User blog comment:Bubblegum25217/lori's lullaby/@comment-29928741-20170524234540/@comment-29928741-20170525103949

(Sighs) I'm gonna have to be honest with you, kid. No! I do not like it, but let me explain why...

1. All this plot has is just Lori singing a lullaby to you with no explanation. I mean, it could've been longer like when Lori sang it to Lily, and then the younger sisters beg her to sing it to them or something like that, but nope! All I get is this. Just Lori singing the lullaby to you when you got to bed. I mean, would she even know you?

2. There are some capitalization errors that you somehow didn't bother to fix.

Sorry if I hurt your feelings kid, but I had to say it.