User blog comment:Aartistboy714/A heartfelt apology.../@comment-30498740-20171127170429

Well you don't need to apologize, trust me I'm not a fan of the story, but I know you aren't biased and were just trying a new idea. One of my ideas is similiar to  this story except mine was that my main character wasn't doing this and it was his spilt personaility doing all of the evil/ malicous things. So far, it seems in your story Lincoln is doing this and isn't being controlled by Wretched and Wrecthed feels like more of an alter ego than a spilt personality. But the third part can change my mind and continue Wretched even though i didn't like som eof the execution, he is promising and remind me of my own OC.