User blog comment:AustinDR/Fanfiction: Remembering Lincoln/@comment-2175012-20161228161914

I wonder if I should've added more dialogue. Maybe perhaps have Lincoln say his final words with all of his sisters, they tell him not to leave them, etc. Maybe I could've also added that with Lily, while she did notice that someone was missing, as the years went by, no one talked about their loss, thereby only contributing to Lily's  surprise that she had a brother at one point.