Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-32807753-20171122161021

So I made this small shorfiction that has Leni as the antagonist. I'm kind of mixed on how it turned out as a lot of people say the way I made Leni an antagonist doesn't work from a story perspective. Seeing as how you're very experienced with writing fanfictions, I think you'd be the perfect one to to help me out with being a writer. Can offer me some criticism and advice for this?

http://theloudhouse.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:TheMaximumMatt/Shortfiction_-_Trash_the_Night_Away 