User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews 3: Frigid Fever

Ok I am surprised that this time I got some comments for other fanfictions to review! However it was kinda hard which is one reason I didn't do a review these last two days but I"M BACK AND READY TO SEE IF MY NEXT REVIEW OF A FANFICTION WILL BE EITHER HATED OR LOVED, "The fanfiction I review not my actual review cause I'm sure you all love them." Anyways today we have what FirstDrellSpectre considers his most popular fanfiction, Frigid Fever!

Part 1: Storyline

Ok this time I am not going to go into full detail just main parts. So it starts with the Loud Siblings having a snowball fight and Lincoln's team wins. However, since Lola is angry at whatever Lincoln really does to her even though this was just a game, shoves snow EVERYWHERE in Lincoln making the other siblings grab her back. Sadly, due to the coldness of the snow that was on Lincoln, he gets a fever/cold making him go to bed. Lola is than yelled at by the others making them leave.

While in bed Lincoln has a dream that really made me laugh but it was due to Leni hugging Lincoln because of the body temperature. Leni catches a fever/cold as well and has to stay in bed with Lincoln. Len feels bad at first but Lincoln makes her feel better.

Meanwhile Lola is still treated badly for what she did to Lincoln while Lori has to quarantine Lincoln's room while the others do two but just so Lola doesn't make them get sick and Lucy puts a curse on Lola. Lincoln and Leni also bond during their time while talking about different stuff about themselves.

That night Lola has a nightmare which makes her realize her wrong-doing. Len and Lincoln wake up and after talking a bit Leni reveals she intentionally got sick so she could be with him due to them not spending much time together. Lincoln accepts this just as Lola comes in to tell Lincoln she is sorry, Lincoln says no at first but after Lola gives him sand to play with Lincoln finally accepts her apology. Lola than asks Lucy to lift the curse she put on her earlier but Lucy says there was not really a curse.

Later Leni and Lincoln are finally all better but they all realize Lynn is sick due to drinking cola Leni and Lincoln had earlier making her go to Lincoln's room, "As to not infect Lucy." And the fanfiction ends.

'''[Ok Imma give this an 8/10. now that has been lower then the last 2 but this is still pretty good. But the reason its only 8/10 is since that some words in the story were not good words and some scenes are too.........weird. Now all of that was funny and I'm not saying it wasn't! But in a case of this actually being an episode it may not be aired so I had to deduct a few points but sorry. Still great storyline!]'''

Part 2: Characters

The relationship between Leni and Lincoln in this fanfiction is really good. The other characters are portrayed well too! For examples Lori, Lola, Lucy, and Lynn who serve as secondary sisters close to main characters, "Although I feel Lola is a main character." The other characters are still good too and portrayed good as well too!

'''​[Characters portrayed well and I don't really notice anything wrong! 10/10!]'''

Part 3: Style

This style is a sibling bonding story along with Lola's subplot of going through all the hate she gets for what she does to Lincoln. Both are portrayed well but the bonding between Lincoln and Leni I feel is better than Lola's subplot cause there's is the main one and also Lola doesn't really feel bad at first but her's is still good and I accept that!

'''[Imma give this a 9/10! I don't really have a reason I just feel Style could be a bit better.]'''

Part 4: Does the story have anything missing?

I feel like the other sisters who weren't secondary should have had a bigger role and that the parents should've punished Lola for what she did but other than that it's good!

[So a 9/10 should be a good one for this!

Part 5: Final Rating

'''[Ok my final rating is a 36/40, so an A- story! This was overall a good story that I recommend anyone who hasn't seen it see it! Now is this FirstDrellSpectre's best and most popular fanfiction? Well I don't really know in my opinion but hey it is just an opinion.....A LUCAS OPINION! (Sorry I just had to do that!)'''

'''I hope you all enjoyed my 3rd fanfiction review and comment below what fanfiction I should review next and tune in next time for Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews! '''