Thread:AndrewBrauer/@comment-24200891-20170529073720/@comment-24200891-20170530050613

Thanks for agreement. I'll start writing it when I'm done with Bro in the Band. For now we can discuss plot elements. First I'd remove Clyde from the restaurant, so Lincoln doesn't inform him about Lori. He can be more discreet and tell him only about Ronnie Anne or don't talk to him at all. What's better reducing or removing? Lori's psychotic and violent overreaction is what most of viewers criticized. How would you suggest toning it down?