Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20170711150212/@comment-24200891-20170910191923

Sorry but not good. I;ll tell you what's my plan for the story. Luna hangs out with Sam a lot. This makes Tabby jealous, she think Sam hogs her friend. She finds the British guy to "befriend" Sam, so Luna would be only for Tabby. Problem is the story sounds predictible, because everyone will see Luna gets devastated and Tabby feels sorry for what she did.