don't know anything about her.

I'm not telling you that you have to stop writing self-insert fics, but please accept that they're not for me.