User blog:AustinDR/Well, This is New

So, basically, I had been given a review on one of my stories; Luan's Problem a few hours ago. I wasn't expecting that, but it is pretty interesting. As for the final grade, yeah, I can live with that. I mean, I did deliberately over exagerrate Bitterns' character becasue I used several teachers for inspiration ranging from the Trunchbull, Dolores Umbridge, some of my college/ elementarty / high school teachers (Ha). As for the issue with time, yeah, I also admit that it was faulty. I poorly tried to convey both sides of the story, and yeah, I guess Luan received a bit too harsh of a rebuke. But keep in mind Lincoln could've probably suffered worse because of her. She nearly killed Lincoln, so I felt that it was pretty obvious that the other sisters would be peeved at her. Yeah, and Blogsby not charging anything...yeah, that'd never happen. Yeah, there are several holes that you could make in the story, but I don't really care.

Overall, I do get most of the issues with the story; hey, at least it was short unlike SI.