Thread:WillTheArthurandBusterFan5050/@comment-26253276-20171023205627/@comment-26253276-20171024011441

Since you left no reply, I will treat it as you want simplifications.

Luna is holding Lori and letting the tiny teen see the ruins of the city as she explains what she did. Sam is following her.

I made it clear that you do not need to add the bodies or blood.

Try simplifying the destruction. Use a black fade at either side of the streets to simulate dust and debris. (Most items would be covered in black ash anyway from fires or explosions.)

Not all the buildings have been destroyed. In fact, very few have collapsed, but suffered heavy damage. Try tearing off part of a building or using other destruction such as craters from Luna's and Sam's huge feet, flipped cars, or large holes in buildings signifying punches. (A torn building would be large triangles at the break point, like shattering glass [or comical lightning], and many planes representing floors, broken at the same break point [or you can just do one floor at the "roof" of the breakage].  Punch holes can be simple circles or many-point stars. Craters can be simple ovals.)