User blog comment:Thomperfan/Selfie Improvement (my version)/@comment-26521507-20180222221103/@comment-24092553-20180223000754

@IronRaphRa Personally, my biggest problem with Thomperfan's fics is that his self-insert is basically a Gary-Stu, evidenced by him constantly including forced romantic moments between him and Leni and always including at least one or two lines in about half of his fics to praise himself.

@HBN1 We're giving him constructive critcism.