User blog:TheEyeOfAllEyes/Fanfiction - Freaky Louds part 4

Part 4 of my fanfic is here, and in case if you haven't seen other parts...

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

You can read them all before reading this part if you haven't done so yet.

To the rest who have followed along, enjoy reading.

OVERVIEW ON THE LOUD FAMILY
Lynn Sr. and Rita, who are in each other’s bodies, still wear the same usual outfits.

Lori (see part 3’s overview)

Leni (see part 2’s overview)

Luna (see part 2’s overview)

Luan remains the same.

Lynn (see part 3’s overview, In the previous part, Lynn, while in Lori’s body, wore a headband and had Lori’s hair in a ponytail. In this part she is not wearing a headband and does not have Lori’s hair in a ponytail.)

Lincoln, still in Leni’s body, has Leni’s sunglasses back from Lily. (Also see part 2’s overview)

Lucy is back in her own body. In the previous part Lucy was wearing a diaper while Lily was stuck in Lucy’s body. After getting their bodies back, Lucy has since then changed back to her usual legwear.

Lana (see part 3’s overview)

Lola remains the same.

Lisa remains the same.

Lily is back in her own body. In the previous part, Lily wore Leni’s sunglasses, and since getting her body back, Lincoln, being in Leni’s body, got Leni’s sunglasses back from Lily.

THE STORY CONTINUES HERE
(The story continues with Rita having a bad dream. Rita and Lynn Sr. are in their own bodies during this dream.)

Rita: You have to get rid of these shirts.

Lynn Sr.: But they still fit me, and besides there’s not a single shirt that I want to give away.

Rita: But honey, look at all these shirts.

Lynn Sr.: I love my shirts, and nothing you do will tear me apart from them.

(The word “nothing” echoed in Rita’s head, then thousands of shirts began raining down on Rita.)

Rita: NNNOOOOOOO!!!

(Rita wakes up from her dream, still stuck in the body of her husband, and because Lynn Sr. kicked her out of their bedroom, Rita slept in Lincoln’s bedroom.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): (wakes up) AHH!!! (Breathes calmly) What a nightmare.

(The time shows that it’s 7:21am, Rita gets up from Lincoln’s bed, opens the door and sees all her children standing in front of her.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Oh, kids, I see you’re all up and out.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Hey Mom, we’ve heard some screaming in there, and we just want to make sure you’re feeling okay after what happened yesterday.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Unless having that dream about raining shirts counts, I am not feeling ok.

(Rita walks past her kids and straight down the stairs.)

Lynn (In Lori’s body): We have got to do something to get Mom and Dad to make up.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Only problem is, how?

(Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body) enters the kitchen and sees Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body); Lynn Sr. also sees her, and then turns away from Rita with his back (or in that case, Rita’s back) facing Rita.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Uh, honey…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Not another word out from you, I had to spend the rest of the day yesterday gathering all my shirts that you threw out of the closet.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): That’s what I…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): No no, I already know what you’re going to say, “But honey, those shirts were old, you’ve outgrown some of those shirts, some are too tight for you!!!”

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): That’s not what I…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Don’t even think about saying what I know you’re going to say, there is no use lying your way out of this argument after the attitude you’ve given me yesterday.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): But I’m…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Don’t but me, all of your explanations will not come through.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): But can’t I…

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): NO!!!

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): (sighs)

(Rita leaves the kitchen; all 11 children had heard everything.)

Luan: Wow that was harsh.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Your father won’t let me talk to him at all, he’s still mad at me for the shirts I tried to get him to give away, and I still don’t know if changing back to my old body will happen at all.

Lucy: I did talk to Dad yesterday and… well… sigh…

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, what happened?

Lucy: This will not sound pretty.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): What did Dad say to you?

Lucy: Dad… does not want to change back to his original body.

(The other 10 kids and Rita gasp.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Please tell us he’s kidding.

Lucy: I wish he was, but he isn’t.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): But I don’t want to have a Mom sounding like Dad and a Dad sounding like Mom forever.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Oh, I knew it, now I’ll never get my own body back.

(Rita starts to cry. All her children comfort her, all except Lana (In Luna’s body) whose still duct taped to the two-wheeled dolly.)

Lana (In Luna’s body): I wish I wasn’t on this dolly so I could join the huddle.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): I hate to see our own Mom cry like this.

Luna (In Lana’s body): As much as being stuck in a different body, I think the same thing.

Lola: How will we get Mom and Dad to make up now?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Until you all can think up something, if anyone needs me I’ll be in Lincoln’s room.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Everyone to my room, time we have to sort out this big issue that’s been going on with Mom and Dad since yesterday.

(All 11 kids are now in Lori and Leni’s room.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): So we all know why we’re here.

Luan: Here about Dad’s anger issue at Mom.

Luna (In Lana’s body): All because she tried to get rid of Dad’s old shirts.

Lola: And if that not being worse enough, Dad kicking Mom out of their bedroom.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): If we don’t get this sorted out by tonight, Mom may have to sleep in my room again, and I have to sleep on the couch again.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): There needs to be some way to get Mom and Dad to talk to each other.  Lisa: I think I may have the right idea.

(The story cuts to the parents’ bedroom, where a knocking on the door is heard.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Dad, its Luna and Lola.

Lola: Can you open the door?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): (Sighs!) Sure thing.

(Lynn Sr. opens the door for Luna and Lola.)

Luna (In Lana’s body): Hi Dad.

Lola: We were wondering if you can come with us to the living room.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Whatever for?

Lola: Oh you’ll see.

Luna (In Lana’s body): C’mon Dad.

(Luna and Lola take their dad to the living room and to the couch, where Rita and Lori (In Lynn Sr. and Lynn Jr.’s bodies) were sitting at.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Oh, this is rather awkward.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Let Mom get the chance to actually talk to you, try and talk good sense to each other.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): We’re going to leave you two to be now.

(Lori (In Lynn’s body), Luna (In Lana’s body), and Lola leave the living room and up the stairs. The parents say nothing to each other for a minute. Then Lynn Sr. finally spoke up.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Well?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Well what?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Since the kids insisted I should let you have a chance to talk to me, I’m waiting for that apology.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): What apology?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): That apology for making a mess of shirts in our room, all the shirts that belonged to me, not you.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): You expect me to apologize to you after you kicked me out of our bedroom?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): You had no right to take out my shirts from the closet, and for that reason, I had to kick you out.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.'s body): Well I'm waiting for an apology from you for your attitude, and the way you kicked me out of our room.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita's body): Not until you apologize first.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): THEN I HAVE NOTHING TO BE SORRY FOR.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): WELL FINE, I DON’T EITHER.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): FINE!!!

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): FINE!!!

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): FINE!!!

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): FFFFIIIIIINNNE!!!

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I’LL JUST SLEEP IN LINCOLN’S ROOM AGAIN TONIGHT, GGGRRRRRR.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): GGGRRRRRR.

(Lynn Sr. goes back to his bedroom and slams the door. Rita heads up the stairs.)

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): NOW I NEVER WANT TO TALK TO MY OWN HUSBAND EVER AGAIN.

(Rita goes into Lincoln’s room, slams the door, screams, and then cries.)

Mr. Grouse: (offscreen) LOUDS, STOP WITH ALL THAT SCREAMING, YOU ALMOST MADE ME SPILL MY TEA.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Well, that’s it dudes.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): I guess we all failed to get Mom and Dad to make amends.

Luan: Oh, bummer!!!

Lily: Poo poo!!!

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): We should all go comfort Mom.

Lucy: Good idea.

Lisa: I’ll check on my machine.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Let’s face it; it’s over between Mom and Dad.

(All sisters except Lisa enter Lincoln’s room to comfort their Mom, while Lisa goes into her room.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): No, it’s not over.

(Lincoln slides down the stair railing and runs towards his parents’ bedroom. Once at the door he could hear his dad crying. He put his ear (or Leni’s ear in that case) to the door to hear clearly. Lincoln tries to open the door but it’s locked.)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Uh, Dad?

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Please leave me be, I don’t wish to talk.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Dad it’s me, Lincoln.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Is Rita with you.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): No Dad, it’s just me.

(Lynn Sr. unlocks the door, and Lincoln enters his parents’ bedroom.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I hope what you’re here to talk about should not have to do with Rita.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): It is to do with Mom, just face it Dad, you really miss her.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): What are you talking about, I don’t miss her any bit.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): But I heard you crying when I came over here.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I was not crying, I just had something big stuck in my eyes.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Just admit it Dad, I know you can’t last another day being without someone you love so much, I know you need Mom, and Mom needs you. Just tell me truth Dad, do you really miss your own wife?

(Lynn Sr. looks at his self as Rita in the mirror.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Oh who am I kidding? I am alone, I do miss Rita, and I do feel incomplete without her, kicking my wife out of our room was a big mistake, and I let my anger get the better of me.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): That’s it, so how about you finally give Mom another chance.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I will give Rita another chance; let’s go Lincoln, time to bring my wife back.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): That’s the spirit Dad.

(The story cuts to Lisa and Lily’s room, and Lisa’s machine shows that it’s 99% charged, few seconds later the 99% charged changes to 100% charged.)

Lisa: Brilliant, my machine is at full charge again.

Rita: (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I’ll let you kids decide who should switch back, we all know your father doesn’t want to.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well, even if Dad doesn’t want to, we’re all deciding that you and Dad will switch back to your own bodies.

Luan: Yeah, we want the old Mom and Dad back.

Lucy: I don’t care any bit about what Dad told me.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): It’s really nice of you kids, but you all know what your dad said, even if deciding on me switching back with my husband, it still not going to matter.

Lisa: If switching our parents back to their respective bodies won’t be an option, anyone else who should go next?

Luna (In Lana’s body): If Dad doesn’t want to then we’ll go with me and Lana.

Lana (In Luna’s body): No way, I volunteer Lori and Lynn.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Even though I really want my body back so much so I can be in great shape again, I think that will have to wait.

Lana (In Luna’s body): NO, YOU WILL NOT MAKE ME.

(Lana tries to move herself while on the dolly but ends up knocking herself over. Lynn Sr. and Lincoln (In Rita and Leni’s bodies) enter Lisa and Lily’s room, and Lynn Sr. catches Lana before Lana could get seriously hurt, or in that case get Luna’s body hurt.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): ENOUGH, ALL OF YOU (breathes deeply), I will go next.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Dad? We thought you didn’t care anymore.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Dad had a change of heart.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): I felt too lonely and didn’t want to admit to have regretted my decision of kicking my own wife out of our room.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Now you won’t have to hide the truth any longer.

(Lynn Sr. takes Rita’s hand, or in that case, his own hand.)

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Rita, I’m sorry I kicked you out of our bedroom, and for my anger. I was too selfish to care how sad you were, and to make it up to you, I will change from your body and get my old self back, and give you your body back.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): And I’m sorry I tried to get rid of your old shirts when it isn’t my place to do what’s your responsibility.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Maybe I could get rid of some shirts, but only ones I think I shouldn’t keep anymore.

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): Whatever decision you make, I will let you decide.

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): So do you accept my apology?

Rita (In Lynn Sr.’s body): I truly accept.

(The parents hug each other.)

All 11 Kids: Aaaaaaaaawwww!!!

Lynn Sr. (In Rita’s body): Now let’s go get our own bodies back.

(Each parent enters one pod, and Lisa presses the red button, activating the machine, mist in the pods cover the bodies of the parents until they couldn’t be fully seen, seconds after the machine’s activation, it stops. Both doors on both pods open, and the parents exit the pods.)

Lynn Sr. (back in his body): Haha, the old Lynn Sr. is back.

Rita (back in her body): And I’m back the way I that I will always look like.

Lynn Sr.: What we both should always look like.

(The parents then kiss each other off-screen.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Okay, we should all let them have their moment.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): Yeah!!!

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Totally!!!

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Definitely!!!

Luan: I hear you!!!

Lisa: I couldn’t agree more!!!

(The 11 siblings leave Lisa and Lily’s room to leave the parents alone with their moment. Later on the parents are back at their bedroom.)

Rita: Thank you honey for letting me back to our bedroom.

Lynn Sr.: Nothing else can make me happier than being with a woman I love most.

Rita: So are you going to do anything with all those shirts you have at all?

Lynn Sr.: Well, I’ll look through all of them, since I haven’t had the chance to go through the rest of the shirts that you haven’t taken out. (Giggles)

Rita: (Giggles as well)

(The 11 siblings are at Lori and Leni’s room, all cheering after their parents’ amend.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Well everyone, It seems getting Mom and Dad to make up with each other was a success after all.

Luan: And we have Lincoln to thank.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Oh, it was nothing really.

Lisa: Now with our parents’ problem solved we can leave it all behind now, and focus on just the one important thing.

Lynn (In Lori’s body): The other half of us yet to switch back to our own bodies and live our lives the way we normally live it.

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): And we all hope to keep it at being the only focus, all of us knows that body-switching machine works only once every day.

Lisa: Which means it will take the next three days until everyone is in their proper place.

Lori (In Lynn’s body): And so the six of us in different bodies will be ready when that machine is ready to work again.

Leni (Lincoln), Luna (Lana), Lynn (Lori), and Lincoln (Leni): YEAH!!!

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Um wait; that’s only five of us, I know that I look to be in Lincoln’s body and have to go back to my own soon, but we’re missing someone.

Lana (In Luna’s body): Ugh, they mean me, you guys can do what you want with yourselves, but I’m staying in this body, it makes me look a lot cool.

Luna (In Lana’s body): Oh we’ll do whatever we want with ourselves, as well as doing what we’re going to do to you.

Lola: And that is to make sure we put you back to the right body you’re meant to have.

Lana (In Luna’s body): You think I’ll ever will switch back to my…

(Lynn duct tapes Lana’s mouth (or in that case, Luna’s mouth.))

Lynn (In Lori’s body): I think we’ve heard enough from you.

Lana (In Luna’s body): (Mumbles)

Lincoln (In Leni’s body): Well, we best head to our rooms, I can finally get back to mine and I won’t have to sleep on the couch again.

(Lincoln and 8 of his sisters head to their rooms.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Hmmm, I feel like I’m forgetting something.

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): What is it?

Lori (In Lynn’s body): Something I was supposed to be ready for and I know it’s supposed to happen tomorrow, but what was it?

Leni (In Lincoln’s body): Well whatever it is, I hope it couldn’t be anything that important.

(Lori looks at herself as Lynn in the mirror.)

Lori (In Lynn’s body): But I know it has to be something important… literally.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 5

Other parts
Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 5 (coming soon)

Part 6 (coming soon)

Part 7 (work in progress)

Part 8 (work in progress)