User blog comment:AnimationFan15/Fanfiction - Whitewashed/@comment-26302585-20161206145911

Really good story. I imagine if the Loud parents were involved, the sisters would've been grounded. Lincoln probably would've been grounded too for using naughty words, but I think the sisters would've been grounded for longer because 1) they read his comic, even though they had no right to look at it, 2) they destroyed his hard work, and 3) and worst of all (to me, at least), they washed his mouth with soap and physically assulted him. My god, that must have been rough. I'd expect that from Lynn, Lori and Lola, but all 10 of them? I noticed in the sisters comic, they didn't include the part where they beat him, and in the "Dear Lincoln" part, while they apologized for destroying his comic and putting soap in his mouth, they didn't apologize for brutally beating him. Any chance you could add that?