User blog comment:FirstDrellSpectre/Fanfiction - Coach Lynn/@comment-24669562-20160709194931/@comment-24200891-20160709205402

I just corrected my mistakes. Lynn was ashamed of Lincoln. What master would like to be associated with a clumsy relative? She didn't want to be ridiculed because of Lincoln so she tried to change him so nobody could have a reason to laugh from her. Britanny is the antagonist of this fanfic. Britanny was mean to Lynn because she no longer needed to hide her true face. She  used Lynn's pride to manipulate her because she had enough of being always the second best. Lincoln means nothing to her but she could use him to get rid of Lynn. That's how she deals with her personal rivals. Because Lynn trained Lincoln with such determination, she had no time to train herself. That's why she was removed from her team. Moral of this story is to not make decisions based on pride or reckless indignations. I considered to make Lincoln win his match but losing respect of his team because he played solo. But that would be too dark. Lincoln was supposed to learn to not tolerate his flaws so carelessly and Lynn was supposed to learn that she can't change anybody by force and that Britanny isn't her friend. She doesn't deserve her respect due to her dishonesty.

I am not registred on fanfiction.net, so I didn't put it there. You are free to add the story to   fanfiction.net,  but I wish to remain recognised as the author. That's my work after all, I spend some hours writting it, considering chain of events, etc.