Thread:BigFanofEntertainment/@comment-30953185-20180610054211/@comment-26302585-20180622070149

I just read it. You were right, it wasn't as bad as Game Crashed, but it still wasn't good. Honestly, I think Lincoln spending the money, which the sisters gave him to pay off a dept, on a video game was incredibly dumb. And Ronnie Anne coming in to save Lincoln from the bully the moment he was about the give the money just comes off as contrived. Lincoln was made into an idiot, because I don't buy that he would just spend the money his sisters gave to save him like that. If the younger sisters or even Leni wouldn't do that, then why would Lincoln do that? Even Patrick Star and Ed would tell Lincoln that it was a bad idea. But even with how dense Lincoln was in the story, the sisters were no better. I mean seriously? Measuring his coffin size? Taking his room? Physically assaulting him?! I'm sorry, but in my eyes, these character are not the same characters from the show (both the sisters and Lincoln).

As for the Gregory, he's pretty much just a generic bully, who for some reason hasn't been told on and the teachers don't seem to pay attention. Seriously, what are the teachers doing while he's forcing kids to pay him? Are they dense too? And why didn't Ronnie Anne do something about him before? How convenient that Ronnie Anne stops Gregory just when Lincoln was about to pay him, and then Lincoln makes a dumb move.

Here's my overall reaction to this fic. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LTNP792ykYM

(sigh) I'm so glad I got that out. But hey, at least it had a better ending than Game Changed.