Thread:TMNT1987Dude/@comment-24200891-20160908075016

I see you're eager to see how it ends. However after reading what I wrote I'm disapointed with the story progress. In the original concept Lincoln was secretly helping both but when they discover it he received threat from Lynn and emotional blackmail from Luna. I realised it would make Luna a jerk and she would never blackmail emotionally so I decided to switch it on Lynn's annoying pride and lack of humbleness. I need to rewrite what I already wrote to make the story less messy. After suggesting to go on wrestling whole this fencing description seems to be needless waste. I still don't have a good idea for how would Lincoln support Luna. If Linc is going to support Luna over Lynn then this begging for forgiveness seems misplaced. Any suggestions for fixes?

I see you write Cold Logic and I'll read it when I have time. By the way did you know that Competing Sisters Helpful Brother is a reference to Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon? 