User blog comment:007Jamesdean/No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out/@comment-30953185-20180723040500/@comment-31358352-20180723045910

Dang, that's gotta hurt. For the nasty Louds involved in this chapter, I mean. Hopefully from now on, things will turn out good for the good Louds now that they're living with the Santiagos. Still, for an experimental one shot, it's not that bad, really. It's not great really, but I had a little fun reading this. So, I think you did okay with this one, James. But there's always room for improvement, I'd say. And don't be too hard on James, Thomper, alright? It's was just for experimental reasons and done in one's own way.