Thread:BigFanofEntertainment/@comment-30953185-20170322005651/@comment-26302585-20170324035323

So I checked out your first fanfic and I have to say, it was pretty good.

Now for what the sisters say to Lincoln. Here's what I'm thinking.

(after Lincoln, Lisa and Nolan go inside the Loud House. The other sisters are in the living room and immediately glare at Lincoln)

Lincoln: (nervously) "Hey guys. Guess what, I brought Lisa back to herself."

Lisa: "Greetings my fellow female siblings."

(the other sisters still glare at Lincoln, who nervously chuckles)

Lori: "What were you thinking Lincoln?"

Lincoln: "*sighs* I was only trying to help her fit in with my peers, and maybe so I wouldn't be an outcast myself, but I realized that trying to changing her wasn't a good thing to do."

Lynn: "Really?! You were only trying to make her different from who she is just so she would 'fit in' and to please your peers?!"

Lincoln: "I know, it was stupid and selfish of me, but-"

Leni: "But nothing! Because of you, she was acting like someone she wasn't!"

Luan: "Not to mention it inconvenienced us."

Luna: "Yeah dude, that was a really low move of you."

Lori: "What you pulled showed us that you only care for yourself and don't love your sisters for who they are!"

Other sisters (sans Lisa): "Yeah!"

(Lincoln is hurt by what he just heard. Tears begin to form in his eyes and he runs to his room. Lisa looks angrily at her sisters)

Lisa: "I normally don't care for inane human emotions, but I can tell when a sibling of mine needs emotional comfort". (runs to Lincoln's room)

And this is where you scold them.

How's this?