User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Gender War/@comment-30408884-20170316073521

I'll say it was okay, for me in my opinion, the beginning feels forced and when Lincoln starts to cry because he needs to do activities with the sisters, I wouldn't make a crying scene, I would make a disappointed scene.

Also, the scene where Luna, Leni and Lincoln remember what they've done in the past, kinda drags on and on, but that's just my silly opinion.

Other then that, it's okay.