Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31563773-20170926133158/@comment-32202721-20170926141253

Hmm... when you put it that way, I guess "fix fic" wouldn't really be the right term to describe them.

And yeah, I finished reading it. I thought it was... okay.

On one hand, it was interesting to see such an intense fic based around an episode that most people either like or don't care about, and it makes a pretty compelling case for the argument that the episode could have gone horribly wrong if just one detail was nudged out of place.

On the other hand, it's also based on the premise that Lincoln and Ronnie Anne are in a committed relationship. And while I may have bought that a few months prior, by the time the fic was published there was just too much evidence to the contrary. In "Relative Chaos", both of them vehemently deny being boyfriend and girlfriend, and after she hugs him, Lincoln remarks that it was the first time she ever did.

So I couldn't really sympathize with her after she blew up at Lincoln in the first chapter. Yes, it's strongly implied that she's romantically interested in Lincoln, and she'd probably be hurt and upset to see Lincoln at the dance with four other girls, but I don't think it'd merit her turning into the flying rage machine that she did.

I may do a full review of it once I have the time.