Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20180407012938/@comment-32202721-20180407030855

Well, on one hand, I agree with most of their commentary; most of the problems I had with Gender War are addressed. On the other hand, the episode was missing a vital ingredient.

The ingredient? Jokes!

Most of the commentary was just the Loud siblings pointing out the problems with the story, with few real attempts at humor. It read more like a review than anything else. If you're trying to write a PTTFW episode, you gotta have jokes.