Thread:007Jamesdean/@comment-31358352-20180129022336

Hey, James. I'm hoping to talk to you about something about your stories and what I can do to  improve it with what I'm about to suggest. How about doing a story on Fanfiction.Net called J.D. and the Loud Siblings watch Death Battle. You can probably guess what that means. The premise involves a fan, namely me under my real name maybe, who sends your OC and his combined family a box of Death Battle DVDs of all four seasons so far of the hit Youtube and Rooster Teeth webseries along with a message of sharing with a great guy with an awesome family the means to learn more about the fictional worlds they know about. I think that would be better since most of the people who do a watch Death Battle story always do the usual shtick: Inform them that their world aka Earth is uninhabitable due to something catastrophic or another and wanted to send his favorite series to someone else to enjoy them and learn about the characters who go toe-to-toe in a battle of last man standing. I just wanted to try something different where this story starts off on a good note and this way, your OC and the Loud family will know more thanks to watching Death Battle. Lisa could learn much about the fighters who are tech-savvy or wield futuristic weapons like the Jedi from Star Wars or any other weapons wielded by fighters like Jak from Jak and Daxter and Ratchet from Ratchet and Clank. Lucy would be alright since she's into what Death Battle has in terms of blood spurting out and death and all that. Luna would definitely dig Dante since he knows how to rock with the literal electric guitar Devil Bringer Nirvana. All this and more that can happen if you do this story since I'm sure I'm not the only one who watches Death Battle. If you're going to do this story, you do what you do best: tone down the langauge and what not. It's what you normally do though I'm used to everything Death Battle has and I've been watching and collecting the episodes of the webseries for five years now at best. So it's all good here for me. Besides, I'm sure you wouldn't mind seeing this story get written by you yourself. But that depends if you want to do it later on or you don't want to. It's up to you since you do the storytelling and writing. Just take your time and let me know if you want to do this or not. Either way, I'll understand. Anyway, looking forward to your next upload, man. Take care now and I'll see you around. 