Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-30158554-20190730235916/@comment-30158554-20190810104043

Like I said the whole story seems weak and uncreative.. Nothing funny happens. I didn't even develop the story, I was just making it up as I wrote. It needs to be better. I think I may have Animationfan15 delete it so I can start over. I just don't like the way it is.

Actually I planned to make them the whole Loud House opening theme song at the end with the Loud kids.