Thread:Harburton81/@comment-24200891-20161214142944

I liked your Alone on My Own because the pets were nice companions for Linc in time of loneliness. Relatively short but heartwarming.

Your nearest plan is the siblings at renessaince. Interesting that they will play mediviel knights and soldiers.

My nearest plan is Tango Santiago. L and R will dance. I wonder only is my idea for start isn't jerkish. The sisters have a party without Linc, when he finds out he invites himself and gets kicked out because he is party ruiner (Linc or Swim, Overnight Success). In retaliation he keeps his tango dancing trainings in secret and doesn't invite his sisters for his dance with Ronnie. How do you think is it mean?

I try to write shorter stories but problem is I like writting my thoughts and considerations. It because I watched lots of tv series where 90% of story is talking so I got used to slow tempo. 