Thread:TMNT1987Dude/@comment-24200891-20170104085946

Sometimes before I write my fanfics I need to discuss if my ideas have proper level of dignity. Here is another one.

In MelanchoLinc Lincoln becomes an emo for reasons silimar to ones he had a nightmare in my 13th fanfic. Here however he doesn't kill or hurt anybody but simply expresses his sadness by monologues and drawings. II once was an emo because I and my parents moved to another house after I graduated to new school. All was new and alien to me, I needed lot of time to adjust to this. I was closed and isolated. I already made a picture for this upcoming fanfic. I began to wonder if he doesn't become a jerk if I write that he says things like "I have 10 living reasons to be depressed", "I don't belong here as I'm not a fun-loving girl who can be proud of own accomplishments", "Living in 10 shades equals death to me", "You are all special when I am so avarage all ignore me like I were invisible", "Because I am nothing like Loud sisters I am not Loud", "You can't possibly comprahend me because you are special and I never was", "I live in a world I can't accomplish anything and that's why I'm ignored so what's wrong in becoming invisible?" "Lobo Solo, that's who I really am". In this form Lincoln feels overshadowed by more successful sisters and he gave up trying to be special like them, he's just apathetic and depressed like a typical emo. His expressive monologues aren't supposed to make him feel better but to make others feel worse. Same purpose have blues songs.

I need to ask you what would you find there so wrong it shouldn't appear in my future fanfic? 