Thread:Flash of Memory/@comment-28183553-20170125033749/@comment-28183553-20170130001207

Well, you've been doing fine so far, but when you add in that little "br" part that breaks down to another line for another piece of dialogue or an occurrence in the script, you don't hit "enter" to go to the next line. It'll go onto the next line automatically. Also, the flashback of them being washed away down the river should have its own separate line after Clyde asks how they got into that situation. Same goes to them running away from the bees after he notices he's laying on a beehive. It's your first time doing transcripts, so I figured I'd tell you that.

Also, for LL:GG, it has the cleanup template because there might be some actions or lines missing from it.