Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31789809-20170815135705/@comment-31789809-20170815154702

This is one of the funniest things I've seen on this wiki. The way you write the siblings to be so down to earth with these over the top stories creates a contrast that meshes into the perfect satire. I especially like how they complain about how authors either make Lincoln look less strong than he actually is or make the sisters look like complete monsters.

As for Trustworthy, I think it's good but I see a lot of major problems that keep it from being stellar. For instance, the way the sisters are portrayed does sort of irk me, I can see some of the plot points coming from a mile away, and the second time Lincoln gets angry at his sisters seems very rushed and unnecessary when you compared to what happened the first time.