User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews 4: Bunking In

Ok today I am reviewing what people say is Harburton81's most critically acclaimed fanfiction, "Bunking In." Now Harburton81 is one of my top 3 favorite fanfiction writers so I am very excited to review on of his works! Let's start!

Part 1: Storyline

So Lincoln's room is small as we all know and after the beginning of the story in which Lincoln wants to have a bigger room and be with others. So after he has a bad morning start he asks his parents if he can sleep in the living room but his parents refuse and instead they suggest one of his sister's rooms which Lincoln thinks is a great idea.

Lana asks him if he wants to be in her's and Lola's room and Lincoln agrees! However since Lola is....Lola she refuses and after saying some stuff, Lana tells Lincoln to leave so she can beat up Lola for saying that stuff.

Lincoln attempts to go to Lisa's room but there's an explosion so that ain't happening!

Lincoln goes to Lynn's and Lucy's room and Lynn welcome him in open arms, "Cause of after Space Invader," but Lucy scares him off after she asks him to be a corpse for her practice funeral Lincoln runs off.

Lincoln tries Luna's and Luan's room but Luan the prankster just ruins that idea.

Lincoln tries Lori's and Leni's room but Lori says no but Leni convinces Lori for him to stay but just for one night which Lincoln agrees.

A few days later the meaner sisters, "Lori, Luan, Lynn, Lola, and Lisa," come up with a plan to get Lincoln out of there rooms. Their plan is pranking Lincoln by pretending to be ghosts and it succeeds and they tell Lincoln themselves they on longer want him in their rooms. The nicer sisters come and yell at meaner sisters until Lincoln snaps and tells the meaner sisters and nicer ones that he just wanted to spend time with them before running to him room, with the nicer sisters soon following.

The parents come and punish the meaner sisters by grounding them for two weeks. The meaner sisters feel guilty because of what they done. The nicer sisters meanwhile comfort Lincoln and remember the good times they had. Then Lori comes and tell them to follow her.

They go to Lori's and Leni's room cause the meaner sisters made a sleepover to apologize and Lincoln and the nicer sisters accept and they have a good sleepover as the Fanfiction ends!

[Let's get this out of way, 10/10, good storyline, overall one of the best i ever seen.]

Part 2: Characters

Well Lincoln is just Lincoln which the 10 sisters are divided to the nicer sisters and meaner sisters. A concept used by loud fanfiction writers so half support Lincoln while other half don't. To be honest I think this story is one of the best that uses this concept so the characters are basically perfect.

[10/10 the characters are portrayed just right!]

Part 3: Style

The style is also overall good to be honest. The plot of Lincoln just wanting to hang with his sisters and wanting to sleep with them since he is lonely is just cute and wonderful. The meaner sister's style is good too and like I said this story portrays them one of the best even though some people may not like the concept, "AnimationFan13 to be an example."

[10/10 This is just getting really noticeable how good the story is.]

Part 4: Does the story have anything missing?

Well I can't really think of anything so I guess not!

[So 10/10 so then I guess we know what that means!]

Part 5: Final Rating

'''[Ok my final rating is a 40/40 so an A+! This is the first story I have reviewed to have an A+ rating in my opinion. So is this Harburton13's best story? Well he considers it and I gave it an A+, although I feel like I might like others made by him better despite the high rating I gave for this one but this story is AMAZING NONE THE LESS!]'''

'''So I guess that's it for this review! Yes two reviews in one day, few minutes before midnight so going to bed! Now that I have reviewed four fanfictions I am still going to review more! Hopefully I can find a bad one to rant at! Anyway tune in next time to Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews!'''