User blog comment:AndrewBrauer/Fanfiction - Whipped/@comment-28517097-20170520054636

The ending need some improvement like his sisters hugging him for forgiveness. Also, its not Lincoln's fault who started the whole thing, its actually his sisters. If they just let him decide instead of trying to win him over on their side, NONE OF THIS WOULD NEVER HAPPEN!! They try to win him over on which is better to go which makes him have a great time and wanted more. So, its ALL his sisters FAULT for making him feel that way and for trying to use him to win their vote!