User blog comment:Funnyman12/I really hate no such luck fanfics./@comment-31563773-20170621224306/@comment-32055298-20170621225423

Yeah but it's pretty making the same cruel story just done to the sisters instead Lincoln and acts more mean spirited then needed, yours for the most part works but the rest is very cringy and just feels needlessly cruel without a point, you have a point and most of the flaws in your fic is the fault of its source material really.