User blog comment:Curious Poker Chip/"L is for Love": Alternate Ending/@comment-30498740-20180624013325/@comment-31563773-20180624045005

Relating yourself to fart jokes is hilarious, as well as a bad comparison, but anyway...

I have no issue with showing Luna having feelings. However, your definition of showing said feelings is quite off. People have a multitude of emotional responses that don't just amount to sitting somewhere moping about their issues. Not everyone will cry, and you assuming I would want Luna to just sit there being dead silent is just outright wrong. If you really want to know what she'd do in a situation like this, Luna would be trying to compose a song of some sort as it would help her think, or just fuming her guitar while trying to sort plug her thoughts as she's often seen fiddling with some instrument while in the house. The reason she appears weaker is because she's typically more level headed than to let something like that bring her down into a sniveling mess. Even when she had doubts about giving Sam a small gift, it's not like she was on the verge of tears.

At best, Luna would be in a funk, but not enough to act as if she had been dumped or cheated on by a boyfriend or something all because of a lack of a love interest. Heck, you could've easily had a different mate in mind for her, but decided for whatever reason to not do that.

And even if it's not Sam's story, the fact you based it after L is for Love does make it related to her since that episode is the first time she appeared and was a significant character. And by MY logic, given how each other sibling has their letters ready, it seems very odd how the siblings love interests are apparently around, yet Sam is mysteriously out of the picture. Take Lil Roomie for example. I could easily make it just about the siblings, but included the likes of Carol and the parents even though they aren't that important to the main story. Heck, I even added Polly Pain during a chapter of Worth, and she only appeared for a few seconds. Point is, you could've at least mentioned Sam, but refused to. The fact you don't want this story to be related to your only other LH story isn't helping your case.

And at least you are well aware of Luna being bisexual, but as far as what's been seen in Forbidden Love, as well as the earlier statement, you still have an issue with treating Sam as Luna's love interest instead of a best friend and I'm not certain where your second fic is going to go in regards to that. I'm not saying it's a sin, nor would I call it one, but there's just too much suspicion as to why you couldn't even add a line or give a hint since Sam was included in the episode itself. If you could take the time to give implications about the other love interests through the letters the siblings wrote, why specifically leave Sam out of it? At that point, the statement of 'it's not her story' doesn't offer much of an explanation. The letter from her family was heartwarming, but still.