User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Breakdown on the Beach/@comment-32318818-20180113022009

This is pretty dang good man, the only flaw is that the family seems to have more of an argument on their part, more than Lincoln does on his part, and it really should be kinda equally sized/balanced argument. Plus, that joke ain't funny, like, at all. To be honest tho, all the fanfics about this episode always end up giving me a headache, so I don't why I even read this story. But still, good job!