User blog comment:ColinMiller1989/I Meet The Louds/@comment-26302585-20170622164445

This was pretty weak, to be honest. First off, with the way you and Lincoln meet each other, you sound like a stalker. "I know and see everything". I'm pretty sure if you say that to someone, they'll think you're a creep. Also, saying your 21, then saying you have a crush on Lynn, who's 13 mind you, makes you look even more like a creep. Ever heard of pedophilia? Another thing. Why is everyone saying how old they are? What is the point? I have nothing else to say, other than the intruductions were rushed.

Overall, not a good story, but not the worst I've read.