Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-32999728-20180531201501/@comment-32999728-20180602232050

Okay then. He considered Raw Deal rewrite better because (I'm using his words): it shows how damaging Lucy's fortune cards can be, where as in the actual episode the person who seems remotely concerned for the cards is Lincoln, everyone else doesn't seem worried about Lincoln possibly dying which pisses me off. Lucy especially should be worried since this is her fault as well, yet the episode seems to pit no blame on Lucy and all of the blame on Lincoln, as it expects the viewer to see Lincoln learning a lesson and not her since she clearly did "nothing wrong". The sisters jerkass tendencies were amped up in the rewrite to show how they were acting was mean and cruel, unlike in the original where they were being jerkass' yet it goes unnoticed and they don't feel bad at all for how they acted. In the rewrite, they at least made up to Lincoln with how they acted to show that they feel sorry for turning Lincoln's fear of dying from the cards into a joke.