Thread:Veenster7/@comment-24200891-20160927045457/@comment-24200891-20161003175010

I read some artciles about braces to describe problems. The worst are first days after putting them because they cause pain. Brace wearer needs to be extra careful with eating and brushing teeth.

Lincoln has a very strong big brother instinct towards Lucy and Lily. To Leni sometimes he's the older brother. I wondered if Lucy would really react like a victim if someone kept using humiliating insults against her. Initialy the scene with Lincoln defending Lucy was darker. I imagined him breaking mirror in toilet, taking a shard and stabbing oppressor of his sister. However I thought that would be too dark and a preteen wouldn't have such idea. I have such dark ideas because I'm old enough to play  pg-15  games. After playing [Prototype] no wonder my 13th fanfic is so dark. However I try to use much lighter tone now. Brace Bro was very much ligher and softer.

Another candidate for antagonist is Carol despite she made only a cameo. I tried to imagine a story in which Carol hangs out with Lincoln and is nice to him to get info about Lori. She uses fact Linc argued with Lori. However we all know absolutelly nothing about her, we don't know if she nicer or meaner than Lori.