User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Rea-Loud-ty/@comment-26901681-20161119055705

You did a great job creating unique yet troubling scenarios for each character after they became popular. I am most impressed with how Leni's case was handled, something about her snapping at the rich girls was so satisfying. It was a long fan fiction but every line felt like it should be included, making it so the story never felt like it was dragging on (to me at least).