User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 5

The second half of my multiple-parter Fanfiction is now underway, continuing this story with part 5, and as always, here are the other parts that you see before reading this one.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Enjoy reading.

OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Lynn Sr. and Rita are now back in their own bodies.

Lori (see part 3’s overview)

Leni (see part 2’s overview)

Luna (see part 2’s overview)

Lynn (see part 4’s overview, In the previous part, Lynn, while in Lori’s body, did not wear a headband and did not have Lori’s hair in a ponytail. In this part she is wearing a headband again and has Lori’s hair in a ponytail again.)

Lincoln (see parts 2 and 4’s overviews)

Lana, still in Luna’s body, now has Luna’s mouth duct taped. (Also see part 3’s overview)

Luan, Lucy, Lola, Lisa, and Lily all remain the same.

When we last left the Loud House
Lori (In Lynn’s body): Hmmm, I feel like I’m forgetting something.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): What is it?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Something I was supposed to be ready for and I know it’s supposed to happen tomorrow, but what was it?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Well whatever it is, I hope it couldn’t be anything that important.

(Lori looks at herself as Lynn in the mirror.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): But I know it has to be something important… literally.

The Story Continues Here
(The story continues with Lori and Lynn, who are still in each other’s bodies, eating stacks of pancakes and bacon.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): It is time I take serious measures and give this body of yours a very big workout that it never had for 2 years.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): You may just try, while I on the other hand, being stuck in your body, will do what you do best, only this time I will do what you do better than what you can do, that also means I’m having your body to literally lay off those meatball sandwiches for a while, this body should really use a salad for lunch.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Coming to think of it, your body could use a salad too, that ought to make your body look even tougher.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well, we best head off to that fitness place, and put each other’s bodies to the test.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah, let’s do it.

(Lori and Lynn head out of the house. Lincoln sticks his head out of the kitchen, or in that case Leni’s head.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Oh finally, I never thought they’ll never stop eating so much pancakes and bacon, and we’re out of pancake mix and bacon anyway. Well, now to have whatever pancakes and bacon is left that I’ve been cooking for the past half hour.

(Lori and Lynn arrive at the fitness place.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Okay Lori, here we are, the place where you’ll stay fit and in a good shape, and I make sure this body here will get in the best shape as possible.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): And I have to keep this one here in shape, I know how much this one’s gotta have infinite exercise.

(Lori and Lynn then set each other’s bodies to a long montage of exercising, and I mean very long. This long montage includes, Lori (In Lynn’s body) running on a treadmill, Lynn (In Lori’s body) doing bicep curling with a pair of dumbbells, then Lori (In Lynn’s body) on a stationary bicycle, Lynn (In Lori’s body) doing pull ups on a pull up bar, Lori (In Lynn’s body) pushing weights with her legs on the leg press bench, Lynn (In Lori’s body) doing pushdowns with a cable machine, Lori (In Lynn’s body) doing extensions on her (or in that case, Lynn’s) fore legs on a leg extension machine, and then Lynn (In Lori’s body) is shown at the barbell bench.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Alright, this has been done before, I’m sure with enough strength built with this body, I’m confident I can do it.

(Lynn (In Lori’s body) lies down on the bench and begins to slowly lift the barbell of weights, meanwhile Lori (In Lynn’s body) while holding weights with her (or in that case, Lynn’s) arms, is doing squats with her (Lynn’s) legs, bending her (Lynn’s) legs downward, then straightening them back up. Lori repeats this until she sees Lynn at the bench slowly bending her (Lori’s) arms down while holding the weights slowly down. Lori comes to the bench to help Lynn.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Whoa there Lynn, let me help you out here.

(Lori (In Lynn’s body) grabs hold of the weights that Lynn (In Lori’s body) is holding, and with a little of Lori’s help Lynn was able to lift the weights up. The exercise of bending the arms down with the weights and then lifting them back up using Lori’s help was repeated up until Lynn (In Lori’s body) was able to lift the weights by herself, but in slow manner.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Hahaaa, I did it, now that’s what I call a workout.

(Later that day Lori and Lynn were having salads for lunch.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): I think we literally gotten ourselves carried away didn’t we.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah, we sure did.

(Lori and Lynn then laugh with each other.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): At least I’ve gotten your body into a real good shape.

(Lynn flexes Lori’s muscles in her arm.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Wow, I really look stronger with those arms of mine, although it looked be too much of exercising for that body. Coming to think of it maybe it was too much for both our bodies.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Well not too much for my body, but with yours, maybe.

(Lori and Lynn laugh again.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well at least you made my body have a better shape than I at least had before.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Still, we’re not done with our exercising yet.

(After lunch Lori and Lynn continues with their exercising montage, including them doing sit-ups, then jumping jacks, then pushups, and then their montage ending with them running up a long line of stairs. The scene then pauses to Lori and Lynn jumping up and high fiving each other. The scene cuts to the mall, where Bobby is shopping for a suit.)

Bobby: One of these suits has got to be the best one for me.

(Bobby goes through a selection of different suits.)

Bobby: No… no… no… no… no… ugh there’s got to be at least one good suit, hmmm, I don’t want it to just be all black and white, it’s got to be more than that.

Male Employee: Excuse me sir, I couldn’t help overhearing about which suit would be best for you.

Bobby: Oh not at all, I need a good suit to wear on my date; I’m guessing you have some good ones.

Male Employee: Follow me and I’ll show you the best suits we have that’ll be perfect to wear on your date.

(The employee shows Bobby the best suits that Bobby could find, some were found hideous, others were found too stupid looking. The two kept looking until the employee found a smooth tan suit and Bobby found it perfect enough.)

Bobby: I will definitely wear this on my date, now to find a good shirt and tie to go with it.

(Bobby then finds a light-green buttoned long sleeved shirt.)

Bobby: Now here’s something to go with the jacket and pants.

Male Employee: I did find some good ties to go with that suit.

(The employee showed a selection of ties for Bobby to choose. Bobby went for a black tie with thin white stripes.)

Bobby: Now this one goes well to complete the whole suit, thanks for showing me the way to best suits good man.

Male Employee: Anytime!!!

(After Bobby purchasing the suit, he then leaves the mall and heads to his car.)

Bobby: Alright, I got a good suit to wear to my date, now I should send a text to Lori, even if it may not be necessary, I’ll just do it anyway.

(Lori receives the text sent by Bobby in her phone.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Oh, somebody’s messaged me.

(Lori and Lynn look at the text.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Who is it?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): It’s from Bobby; he’s hoping that I remember to get ready for my date with him tonight.

Lynn (In Lori's body): Oh right, your date with Bobby. Um, wait, did he just say tonight?

Lori (In Lynn's body): (Then realizes…)(Gasps) My date with Bobby is tonight, oh no, oh no, OH NO, what am I going to do, what am I going to do? (About to panic)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Whoa Lori, calm down, we’ll do what we have done since Lisa built that machine to switch back to our own bodies.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Oh that’s right, to Lisa’s machine.

(Meanwhile at the Santiago’s house, Bobby was dressing up in the suit he had recently bought with the green buttoned shirt, sprays cologne on himself, puts gel in his hair, and takes a mint. He then looks at himself in the mirror.)

Bobby: Oh yeah, lookin’ good Roberto, lookin’ good.

(Back to Lori and Lynn, they just returned to their house.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Oh hi Lori, hi Lynn.

Luan: Back in time before Lisa’s machine can be at full charge.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): That machine must get to full charge sooner; my date with Bobby is tonight at 7 and I have forgotten all about it.

Leni (Lincoln), Luna (Lana), Luan, Lincoln (Leni), Lucy, Lola, and Lisa: TONIGHT???

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Then we got to get you back in your old body.

(Lincoln and his sisters head up the stairs. Back at the Santiago’s house, Bobby just started to put on the tie he bought from the mall.)

Bobby: I hope Lori doesn’t forget about our date, I’d be disappointed if she did. (Finishes putting on his tie.)

(Back at the Loud’s house all 11 siblings are at Lisa and Lily’s room waiting for the body switching machine to be at full charge, the machine goes from 98% to 99%.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Oh come on, come on.

Lisa: We have to give the machine 15 more minutes before it can fully operate.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): That long? Oooooohh come on come on come on!!! (Lori begins to walk in place.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Keep calm Lori.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Keep it together.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Right, I got to be cool to myself, I know, I can see which dress to wear for my date.

(Lori runs to her room, and is trying to decide which dress to wear.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Hmmm, I got to wear the right dress for my date, but which one should I wear? Oh… no… no… no… no… no no NO… I already wore this… and this… and this too… and I already wore this one… and even this one.

(Back to Lisa and Lily’s room, and 9 minutes already passed.)

Lola: Lisa, how long until it’s ready?

(Lisa looks at the clock.)

Lisa: 6 more minutes to fully operate.

(Meanwhile Bobby is out of the house and walks to his car.)

Bobby: I’ll play some music to keep me on the mood.

(Bobby turns on the radio in the car, and the "Ooh girl" song plays.)

Bobby: Oh yeah I like this song. (sings along)

Ooh girl, if I could…

Ooh girl, give you the…

Ooh girl, world girl…

(Bobby drive off heading to the Loud’s house. Back at the Loud’s house, and 6 minutes have passed, which means Lisa’s machine has reached 100 percent.)

Lisa: The machine is charged now.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Great, I’m going in right now.

Luan: And I’ll tell Lori.

(Lynn (In Lori’s body) goes in one of the pods of the machine, while Luan heads to Lori and Leni’s room.)

Luan: Lori, the machine is ready.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Looks like trying to find a good dress to wear will have to wait.

(Lori heads to Lisa and Lily’s room.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Okay Lisa I’m here.

Lisa: And good timing before your date with Bobby. Lynn has already gone into one of the pods, ready for you to go in the other.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Great, now let’s make this quick.

(Lori enters the other pod, and Lisa presses the red button, activating the body switching machine, mist covers the bodies of Lori and Lynn, and after seconds of them not being fully seen, the machine comes to a stop.)

Lisa: Now to release them.

(Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Lori’s body, and out comes the body of Lori.)

Lori (back in her body): (stretching) Eeeerr yeah, (flexing her bicep) wow, Lynn literally did make me look tougher than I was before. Oh it’s so good to have the old me back, with a new improvement.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Definitely good to have the old older sis back.

Lisa: Now to release Lynn.

(Lisa opens the door of the pod containing Lynn, and Lynn, now back in her body, jumps out of pod.)

Lynn: WOOOOOOOHHHOOOOOO, I’m my old athletic self again, WOOHHOOOO YEAH!!!

Lori: Now to get back to getting ready for my date with Bobby and I have to be ready in… (Lori looks at the time on her phone, and the time says 6:27pm) 33 MINUTES? I HAVE TO BE READY IN 33 MINUTES, (smells her armpit) bleh, and I literally have to take a quick shower; I can’t have Bobby thinking I smell bad. (Lori runs to the bathroom.)

Lynn: It looks our big sis needs our help.

Luan: And she’s definitely going to need it.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Alright, it’s time to put operation help Lori get ready for her date with Bobby, and also think of a shorter name for this operation, into action.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): I have been making a new dress for Lori, one that will be prefect for her date with Bobby.

Luna (In Lana’s body) and Lola: We’ll help with the make-up and perfume.

Luan and Lynn: And we’ll look-out for Bobby.

Lily: Me come.

Luan: Okay Lily, you’ll come with us. (Picks up Lily)

Lucy: I’ll come with you too.

Lynn: Alright, all 4 of us to the front door.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): And Leni, Luna, and Lola with me.

(Luan, Lynn, Lucy, and Lily head downstairs, while Lincoln, Leni, Luna, and Lola head to Lori and Leni’s room)

Lisa: And so that leaves me to watch over Lana.

Lana (In Luna’s body): (Mumbles)

(The scene cuts to Leni, Luna, Lincoln and Lola in Lori and Leni’s room. Leni finds sparkling blue fabric all cut up to form a dress, Lincoln is trying to find the best foot wear for Lori, and Luna and Lola are trying to find the usual make-up that Lori wears, and find the right perfume.)

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Now this dress should be perfect for Lori on her date.

(Leni gets to sewing as quick as she could.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): There’s got to be a pair of shoes that should be perfect for Lori to wear on her date.

Lola: Now here’s something that will make Lori smell great for her date.

(Lola shows a bottle of perfume, saying that it’s strawberry scented. Luna was able to find the usual make-up, including the usual blue eye-liner that Lori wears.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): There’s some eye-liner for Lori, now to find some good make-up.

(Meanwhile Luan, Lynn, Lucy, and Lily are at the front window next to the front door.)

Lynn: Alright, let’s keep a good look out on both sides of the street, Bobby could be anywhere.

(The scene cut to Bobby driving to the Loud’s house and still singing along. Cutting back to the Loud’s house where Lori just got done showering, exits the bathroom, and gets to her bedroom.)

Lori: I still have to find the perfect dress.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): I’m getting your dress done as fast as I can Lori.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Here’s a good pair of shoes you can wear to your date.

(Lincoln shows a pair of light blue high heels.)

Lori: That’s perfect; those will definitely do for my date. Now quick I need to get my hair brushed.

Lola: I got you covered. Leni, throw me that hairbrush.

(Leni throws the hairbrush at Lola, and Lola catches it. Leni continues to sew Lori’s new dress, Lola begins to brush Lori’s hair, and Luna was able to find perfect make-up, and begins to apply to Lori’s face.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): I will go check on the others.

(Lincoln exits Lori and Leni’s room. Meanwhile Luan, Lynn, Lucy, and Lily are still keeping a lookout for Bobby.)

Luan: Any sign of Bobby?

Lucy: No sign of him yet.

(Lily notices Bobby just driving up to the front of their house.)

Lily: Looky!

(Luan, Lynn, and Lucy notice Bobby too.)

Lynn: Good eyes Lily.

(Lincoln comes at the top of the stairs.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Do you see Bobby yet?

Luan: We’re just seeing Bobby getting out of his car right now.

Lynn: Is Lori ready to come down yet?

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): We’re still getting the final touches on Lori before she can come down.

Lucy: Well I hope you get it done fast, because Bobby’s almost at the door.

(Back to Lori and Leni’s room)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Done applying make-up.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): I have the dress finished.

(Leni, Luna, and Lola begin dressing Lori up, with shots cutting from dress, to earring, to shoe. Bobby rings the doorbell.)

Luan: Okay, let’s all just act natural. (Breathes in, and opens the door) Oh, hi Bobby.

Bobby: Hey there Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lily.

Lily: Hahah.

Lynn: Wow Bobby, such a nice suit you’re wearing there.

Bobby: Why thank you, just picked this one from the mall today to make me look good for my date with my babe.

Lucy: Now that looks really good on you, just like most guys.

Bobby: So can someone tell me if Lori is…

Lori: I’m ready.

(Lori comes down the stairs wearing a sparkling blue dress going over one shoulder and going down past her knees.)

Lori: So, how do I look?

Bobby: Wow, Babe, you look wonderful, that is such a nice dress.

Lori: Thanks Boo Boo Bear, glad you like it.

(Lori hugs Bobby, but due to her strong arms thanks to Lynn, she accidently squeezes Bobby so hard.)

Bobby: Oooooh!!!

Luan and Lynn: Oooh!!!

Lori: Oh, whoops, heheh, sorry about that, guess "I" gave my body a very good workout, didn’t I Lynn? (Winks at Lynn)

Lynn: Um, yeah, you sure did Lori. (Winks at Lori)

Lori: Didn’t realize I could become this strong could I. (Flexes her muscles in her arm.)

Bobby: (Feels Lori’s arm) Wow, you really did give those biceps a great workout, I’m so impressed, and maybe I should give my arms a good workout too.

Lori: Ready for our date Boo Boo Bear?

Bobby: Ready Babe.

Lori: (To Lynn) Tennis game tomorrow Lynn?

Lynn: Well I was going to ask Lincoln to play tennis with me, but since you asked, it is on.

(Lori and Lynn fist bump.)

Bobby: Alright Babe, let’s get going.

(Bobby and Lori leave the house.)

Lynn: Bye Lori.

Luan: You two have fun on your date.

(Leni, Luna, Lincoln, and Lola come down the stairs.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): We did it dudes.

Lola: We actually did it.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well girls, operation help Lori get ready for her date is a success, well done to us all.

(Leni (Lincoln), Luna (Lana), Luan, Lynn, Lincoln (Leni), Lucy, Lola, and Lily all cheer for their success. The final scene cuts to the front of the house outside, where Bobby and Lori were just driving off.)

Bobby: Now for a nice fast ride.

Lori: WOOHOOHOOO!!!

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 6

Before you say anything
This fanfic takes place before The Loudest Mission: Relative Chaos, that's why the Santiago family is at their old house before moving.

== Other parts =

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 6 (coming soon)

Part 7 (work in progress)

Part 8 (work in progress)