Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-24200891-20161028223319/@comment-5888829-20161029215019

I just read it. It was really good. Not the best fanfic you've made (that would be Frigid Fever) but I still like the way you handled Luna and Lincoln's relationship.

BTW, I finally came up with some ideas for a sequel to Trustworthy. Forgive me if it sounds a bit cheesy, but here's what I've got so far.

After what the sisters have done to Lincoln, bad things start to happen to them, such as Clyde losing his interest in Lori, Chunk no longer giving free rides for Luna, Lynn getting kicked out of both the Biker Gang and her Football team, etc. Afterwards, they try to take him to many different places to cheer him up, such as Dairyland, the Beach, Gus' Game and Grub, and so on. None of these manage to make Lincoln forgive them, to which they eventually give up, feeling even worse about themselves. Then, one day, Lisa's experiment goes haywire, and causes the entire house to be set on fire. The sisters have to get the family, their pets, and more importantly Lincoln out. Of course, as this goes on, Lincoln becomes trapped in the burning house and he's unable to escape on his own. That's when the majority of the sisters reenter and do everything they can to get him out. The rescue mission is successful, but Lincoln has passed out.

Please tell me what you think, or how I could make this better.