User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 11)/@comment-32799780-20180220214647

My thoughts on all three stories.

1) Well, as far as self-inserts go, that wasn't too bad. Not that the bar for those types of stories are very high, but still.

2) The best story out of the bunch and its own author calls it "My First Fanfic, I Know its Really Bad"?? Jeez, and here I thought I had high standards for my own work.

3) (eye twitch) The grammar... The fic itself was alright, but that grammar..

Hilarious commentary as always. Favorite part was Lincoln asking my anyone would hold a petty grudge over Luna being grumpy with him in "Garage Banned." Not gonna lie, I laughed for like a minute straight.