User blog:DukeyDukeyDoo/"Oh, Brother? Where Art Loud?" Story Plot (Act 1)

Just to help you all understand more about my story request, I will be posting some Story Plots to show you all how the story turns out. If anything T-rated/MA/+18-related shows up, I'll post a warning to let you know ahead.

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"Oh Brother, Where Art Loud?" Part 1
The story starts similar to that of YoshiRocker13's story, "Trustworthy", where Lincoln explains to the audience about how his sisters would give him a hard time on certain things. But an important event was happening today that would make all of his problems be put to rest.

Throughout the day, Lincoln's sisters would give Lincoln a hard time. (How that happens if up to your imaginations) It happens like this through most of the day, until a humiliating incident "breaks the straw on the donkey's back". (This is also up to your imaginations).

At the end of the day, Lincoln snaps in front of all of his sisters and blames them for everything that happened today and in the past. In fact, he is so angry and riled up, that before he goes to his room, his final words were: '"YOU GIRLS ARE THE MOST UNAPPRECIATIVE, WORST SISTERS I HAD! I WISH I ONLY HAD 1 SISTER WHO WOULD TREAT ME FAIRLY!!!!" 'before slamming the door.

In his room, Lincoln did some hard thinking about what had happened today and how he had blamed it out on his sisters. He decided that if his sisters were to keep humiliating and neglecting him this way, then... maybe it's time he found himself a new family that would appreciate him. So after packing up some of his things and writing his good-bye message to his family, Lincoln snuck out of the house, late at night and ran away from The Loud House, vowing never to return.

While on the search for a new home as well as a new family to live with, Lincoln was starting to get tired and he wasn't sure if he could make it through the night. So, finding a bus stop bench, Lincoln decided to spend the night before resuming his search in the morning.

But meanwhile, heading his way while driving in her new car was Lori Loud's High School Arch Enemy and Homecoming Queen, Carol Pingrey. Carol was bragging about how she beaten Lori at being the best of things. Suddenly, she saw a familiar looking boy trying to set up a place to sleep for the night. She pulls up to him and realizes that the boy she saw was none other than Lincoln Loud. She first asks him what he was doing so far from him home and why he was making camp at a bus stop?

Lincoln told Carol how his day went and what had happened up to this point of the story. But then Carol heard Lincoln said something that popped into her head: "If I only had one sister, just one perfect sister, whether she's big or little, who wouldn't make me feel so neglected and would treat me better than anyone else, I would think of her as the best sister anyone would have."

Those very words: "The Best Sister Anyone Would Have" gave Carol a sneaky, sinister idea: If Lincoln trying to find a new sister, then maybe she could beat Lori at being the Best Big Sister.

So, deciding to earn his trust, Carol proposes that Lincoln should stay at her place for a while, since her parents are out of town for a while. She offers him a warm bed and living arrangements until he thinks he's good and ready to move on.

Lincoln, unaware of Carol's trickery, takes up her offer and decides to go with Carol. So after packing up his things into her car, Lincoln rode with Carol as she drove him to her house.

Later that night, after setting up some living arrangements in a spare bedroom, Lincoln was all set for bed. Carol prepped up everything to his liking: A comfy bed with all the soft, cozy, pillows and blankets. And right next to his bed, was a glass of warm milk with a bendy straw. Lincoln was surprised that Carol did this for him and thanked her for all she did.

As Lincoln got into bed and drank the warm milk, Carol told Lincoln that if there's anything that he wants, she would always be there to tend to his every need. Lincoln was happy that Carol would be there for him and he also apologized to her about the time he was going to use her to replace Lori in a family photo, but somehow Carol told him that it was all in the past and she also told him that this would be the beginning of a wonder new life for Lincoln she gave him a kiss on the cheek for a good night's sleep.

When Carol turned off the light and left the room quietly, Lincoln decided to tell the audience about how the way Carol treated him. He says that Carol may not be such a bad person after all and that maybe Lori was wrong about Carol being a selfish. As he started to fall asleep, he groggily says that maybe this could be the start of a wonderful new life for him.

Outside of his bedroom, leaning against the door, Carol had a evil look on her face as a sinister smile slowly formed in her mouth.

"That's what HE thinks." Carol tells the audience in a sinister, seductive tone, following her statement with an evil, sexy chuckle.

TO BE CONTINUED...

And that's the first story plot of the first part of "Oh Brother, Where Art Loud?".

What do you guys think? It doesn't look too bad, right? Let me know your reactions in the comments below.