User blog:Thomperfan/My thoughts on The Nightmare House

Hey guys, It's me Nolan and today I'm gonna be giving you my thoughts on antoher fanfiction. This time, I'm giving you my thoughts on MrTyeDye's Halloween fanfic, The Nightmare House. It's pretty much a look on each LK's worst nightmares.

Now, pretty much ANYTHING MrTyeDye writes is gonna be good, because, he understands these characters, he knows exactly how they act, the relationships they have with each other and the overall feel of the show. And this fanfic is certainly no exception. Now the story is split into 12 chapters, each Loud Siblings nightmare and the end. The way I'm gonna do this is give you my thoughts on each chapter individually, so let's get started.

Lori: This was an interesting one. Lori finds out that her parents have decided to let the siblings take care of themselves, so she's no longer in charge. Now if you didn't already know, Lori has this fear that her family will eventually not need her for stuff. I don't really get that, but then again, I'm just 15, so I wouldn't understand. But this actually would make for a pretty good episode. The siblings learn their lesson and decide not to go crazy and just act regularly. Who knows, Lori may actually learn something from her siblings.

Leni: OK this is was another interesting one. Leni's plans to show off her new back-to-school outfit to her classmates goes awry when legwarmers start taking over her body and and spiders start growing into giants. I like how the legwarmers actually turned into snake like creature that tried to crush her legs and this line in particular gets a chuckle out of me: "Or eat her and then enslave her!" said the fourth one, prompting the other three to cast a peculiar look in its direction. "...Okay, that last one didn't really make sense," admitted the fourth one. "Whatever. The point is that  she's ours now." And before you go and label me a sadist for actually enjoying seing my crush get tortured like that, let me just say, I wanted to hug Leni so much after it was done.

Luna: This one was probably the most accurate, except for some other ones we'll get to later. Mick Swagger, Luna's idol personally insults her and rock on TV and then she gets visited by a older version of herself who tells her she'll be nothing. Now this feels EXACTLY like the kind of thing Luna would dream or worry about. Although I have no idea what "Taking the piss, wankers" means, I could understand it was nothing good. I also like how Luna just snapped once her older self started bringing up Sam. She must like her THAT much.

Luan: This was a really surprising one. Luan's preformance at a comedy club turns out to be terrible once she realizes that she's in a museum of statues and Mr. Coconuts comes to life and starts taunting her. One thing I really like is that here, Luan would rather prefer booing and negative responses than complete silence, and it went really sad near the end.

Lynn: Oh this was a wonder to behold. Lynn is in a wrestling match with Lincoln, and once Lincoln starts beating her, she lifts some weights and then literally punches Lincoln's head off. Now I think lynn actually has that fear she's gonna end up like hwat most of the fandom views her as: A sadistic bully, when that could not be further from the truth. I like how Lynn was just speechless by the fact she killed her own brother.

Lucy: This was certainly NOT what I was expecting. I was thinking Lucy was gonna have something really cute and sappy for her nightmare, like Rainbow Dash did in the episode "Do Princesses dream of magic sheep?" But here she's forced to take part in a school dance, and the other people don't like her dancing and start throwing stuff at her. Well, can't say that I blame her, I'm not a big fan of School Dances myself, and it does sound kinda scary, when you put it the MTD puts it.

Lana: OK this is the another perfectly accurate nightmare sequence. Lana pays a visit to the dentist, and she gets turned into a perfect little girl who wears dresses, springy pigtails and buckled shoes. I just felt so sorry for Lana in this one. I'd tay the messy, dirty, gross Lana over the perfect, girly, smiley Lana, anyday. Also Rita was also in this sequence, and she was surprisingly out of character. I don't care if it's a nightmare, RIta loves her children and highly doubt she would be on board with trying to turn one of them into something they're not. Is that really how Lana sees her Mom? But, that's probably just me nitpicking.

Lola: Whoa. The twins surprisingly get the most accurate nightmares. Lola is participating in a pageant, and when the judge starts critiquing her, she gets rid of her whole face. I can honestly see Lola fearing this. I for one think her face looks great. Something I noticed was that the pageant judge was a real douche. I'd really like to give her a piece of my mind.

Lisa: This was an odd one. Lisa's experiments are apparently too dangerous for her kindergarten, so her teacher suggests to move her back to daycare. Now when Lisa's teacher first said move her back, I originally thought they were gonna have her actually go inside of Rita's stomach. Weird, right? But I guess daycare is the next worst thing. And a teddy bear that actually spanks you? Oh my god, I feel your pain, Lisa!

Lily: Again, with Lucy, I can't say I expected this at all. Lily is just getting ready to go to bed, when her parents encounter a monster named "Mor-gaj" who likes to eat money, and apparently new-born babies. It took me a little while to realize what Mor-gaj actually meant. And now that I do, I have to agree with Lily, mortgage can be a really scary thing, and once she gets a better understanding of it, when she's older, I'm sure she'll still be scared of it.

Lincoln: Alas. Our 11-year-old white-haired hero gets the worst treatment out of all of them. He gets a visit from the sister-snatchers, who have taken Lincoln's sisters, put them in a box and turned them into pale, zombies. Here, you have to admire how great of a brother Lincoln is. These imposters are pampering him and giving him luxory treatment, but Lincoln would gladly turn the all away in exchange for his real sisters. I that's proof that Lincoln is one of the best brothers out there, then I don't know what is. And yes I do get the reference that the author is taking a jab at people who demonize the sisters, and I think it's pretty clever.

Epilogue: This was a great ending to the story. Lori comforts Lincoln, after he wakes up, it was revealed all 11 kids each had a nightmare and they've all decided to sleep together in the living room. That was just heartwarming. Oh, and props for having Lori be the one to reconcile Lincoln instead of Leni or Luna. It also had a sweet moment between Lynn and Lincoln.

So that was the Nightmare House, and let me just say: It rocked!! All the characters are in character, the nightmares were all interesting and the resolution was perfect, I would recommend this fanfic, for anyone who wants to get into Loud House fanfictions or just want a great story. What do you guys think? Let me know in the comments.