Thread:BigFanofEntertainment/@comment-30953185-20170325225153/@comment-26302585-20170326001635

So I looked at the updated and It's pretty nice. A great way of showing that they are done with the protocol.

However, there is one more thing I think could be added to the story. I'm not saying you should add it, you don't have to if you don't want to, but hear me out. I think Nolan maybe could talk some sense into Lynn Sr. and Rita for not being responsible parents. This is what he could say.

(before Nolan tells the girls he will leave, Lynn Sr. and Rita come out their room to see if everything is alright).

Nolan: (to the Loud parents) "And you two. How could you let things get out of control? You're the parents for crying out loud! You're supposed to step in when thing get out of control with your children! Instead, you dine with your arguing daughters separately and hide. What kind of parents would do that?! If that wasn't enough, you let the girls keep Lincoln from eating, using the bathroom, kick him out of his room and take his things without asking! The girls were taking over Lincoln's life and you, the parents, did nothing and just let it happen.

(the Loud parents have horrified looks on their faces)

Rita: "You're right. What were we thinking?"

Lynn Sr.: "We were being horrible parents."

And then after the sisters apologize to Lincoln, the parents apologize to him too.

What do you think? Again, if you don't want to add it, that's fine, I just think Lynn Sr. and Rita need some sense talked into them too.