User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Kids & Fire VS Adult Evil P1/@comment-31358352-20180515044449/@comment-31358352-20180515170600

Well, didn't see that coming. Did not know that Ben and Gwen were teens. Thought you were using their kid forms from the original Ben 10. But since this is Alien Force Ben 10, that would make sense. Even so, why not have them still come in but act as spies for the KND by infiltrating and doing recon on the teens. Like what Maurice and Chad are doing. While we're at it, how about I ask that you have them convert Cree back to the side of good and not have her have to fight Number 5. After all, they are sisters and family, for pete's sake. Oh, and during the story, why not use what you did in Shinobi of the Cosmic Storm and use some more of TV, movies, and video games, m'kay. Anyway, I'll see about coming up with some stuff for you to incorporate in the miniseries. I also have some additions you can bring in for the DBZ miniseries I came up with a month or two ago. How about including Ben and Gwen Tennyson, the Teen Titans, and for the first Kryptonian superhero to appear in your story before Superman, why not have it be Supergirl. After all, she must have been in her teens when we rescued her and the rest of Krypton's denizens when it exploded so since she's older than Kal-El, how about using her to take the place of her cousin until later on when he's more grown up. Besides, it would be a good thing for Kara to become a symbol of hope and justice by using her newly discovered superpowers to do some good as both Kara Danvers and as Supergirl. Start off small in Royal York, then bump it up to the next level in the Simulator, and the rest will speak for itself. With all that said, I'll still come up with more for you to use for both Kids & Fire vs Adult Evil and for the DBZ sequel dubbed Saiyan's Redemption. Check you later, James. Vince out.