User blog comment:LoudFanWolf/No Fighting Matter/@comment-30498740-20180821165851

So the intense arugument with Derek’s mother is just ignored and forgotten and never followed up? Also Derek could have gotten angry slowly at Luan as she kept trying to tell jokes to him and he blows then. Here it went way too fast with not much build up and also Derek got a lot of “praising words”. These aren’t always bad, but it’s best not to overdo it with the “caring boyfriend” being said over 5 times. Final thoughts, I didn’t like it that much, but you did try which is always good.