Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-24200891-20161026075001/@comment-5888829-20161026115946

I think I've noticed a big problem with my fic.

Lori's personality randomly changes all throughout the fic. At one point, she feels bad about what she did, then at the next point she's mad at him for breaking her phone, but then immediately after she feels bad again like she didn't feel bad in the first place. It could just be me, but I'm thinking I might have screwed it up a little, and it's been stressing me out.