User blog comment:Thomperfan/Shop Girl (my version)/@comment-30498740-20180711171917/@comment-30498740-20180711172825

Lenis boyfriend. Since you are a guy. The others wanted her to toughen up to help her get what she wants, I mean they could have had doubts too, but why is Nolan the only one getting it? Nolan doesn’t have any flaws though. Why couldn’t he get caught up in trying to help Leni like the siblings that he doesn’t understand why Leni is the way she is? That epilogue would have worked better if you actually had no doubts about it and were completely fine with the plan so it really undermines your epilogue. The future part didn’t admit to the story since it feels too out of place.