User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - lost on the open ocean/@comment-24669562-20160715175216

Horray I finally just read it! Awesome story and a bit epic too!

So it was Lincoln and Lynn's fault. And then it was Leni's. Luna and Lori try to help or prevent the situation.

One situation after another. And then the octopus. I don't even want to know how that tasted and I think I would have rather had the raw fish than that, but to survive I you have to do what you can, I guess. Just hope I never have to resort to eating rabbits, they're my most favorite animals in the whole wide world (still would like to know what the Loud House characters would have looked like as such but there's this picture of Lincoln as a rabbit but it's a fan drawing http://spongefox.deviantart.com/art/Lincoln-Loud-the-Rabbit-612481044)

Getting back on topic, it was also funny that the eggs were mistaken for pearls. Too bad the octopus had to die and now her babies have, if they're still alive and can hatch out, have to grow up without her.

Now if this was a real episode, I'd have had to cover my ears or fast-forward through the burping part, although I'd rather hear burping than hear it come out the other end! (UGHHHHH!)

I'm happy this story had a happy ending, well almost happy ending. I'm happy the Loud kids made it back to land and got reunited with their parents. Too bad they had to be grounded, although I'm not sure if Lori and Luna should have been, they tried to stop the situation and tried to do what's right (or did I miss something?)

But good story. Hope you make more Loud House fanfics. And I'm not gonna nitpick this time.

If I ever copy and repost these on Fanfiction.net, I will be absolutely sure you get credit for it and I will mention you. I may change some of the story but I will be sure to give you credit for it.