Thread:Austria-Man/@comment-24200891-20170507152810/@comment-24200891-20170511083935

Your English is almost ok here. In the last sentence "in" is missing before "your end".

To make Lynn learn her lesson she failed to learn in the actual episode I made whole her team fed up with her superstitions. In my story Lincoln is vengenful but he has every right to be. Parents and sisters deserved punishment so Lincoln gave them a glimpse of being homeless like they made him homeless. However he didn't want to be a jerk like them so instead of some days of homelessness he gave them only few minutes of this.

After this episode I have difficulties with writing fanfics because now I can't imagine any sister nice. That's why for example writing "Golf Sibling" lasted long.