Thread:DPSII/@comment-24200891-20170617052430/@comment-30158554-20170708182303

Looks okay but there are 2 errors: 1. Leni's skin cannot tan and 2. one part you wrote: "Leni and Lana came to boat together" when it was Lola. But Leni thinkin its tween stare boat is funny tho.