Thread:YoshiRocker13/@comment-5888829-20170407235421

Hey everyone, I've been planning a Green House re-write and I've got most parts down. For example, in the scene how it cuts to the sisters complaining and refusing to go green, instead start off that scene with Lincoln about to explain his situation to them and appeal to them. Starting off with

"So, there's this thing going on in my class, and, well... I need your help."

And the sisters could be more willing to help their brother reduce their Eco-footprint for his sake and less because of the polar bear but still think it looks very cute.

However, the one part I'm stuck with is Lincoln being a hypocrite and putting him in a bad situation. I've been trying to think of how to fix it, but it's REALLY tricky, being the message of the episode. If you could assist me with story, that would be great, and you'll get credit for it. 