User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Dethroning The April Fool/@comment-31358352-20180402020350

Good work as always, James. Wasn't expecting Dark Luan to be back for a sequel and for revenge from last year, but I guess some cockroaches are tougher to stomp out than you and I think. Got to say, good work with the hilarious stuff you used from the Looney Tunes cartoons. I would have perfered to have used the wooden plank on Dark Luan's butt since I think Foghorn usually swats Barnyard Dog's rump with a wooden plank. I thought a little consistency and good measure would suffice with this. The rest of the story was great and I think Dark Luan is going to be serving some hard time at the Moon prison. Served her right. Just wish I was there in the Simulator to watch the show with a soda and bowl of popcorn with Carol sitting with me as we watch my friends get payback on Dark Luan for making my comical buddy go overboard with the pranking. Glad Luan finally got rid of that guilt from April Fools past by facing her past head on and coming out on top a better person. Now if only the show's developers and writers can get Luan to stop her over the top hijinks that go on every April Fools Day episode. Also, good job using Pinnochio for this chapter. That movie was a classic and I'm happy Lucy broke the curse that accursed amusement park had on boys. Anyway, good story and I can't wait to see what the rest of Shinobi of the Cosmic Storm has in store. Now that that's out of the way, happy April Fools Day and Happy Easter, James. Peace out!