User blog:TheFlyTeen/Partial Rewrite - One of the Boys

My 1st rewrite. Except it is not a full rewrite. If I made Lincoln a jerk, I am sorry. We will start at the scene boy Lynn punches Lincoln in the stomach for no reason:

Lars: And one for scratching my coffin.

Lincoln: It was Lynn's fault!

Boy Lynn: NO! It was Lincoln!

Lars: Meh, I agree with Lincoln. Lynn, you are such a terrible roommate.

Lincoln: Cool there is no line! (screams in horror when he looks in the bathroom) Ew! The bathroom is dirty!

Luke: What's your damage, bro?

Lincoln: This bathroom is disgusting!

Luke: You're right bro. We can't live with this. Let's go clean it! We will start with the toilet! (grabs Lincoln but Lincoln slips away)

Lincoln:  That's it, Luke! How dare you grab me! I am telling mom!

Luke: (mimicking Lincoln)

Lincoln: Mom!

'''Alt. Rita: '''Yes, Lincoln?

Lincoln: Luke grabbed me for no reason!

'''Alt. Lynn Sr: '''And the boys like to dog pile on me! Let's ground them!

(Alternate Rita and Lynn Sr. along with Lincoln walk upstairs)

'''Alt. Rita:''' Luke, you are grounded for 2 months for grabbing Lincoln for no reason at all.

Luke: But I was gonna clean the toilet!

'''Alt. Rita:''' Don't even use your brother like a plunger.

Luke: Ugh, fine mom.

(The parents walk downstairs, then Lincoln trips and hurts his thumb)

Lincoln: Ow!

(Leon crawls up to Lincoln)

Lincoln: Leon? You wanna kiss my boo-boo and make it better? (Leon bites Lincoln's thumb) Ow!

(The parents come upstairs and see the boys are laughing at Lincoln)

'''Alt. Rita: '''Now all boys are grounded for 2 months, including Leon.

TBC