Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-31541999-20170719065214/@comment-31541999-20170726012328

CircularBoat742 wrote: Aartistboy714 wrote: Great! But erase the these two:

Wretched: There is no more Lincoln! Now get out!!

(Before the two knew, they were pushed out of his room and trip to the ground with the family watching in concerned).

(Before Lori could finish, her shirt along with Lola's pageant dress were pulled very harshly by Wretched. He looks at them with an intimidating glare, while they started shaking nervously.)

Wretched: (Very venomously) Listen to me you two bossy, spoiled and condescending brats! I don't care if you two are high authorities around here, I'm not following anymore orders from you two ever again! (To Lori) You're just a grumpy, ill-tempered, condescending and control freak jerk who doesn't do anything all day, but focuses on her phone and chatters all about her moments about her boyfriend! You call me a twerp, threatened to turn me into a human pretzel, you turned our house into a totalitarian state and turned our lives into a makeshift prison, you made fun of my costume, accused me as the toilet clogger and gave me an atomic wedgie, you and the others refused to help me out when I was doing my part for the polar bear challenge, and almost ruined my reputation at school, you used me as footstool, you tried to threatened me to choose your side, give you the sweet spot, hand over the quarter I found, hurt me unless to go on a double date with the Santiagos, just because I simply insulted your boyfriend's little sister, and to give you the cereal so you could trade it for something else, you forced me to go with you to stop the Santiagos from moving away here, you and the others wouldn't stop bothering my tutor, you and Lola here kicked me out of Vanzilla, just because I told Lisa to change herself, and you kicked us all out, so we wouldn't "ruin" your so-called "sophisticated" party! You're always thinking of yourself being the first or the oldest around here, but you are nothing but a psychotic, love-obsessed, arrogant, crabby and selfish tyrant, who acts without thinking and comes up with malicious plans against all of us for your petty needs!

Your turn, you be a whimpering Lori, who was almost about to cry. Done! Thanks! And I'm sorry if I was too controlling or something.