User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 25)/@comment-39422678-20190522232456

Another interesting episode. However, I would like to point out a few flaws that drag these newer PTTFW episodes down for me.

1) It feels as if the Louds are becoming more and more aggravated with each new story. This makes the series less fun as they are now pretty much just annoyed with almost every minor flaw the writers make.

2) Lisa not getting annoyed with the grammer and tense mistakes anymore. Those moments were really funny in the earlier episodes.

3) They almost always seem to read stories about Lincoln being the "black sheep" of the family. Can't they read other types of stories like maybe a superhero AU fanfic or something? Heck, why not have them read a crossover story while we're at it?

Sorry if it sounds like i'm nitpicking, but I just find the earlier episodes to be of better quality.

On a side note, maybe you can have the next episode have Lincoln and his friends (Clyde, Liam, Stella, Zach, and Rusty) read a story together to change things up a bit?