User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - It's Still a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House/@comment-32230637-20170629111152

As a fallow up to.. It's a Loud 4X House this feels right you tried you did good.. They still fight over Money after all this.. You think by now they would of learned their leason but nope.. In edition I'm siding with Lincoln on this one why should he give up his money to his sisters that he himself earn after spiting the money plus I didn't like the part that Lincoln forgave them too easily if it was 2 months later and he's still cross with them and then they'll forgive him then that's fine I think they should of earn his forgiveness by not just saying sorry to him but 'just hear me out here' they take his money ripped it to pieces during the fight Lincoln gets cross to all of them and after two months has pass after Lynn Sr ground them all and for them doing the chores and then afterwards they somehow get Lincoln a trampoline and ask him if he could come downstairs to the backyard and see what the sisters have brought him and after saying their sorry to him THAT'S when he'll forgive him and then he goes on the trampoline and then he'll them if they could come and join with him and have fun.. Which they did I know this isn't what you have in mind but this is the best idea I could cook up.. But still for what you did tried to do you did well.. An 8/10.