User blog comment:Dragonzako/Fanfic: Pet Business/@comment-32173189-20180908044309

Good fic, loved some of the meta references like Lana saying that "Conflicts like this are normally solved off screen." and the one near the end about having to distract Mr. Grouse while someone finds his cat. The only thing I can suggest is proof reading for grammer errors for example there were a few extra I's in some sentences and when Lincoln said "Seriously, if the next person I meet I say go jump in a lake. Would they do it?", I would have written it as "Seriously, if I told the next person I see to go jump in a lake, would they do it?". But other than that good job.