Thread:Dragonzako/@comment-33694397-20180513211531/@comment-33694397-20180515005952

IRR: It seems like continuity is only used when it benefits the author's story.

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LOLA: There only one thing that I must do. - Lola said

(Lola walk downstairs and goes outside, the others see this and follow her, Lola reach Lincoln tree house and knock on his door)

LINCOLN: It's open. - Lincoln said

(Lola comes in and Lincoln was mad)

LINCOLN: Get out. - Lincoln said

LOLA: Lincoln, I came here to apologize to you. - Lola said sadly - I'm really sorry for all those times I been cruel and violent to you, especially that time I prank you, I was so angry, (her voice breaks) I never should of took my frustration on you all those times. (get teary-eyed) I should of been nicer to you, Lana, and the others, and I never get to say this to you, but, I love you, Lincoln.

(Lola shed tears on her face, Lincoln was touched by her apology and hugged her, he rubbed Lola's tears off her face)

LINCOLN: I forgive you, Lola. - Lincoln said - That was very kind.

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IRR: At least the fanfic is not making Lola a complete monster. I guess it's okay, if not a little forced. Maybe I'd be more understanding if Lincoln wasn't being so unreasonable.