User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction: Peeking Through the Fourth Wall (Episode 8)/@comment-30953185-20171217182304/@comment-30953185-20180115034419

If I could make a suggestion on a more nice scene, it would go something like this:

Leni: He WHAT?!

[In a fit of rage, Leni stands up, grabs Lincoln by the neck and lifts him off the ground with one hand.]

Luna: Leni, chill! It's just a story! He didn't really do any of that!

''[Leni's anger immediately vanishes, and she gently sets a terrified Lincoln back down on the couch. Leni replaces her look with one of guilt and sadness.]''

Leni: [gasps; guilty] OMGosh, I am SO sorry, Lincoln! I have NO idea what came over me! I didn't hurt you, did I?!

Lincoln: [Still shaky] N-No, Leni, I-I'm fine.

[Leni pulls Lincoln into a tight hug and kisses his forehead]

Leni: I love you, Linky. You know that, don't you?

Lincoln: Of course I know, Leni! L-Let's just continue reading the story.

Leni: Okay.