Thread:TheGlorious/@comment-24200891-20170501062922/@comment-24200891-20170502214907

I need to tell you about English Grammar. You're the one who has a request, I am the one who takes it or rejects this.

To AnimationFan15 you shall speak yourself.

My ideas for plot elements. Lynn trains but makes stupid mistakes because thinking about the boy distracts her. Her trainer or friend (Margo) scolds her for acting weird. Lynn looks in mirror and wonders what happens to her, she compares herself to Lori and realises she has a crush on the boy. She tries to talk to him but she can't bring herself to say a word due to her shyness and stress. The boy finds her as weirdo and she feels wounded, too wounded to scream. Lynn thinks her feelings make her soft, she doesn't want to lose her reputation so she in secret tries to change herself for the boy. Lynn wears teh dress but feels inconvinient, like too much air on legs or the dress chokes her in waist. She trains with mirror how to talk to the boy. She talks to him but doesn't get what he's talking about due to different interests. That's all what I have for now.