User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's FanFiction Reviews 8: What's Cooking?

Welcome back everyone to another episode of Lucas's FanFiction Reviews, and today we have a surprise for you all. YoshiRocker has just released his 40th FanFiction, "What's Cooking?" Sadly he has said this will be his last FanFiction for the wiki. This is incrediblely sad to be honest, I can't believe one of my favorite writers is quitting. However based on what he said it is since people are saying bad stuff about him, look people can we please stop driving away everyone, we might soon make everyone leave.

Anyways I decided to change up the style of these fanfictions. Instead of out of 40 it will be out of 30. And the three categories will be the Story, the Characters, and What is Missing, "I took out the style since I felt like it was a weird category and it was always short and hard for me to think of a style."

Did YoshiRocker13 give us a final legacy fanfiction, or was it just a final nail to the haters. Let's find out.

The Story
Our story is about our main character Lincoln trying to get the approval of his father. What kind of approval you might ask? Well apparently Lincoln took a cooking class and after one night where Lynn Sr couldn't cook Lincoln did it and his whole family loved it.

However Lynn Sr, for some strange reason, hates it. The story would go along as Lincoln tries to make his father like his cooking until after days of trying and getting exausted he tells his father that he justs wants his approval. Then Lynn Sr tells him he lied and he did love his cooking, which I will admit gave me a shock.

Though I did feel a little bit conflcited on why Lynn Sr did this, I will explain in the character section why. But anyways, the father-and-son team then work together the next night to cook an amazing meal for the family, and they greatly succeeded.

Hmmm. This was a nice storyline YoshiRocker15. I mean this fanfiction is nothing theatrical, but this was a nice storyline to go with such a simple and nice story

The Characters
The two people to make this fanfiction stand out is Lincoln and Lynn Sr. Lincoln is pretty nice in this fanfiction and it doesn't really affect the show since in one episode he and Clyde made pies so it is nice to see this be expanded upon.

Now earlier I said I felt conflicted with Lynn Sr. It was just since he lied to Lincoln cause he was jealous of Lincoln. Now nothing is wrong with that, but unlike any other chracter if put in the situation, Lynn Sr is a chef and I always thought if Lincoln did cook great he would be supportive since cooking probably runs int he family. But the story makes up for it by Lincoln comforting him and telling that he was once jealous too but learned to control it, which was nice.

As for the others, the mostly are supportive of Lincoln and not much stand out other then a scene with Rita and a scene with Lana.

In the end however, the characters are well done and had some development by the end

What is Missing?
Now nothing here really would seem missing. I mean I would say that the other characters should get more development, but people will say that it ain't needed and the story should just focus on Lynn Sr and Lincoln.

Though maybe some more scenes with the family supporting Lincoln and trying to convince Lynn Sr together.

Other then that maybe the story should've been a bit longer to flesh out the story more, but this is good enough itself.

Final Thoughts
YoshiRocker13 has left the wiki with one last fanfiction to come out of his genius mind, and I got to say this was good. I mean it's nothing special, just a simple story about a father and son. But for what it is, it's a story that any YoshiRocker13 fan would read as a final tribute to the man himself.

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The Story: 8/10

The Characters: 8/10

What is Missing: 8/10

Final Rating: 24/30

Well thanks for watching, Give me some ideas for a review in the comments. Anyway I am Lucas and I will see you all later...

BOOOOOOOOOOOM!

(All of a sudden, there is an explosion in the Review Studio which sends me flying to the wall)

OW! What the heck was that?! (GASP)

(Suddenly a dark figure emerges from the hole in the wall as it smiles)

Figure: Hello.....Lucas...

(I look in shock as the camera showing me shocked turns off in blackness)