User blog comment:Aartistboy714/One-Shot - Lincoln's Advantage/@comment-26302585-20170914031638

Okay. I know this is probably gonna sound rude, and I apologize, but...I think these one-shot's are absurd. Let's look at the parts so far

Part 1. Lincoln spanks Lori just because she pushed him off the couch...why? Why did he spank her? Only an insane or abusive person would do that.

Part 2. Lincoln threatens Lori with the paddle and takes her food. What the fugde?! Why would Lincoln do that

Part 3. Lincoln is bossing his sisters around. Where the heck is this going?!

Nothing about this story makes sense at all. Why is Lincoln acting like this? No, Lori pushing him of the couch is not a good reason for him to act this way. This came out of nowhere with no buildup.

I'm sorry, but so far, I think this little series is...unpleasant. I don't know if this is supposed to be funny or not, but I don't think this is funny at all. What's so funny about Lincoln being a jerk for no reason? What am I supposed to get from this? I mean, some fanfics are guilty of making Lincoln and other characters out of character, but this? I mean, wow.

(sigh) I'm sorry, man. I respect you as a person, and I'm not trying to be mean, but...I see nothing enjoyable about this. But I realize it's not over yet, so...maybe things will look up? Lynn Sr. noticed the whole thing, so that's gotta hint at something.