User blog comment:Lucasthewikiguy13/Come Sale Away: Dark Alternate Ending/@comment-26302585-20180105041301

There's one plot hole.

[Then he begins to hear noises from inside the house as a bunch of fun, him being the curious guy he is, "and really since he thought they made a lot of money and he might've wanted to rob them," saw them all dancing very crineworthy.]

How did he see the family dancing? Did he look through a window? He couldn't have just opened the door, but you can't enter someone's house without knocking. You didn't say how he saw them. You have to pay attention to detail when writting a story, Lucas.