Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-29928741-20170624163140/@comment-29928741-20170624214506

For Chapter Three, I have this:

Later...

(Leni is sitting on the floor in Lori and Leni's room, STILL watching the video while making a weird face. Suddenly, Lori can be heard in the background)

Lori: Leni!

(Leni ignores her)

Lori: LENI!

(Leni is still ignoring her. A few seconds later, we hear stomping in the background. Lori then opens the door)

Lori: Leni, I need you to-

(Lori then sees Leni watching the "Luna" video, making a shocked face. Leni then slowly turns her head to Lori and closes the laptop after)

Leni: Yes, ma'am?

Lori: I need you to come downstairs.

Leni: Why?

Lori: Because I said so!

Leni: You didn't say, "So". You said you needed me to come downstairs-

Lori: Whatever, just come downstairs!

(Lori then heads to the living room as Leni curiously stands up and follows her. They then make it)

Lori: (patting hand on couch) Have a seat, would you?

(Leni then sits down on the couch)

Leni: What is this about?

Lori: Remember what happened at the mall?

Leni: (annoyed) Uh, yeah! When you tried to take away the dress i wanted to buy, SINCE IT'S A MALL AND THE PURPOSE IS TO BUY STUFF!

Lori: Alright, calm down! Now, the reason why I brought you here is usually because of that incident, so I decided to make you a better person.

Leni: A better person?

Lori: Yep! A better person! So I can get my friends back- I mean, So I can see how good you are... And If you become a better person, I may give you a "reward".

Leni: (excited) A reward!?

Lori: Mhm!

Leni: I bet it's a golden dress or a new fashion magazine or maybe even a DVD with those 6 dancing aliens in the background.

Lori: You'll see...

Leni: Okay, I'm ready! Now what should I do to be a-

Lori: Hold up there! We're not doing this in the house?

Leni: (disappointed) Aw, why not?

Lori: Because I just thought a better place.

(The next scene then skips to Lori and Leni in a playground)

Leni: Why the playground?

Lori: This is the first place where I may make you a better person... Now Leni, the first step of being a better person is being respectful, a LOT more respectful than you had been during the mall.

Leni: Hm?