Thread:IronRaphRa/@comment-30953185-20180327032305/@comment-26253276-20180329211901

Thomperfan wrote: I don't buy what Lincoln did was that bad. When the sisters gave Lincoln that money, Lori said, and I quote: "You can just pay us back in the future." Not after school, not tomorrow, not on the weekend, not next week, but in the future. She didn't specify on a certain time, just some time after when she said that. And as for him buying that video game. He's an 11 year old boy, who has $100, and wanted to buy a video game with said $100. I mean I would buy if he did it without thinking and was really open about it, and told the sisters that he wouldn't pay them back, but he said two times (one before he bought the video game and one after he told them he bought the game.) that he would pay them back. So don't buy that he was being totally selfish.

You had the sisters act just as bad, if not worse as a typical "Lincoln's sisters are the worst" story, even though Lincoln said he would pay the girls back, they pay it no heed and constantly put him through torture. It's like they don't even know what patience is! Not to mention the things you had them to do to him was BITF level of Lincoln torture if not higher.

Also there are some issues I think you overlooked. You do know that Lincoln's room is really just a linen closet. It's tiny, small, cramped, so even though Luna wanted to make it her studio, she wouldn't be able to, because there'd barely be enough room for Lincoln. Oh wait, what if she does know that and she's trying to kick him out?! That's even worse!

And I still don't care what anyone says, Leni would not whack Lincoln on the head like that. That's just not her.

And while the apology was nice, I think the girls should've done more with their apology, especially after what they did to him.

Sorry, if I was too hard. I know this was your second story, so it's not gonna be good, but I just thought I should let you know what my full thoughts were. I agree with you ∞%. And this is not hard at all. Making a Lincoln torture fanfiction with little to give back and classifying it as an Anti-Lincoln-fanboyism is only doing the exact opposite: adding fuel to the fire.

Iron deserves this.