User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Request a Re-Write/Alternate Ending!/@comment-30458740-20170321015548/@comment-30458740-20170321031335

Well, for "The Green House", in the scene how it cuts to the sisters complaining and refusing to go green, instead maybe start off that scene with Lincoln about to explain his situation to them and appeal to them. Starting off with "So, there's this thing going on in my class, and, well... I need your help." And the sisters could be more willing to help their brother reduce their Eco-footprint for his sake and less because of the polar bear but still think it looks very cute. Also, not entirely sure how, but maybe there's a way of Lincoln being less of a hypocrite so that the sisters don't get reduced to wearing those smelly potato sacks. And then, end it with Lincoln returning home and telling the results of the go green project to the sisters rather than "showering" outside the classroom.

And as for "Ties That Bind", based on Lincoln's fear of his family falling apart and how lonely he gets when they're not around, I would think that Lincoln would not want to live the life as an only child like Clyde does. Even he mentioned that being an only child gets lonely in "Overnight Success". So, instead of scheming on being the favorite the parents keep, he can try to find ways so that the parents don't get rid of his sisters. The pancakes can be written "big families are better than small families" in chocolate chips, his "only child fantasy" can be him being so bored and lonely, and when mentioning the "white hair", Rita could also throw in how its an obnoxious pain in the neck. One of the sisters can then give him an "you're an awesome brother" speech before going to confront their parents. And then, end it with Lincoln stopping to listen to the whole "bun in the oven" comment and realize it was a false alarm.