Thread:Thomperfan/@comment-32318818-20180527025429/@comment-30953185-20180602162154

So, what do you think of this part?

(It starts out with Derek walking over to the Loud House. He opens the door and sees that the Loud Family are working on something.)

Derek: Hey guys, what are you doi-(he trips on something) WHOA!

(he trips and knocks into the Louds and they break the thing they were working on.)

Lynn Sr.: (gasps) NOOOOOOOOOO!

Lincoln: (Angry) Derek, what did you do?!

Derek: (nervously) Um, I don’t know.

Lori: (angry) You literally messed up our project!

Derek: W-what was it?

Rita: That was a project for Pop-Pop’s birthday in a few weeks!

Lynn: It took us eight months to finish that!

Derek: Oh, guys, i had no idea! I’m sorry!

Lola: Sorry won’t fix it!

Derek: Y-You’re right. I-I’ll just do something else to fix it-

Loud Family: NO!!!!

Luan: You’ve helped quite enough already!

Derek: But, I didn’t help at all.

Luan: Exactly!

Lucy: If it wasn’t for you, we wouldn’t be having to take car of this in the first place.

Lana: Why do you keep coming here anyway?!

Derek: Uh, because you guys let me.

Lola: Well, then we won’t let you! In fact we DISinvite you from coming here!

Luna: Yeah, dude! We would be better off if you never came to this house at all!

Lori: Now get out of here!

(The Louds push Derek out and slam the door.)

Derek: (teary-eyed) The-The-The Loud family d-d-doesn’t like me anymore!

(Derek runs back home crying.)