User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-30953185-20170127003229

This was a really great fanfiction. If I may make a suggestion, when the sisters are all discussing what they did to Lincoln, you could also mention that time they fought him to get the best seat in the car. Not that it was necessarily a bad episode, but it was an episode where the sisters were being mean to Lincoln. If you don't want to add it that's fine. I won't bother you.