User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 5)/@comment-32242796-20180704074327

''Lisa: I can't get over this. We started out the story with perfectly consistent tenses, and now we have tense changes within the same sentence. Did a new, less competent author just take over after Part 1?!''

Well, part 2 IS co-written by two other people besides yoshirocker13. So, does that answer your question, Lisa?