User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 14)/@comment-30953185-20180315005504/@comment-30498740-20180315011015

@Thomper Well Luan had a point that most of your gifts were Thomas and it isn’t bad it’s just you could introduce something else you like. Not to mention it was becoming a bit repetitive. Also when were you friends with Mr. Grouse? Also were your were parents and your sister? They weren’t at the party since we never saw what they gave you, not to mention it felt you were giving the other characters and less important ones more focus than your own family.

Now that I read it, it doesn’t hold up. It isn’t bad, but not really good. I did find this better than the cut out and paste stories as those are just the same thing with one or two differences.