User blog:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Louds of the Renaissance

My thirtieth fanfic. Commentary is acceptable, plus, AnimationFan15 gets credit for the title.

Plot
(It shows Lincoln's school, he and all of his classmates are lined up in the auditorium, trying out for a play)

LINCOLN: You may be wondering why I'm trying out for the school play? I love the Renaissance Era, not those old paintings and sculptures. I'm talking about good ol' knights, kings, and queens.

(Their drama teacher, Mrs. Crowley, walk to the stage)

MRS. CROWLEY: Alright, class, you're trying out for the school play. - Mrs. Crowley said - Bring your A game on, and act like a true king.

LINCOLN: (excited) I'm gonna ace these tryouts. - Lincoln said, confident

ONE WEEK LATER

(Lincoln and his classmates are gathered around a bulletin board)

LINCOLN: Here we go! - Lincoln said, determined

(Lincoln looked at the list of students who made the tryouts; Unfortunately, he'd didn't made the cut, making him depressed; Later, Lincoln is walking home with Lana, Lola, and Lucy)

LOLA: So, Lincoln, you made the tryouts? - Lola ask

LINCOLN: No, I didn't. - Lincoln said sadly

LANA: Dang, I'm sorry about that, Lincoln. - Lana consoles

LINCOLN: It's okay, Lana. - Lincoln said - I been waiting six months for this play, I can't believe I didn't get in, I wanted to be the prince.

(The four siblings reach their house)

LUCY: Don't worry, Lincoln. - Lucy said - It would've been better if you were an executioner.

(Lincoln rolls his eyes and the four walk into the house, Lori, Luan, Luna, Leni, Lynn, Lily, and Lisa are on the couch)

LUNA: Hey, dudes. - Luna greeted - How was school?

LANA: (proud) got an A+ on my test. - Lana said

LOLA: (deadpanned) I got a C- on my test. - Lola said

LORI: How was yours, Lucy? - Lori ask

LUCY: I got a B on my poems. - Lucy said - You wanna hear it?

(Lori shakes her head for no, making Lucy sad)

LUCY: Sigh. - Lucy lamented

LENI: How was yours, Linky? - Leni ask

LINCOLN: (crestfallen) I didn't made the tryouts for the school play. - Lincoln said sadly

LYNN: Ah, sorry, bro. - Lynn said

LINCOLN: I was the prince for 4 years, now, the 5th year I won't. - Lincoln said sadly

(He walk upstairs to his room, depressed, the girls exchange frowns to each other, feeling bad for Lincoln; Later, the sisters are in Lori's and Leni's room, they're having a meeting)

LORI: Girls, you may know why l'm assemble all of you here. - Lori says

LUNA: Lincoln didn't made it in his play. - Luna mentioned

LYNN: This play was made for him... - Lynn stated

LUCY: And, unfortunately, he didn't made it in. - Lucy finished

(Luan think of something, and she an idea)

LENI: You got an idea, Luan? - Leni ask?

LUAN: Well, since Lincoln can't bring himself to the Renaissance, how about we can the Renaissance to him? - Luan gestures

LOLA: What do you mean? - Lola ask

(Luan pulls out a flyer for a Renaissance Fair, Lori takes it and look at it)

LORI: A Renaissance Fair? - Lori says - That's perfect, Luan!

LANA: Yeah! We can take him there to cheer him up! - Lana said happily

LUAN: Thanks, I hope this will cheer up Lincoln. - Luan said

THE NEXT DAY

(Lincoln is in his room reading comics in boredom, the girls come in their room)

LUNA: Hey, dude. - Luna said - Get your things ready, we're gonna take you somewhere.

LINCOLN: Where? - Lincoln ask

(Luan gives him the flyer for the Renaissance Fair, he examines it)

LINCOLN: A Renaissance Fair? - Lincoln said confused

LENI: We felt bad since you didn't made it in your play, so that was all of us are gonna do! - Leni said nicely

LINCOLN: Wow! Thanks, guys! - Lincoln happily accepted - That's so thoughtful!

LORI: C'mon, let's find some costumes to wear. - Lori says

(Later, the siblings are changing into costumes from the Renaissance, Luan was the first to come out, she's a jester, Lily and Lori come out, they're dressed as maidens)

LUAN: You guys look great in those maiden costumes. - Luan said

LORI: Thanks, nice jester costume. - Lori says

(Lucy comes out, dressed as an executioner, everyone steps back from Lucy at least twice, Lisa comes out)

LISA: (as a sorcerer) Who want's to test my potion? - Lisa ask

(Everyone shake their heads for no, Lola comes out as a princess and Lana comes out as a blacksmith)

LORI: Cool costumes, girls. - Lori said nicely

LOLA AND LANA: Thanks, Lori. - Lori said

(Lynn comes out, dressed as an old warrior, she carries a mace)

LANA: Whoa, where you get a mace, Lynn? - Lana ask

LYNN: I got my ways, Lana. - Lynn says

LORI: Dad's credit card? - Lori sask

LYNN: Guilty as charged. - Lynn admitted

(Luna comes out, as a piper, she plays a lute, everyone claps to Luna)

LUAN: Nice playing, and nice costume. - Luan complimented

LUNA: Thanks, we're just waiting on Leni and Lincoln. - Luna said

(Lori knocks on Lincoln's door)

LINCOLN: Almost ready. - Lincoln announced

LORI: C'mon out, little bro. - Lori says

(Lincoln comes out, wearing a prince's costume and he's holding a staff, everyone looked amazed at Lincoln's costume)

LORI: Whoa, you look amazing, Lincoln. - Lori said nicely

LOLA: Even, I'm envious. - Lola said - You look so handsome, Lincoln.

(Everyone agreed to that, Lincoln is flattered)

LINCOLN: Thank you, girls. - Lincoln said - Now, there's Leni.

(Leni comes out, wearing a princess gown, everyone looks amazed at Leni's costume)

LINCOLN: Whoa, you look beautiful, Leni. - Lincoln said nicely

LENI: Thanks, little bro, love your prince's costume. - Leni said - You look adorable.

LISA: C'mon, lets go to the Renaissance Fair. - Lisa said

(Later, Lori is driving Vanzilla to the Renaissance Fair)

LINCOLN: Oh, man, this is gonna be so much fun. - Lincoln said eagerly

LYNN: You know it. - Lynn happily agreed - I'm totally gonna joust some people.

(They arrived at the Renaissance Fair, they walk inside, they're jesters juggling, sorcerers mixing up potions, joust matches, etc.)

LINCOLN: Ah, the good ol' Renaissance Fair, the ol' 15th Century. - Lincoln said nicely

LISA: Uh huh, I'm totally gonna test out these potions. - Lisa said

LYNN: So, Lincoln, what you wanna do first? - Lynn ask

LINCOLN: Hmm, it's so hard to choose. - Lincoln said - They're many activites to choose from.

LORI: How about each of us will take Lincoln and show him how the Renaissance is about. - Lori said

(Everyone agreed to that)

LINCOLN: Okay, I see their this is going. - Lincoln said - Alright, I'll do it, who's first?

LANA: Me first! Me first! - Lana said

(Lana takes Lincoln's hand and they run off, in a booth, Lana and Lincoln are with a blacksmith)

LANA: Alright, being a blacksmith can give you your perks, they crafted the sword from steel, then they cool the metal with magma to form it, and here's a sword. - Lana explained

(Lana pulls out a small dagger and Lincoln pulls out a sword and they fight, Lana's dagger was flying offscreen)

PERSON: Ow, my eye! - someone yelled

(They frantically zoom away, to avoid being caught; Later, Luna is playing a lute, while Lincoln is playing a viola)

LINCOLN: You're right, Luna. - Lincoln said - These old instruments are fun.

LUNA: Thanks, dude. - Luna said - They played many instruments by musicians in medivial times, they played the viola, madolin, pan flute, and dulcimer.

LINCOLN: Huh, I'm learning so much about these instruments. - Lincoln said - You wanna play some more?

LUNA: Sure, little bro. - Luna said

(They resume to play their instruments, gatherers looked and danced to their music)

TO BE CONTINUED