Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-30408884-20161225200008/@comment-24200891-20161225233906

Thank you. It was also incredibly long for my fanfic. prologue, 7 chapters and epilogue. I wondered if not transfer some lines to another story. I incorporated there flashbacks from Frigid Fever, Responsibility Issues, Brace Bro and Second Loud Brother.

Holly asked me for Lucy's birth but someone did it faster so I resigned. However I still think I can write it better. In short Linc feels lonely since his elder sisters go to school. Lucy comes to world and everything changes. He's jealous because he's not the youngest but Lucy is crazy about him, she likes him like he liked Luna as a baby.