Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-28872366-20160903214819/@comment-24200891-20160910063134

Exacly. But I need to consider possible events in this story. I need opening, development and ending. I have some of the development but that's all for now. The beginning is separation from the rest of the family, what about Luna singing too loud in mountains and causing mud avalange that separates her, Lincoln, Lynn, Lana and Lisa from the rest? Too scary,  too unrealistic? Here I'm planning to explore Lisa's problem of feeling special and Lana's problem of too much risk. Their moral supporters will be Linc and Luna respectively.

I thought about this fanfic as a direct sequel to in Tents Debate but Jimmielee10 already wrote it.   http://realmilesify.deviantart.com/art/The-BFHC-A-Loud-House-Fanfic-Chapter-1-620707710