User blog comment:Ice Bear Phantom/Violet Hues (Luna x Sam, Friendly Interactions)/@comment-32202721-20170827005743

Not bad so far! I like where this is going. You have a knack for capturing Luna's voice, and the way you write Sam is pretty cute.

As a suggestion, I really think you ought to describe Luna's reaction to Sam touching her hair. Does she blush? Look away? Giggle? I imagine getting her hair touched by her crush would trigger a pretty big, or at least noticeable, response.