Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20180318170234/@comment-32202721-20180318192547

Overall, it was a pretty decent attempt at a parody. Like how you incorporated both the vilification of Lincoln’s sisters and the deification of Lincoln into the narrative; the sisters act horribly OoOC just so the narrator can claim that Lincoln is justified for beating them up.

My one criticism is that it seemed pretty rushed. I found quite a few errors that you could have caught with a round or two of proofreading, like “your” being used where “you’re” should be.