Thread:Aartistboy714/@comment-30953185-20170807003451/@comment-32290895-20170815203942

Hey guys, I'm back! How are all of you doing? Sorry If I didn't respond before, my computer wasn't working so well for some reason. Anyway, before we continue with the rest, AA714, I finished the extended dream fight. Here it is:

(He starts having a dream, where he's back in the alternate world, with his brothers, Loki, Loni, Luke, Lane, Lynn, Lars, Leif, Lexx, Levi and Leon)

Loki:  Hey guys, look! It's Stinkoln!

(They all laugh)

(Wretched looks back at them, and smiles evilly.) 

Wretched : Oh, you're in for it now! 

Lynn: <span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;"> (taunting) Oh, what are you gonna do, you big wimp? Scold us? <span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">

<p style="margin-top:12pt;"><span style="font-family: "Arial","sans-serif";color:black">(They all laugh again)

<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;">Wretched:  <span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">(to Lynn) Oh, I can do so much more than that!

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<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;">(He throws a punch at Lynn, but he manages to grab his fist before it hits him, surprising Wretched)  

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<p style="margin:0in0in0.0001pt;"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;">Lynn:  <span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">(taunting) Wow that's so much more!

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<p style="margin-top:0in;"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;">(He starts laughing and then pushes Wretched to the ground) <span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;color:black;border-width:1pt;border-style:none;border-color:windowtext;padding:0in;">

<p style="margin-top:0in;"><span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black">Lynn: <span style="font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:black"> Come on, guys! Let's teach this wimp a lesson!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Brothers: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> Yeah!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(They all jump onto Wretched, starting to get pummeled by the brothers)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Lynn: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Next time, don't try to pick a fight with us because you're too weak to do anything!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(They all start laughing as they keep pummeling him down. Wretched isn't having it with their behavior. His eyes start to turn bloodshot red and his veins start beating to the point where you can physically see them beat.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Loki: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> What're you gonna do?! Nothing, because you're a weakling!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(That final insult drives him into his rage mode.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">(Screams) RRRRRAAAAGGGGHHH!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He sucker punched the nearest person near him, which was Lynn, in the face and it slams head first onto the floor. <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">He then gets up and looks at everyone else, who is shocked by this)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""> What was that about being a weakling?

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He rushes up to Loki with full force. Loki tries to defend himself by fighting, but Wretched grabs his arm and uppercuts him. He stops for a second, which gives Wretched the chance to kick him down to the ground. Before he can do anything else, Luke comes from behind and grabs him by the arms, but Wretched jerks forwards, causing him to fly forward, crashing into Lane, Loki, Lars and Lexx.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">You all made life a living nightmare… (Smiles evilly) So now, I’m going to return the favor. (Clutches his fists) RRRAAAGGGHHH!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He runs up to Loni and hits him in the stomach, then grabbing his head by the hair and hitting him with his knee. Lars tries to throw a punch at him, but he catches it, and twists his wrist.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Lars: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">(Screams in pain) AGH!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">What’s the matter? I thought you liked pain and suffering.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He kicks Lars in the shin and punches him in the face. He goes up to Lane and slaps him across the face. He pulls up his pants to cover his face, grabs his hair, and throws him over his head across the hallway. He looks to where the twins are.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Two for the price of one. Time you losers pay the price.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(They try to run away, but Wretched grabs the back of both their heads, and hits them together.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Time for both of you to ditch your threads.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He stretches the back of their clothes and kicks them off the stairs, leaving only their clothes, as they hit the floor from downstairs.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Now you both know how I felt.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He turns his attention to Levi, who is now trembling with fear.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Guess you weren’t smart enough to run away, huh Four-eyes?

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He grabs Levi by the collar of his lab coat, and slams his face into the fall, breaking his glasses. He then slams his head through the closet door, rendering him unconscious. Wretched see Leon trying to get away, but he grabs his diaper and lifts him up.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">What? You thought I was going to leave you out?

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(Wretched then bites down of Leon’s hands, hard. This causes Leon to cry out in pain. Wretched covers his mouth to muffle his crying.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Shut it you little brat!

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He throws Leon onto the wall, which causes him to be unconscious. Lynn gets up to try and hit him from behind. But, his fist is caught by Wretched.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">(Smiles menacingly) How’s this for so much more?

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(Lynn smiles sheepishly, before he’s met with a fist to his face. He groans in pain, as Wretched pulls down his pants and hits him where the sun doesn’t shine. He falls down in pain.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Now that was funny.

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(He sees Luke trying to get up, but gets an idea. He goes over to Luke, punches him in the gut, and drags him to the bathroom. He goes in and opens the toilet.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Penny for your thoughts?

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(Before Luke could answer, he puts his head into the toilet and pulls down the lever. Luke is flailing his arms for help.)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Wretched: <span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">I’m just getting started! (Laughs manically)

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">(The screen cuts back to Wretched sleeping, as he smiles from the dream he’s having.)

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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;line-height:115%;font-family: "Arial","sans-serif"">I hope you like it. By the way, how was your first day of school AA714?