User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Rea-Loud-ty/@comment-24200891-20161118071451

Whole concept for the story was original and cool.

Joke "How does a poet sneeze? Haiku!" is hilarious. So is "Where do pencils go for vacation? Pencil-vania!"

It's interesting how fame can change nice people into snobs. Lori, Linc, Leni, Lana and Luna were the worst. Ronnie was justified to no longer trust Lincoln after how he misbehaved. That's realistic.

Lori, Lincoln, Luan, Lola, Lana and Lisa realise themselves that their family has changed. That's a rare situation when they all agree. Interesting and cool is that not only Lincoln opens eyes of his snobish sisters, Lisa, Haiku and Tabie also.

I like the reference to It's a 4xLoud House as the worst episode. This fanfic is so great it should have been an actual episode. One of the best and most credible fanfics I've read.