User blog comment:Dragonzako/Thoughts on Fanfic Writers/@comment-30953185-20180113175032/@comment-30498740-20180113180715

Make scolding more better? In your Sounds of Silence you could have told all of the siblings off the sisters for pulling the prank despite they were trying to teach Linc a lesson and Lincoln for ignoring them on purpose and doing it longer than he needed to. Also you could have lessened the scolding to that both parties are at fault and they should have communicated better for instance Linc should have told his sisters he wants free time for himself and the sisters would probably give it to him. Linc is just as guilty as his sisters in that episode, but he was asking for it.