Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-29928741-20171012003728/@comment-29928741-20171012005359

This is what I have for my latest chapter.

(The next scene then skips to them making through the last step and then walking up to the door)

Lola: Ah... Save my family and my quest is done.

Gerald: Yep!

(Gerald then opens the door of Kaku's lair)

Gerald: Ladies first?

Lola: Nah, not today. It's the gentlemen's turn to go first.

Gerald: Aw, alright!

(The three dogs then enter the lair and run through the hallway)

Gerald: Finally, the quest will be over-

(The dogs' excited expressions suddenly turn into shocked ones as they encounter something horrendous)

Gerald: Oh no...

Lola: (walks up to the digs) What?

Gerald: We're too late, lad!

Lola: Too late for what?

Gerald: Just look!

(Lola then walks up to see what they were staring at. Suddenly, she makes a shocked face at what she saw. What she saw was her house destroyed, now nothing but a pile rubble)

Lola: Wait, hold up!

(Lola looks very closely, but doesn't see any of her family)

Lola: Oh, god... I don't see anybody... Not Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, Lisa, Lily, Mom and Dad, any of our pets... They're all... (sniffs, then starts to tear up) dead! THEY'RE ALL FREAKING DEAD!

(Lola then begins to sob as Pancake and Gerald walk up to her and pat her)

Mr. Broun: Welp, we tried! Sorry, kid! Guess you'll be homeless for the rest of your life.

(Mr. Broun turns around and was about to walk away until...)

Voice: What do you bone-headed monkeys think you're doing in my lair?

Everyone: Huh?

(Everyone looks up, only to see a dark, giant demon with a yellow face and maroon fire burning above his eyes, which is none other than Kaku)

Gerald: Kaku!

Kaku: Yep! It's me alright! Anyways, why did you guys intrude into my lair!?

Lola: We came here to save my family, but it was too late because you killed them and destroyed the house they were in.

(Kaku then reveals Lola's family in his hand)

Kaku: You mean these guys?

Lola: (sighs) Mom! Dad! Brothers and Sisters! Pets!

Pancake: They're still alive!

Kaku: Not for long. I was gonna bring them up to my lava pit.

Mr. Broun: Lava pit!?

Kaku: Yep! Which is (points to the left) right over there!

(The three dogs and Lola turn to the left and see a large lava pit)

Lola: YOU HAVE A LAVA PIT!?

Kaku: Yep! Now back off! You're causing my execution to be delayed!

(Kaku was about to head to the lava pit until...)

Lola: NO!

(Lola then runs up to Kaku, jumps up, and was about to try to hit him until Kaku grabs her)

Kaku: You try to hit the almighty Kaku!?

(Kaku then throws Lola at the wall as the three dogs stare in shock)