User blog comment:Funnyman12/I really hate no such luck fanfics./@comment-2175012-20170622024109/@comment-32055298-20170622041120

@dragonzako

The problem wasn't that he demonized the sisters the problem was he made everyone who wasn't a loud a complete self righteous jerk and constantly bombarded the sisters with cruelty upon cruelty even thou the emotions by themselves would get the point across and it generally being to quickpaced to work as a serious longterm story.