User blog:TheMaximumMatt/Fanfiction - Three Louds Are Better Than One

​Three Louds Are Better Than One
Synopsis: We follow three separate stories taking place at the same time, each starring three different Louds getting into a situation where teamwork and acceptance are needed.

Lana and Lola try to get Lisa to have some fun with them when they find out about an invention of hers, but it ends up getting the three stranded in the middle of nowhere.
[Episode begins with Leni and Luna setting up for a big party they and Lori are holding]

Leni: OMGosh! I am so excited! All of our friends are coming over today!

Luna: Yeah, dude! We haven't been together in such a long time!

Lynn: You still haven't told us why you and Lori are having this huge party and we aren't allowed in it.

Leni: Sorry, guys. It's a personal thing for us three.

Luna: A high school get-together! It's for us and our friends.

Lincoln: Come on, Lynn. We can help these three. It's what families do.

Leni: Thanks, Linky.

[Cut to Rita and Lynn Sr. with Lori in the kitchen]

Lori: I can't thank you enough for having this get-together today!

Rita: Oh, sweetie! It's nothing!

Lori: This is lierally going to be the best time of this year!

Lynn Sr.: You bet it will be! Now, why don't you go and put up the decorations on the table there.

Lori: What decorations?

[Rita glances at the table]

Rita: Oh dear...

Lynn Sr.: Guess we're gonna have to go under the front deck to get it then. We're gonna nedd some of the smaller Louds to do this.

Lori: Well actually, Leni and I once-

Lynn Sr.: Lana, Lola, Lisa! Come down!

Lola: Ugh. What does he want?! I'm in the middle of doing my makeover!

Lana: So am I! [splashes mud on herself]

[Lola and Lana sluggishly go down the stairs]

Lola: Yeah?

Lynn Sr.: Could you help Lori get the decorations from under the front deck?

Lola: Ew! Not under there! Gross!

Rita: Get Lisa to come down!

Lana: Lisa? But...

Lola: Lisa hasn't come down from her room for an entire month!

Lana: Yeah, she never wants to come out from doing her weird experiment stuff.

[Montage of Lola and Lana asking Lisa to do activites:

Lana: Lisa! You wanna come out and play "Plumber's Quest"? I could use a third player!

Lisa: Whatever it is Lana, I am unavailable at this moment.

Lola: Lisa! I need someone to try out my new makeup!

Lisa: I'm occupied at the moment. Take your request to Lincoln.

Lana: Hey Lisa! Wanna go fishing with a few of us?

Lisa: My apologies, but I a m unable to at the moment.

Lola: [knocks on door and breathes in]

Lisa: No, Lola!

End montage]

Lola: She's no fun at all!

Lana: Yeah.

Lynn Sr.: Kids. Regardless or what you think of her, Lisa needs to come down to help with the decorations.

Rita: Besides, maybe instead of complaining about her, you can try getting Lisa to actually come out of her room yourself.

Lincoln: Yeah, I'd really like it if Lisa could come out of her room.

Lana: Yeah! Lisa's always alone in her room by herself doing her weird experiments so much, maybe we can show her there's more to life than that!

Lola: I guess we could try.

[Cut to Lola and Lana knocking on Lisa's door]

Lola: Lisa!

[Inside Lisa's room...]

Lisa: Leave the premises! I'm occupied! [Puts welders mask back on] Don't worry my dear art! you'll be finished soon.

[Sparks fly]

Lisa: Ooh. Feisty one! Nothing a little modification can't fix.

Lola: But Lisa! It's Mom and Dad this time! They want you! Now!

Lisa: [sigh] My apologies, Pal. I shall return for you. [places curtain over invention and shoves it in closet. Puts up sign on closet door.] I will be down in a moment! [runs downstairs]

Lana: Finally! Come on Lola! Lola?

Lola: [peeks into room] What's Lisa doing in here anyway?

Lana: Lola, I don't think we should- actually... let's see.

[Lola and Lana walk inside her room]

Lola: What's this? [sees sign on closet] "Don't open closet under any circumstances. That means you, Lola and Lana."

Lana: Let's open it!

Lola: Yeah! [opens up closet] What's this hunk of junk? [takes off curtains and gasps]

Lana: What is it?

Lola: It's kind of cute.

[The mysterious object reveals to be a robot with a touchscreen face placed on a metallic table with wheels and yellow arms attached to its touchscreen.]

Lana: Touch it.

[Lola is about to do so until Lisa runs back to her room]

Lisa: Well, I just got back from taking out decorations. No thanks to a certain duo of- [gasps]

[Lisa slaps Lola's hand]

Lola: Ow!

Lisa: [covers up invention] What are you doing?!

Lana: Calm down! We weren't doing anything!

Lisa: The sign specifically said do not open under any circumstances. That means you two!

Lola: Oh please. Whenever someone says do not open, it clearly makes the person more curious to open it. Besides, we didn't even touch it. Or we couldn't thanks to you.

Lisa: This was meant to be a secret just for me, and now you two have found out about it and are going to ruin it!

Lana: We won't tell anyone else. Just... what is it?

Lisa: Get out! I do not want you to know!

Lana: [whispers] Come on! We gotta get Lisa out of this room. Maybe we can get her to do a test run with this invention. Lisa will be outside of her room, and we can spend some time with her for once.

Lola: [whispers] Alright. I got an idea!

Lisa: You two! Must get out of here right now!

Lola: Alright then... Mom! Dad!

Lisa: [covers Lola and Lana's mouths] Okay! I will tell you! Do you swear to keep it a secret from any form of life? Cross your heart and hope to die?!

Lana: Yeah.

Lola: Yeah. What's the big deal?

Lisa: This... is an invention of mine. I named him, Pal-0.

Lola: That's a cute name.

Lana: So what does it do?

Lisa: I will show you. We just gotta find a place where we can do so. [to herself] Perhaps I can erase your memory afterwards.

Lola: Maybe the backyard?

Lisa: The only problem is getting it out there.

[The three push the invention to down the stairs]

Lynn Sr.: [in the background] I think there might be a few more props in the attic. Anyone wanna get them for me?

Luan: I’ll get them!

Lynn: Not if I get them first!

Lincoln: Come on guys! I was here first!

Lana: Okay. They’re distracted. Let’s go! Now!

[Lola, Lana, and Lisa push the robot to the backyard]

Lana: So… what is the big deal with this robot?

Lisa: Turning him on… and… [turns on robot]

Pal-0: Hello! I am Pal-0. How may I be of service?

Lola: Ooh. Can we play with it?!

Lisa: No! I just got through with telling you that this is an important invention for me!

Lana: Oh come on, Lisa! Have some fun in life. You can’t just be staying up in your room all day.

Lola: Yeah. Give your robot a try outside. It’ll be… fun. [winks at Lana]

Lisa: No thank you. I will show you a small demonstration and no more! Pal-0, I command you to grab the flower from over there!

[Pal-0 rolls over to a flower, picks it up, and drops it in front of Lisa]

Lana: Ooh.

Lola: Let’s see what else it can do. Pal-0! Do me a favor and tell me, who’s the prettiest girl in all of the world!

[Pal-0 points it’s hand towards Lisa]

Lola: Hey! [pushes Lisa to the side in front of Pal-0’s arm]

[Pal-0’s hand moves towards Lisa. As Lola keeps pushing Lisa around, Pal-0’s arm follow her around.]

Lisa: [blushes] Well, I’ve never been called the prettiest before, but…

Lola: GRRR! Forget it! Do something else!

Lana: Ooh! Take us for a ride.

Lola: Oh yeah!

Lisa: No! Pal-0! Don’t!

Pal-0: where would you like me to go?

Lisa: Lola! Lana! I don’t like what you two are doing. [hops on Pal-0] Get off my fre- I mean, invention! Now!

Lola: Oh, calm down, Lisa!

Lana: Yeah. As long as we don’t say something like “Pal-0 take us to the middle of nowhere, we should be…”

Pal-0: Taking you to middle of nowhere.

Lisa: Oh dear.

[Suddenly, rockets appear out of Pal-0’s back and Pal-0 blasts through the fence. Pal-0 and the three end up breaking through people’s gardens and backyards, leaving marks everywhere. The three scream and cling on for their lives. Eventually, they accidentally end up leaving the neighborhood and blast into a field of hills. Pal-0 blasts of from one of the hills like a ramp and Pal-0 crashes into the cold, hard ground. The three fly into the air and land in a bush]

Lisa: [pops her head out] Oh dear… that was…

Lola: Fun?

Lana: Awesome?!

Lisa: No and no! That was dangerous and worst of all, destructive! You could’ve hurt my- [gasps] Pal-0!

Lana: [whispers] I don’t think Lana is having any fun, Lola.

Lola: I can see that…

Lisa: Oh no! What have you done to him! He’s completely demolished!

[Pal-0 is entirely in pieces. Even his touchscreen is broken and cracked]

Lola: [guiltily] Uh… well… ahem. [acts reassuring] Calm down, Lisa. You can just build it back when we get home.

Lisa: I can’t just build this in five seconds you know! This project took me ages to complete. I spent all that time working hard on Pal-0 and all you did was make it all go to waste! Oh my invention…

Lana: We’re sorry, Lisa.

Lola: Yeah. We were only trying to have… fun.

Lisa: Fun? You call this fun?!

Lana: Don’t worry we’ll get back home. I recognize this place.

Lola: Yeah. Won’t be long now.

Lisa: I can’t believe I have to put my trust in you two.

Lana: Alright let’s go!

[The three start walking through the hills. They come across a small chirp.]

???: Cheep! Cheep!

Lana: [gasps] It’s a duckling!

Lola: AW! It’s so cute!

Lana: I’m gonna name it, Louie!

Lola: Louie? I was thinking we name it Ludwig.

Lisa: Excuse me but-

Lana: Or maybe Dewey!

Lola: Donald?

Lana: Gyro!

Lola: Huey!

Lana: Webby!

Lola: Daffy!

Lana: Plucky!

Lisa: GUYS! The both of you! Have you forgotten what our main task was?

Lana: But Lisa! It’s cute isn’t it!

Lola: What are you gonna name it?

Lana: Yeah, name it Lisa!

Lisa: No. I-

Lola: Come on!

Lana: Please…

Lisa: Fine…. Montague!

Lola: Montague?

Lana: You’re going to name a duck, Montague? I mean… great name, Lisa!

Lola: Yeah! Wasn’t that fun?!

Lisa: No! I just want to go home, go to my room, and repair Pal-0 at once!

Lola: What’s up with you and always staying in your room?!

Lana: Yeah?! Why are you always by yourself?! Would it hurt to spend some time with us instead?

Lisa: Well, I did and look where that got me!

Lana: Ugh. [walks home]

Lisa: I assume you two know where you are going?

Lola: [casually] How should I know where we’re going? I’m not even sure we’re going in the right direction.

[Lisa freezes in terror]

Lisa: Pardon!? Are you saying we have no way of tracing back home?!

Lola: Relax. Lana will lead us. Trust me. If anyone knows they’re way back home, it’s Lana.

Lisa: Oh dear.

Lana: Hey guys! Look what I found! Moss!

[Points to moss on a tree]

Lola: Ew! Moss! Gross!

Lana: No, Lola! That’s a good thing. Moss grows on the North side of trees!

Lola: If we live on the West…

Lana: Then that means we must go… that way! [points west]

Lisa: Actually, moss doesn’t always grow towards the north, it’s just that it happens to be so most of the time, but at this point, I’m desperate to find any way home.

Lana: Into the forest we go!

Lola: Ew. A forest! Filled with bugs!

Lisa: Come on now!

[Lola, Lana, and Lisa head into the forest]

Lisa: Well, at least this forest is fascinating.

Lana: [whispers to Lola] Lola! Look! [points to quicksand] I have an idea! [whispers in Lola’s ear]

Lola: Don’t you think that’s a bit far?

Lana: Come on! It’s a joke! Jokes are fun right?

Lola: Okay then. If you say so.

Lisa: Uh-oh. Careful. This is quicksand. I suggest that right now, we turn around and- [turns her back and hears a splash in the quicksand. Lisa gasps in horror] LOLA! LANA! [reaches into quicksand] LOLA! LANA! GRAB ONTO MY HAND! GUYS! [tears up and sobs] I’m too late… my dear siblings… are gone… [cries]

Lana: You need a hanky? [hands her a handkerchief]

Lisa: Well, they’re called handkerchiefs but… [gawks]

Lola and Lana: [laughs] Got you!

Lana: That was a funny joke! Wasn’t it?

Lola: Yeah!

[Lola and Lana laugh, not knowing about Lisa’s feelings. Lisa angrily gets up without a word and marches in the opposite direction.]

Lola: Hey! Where are you going?!

Lana: Yeah! Its was just a joke! It was fun wasn’t it? [nervously] Right…?

Lisa: [angrily] Well, excuse me for thinking that my dear siblings were gone for eternity! I was worried sick that you two were gone, even after you destroyed my dear hard work, and what do I see? It’s all just a tasteless joke!

Lola: Calm down! We were only having fun!

Lana: Yeah, we didn’t think you’d care about anything since-

Lisa: [angrily] What’s that supposed to mean?! That I don’t have feelings for anything?! That I don’t ever get show care about myself! That I view everyone I come across as a test subject! I am more than that! I do have feelings you know! And right now, I wish to have nothing to do with you two so-called sisters! Sisters who think I’m some robot or something!

Lana: Wait! That’s not what we we’re-

[Lisa storms off]

Lola: Oh no… [tears up] We hurt Lisa’s feelings. I told you we were going too far with that prank!

Lana: I think we did more than that. Now we just gave Lisa reasons for why she shouldn’t hang out with us. [tears up] We were only having some fun with her, but now she’s never gonna wanna play with us!

Lola: [tears up] I feel awful now. For us and Lisa.

Lana: I feel like such a jerk now.

[Montague pops out of Lana’s pocket]

Lana: Sorry Montague… we lost Lisa! [cries]

Lola: Ew. Yellow stuff is coming off of Montague!

Lana: Hold on. It looks like some pollen got on Montague, let me just- [wipes yellow pollen out of Montague]

[Montague reveals to be a white, young eagle chick]

Lola: Wait a second, Montague’s not a duck. He’s looks different now.

[Lisa gives an angry look at Lola and Lana only to see the white eagle baby]

Lisa: [gasps] That’s an eaglet! You better let go of it!

Lana: Why?

[Suddenly, an eagle can be heard from the sky. The eagle swoops down towards Lola and Lana.]

Lisa: NO! [runs over and pushes Lola and Lana out of the way, leaving her to be grabbed by the eagle]

Lola and Lana: LISA!

Lana: [forms a slingshot out of sticks and leaves. Slings rocks at the eagle.] Lisa! I got you!

Lisa: [struggles] Let go of me! Unhand me you beast!

Lana: [keeps slinging rocks at eagle]

Lola: Lana! Hurry!

Lana: I got one more! [slings at eagle]

[The eagle is hit by the rock and drops Lisa. Lisa lands in a bush.]

Lola: LISA!

Lana: Where did she go?!

[Montague jumps out of Lana’s pocket. The eagle sees him and swoops towards Lola and Lana.]

Lola and Lana: AHH!

[The eagle misses them and swoops towards Montague. Montague chirps with happiness. The eagle grows calm and picks up the poor eaglet.]

Lana: Oh! That must be Montague’s real parent!

[The eagle squawks and takes off]

Lola: Bye Montague!

Lana: Not time for goodbyes! We gotta find Lisa!

Lisa: No need to. Ugh. [Lisa, feeling quite giddy, comes out of bush]

Lola and Lana: LISA! [run to Lisa and give her a big hug]

Lisa: Yes… I’m happy to see you too, dear siblings.

Lana: Why did you do that for us?

Lola: Yeah. I thought you hated us.

Lisa: [blushes] Well, I- I couldn’t let my two dear siblings die in an instant like that. I’d rather sacrifice myself to save you two. Even if you do cause a lot of trouble, I still love you two.

Lola: Oh, Lisa! [tears up and hugs Lisa] Thank you!

Lana: You’re the best sister ever! We’re sorry for all of this!

Lisa: Come on. Let’s just find our way back home.

[The three walk through the forest.]

Lola: So… Lisa. Why exactly did you build that Pal-0 robot in the first place?

Lana: So you can have a butler or something?

Lisa: Actually… I built Pal-0 because… so I could have a friend to be with during my experiments.

Lola: What?

Lisa: I do get quite lonely in my room when I do my experiments… so one day… I thought I could build Pal-0 so I could have someone to hang out with.

Lana: That’s the reason why you built Pal-0?!

Lola: If you wanted someone to hang out with, why not us?!

Lana: Yeah. You’re always up in your room doing so many experiments, you forget that you have 10 other siblings who want to hang out with you.

Lisa: Well, I-

Lola: We’ve really missed having you around.

Lisa: You have?

Lana: Of course. We’re your sisters. We were only trying to have some fun with you so you could hang out with us more.

Lola: You don’t have to always be by yourself, let alone build a robot by yourself. We want to hang out with you too.

Lisa: …Well… now that I’ve heard about this… I do feel quite silly.

Lana: Duh. We love you.

Lola: Yeah.

Lisa: You know… you two make a fair point. Maybe it’s time for me to take a break from doing my silly experiments and start focusing on my family. In fact, I don’t even miss Pal-0 anymore. I have two of my dearest sisters with me.

Lola and Lana: Aw…

Lisa: but seriously, no more death pranks like that… ever!

Lola and Lana: Sorry.

Lana: I don’t know what I was thinking when I did that.

Lola: Hey, what’s that?

Lisa: [gasps] Royal Woods!

Lola: See? I told you Lana knew where she was going!

Lana: Yeah!

Lisa: Oh, Lana. I was wrong for ever doubting you!

[The three run to Royal Woods and through some paths, they find their home and run inside]

Lola: We’re home!

[Barges through door]

Lana: We’re here! Yeah!

Lynn Sr.: There you are! It’s about time you came back inside!

Rita: We thought you’d never come out of the backyard!

Lisa: Oh… let’s just say we… had a bit of an adventure back there.

Lynn Sr.: Oh, you kids and your imaginations.

[The three Lori, Leni, and Luna laughing, covered in confetti and frosting]

Lola: Woah! What happened to you three?

Lori: Oh. Nothing.

Luna: We only had the best time of our lives!

Leni: Yeah.

Lana: Where is everyone else?

Luna: Oh… they left.

Lori: Don’t worry. We still had an awesome time. Together. [laughs]

[Lori, Leni, and Luna walk off]

Lola: Those three are weird…

Lana: Agreed.

[Cut to the three changed in Pjs and heading for bed]

Lisa: Lola, Lana.

Lola and Lana: Yeah?

Lisa: Today was… an exciting day. Certainly the most memorable and, dare I say… fun day.

Lola and Lana: Really?

Lisa: Yes. Thank you for this.

Lola: Aw. It’s nothing.

Lana: If you ever need someone to hang out with, you know who to call.

Lisa: Thank you. I wish you a good night.

Lola and Lana: Goodnight, Lisa!

[The three enter in their respective rooms and have a good night sleep.]

END OF CHAPTER 1

​Chapter 2 - Attic-tion
[COMING SOON]

​Chapter 3 - Party's Over
[COMING SOON]