Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-24200891-20170529040756

I reached 300 days of activity. 65 days and I have the badge that needes the biggest effort.

I don't have a request center because often a new fanfic idea just comes to my mind. Ideas come just out of nowhere. It's nice but troublesome to have such geyser of ideas. I note them all in upcomning fanfic folder.

Generally I find season 2 as weaker than season 1 because it has less funny comedy and characters are more jerkish, there are also more continuity errors. Only strength is focus on the other characters than Lincoln. Also I don't really like recycling morals.

Introducing new characters before earlier introduced ones are developed is a bad idea in my opinion.I mean in season 1 were introduced Carol, Lincoln's date and Magdalene. They had no development in season 2 where were introduced Dana, Becky, Tad, Joey. Generally they are one-dimensional flat characters. I simply wish them all to develop before introducing new characters. What do you think about it?

I attempt to write my very first rewrite but I feel I would need your help as the most experienced episode rewriter. I'll try to rewrite "Save the Date". Generally I'd try to remove Clyde, who was bigger problem than support, make Lori less psychotic and focus more on the titular date. The titular event lasted only 4 minutes from 11. 