Thread:Lemonade24/@comment-24200891-20161203142409/@comment-24200891-20170417210435

Because you described in details what you enjoyed there. I also enjoyed how Lincoln interacted with Marie, Sophie and Zoe, they are interesting OCs. I was glad Luna finally opened her eyes. Treating Lincoln as a lucky charm rather than human is the hardest theme used in all sequel of this episode. The biggest problem with this ep is that Lynn learned absolutelly nothing and felt no remorse. She remained a static character, same annoying and immature bully. I liked how you described Lincoln's wrath. I am surprised he didn't get furious and didn't attack her in blind rage in the actual episode. I would do this in his position.

In my sequel I tried to show Lynn her mistakes in a smart way and I wanted Lincoln to express his anger, I am suprised he was disapointed instead of furious in the show. I also wanted someone to call the parents for their abuses, I thought only Albert could do this. In real life they would be arrested for kicking their kid out the house and forcing him to homlessness. By writing this story I released my frustration caused by this infamous episode.