User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: Singled Out (collab w/ EpsilonMk46)/@comment-31829890-20180203201553

Would it be possible if you could review this fanfic?

https://pastebin.com/u/KielYuri

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12726532/1/With-Teeth-Chapter-14-Improved