Thread:TheMaximumMatt/@comment-31647719-20171030211841/@comment-32807753-20171030213903

If you want me to say something negative about FDS himself, I'm sorry, but my thoughts on the creator do not affect what my thoughts are on the product itself.

With that said, this is clearly supposed to be a T-Rated fanfic, so I will excuse it for being more violent and darker than a typical Loud House episode, and considering this was made by FDS and how I'm familiar with his style, I'm not suprised by the way it turned out. The dialogue, of course, sounds like something you'd see in a drama play/movie and feels almost nothing like a Loud House episode would do.

However, the idea of Lynn's development here is interesting and I see what he was going for here. I just think it could have been executed better. Also, IDK why, but despite this being a serious T-Rated fanfic, the whole scene with Lincoln trying to cut off Lynn seems so comedic and childish. "NO! NOT MY PONYTAIL!" I'm sorry, but every time I read that I can't help but laugh.

So yeah, I'm mixed on it too.