Thread:MrTyeDye/@comment-31022739-20170804152352/@comment-31022739-20170804211956

Loved it. While it's true that Lisa wasn't really in grammar Nazi mode, she still had her own funny, witty comments to make. This one was probbaly my favorite:

Lisa: Bravo, other me. You've endangered the lives of countless campers for the sake of some convoluted plan to bring Luan home and deprive her of what would have been a rich, character-building experience, just so you can continue to coddle her cripplingly clingy roommate. [slow clap]

If I only had one real nitpick, it'd be Lola intimidating Lincoln into saying that she was an angel. While funny, "11 Louds a Leapin' revealed that Lola owns up to the fact that she's naughty.

I also ran into another one of these nitpicks back in Episode 1. It's where Lincoln says that he knows nothing about chemistry, after reading about how he prevented Lisa's chemical mixture from combusting. In "Project Loud House", it's shown that he's capable of preventing such an event from happening.

Besides that, what can I say except, "thank you"? I can't wait to see more of these, as well as your fanfiction reviews.