User blog comment:Thomperfan/Tripped! (my version)/@comment-32173189-20180713050706/@comment-32173189-20180713055607

Because these are the basic plot holes that arise from just copying and pasting the script and not thinking about the actual consequences that arise from adding a character that doesn't do much to deviate the story and avoids any real consequences due to fact that the episode has already happened and that the ending is predetermined making it a sort of Deus ex machina. Also if you think this is bad, wait till your usual critics read this, I'm pretty sure their critique will be more in-depth and critical than mine. Also you can't expect every review to be positive, when you post a fanfic it's fair game to be critical of it and point out it's problems to better improve it. You can't just explain away a problem by saying "this character said it's okay" or "I wrote them to be fine with it".