User blog comment:Marv argon/The Mafia Loud: Lucky Lincoln/@comment-24200891-20170119205324

I like the story. It was standard but still interesting. I liked how Lori and Luna greeted Lincoln so warmly. It was a good idea to just put 2 of them. I was surprised by identity of Death Hook. Lincoln dreams about being a detective so this fits him. He was good at improvizing faking death of Ronnie Anne. This is the best Alternate Universe Loud House story I;ve read. Good job.