User blog comment:YoshiRocker13/Fanfiction - Trustworthy Part 2/@comment-24669562-20161223110224

I'm so glad I finally got to read this!

First the music wasn't bad, I decided to listen to it first before reading the fanfic because I cannot read and listen to music at the same time, at least not lyricised music, instrumental maybe but not with lyrics, I get easily distracted and my attention span is too short.

It was so nice of Lincoln's sisters to try and make up to Lincoln for what they did to him and it took some thought. Luna was nice to write a song for him, Lynn was very nice in this fanfic, inviting Lincoln to ride bikes with her and he accepts, Lily teaches Lincoln how to play chess and he wins the tournament as a result,   Lucy writes a poem for him,  and Leni apologizes to him for making fun of him after realizing she was made fun of for the same reason.

It seemed like sunshine until the girls started telling jokes about each other and then it turned into mocking and then one of them talks bad about Lincoln, who happens to hear it, and then gets angry and rips up the certificate he made for them and was going to give them.

I was waiting for the fire part of the fanfic to come, the picture provided by FirstDrellSpectre is the reason I wanted to read this fanfic in the first place.

It was so nice of Lincoln to go out of his way to rescue Lisa, and thank goodness Lily wasn't in there during the explosion and fire outbreak, I hate to imagine what would have happened if she was there! And nice of Lincoln to rescue the twin sisters. I kind of sort of hoped Lincoln would get trapped (not because I didn't like him, I really do, but, I don't know how to put it into words) It was great all the sisters and all the pets made it out alive, and both the parents. But Lincoln was almost lost. Very daring of the older sisters to go back in and get him. Good intentions but not very smart (NEVER EVER GO BACK INTO A BURNING BUILDING FOR ANY REASON!)

Lincoln was finally taken outside but was unresponsive. And the girls tried talking to him and they all sobbed, as did the parents. But fortunately, Lincoln was still alive and woke up, and forgave his sisters! YAAAY Lincoln survived! But it was really nice of him to put his life aside to save his sisters. But greater that he didn't make the ultimate sacrifice (costing his life and his sisters their sole brother.)

Lincoln's sisters really woke up!

And when they went back to their house, they discover they lost all their valuable things. I was really sad that Bun-Bun, me being a rabbit lover, even though that was a fake rabbit, but still a good rabbit, didn't survive the fire, that made me sadder than everyone else's losses! Well, material possessions can be replaced, it's real actual human beings and human lives that cannot be replaced. I wouldn't want to lose my stuff, but it wouldn't matter if I had my stuff, but lost my loved ones, like my mother, I'm terrified enough about losing her as she is of losing me. And it was great the Loud kids realized that having each other was more important than their material possessions. I also saw that as a consequence for what they did to Lincoln, losing their stuff, maybe it kind of was, but then again, "Time and Unforeseen Occurrences befell them."

Although Lana and Lola meant well sticking up for Lincoln, I'm sorry but they went wrong when they pulled down the bully's pants, sending him away crying. I mean at least they got the bully away from him (and I thought the bully went after Lincoln for what happened at the Ace Savvi convention).

Seeing that bully running and crying in embarrassment hit a little home to me. When I was in 3rd grade, I dreamed a little girl, older than my sister but not too much younger than me, took me prisoner, and she had a panther and other animals. I managed to escape and get free, but (NOW THIS PART IS DISTURBING, YOU'VE ALL BEEN WARNED): I beat the girl up until she cried. I had almost no remorse for it. And my adult friends looked at her shocked, probably feeling sorry for her. I don't know if they knew I did that to her. Looking back on that, although that was 12 years ago, just about, I feel terribly about that. I know it was just a dream, but still, that was not okay to do. I mean I was 9 years old at the time and didn't know much better, and I was a dumb kid in 3rd grade, never mind I have autism. If I could have that dream just one more time, I hope I don't but if I do, I am going to not hurt that girl, well not hit her and make her cry, even if she is evil that isn't me. Hopefully I'll try something better that won't result in her crying in pain, pain I inflict on her. Maybe I should just let her keep me captive but if I do escape, I'll try to run and think of other things but hitting her, NO NO NO!

Okay enough with this trip back down memory lane. Well, except for this, like XxSkilletSaviorX, I too wanted to run away from home as a child and seriously considered doing so, but I hesitated to do so. I won't say why, just know that I'm guilty of wanting to do that myself.

But this was a great story with a happy ending. And it was really nice of Lincoln to make another and better certificate for his sisters.

Lincoln's the best! One of them anyway.

This story, the one before it too, these were much better than anything I could/would have written. Great great great job!