User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Snowmageddon/@comment-26302585-20171211184145

Hmm. Interesting so far.

But who set up that trap in Pop-Pop's room?

I got a couple corrections for you

LINCOLN: Let's "iced" this sucka.

LUAN: Plus, it'll "iced" Lincoln for good. (laughs evilly)

I don't mean to sound like an English teacher, but remove the "d" from "iced" so it will be "ice" and it will sound proper.