User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Pool of Pity/@comment-26981664-20170218143005

Great fanfic, Harburton. I like how the Loud Sisters we're working together to help Lincoln with his hydrophobia. The part when Lisa was ticked about the others not comprehending what the fear of water is was hilarious! After Lincoln conquered his hydrophobia and saved Lynn from drowning, they both shared a tender sibling moment together. Quite a good story.

By the way, no one can easily drown in a small pool as the Paradise for One, you should've gave the Loud Siblings a much bigger one than that, along with the fanfics 'Off-Loud', and 'A Pox Among Us'.