User blog:Harburton81/Fanfic Short - Late Rate

My first fanfic short. Commentary is acceptable and I hope you can enjoy.

Plot
(It's morning in the Loud House, Lincoln is sleeping quietly in his bed; He wakes up and glances at his alarm clock, it's 7:30, he screams in shock)

LINCOLN: Oh no! - Lincoln said, shocked - I need to get to school!

(Lori kicks downs Lincoln's door in anger, shocking Lincoln, Lori grabs her)

LORI: Can you stop screaming?! - Lori yelled - I'm literally trying to sleep!

(Lori then throws Lincoln on the floor, he grabs her face place it close to him)

LINCOLN: You don't understand! - Lincoln said, shocked - I'm about to ruin my prefect attendance record. my grade point average, and my time at the library! I won't let it happened, drive my there!

LORI: (annoyed) And I'm about to ruined my beauty sleep! - Lori said, annoyed - Toodles!

(Lori went back to her room to go back to sleep, Lincoln then went to the twins room, he tries waking up Lana)

LINCOLN: Lana, wake up! - Lana called - Wake up!

LANA: (dreaming) No, I want that with extra mud. - Lana mumbles

(Lincoln headpalms in annoyance, he turns to Lola, but she wakes up and grabs his neck)

LOLA: Wake me up or you will end! - Lola threatens

(Lola then went back to sleep, Lincoln runs to his room and get dressed)

LINCOLN: I should wake up the others up, but they'll be angry. - Lincoln mentions

(He looks at his alarm clock and it's 7:50, he screams)

LOLA: (from her room) KEEP IT DOWN OR I'LL END YOU! - Lola screams

LINCOLN: Sorry. - Lincoln said

LORI: QUIET, LOLA! - Lori screams

LINCOLN: I got no time, class starts in ten minutes. Good thing I don't need my backpack, since I'd left it in my locker. - Lincoln said - Start the clock!

(A timer appears on the top-right corner with 10 minutes on it, he run downstairs, Rita has a breakfast tray for herself)

RITA: Ah, breakfast prepared for myself, now to dig in and... - Rita said

(Lincoln zoom pasted her mother and takes her toast and juice, he runs back and saves her one piece of toast and he kiss her cheek, he runs outside on his bike, he zooms past a tree, he see's a kid crying in the grass)

LINCOLN: What's wrong, kid? - Lincoln ask

BOY: My cat is stuck in a tree. - the boy cried

(Lincoln sighs and he uses a ladder to get up to the tree and reaches for the cat, but the cat attacks Lincoln and he falls on the grass, he hands the cat back to the boy)

BOY: Thanks. - the boy thanked

(Lincoln glances at his watch and it's 7:55, he hops back on his bike and race to the school and park his bike on a bike rack)

LINCOLN: Yes! I made it with one minute to spare! - Lincoln said, excited

(Lincoln tries opening the door, but they're locked, he put his foot on the door and forced it opens, it wouldn't bud)

LINCOLN: What the heck?! - Lincoln yells

(He looks through the door and no people was there, and he looks at the window and no people was there neither, meaning one thing, he headpalms)

LINCOLN: (deadpanned) It's Saturday, isn't it? - Lincoln ask, deadpanned

LENI: (walking to him) Sunday, Linky. - Leni claims

(The other sisters then walk to their brother)

LOLA: You didn't know it was Sunday, Lincoln? - Lola ask, mad - Are you serious?

LINCOLN: I thought it was Monday. - Lincoln laments

LUNA: You done this yesterday, dude. - Luna said - I think you're paranoid of being late.

LUAN: That was a waste of ''time! ''(laughs) - Luan joked

(Everyone else groans in agony, Lincoln sighs)

LINCOLN: (bored) I'm going back to bed. - Lincoln said

THE END