User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 8)/@comment-32799780-20171217214230

I'd call this story a dumpster fire, but that would besmirch the name of dumpster fires everywhere. It pretty much embodies everything I despise about the whole "St. Lincoln" subgenre of Loud House fanfiction.

The commentary, as always, was absolute gold. This was the best grammar-police Lisa you've done yet, that bit with Lucy showing her eyes was hysterical, and I loved how Luna started spacing out while fantasizing about Sam and just forgot that her younger siblings were right there.

As for recommendations for future episodes, maybe have the Louds react to a fic where Lucy gets to live her dream of becoming a vampire? I would recommend one specifically, but the only one I can think of off the top of my head is SUPER rated M. Eh, I'm sure there's at least a few out there.