Thread:RoniX2D/@comment-25979382-20161231024403/@comment-25979382-20161231160818

Ok, Sorry about that. Just two things I want to change (you decide if it changes or not): I don't really like the subplot with Luan being insecure. She is probably around the age where that's normal, but I kind of don't like the story going into that territory (with any of the characters, not just her). If it becomes important to the story, that's fine. You can make the final desicion. Secondly, there are a few typos here and there. They don't bother me really, but I don't know if you wanted to know about them. Other than that, the fanfic is coming along great! I'm sorry I couldn't help with it recently, it's the holiday season so I was pretty busy.