User blog comment:Harvey Beaks Number 1 Fan/Shattered Innocecne (Continued)/@comment-26302585-20170506055435

Honestly, while I don't find it bad, it really kills the dramatic and serious tone the story had. And everyone talking in that sentence... that was just odd. I actually liked the tone Austin was going for, and to go from that to this is just... baffles me.

Also, I don't buy that he was in a bag for three weeks and is still alive. How is he still alive? If he was In a bag for that long he would die from either starvation or suffocation. It makes no logical sense. Was he let out and fed by his kidnapper from time to time? There's no explanation. I know it will be.