Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20161008174318/@comment-24200891-20161018213104

In my fanfic Leopold was afraid of Lucy with covered eyes and he was also afraid of Lana's pets. To him all what's living must have eyes and all what's not human is scary for him. In your fanfic he seems to overcome fear of Lucy and pets. Mr Coconut spooked Leo because it's not human and moves. Unlike Lily Leo is afraid of Lisa's experiments. Because of Lisa's chemicals Lily's farts are toxic. Lincoln could tell Lisa something like "your chemicals already mutated poor Lily's digestive system, I won't let you infect another baby!".

Your fanfic keeps getting better.