Thread:Harburton81/@comment-28715445-20170429020157/@comment-28715445-20170429143542

Hey I had an interesting thought for a FanFiction. I also think it is neccessary it comes out from now-soon, and I'll explain. You see it is basically based on the, "Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory," move from 1971, not the 2005 remake. The plot is this, though it can be changed to fit the tone more but here is how I think of it. A man by the name of Willy Wonka, "can be changed so as to not copy it," has a chocolate factory which no one ever has been inside. He places a golden ticket to be found by anyone. Lincoln of course wants to find it so that he can visit the factory. However it is soon found which makes him sad. The next day he buys one chocolate and on a the TV's in a TV shop it sasy the the ticket found was a fraud. Lincoln opens his chocolate and finds the Golden Ticket. The Ticket allows a person to bring 10 people, "You see where this is going?" So Lincoln and his sisters visit the chocolate factory in the experienc of a lifetime.

So here is why I thought of it. I thought of it since it seems like a good idea since the sisters CRAVE chocolate and Lincoln likes it too. So them going to a Chocolate Factory ain't that hard to believe. Not only that, but after I thought of it, it was announced that Tom and Jerry were going to be in a WIlly Wonka movie, and a LOT OF PEOPLE hated it, so this can help people have a good story to pass the time.

Also the original movie was a musical so I thought maybe it could be a musical, prehaps if this becomes a story someone can cme up with lyrics for a song. Except the, 'If you want to find paradise," song.

Another thing I thought if maybe lily shouldn't go. Now I love Lily, everyone does, but she is a baby andthis leads me to my next thing.

Pop Pop should go. Why? Cause in the original Charlie's grandpa goes. So Lincoln's Grandpa should go in place of Lily. Also the kids need an adult with them.

And also, I thought that as their tour goes on, the sister's would go one by one. Cause in the original movie the kids do something that gets them out of the tour, like Agustas is a chocolate pool and Violet being a bluebery, and so on and so on. So each sister would go due to them doing something that affects them. Just at the end it would be Lincoln and Pop-Pop.

So what do you think exactly?