Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-30953185-20180829001803

It's going really great. I can just picture how Haiku, Nikki, Sam, Paige and Thiccella are going to convince Lincoln to come home. Although, I do have some notes and suggestions for you.

1. I think you should give Lola more to do. So far throughout this story, she's gotten killed by Lincoln, sent to her room, sang sadly with her sisters and sent back to her room. I mean compare this to Lynn, who's already had a few scenes that depict her as just a horrible human being, Lola is known for being a really evil brat, it would be nice to see her actually be that in this story, or if not that then have her do something else.

2. I really think you should do something with Ronnie Anne. She is one of the biggest parts of the St. Lincoln universe. Like, you could have her hear the OT5 are trying to convince Lincoln to come back to his home and she could have a huge overreaction. She could be like she was in "A Night to Forget" but worse.

3. Loudcest. It's a thing and I think you should touch on it. 