User blog:Steven A. Lucas/Steven Lucas in The Loud House: Tricked Part Two (FANFIC)

Hello, Steven Lucas again. Welcome to part two of My version of Tricked! In part two, I've added a deleted scene that was cut due to time where Lincoln and Clyde are Trick or Treating at Huntington Manor. On the further note, I've added more scenes on the haunted corn maze. I've added a scene where I'm dressed as post-apocalyptic cannibal that eats people with stomachs filled with candy. I know it sounds a bit gruesome, but it's not violent nor scary. It's just for fun. I've added a few characters, each name is a reference from a movie, or a specific film director. And I've even added a scene where Hawk and Hank are invading Franklin Ave. and that moment that I discovered that Lincoln and Clyde are responsible for bringing them here. I know I might go on and on about it, but anywhere here's part two. I do not own the rights of the show, the characters, and the stories. It belongs to its rightful owners, the writers, the creators, and the crew. Enjoy!

Tricked! (Part Two)

Originally Written by Sammie Crowley, Whitney Wetta, & Kevin Sullivan

Re-Written by Steven Lucas

[A flock of bats transitions back to the Loud House where Lucy steps out and turns on the lights for her corn maze and carries in a bucket of fake blood.]

Lucy: [into a megaphone] "Okay, everyone, places."

''[Steven comes out with his costume from before, and he is wielding a small axe, and a silver fork. He’s also wearing a belt that includes barbecue sauce, a salt shaker, a pepper shaker, hot sauce, and Worcestershire sauce. His pants is a bit torn, and has red paint all over his face and his chest.]''

Steven: Can’t wait for those kids with stomachs filled with candy.

Lucy: That’s pretty cool, Steven. I loved that you added fake blood on your face.

Steven: Thanks. But I’m not the only one whose dressed as this. Check it out.

[Lucy turns and sees Steven’s friends dressed as a group of cannabals.]

Lucy: Okay. Who are they?

Steven: These are my friends from my film workshops in Royal Woods, and they all would love to participate in your scary corn maze.

Lucy: Okay. But what are their names?

Steven: Their names are Edgar, John, Nigel, Mary, Fred, Billy, George, Alfred, Sidney, Jason, Victor, Heather, Eli, and David.

Lucy: Wow!

Steven: They all agreed to help along you and your family.

Lucy: Sure, they can scare too.

Steven: Thank you Lucy. Alright, ready Mrs. Loud.

[Rita steps out looking like a zombie, moaning and groaning.]

Rita: [chuckles] "How's that?"

Steven: Simple yet amusing. What did you think Lucy?

Lucy: "Hmm...not quite there. I think we need to lose a limb." [takes out a chainsaw]

Rita: [panicking and flinching] "NO, LUCY, NO!"

Steven: Relax, Mrs. Loud. She’s just actually handing it to Lynn.

[Lynn comes out looking like a masked serial killer.]

Lucy: "Here, Lynn. Don't forget your chainsaw."

[Lynn takes it and runs into the maze.]

Steven: Nice costume Lynn!

Lynn: [offscreen] Thanks, so do yours!

Steven: See. There’s nothing to worry about.

Rita: [relieved] "Ah."

Steven: Just relax, we’ve gotten an alternative way to think you’re a zombie.

Lucy: [pulls her mom's shirt sleeve up to cover up her arm.] "A little homemade blood, and you're good to go." [rubs it on the armless sleeve.]

Rita: "You're a real pro, honey. I should have let you do this years ago."

Lucy: "That's okay, Mom. I'm just glad to finally get my chance. I'm so thrilled, I can barely contain myself."

[Once again, her face hardly shows any change.]

Rita: "I know, honey. I can see it all over your face." [goes into the maze]

[Enter Lori dressed as a vampiress.]

Lori: [Transylvanian accent] "I literally vant to suck your blood." [flips her hair and is stopped by Lucy and Steven.]

Steven: [wolf whistles] Wow Lori. You look so hot in that outfit.

Lori: Thank you Steven.

Steven: Don’t tell Bobby, I said that.

Lori: [Transylvanian accent] Don’t worry, I von’t.

Steven: Okay. [to Lucy] What do you think, Lucy?

Lucy: "Hmm. Missing something." [megaphone] "Fangs, here!"

[Fangs flies in and perches on Lori's shoulder, making her scream.]

Steven: Lucy, you can’t make her turn into an actual vampire, are you?

Lucy: "If you wanna make it more authentic, he could bite your neck."

Lori: [objectively, while Fangs smiles] "No! I mean, this is fine." [goes into the maze]

[Enter Luan as Dr. Frankenstein with Mr. Coconuts as her Frankenstein monster as Luan laughs evilly.]

Steven: Wow Luan, your costume is a real scream. That’s a classic right there.

Luan: Thank you, Steven. I even gave Mr. Coconuts a “monster” makeover. [laughs]

Lucy: "Hang on, Luan. Your monster needs more stitches." [draws some on Mr. Coconuts]

Luan: "That's sew much better!" [laughs] "Get it?"

Lucy: "No puns in the maze."

''[A disappointed Luan goes in. Enter Leni dressed as Marie Antoinette with her head missing. She trips over the stairs since she can't see where she's going.]''

Steven: Are you okay, Leni. That’s one hard fall.

Leni: [underneath her costume] It’s alright, Steven.

Lucy: "Looks great, Leni. But don't forget this." [takes out the head that was in the fridge earlier.]

Leni: [pops her head out, gasps from lack of air, and sees the head.] "Why do I have to look so pale?"

Lucy: "You've just been decapitated."

Leni: "Well, I'd still put on some blush."

Steven: By the way, I think you looked beautiful.

Leni: Thank you. You’re always nice.

Steven: I really love your costume though. It really matches the bows on your sandals.

Leni: Thanks. Same as yours.

Steven: You’re welcome, madame.

''[Geo rolls in and Lucy puts the head on his hamster ball. Leni takes a deep breath and hides her head as she and Geo go into the maze. Out come a pipe organ and Luna dressed like a skeleton.]''

Luna: "Ready to rock, oh, mistress of the dark." [starts playing]

Lucy: "Drop down an octave and try it in D minor. That's the spookiest key."

Steven: I’m going in there to scare the heebie-jeebies out of those kids.

[Steven goes in the corn maze, Luna plays it as Lucy said such and Lucy busts out her megaphone.]

Lucy: "Okay, guys, the Loud Family haunted corn maze is officially open. Let's bring on the screams, people." [picks up her hood, scythe, and blood and creeps into the maze.]

''[Huntington Manor's gate. Lincoln and Clyde come walking by in their disguises.]''

Clyde: [British accent] "Fancy visiting a few flats and loading up on some proper sweets?" [Lincoln looks at him confused; normal voice.] "Didn't you read the British study guide I sent you?"

Lincoln: [takes out the guide] "Sorry. I only got through the first ten pages."

[They walk up to the gate and Wyatt notices them.]

Wyatt: [tips his hat] "Master Nigel. Master Alister. I thought you were in England." [opens the gate]

Lincoln: [British accent] "We got all the way over there, and then we realized we forgot to feed Nigel's fish."

Clyde: [British accent] "So, we flew back straight away, and Bob's your uncle. Well, ta ta."

Wyatt: [suspicious] "Not so fast, boys."

[Lincoln and Clyde stop and think they're busted.]

Wyatt: "Next time, call me and I can feed your fish." [hands Clyde a card]

Lincoln: [British accent]' "Thanks. Well, shredded wheat, old boy."

Clyde: [quietly in his normal voice] "It's cheerio."

[They run into the neighborhood and take off their master costumes and reveal their hero costumes.]

Lincoln: "We're done with the tricks. Now for the treats."

[They fist bump]

''[Candy transition back to the younger sisters trick-or-treating with their dad still shaking in fear. The twins go up to the first house with their patriotic costumes and knock as the door opens.]''

Lola and Lana: "Trick or treat!"

Diem Doan: "Oh, aren't you two adorable." [gives them their candy]

[As the door closes, there's another knock with the twins now in their aquatic outfits.]

Lola and Lana: "Trick or treat!"

Diem Doan: [easily fooled] "So cute!" [gives them more candy]

[Another knock and the twins are in their condiment costumes.]

Lola and Lana: "Trick or treat!"

Diem Doan: [still believing] "Great costumes." [gives them more candy]

Lola and Lana: "Thank you!" [leave]

Lana: "And that is how it's done. One house, six pieces of candy."

[The twins high five and Lisa hops up to the door and knocks as it opens.]

Lisa: "Trick or treat!"

Diem Doan: "How sweet. A kangaroo." [prepares to give her her candy.]

Lisa: "And a baby roo."

[Lily pops out of Lisa's pouch and coos.]

Diem Doan: [overcome by the adorableness] "Aww!" [gives Lisa every piece in her bowl.]

Lisa: [hops away] "Thank you!" [contently to the twins] "Ha. One house, eighty-seven pieces of candy."

[The wind blows eerily behind Lynn Sr.]

Lynn Sr.: [screams] "A ghost just touched me!" [faints]

Lola: [shaking his face] "Daddy, wake up!"

Lisa: [pulls in a wagon] "Never fear, siblings. I have prepared for this eventuality."

[They drag Lynn Sr. on the wagon for the rest of the hunt.]

[Meanwhile, Lincoln and Clyde are trick-or-treating around Huntington Manor, they walk up to one of the houses, Lincoln rings the doorbell, and one of the house owners opens the door and sees Lincoln and Clyde dressed as Ace Savvy and One-Eyed Jack.]

Lincoln & Clyde: Trick or treat!

Fancy Woman: Oh, how delightful!

''[She comes back in as she’s about to give out a bowl of candy or something. Lincoln and Clyde look happily at each other, but the lady is holding a tray that contains three pieces of fun-sized candy. Lincoln and Clyde are not surprised by it.]''

Lincoln: [whispering] Bite-sized candy?

Clyde: [whispering] Was our information all wrong?

Fancy Woman: Keep in mind, these are my sample sizes. Once you pick a favorite, I’ll give you the full-sized version. Unless you can’t decide, in which case you have all three.

''[Lincoln and Clyde are amazed as heavenly music is heard. They smile mischievously knowing that they are happy from what they’ve expected. Then, we get a montage of Lincoln and Clyde going house-to-house trick-or-treating at Huntington Manor. In one house, Clyde rings the doorbell, the door opens up and Lincoln and Clyde has their eyes widened from what they witnessed. It was a butler with a barrow full of candy, he lets go of the barrow and lets it rain out candy. Then, he shows the boys a silver tray with a giant chocolate bar that reads “Big Choco!”. Lincoln and Clyde look amazed and they fist bump. Then, Lincoln and Clyde watch the silver plate, as the butler reveals that the plate is full of candy. The dish looks very steamy. Lincoln and Clyde are dancing and spinning around with glee, as the background is raining candy. But it was the butler raining out the candy to them.]''

''[Meanwhile, at the corn maze, Steven and his friends, and the Loud siblings wait for children to come. ''

Steven: I sure hope those kids are going to come here anytime now.

[Then, Steven suddenly hears Hawk and Hank laughing with their masks still on, stealing kids’ candy bags, smashing jack-o-lanterns, and throwing toilet paper at everyone’s houses.]

Steven: Oh no. It’s those punks from Lincoln’s football game.

Hawk: Hey, let’s try that house. That kid said that it has a haunted corn maze here.

[Hawk points at the Loud House with the scary corn maze.]

Hank: Yeah, I bet they have lots of candy.

[They both laugh, Steven is afraid they might come near the house.]

Steven: Guys, we’ve got two mischievous pranksters that looks like the kids from the Hazeltucky Hockers at that football game.

Lynn: Oh no! Not those guys again. They sprained my ankle at that one.

Steven: [to Lynn] I know that we’ve gotten through hard times, but we must stop them before they ruin the fun.

[Hawk and Hank are about to go up to the Loud House, but Steven stops them alongside his friends, Rita, the older Loud siblings, and Lucy.]

Steven: STOP!!! I know what you’re doing, you beatniks. But we’re not going to let you ruin our fun by the scary corn maze.

Lucy: Yeah, you are trespassing through my corn maze.

Rita: And we are not letting you ruin our Halloween.

Hawk: [pretending] Oh no, she’s going to call our parents.

Hank: What is she going to do, eat my brains for discipline.

Steven: Cut it out, we are only dressed to scare children.

Hank: Nice costume, dork.

Hawk: Where did you get it from, the dumpster.

[They both laugh.]

Steven: [offended] Hey! I’m dressed as a cannibal that eats people filled with candy.

Hawk: [pretending to be scared] We’re so scared.

Hank: Yeah. Are you going to eat us with a plastic fork?

''[They both laugh again. But Lola, Lana, Lisa, and Lily, came back with their wagon carrying their dad as they got back from trick-or-treating.]''

Lola: What’s going on here?

Lana: Yeah, what are those two bullies doing here.

Hawk: Well, look what we have here. A whole family in costumes.

Hank: Yeah, what do we got here, a vampire, a princess, a skeleton, a mad doctor, a psycho killer, a zombie, and the grim reaper.

Hawk: Yeah, and we got a salt and pepper shaker, and a kangaroo.

Lisa: Plus, a baby roo.

Hank: Aww. Ain’t this cute. [nugs Lana’s hair]

Hawk: Why don’t you go back to seasonizing steaks with those costumes.

[They laugh and sees Lisa’s bag filled with candy.]

Hawk: Hey bro, looks like we hit the jackpot.

Hank: Nice! Hand it over you little kangaroo.

[Lily gets so scared at Hawk and Hank.]

Hawk: Yeah, even your baby Kangaroo can’t have any.

Steven: Hey, you leave them alone! They just got back from trick-or-treating! Now explain to us, why are you guys causing much trouble around this neighborhood?!

Hawk: Well, we would love to tell you the truth sir.

Hank: Yeah, but we came here thanks to those two little kids that popped us by earlier the day.

[Steven realizes the truth from what he saw with Lincoln and Clyde’s plan.]

Steven: [realizes] Wait, Lincoln and Clyde told you came here.

Hawk: Yeah, they told us to go get candy from Franklin Ave. They even told us they have a corn maze, which is where you guys have.

Hank: Yeah. Thanks to them, this whole neighborhood has all the good candy we can eat.

[They both laugh so evil, Steven feels both angry and confused at Lincoln and Clyde.]

Steven: I can’t believe it’s all come together. Lincoln and Clyde led them here. I should’ve known when I saw their plan.

Lola: Lincoln did this!

Leni: Why would Lincoln do such a thing?

Lori: By the time he comes back, I’ll literally turn him into a human pretzel. Even his best friend.

Steven: [feels defeated] Why Lincoln, why did you do this to us?

Hawk: Now if you’ll excuse us, we’ve got candy to steal.

''[Both Hawk and Hank steals candy bags from Lana, Lola, Lisa, and Lily. Then, they both throw toilet paper at their house, squash jack-o-lanterns, and ruin most of the corn maze, as they laugh so mischievous. Steven, and the Louds feel defeated on the hard work they’ve put together.]''

[Meanwhile, Lincoln and Clyde are walking down the street with their sacks loaded.]

Lincoln: "What a haul! Maybe we should take it to your house, because my sisters will pounce on it."

Clyde: "Well, if we take it to my house, my dads will lock it up and only let me have three ounces a week."

Lincoln: "Hmm. We need a Plan C."

''[They bury it underground. Bat transition to the intersection of Franklin and Olive as they arrive.]''

Lincoln: "Our hard work paid off, Clyde. Best Halloween ever."

[They high five and turn the corner and find, to their shock, that the jack-o-lanterns are smashed, toilet paper is in the trees, candy wrappers are all over the ground, and all of Franklin Avenue is a complete mess.]

Lincoln: [shocked] "Well...maybe not for everyone."

To be continued...