User blog:Lucasthewikiguy13/Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews 5: The Return of Ace Savvy

Ok guys this review has been overdue due to me being a lazy bum and sick, "though the sick part was only for today," so let's move on. Now today we will review the fanfiction, "The Return of Ace Savvy," which apparently after reading I feel like it's story was in a way like the episode, Sleuth and Consequences, so it's interesting! Let's take a look shall we?

Part 1: Storyline

Ok I feel like I shouldn't go into full detail into the story so once more we will do just the main parts. So the story starts off with Lincoln hanging with Luna and they decide to go to the comic book store. However a window on Vanzilla is broken, and of course Lori, who was going to drive them, points the finger at Lincoln cause we know at this point, the sister's would usually always point the finger at Lincoln, "Although in most fanfictions it's usually only the meaner sisters." However Lori also points a finger at Luna since she usually helps wreck the van in some way like Lincoln. Soon everyone, except Rita somehow, comes out and all blame Lincoln. Leni tries to stand up for Lincoln, but Lori NOW points the finger at Lincoln. Lynn Sr, since he can't point the finger at anyone, grounds everyone then until one of them fesses up.

So Lincoln decides to solve the crime, Ace Savvy style, and him, Clyde, Luna, and later Leni decide to try and find out who did it. But however none of the sisters they interviewed did it. Now I expected a sister to do it, but this story takes A TURN!

Now they find a purple hat and figure out it belongs to the kid who the sisters thought bullied Lincoln in Heavy Meddle, who people call Chuck for obvious reasons I cannot figure out. However he has the purple hat at his trailer so they decide it couldn't be him, "Remember that."

Lincoln at this point is mad and decides to blame Leni since she never got anything right so Leni runs off. Luna attempts to get her, and Chuck for some reason, which will be revealed later, kidnaps her and Luna sees so she goes to get Lincoln and Clyde to help get her back, but Lincoln is still kind of annoyed but after they talk, Lincoln believes her and they all go to save Leni.

Leni wakes up where Chuck reveals he did everything since he hates the Loud's since they got him grounded and getting him grounded again when he stole their stuff. Soon Lincoln, Luna, and Clyde come and fight Chuck until they stop him and save Leni.

Chuck tells the family he did it and his family now has to pay for the broken window. Everyone apologizes to Lincoln for not believing him and everything works out in the end.

'''[Ok I am unsure about this so how about a 7/10. I consider that plot average and I enjoyed some stuff in the plot, such as Leni and Luna in their costumes from, "Deuces Wild!" and Chuck being the villain. One thing that bothered me is that the rest of the family didn't help Leni even though SHE WAS KIDNAPPED. Like Lincoln, Luna, and Clyde rushed the scene without getting help from others or even the cops. Chuck should go to jail, this was a serious offense."]'''

Part 2: Characters

The main characters in this story are Lincoln, Luna, Leni, Chuck, and Clyde and I personally think they were portrayed quite good. I like Chuck as the main villain also since I personally think he is a villain.

[I'll give it a 9/10 since some people may not consider Chuck an official villain.]

Part 3: Style

To be honest to me the style feels like a mystery/drama/comedy which can be a lot of fun. I think the style works quite well in here too but it doesn't flow just as greatly as the characters.

'''[8/10 since the style is still pretty good for the story. Moving On!]'''

Part 4: Does the story have anything missing?

Well to be honest I notice a few stuff missing. First off Rita should've been in the story to help make the flow better. The other family members and cops should've helped Lincoln, Luna, and Clyde save Leni since this is still kidnapping people! But other then that I don't think anything is really missing.

[Another 8/10 so still pretty good even though I already said that.

Part 5: Final Rating

'''[So my final rating for the story is a 32/40 so a B-. Now this is so far the lowest score for a fanfiction I reviewed but the story itself is not bad. there are details there and there but at the end of the day it is a good story that people should check out at least once.]'''

'''So that's it my 5th Review! It's been a while since my last one so leave a comment down below on what Fanfiction I should do next. And I will see you all next time to Lucas's Fanfiction Reviews!'''