User blog:CircularBoat742/Fanfiction - Manor-Terror Remake

''One night, Lincoln just finished watching his favorate show, ARRGH! ''

Lincoln: (talking to viewers) Wow! That was an episode to watch! So much happened! The two guys went into this haunted manor nearby where I live! They saw so much, like a little girl in the basement and bloody skeletons in the halls! It was the best episode yet! I plan to hunt these ghost down in that manor tonight!

Lori: Good luck twerp! Like you're gonna find anything in that old manor!

All of his sister starts to laugh at him.

Lincoln: (talking to viewers) Forgot to mention this: They don't believe in ghost.....except for Lucy.

Lucy: Well, nice try finding one. You can't just go out and call names!

Lincoln: Well, i'm gonna try anyways, because I can.

Lola: No, you're gonna try because you believe in all of this fake stuff!

Lincoln: What do you explain the show then?

Lynn: That's all fake! They use props and animation in order for it to look real! Use your brain!

Lincoln: Can't you guys at least be nice for once?

Lori: Let me think about it...........nope!

They all start laughing at him once again, which upsets him

Lincoln: (angry) Whatever guys! Believe in what you believe in, because i'm gonna believe what i'm gonna believe in! I'm gonna go to that haunted manor and see if I can find anything myself!

Lana: I bet you're gonna find fake blood!

Luan: Or cloths for a "ghost"!

Lori: Or some cheap skeleton props!

They all start laughing once again

Lincoln: (angry) Whatever guys! I'm going out and as a matter of fact, i'm gonna get it all on camera, so I can prove to you that it's all real!

Lynn: Well have fun trying! Also, don't be surprised that in the future, people won't apply you for a ghost hunter!

''Lincoln grabs his stuff and leaves the house while his sisters laugh at him. ''

Lori: What a nerd!

Lynn: Thinking he could find a ghost!

Lisa: It scientifically proven that ghost don't exist, so he's just going out there wasting his time!

Lola: Let him! He has nothing to prove anyways!

Lincoln is walking down the street, talking to himself

Lincoln: (to himself) Why can't they just keep to theirselves? I never do that to them, so why to me? It's messed up!

Lincoln then turns into the forest and clears the treelining and finds an old, busted manor, the same one from the show.

Lincoln: Ah, i'm here! Time to explore the mystery!

Lincoln walks up toward the front door and as he expects, it's jammed

Lincoln: Just like the show, it's jammed. Now if I remember correctly, there should be an open window that the two guys entered through.

''Lincoln looks around and after a while, he finds the same open window. He climbs in and turns on his camera and flashlight.''

Lincoln: Time to prove my sisters wrong!

''Lincoln starts searching around and doesn't find much. That is until he enters the first bedroom. There, he finds an old photo''

Lincoln: Ah, the photo from the episode! It shows the little girl with her parents, but her parent's faces are scratched out. On the back, it says "looking for me?"

Lincoln then realized something odd

Lincoln: Wait, that message was never there in the episode. That's odd. Whatever, time to search some more.

''Lincoln continues to search around more and doesn't find much. He then decides to search upstairs for more clues.''

Lincoln: Well, there's nothing else down here, so time to continue upstairs.

''As he heads upstairs, he realizes something. Every step he touches, he hears something muffled''

Lincoln: What the? Let me listen.

He listens in to only hear muffled screams from the steps

Lincoln: (nervous) Wait, that wasn't in the episode either! This is starting to get creepy. I gotta keep moving though.

''He finally reaches the top of the steps and he instantly gets an eerie vibe. He then starts to search around and the first thing he comes across is a bloody knife, laying on the floor.''

Lincoln: Woah! A bloody knife? That's something!

''Lincoln then comes across a drawing, and it gives him the chills. It shows the little girl once again holding the bloody knife while standing near her parent's graves.''

Lincoln: My god! This is getting knew to me. Everything is! From the message to the muffled screams, this is new too! I don't know if I want to continue.

''Lincoln takes a moment to think, but he decides to keep going anyways. He searches the other rooms and start to see more disturbing drawings. One such drawing showed an up close picture of the little girl with no eyes and something pouring out of her mouth and her eye sockets. The last room Lincoln reaches is the bathroom''

Lincoln: (nervous) Alright, this is the final room on this floor. I need to see if there's anything left. I already found alot of drawings.

''Lincoln searches around and finds another photo. This photo shows the little girl at some sort of funeral. While everyone was crying and looking depressed, she had an evil smile on her.''

Lincoln: I would assume this is......the parent's funeral....

''Lincoln then turns around and looks at the mirror and everything in his body stops. The only thing he sees in front of him is another message, but this one took Lincoln by surprised and terrifies him.''

Lincoln: (terrified) W-What? It r-reads "Welcome Lincoln Loud. You should've never came here"

''When Lincoln was finally able to turn around, he saw the little girl, smiling at him. Lincoln screamed and bolted for the stairs, not caring how much noise he was making. He headed for the window, but before he reached it, it closed on its own and wasn't able to open it. In the act of desperation, he tried breaking it, but he couldn't do that as well,''

Lincoln: (emotional) No.....no no! This can't be! I have to find a way out! I have to!

''He tries to run in a different direction, but the little girl stayed in front of him, no matter what. He then noticed the souls of the parents surronding him as well. The spirits start pinning him against the wall, while Lincoln desperately looked for a way out of this. He then starts to calm down, realizing there's no way out. He sits against the wall and tears start to fall from his eyes.''

Lincoln: (Teary eyes, talking to camera) Well, I guess this is it. I-If my sisters ever find this footage........I just wanna tell you guys how much I love you guys....

He then puts the camera down and begins to accept his fate....

Meanwhile
At the Loud House, The sisters are all on the Living Room couch when they start to feel down.

Lynn: You know guys, as much as thoses things Lincoln were saying earlier sounded weird, he was still following his imagination and we just made fun of him for that.

Lori: And he's right about him believing in himself, because he has the right to. Of course, we had to come along and make it worse.

Lola: Why do we do this to him? He never does this to us, so why does he deserve this?

Leni: I don't know, but I do know one thing, once he gets home, i'm apologizing to him

Lana: Same.

Something then rings in Luna's head, which alerts her

Luna: (nervous) Wait, what time is it?

Lori: It's midnight

Luna: Dudes, Lincoln has been gone since 10:00! He's never out this late unless he contacts us!

This alerts the other sisters, which realize the same thing.

Lynn: Luna's right! What if he's in danger right now?!

Lori: What if he's lost?!

Luna: We gotta find him!

Luan: He said that he was at this haunted manor!

This rings another bell in the sisters

Lynn: Wait, Lincoln never stays out this late and he's at a haunted manor....

Lori: (gasp) What if there's literally someone in that manor doing something to Lincoln?

Luna: We gotta go now!

''They all bolt out of the house and run down the street. In 5 minutes, they find the forest where the manor is located.''

Lori: Alright, everyone shout for Lincoln!

Sisters: On it!

In the manor
''Lincoln is in the manor, crying in his hands. Around him are spirits of a little girl and her parents, who are preventing him from leaving his spot. Lincoln is thinking to himself''

Lincoln: (in his head) I'm so stupid! I decide to go to this haunted manor late at night and try to search the place. Now, I can't get out and I can't even move! The worst part is that no one can help me. No one know i'm in danger, so i'm doomed here for the rest of my life. I gotta face it......i'm gonna die

''He then started to cry harder and closes his eyes, but then he hear some commotion. He opens his eyes for a better listen and realize it's his sisters, calling for him. He looks out the window and sees them searching for him. As hard as he could, he bangs on the window, trying to get their attention''

Lincoln: GUYS, OVER HERE! HELP ME!!!!

''Luna then hears the banging and sees Lincoln in the window. ''

Luna: Dudes, over here! Lincoln's in there!

''They all head to the window and try to open it. Lincoln then starts to shout at them''

Lincoln: GUYS, I'M TRAPPED IN HERE, I CAN'T GET OUT! I'M SURROUNDED BY SPIRITS AND THEY'RE TRYING TO GET M-

''The sisters then watch in horror as Lincoln is dragged into the darkness by something. His muffled screams soon fade away''

Lola: L-LINCOLN?!

Lori: Girls, our only way of us to get him out of there is to bust down that door! It's wooden, so it sould be able to break down.

The girls then huddled up and as hard as they could, they ram themselves into the door and eventually, it finally broke down.

Lynn: We're in!

Lori: Girls, search for Lincoln! Leave no stone unturn!

''They all split up and search frantically for Lincoln. They searched the Living Room, the bathroom and the bedrooms, but they didn't find Lincoln. That's until Luan started screaming.''

Luan: GUYS! I FOUND HIM!

''The girls all found Lincoln under the staircase, unconscious. They pick him up and they all charge at the door and leave the building. They all bolt to the house and finally stop running in the front yard. They all start to panic''

Lori: He's still passed out!

Lynn: Oh no....

Luna: C'mon dude, wake up!

Lola: No.......this is our faults!

Lana: We didn't believe him.....and left him to go out by himself

Leni: And now look at him.....

They all stare down at Lincoln and begin to form tears

Lori: (teary eyes) Lincoln, if you hear us, we just want to say that we're really sorry for not believing you earlier. We didn't think that this could happen to you, but it proves us wrong. Now, you won't wake up......and we don't want that. Please Lincoln........wake up....

Lucy: Please big brother......fight it, like you always do.....

''Lincoln doesn't respond and the girls start to cry over him. While they're crying however, Lincoln finally wakes up after hearing everything they said, but they don't notice this. He then catches them off guard by saying:''

Lincoln: (low voice) I forgive you guys.

Sisters: Lincoln!

They all start a group hug 

Lynn: You don't know how sorry we are for not believing you.

Lori: Yeah! If we did believe you, none of this would've happened!

Lincoln: Girls, it's not your fault, it's mine. I was the one who decided to go out in the first place and I should be thanking you girls. You saved my life. If it wasn't for you.......

He starts to form tears remembering what he was just through and the girls start to hug him tighter

Lincoln: (teary eye) I'm just glad that you guys actually care for me...

Luna: Why wouldn't we dude? We're your sisters! We will never stop loving you!

Lynn: Don't forget that, Lincoln.

Lincoln: Thanks guys! You're the best sisters I could ever have!

They all embrace in a group hug, before heading inside.

Lincoln: (talking to viewers) Well, this was an experience i'll never forget, but if it wasn't for my sisters, I may have not even be here to remember it. It's just nice to see my sisters actually caring for me, no matter what. Well, if you excuse me, i'm gonna go try my best to go to sleep.

Lincoln then goes up to his room, hoping that he'll be able to sleep

THE END