Thread:BigFanofEntertainment/@comment-30953185-20170301154310/@comment-26302585-20170301171156

I didn't read your version of "Snow Bored" yet.

As for ideas. Well you could tell Lincoln that maybe it's not a good idea to walk around the house with those ear plugs. Towards the end, I think you should tell the sisters off for pulling their prank. Tell them that, yes, Lincoln was wrong for ignoring, them, but he didn't deserve everything that happened to him. Tell them that they could've just talked with him and told him that he was ignoring them like sensible people. That's all I've got so far. I'll let you know if I think of anything else.