User blog comment:1jeffyfan/WHAT AM I DOING WRONG!!!/@comment-26302585-20171017022900

Since Thomperfan though I should tell you why I didn't like it, I'll do that right now.

The characters. Everyone in the fic is a both a complete idiot and unlikable. They really believed that Lincoln wrote a letter saying that he messed up the couch and that he actually did it. Okay, they are not stupid, they know better than that. You made the characters stupid, and not in a funny or enjoyable way. Now for the unlikable part. Why would Lana want to frame Lincoln? I'm pretty sure she's better than that. And really? Lynn tackles Lincoln for messing up the couch, which he didn't do? How is that funny? And when Lincoln tries to get revenge, he gets caught and gets tackled again. And I guess Lola and Lana got their comeuppance at the end when Lynn tackled them... even though Lincoln still got punushed for nothing. Was this fic supposed to be funny? Because nothing in it made me laugh.

Also, what was a coke doing near the couch in the first place? Whose coke was it? Why did they leave it near the couch?

In short, I find your fic to be a non-sensical, mean-spirited... whats the word I'm looking for for?

Anyway, I hope this was a decent answer.