User blog comment:Lucasthewikiguy13/Self-Insert Character Review/@comment-33694397-20171203172613

My biggest problem with Nolan is that he comes off as a Gary-Stu. Some of his worst examples are: "Spell it Out - My Version" where he's the only one who notices how upset Lucy is and gives the Loud kids a lecture on how they should treat her better, "No Laughing Matter - My Version" where he isn't annoyed by Luan's constant joking and defends her when the other Loud kids are complaining about her jokes. "No Spoilers - My Version" where he's against the idea of leaving Leni out of the party planning even after the others talk about how she blew the previous surprise parties and is the one who gives her the idea about throwing a surprise party of her own. And "Tricked - My Version" where he doesn't like the fact that Lincoln and Clyde don't want to share their full-sized candy bars. And some of his original works like "Missing Nolan" and "Nolan's Birthday" which come across as the Loud Kids talking about how great Nolan is. Nothing agaisnt Thomperfan, but when you have self-insert doing these things, it just makes the character annoying.

I can't really say anything about the other two because I haven't read their works. I'm not really into self-insert fanfiction.