Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-24200891-20161026075001/@comment-24200891-20161026121327

I didn't see it that way but you're right. It needs improvement. I thought after thr phone is broken Lori breaks her promice because her anger is stronger than her. She feels not only hypocrite but also begins to remember the pain she caused to him. She feels like a monster again. Sending him to hospital once was traumatic enough to make her think again before she finished her threats. Just write her thoughts like "Wait, Lori! He's so afraid of me he can't look at me. What am I doing? Again this? Is my anger really stronger than me? Am I really like that?"