User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: A Night to Forget/@comment-31022739-20171102210011

I thought you were...just a little bit unfair. Quality wise, it’s not the strongest of TE, but even with a not-so original format, I thought that the writing was better than being stuck between the boundaries of “okay” and “good”. But yeah, Ronnie Anne was the biggest problem of the story for me too. Her irrationality didn’t feel justified, which made her antagonism annoying more than compelling.

If you want a suggestion on what to do next, might I point you in the direction of Samtastic 3.0’s “Burning Secret”?