User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-26302585-20161224035502

Hey YoshiRocker, I just noticed an error n part 1. The beginning of the story took place on a Saturday. The next day, the parents left and Rita told the girls they would be back on Sunday. If this did begin on Saturday, that would mean the parents left on Sunday. That doesn't make sense, unless Rita meant they would return next Sunday, but they didn't. In part 1, a day passed since the parents left and Lincoln returned home on that day. But in the beginning of part 2, another day passed since Lincoln returned home and the parents return. This means the parents were gone for two days.

I still love this story, I just wanted to point this out. I would've commented this in part 1, but it wouldn't let post a comment for soem reason.