Thread:TheLoudPurist/@comment-30498740-20180529193524/@comment-29866170-20180602112125

I read your fanfic, and it was a pretty good first fanfic. I really didnt expect Lori and Lynn to bond like that (granted I was thinking due to a recent poll if the two did team up, it'd had to do with both of them enjoying a sport; even though I was also thinking that Lynn wouldn't be THAT into golf because I know her tendecy for more extreme activities). Lori's competitive drive also kind of reminded me of Selfie Improvement.

Good Job, overall!