User blog:Popstartwin/can you help me fix my story the loudest play

I need help fix my story it call the Loudest play  if you good at writing and theater art  you will be in my story.

I want you to do is go edit and fix my story or fix my story down from the if you write a good story. I put the  winning name down  in my next blog. Comment  down below  .Hope you leave you comment down below and See you later  .