User blog comment:007Jamesdean/Volcanic Trip Part 28/@comment-31358352-20180606035107

Alrighty then. I'm back here again and I'm glad to be here. How the heck are you, James? I'm fine today, myself. Now I would like to imploy to you some more ideas for the near future sequel to Angels vs Androids. Before I get into that, I would like to say Volcanic Trip has been a hoot to read. Maybe when you visit Greece during your worldwide trip, how about having this turn into a trip to Disney's Hercules via dimensional portal. This way, you can have a chapter involving our trip around the world and we can also do some good along the way. That said, have the characters who shall go through to Hercules' dimension be you, Varie, me, Carol, Hercules, Zoe, Lincoln and his sisters, Naruto, Sakura, HInata, and the Sailor Soldiers. Anyway, you do your part and I'll be awaiting to see what you've got for Volcanic Trip. Now with that said, here more ideas for Saiyan's Redemption. Now, when you do this story, why not include an OC character into the story. And the one I have in mind is Vegeta's mother, Queen Kasava. I think that since she wasn't fully explored due to Toriyama not wanting to do that, maybe you can have that shot. Anyway, got more inspiration from watching MasakoX's What If videos on Youtube. Right now I'm watching a new one called "What If Bardock Convinced the Saiyans?" where Bardock will manage to completely convince his fellow Saiyans to evacuate Planet Vegeta. If you want to know more about this, go to Youtube and watch that video along with a couple of other What If videos this dude has on his channel. Also, don't forget to like the video and subscribe to his channel and hit the notification bell so you can get updates on Masako's channel and know what new stuff he has uploaded to Youtube in advance. And let me tell you, for a star on the Dragon Ball Abridged series, he's pretty cool outside of dubbing Goku for the Youtube series. Anyway, I've decided to include on this premise more powerful people in the form of Ben and Gwen. Now that I've seen that this is Teen Ben and Gwen, I think it would be a waste to not include them in considering how powerful they are. Plus with Leni now wielding Diana's sword, a Lantern Corp ring if you remember from a previous chapter you did, and her wielding gravity powers thanks in part to Nflemingful's story, I can officially say Leni's now one cute powerhouse who can fight as powerfully as her sisters can. Also, think you can include Nflemingful's OC, Nick, into a future story, perhaps? I was only asking because I've read his first story called Slime and Gravity Strikes, the one that introduced himself into your shared multiverse series and the very same story where Leni got her gravity manipulatin from Atlas, the Greek God of the skies. Along with him wielding the Slime of Ekhidna, the Greek Monster of fetid waters, Nick also has the Fangs of the Dragon, which might just be weapons from the 2003 TMNT series. Also, Cody should be involved since he's got his abilities that would be helpful for what's ahead. With that said, we should split up into three groups. Depends on how many of us should go to each destination. Team 1 will be sent via the Simulator to Planet Sadala in Universe 7's past so we can help Yamoshi and the rebel Saiyans defeat their evil Saiyan kind. If it's not too much to ask, let's keep the body count to a minimum and get the Saiyans to see that if they divided themselves from one another, then they'll doom themselves to oblivion and seal Sadala's fate, leaving the survivors to wander the stars till they find a new place to call home. Team 2 will go to Planet Vegeta in the past when the Saiyans wiped out the Tuffles. The same applies to what Team 1 needs to do. Unify the Tuffles and get the Saiyans to see reason, even if physical measures need to be used. If you remember what the Tuffles are capable of from watching plenty of the Dragon Ball series, then you know that the Tuffles can be helpful thanks to them being technological geniuses. Give them training in martial arts and ki manipulation and who knows, they could do more on the frontlines than just the side. Team 3 will be the main team and will go to Planet Vegeta in the timeline when Frieza strikes and wipes out the 2nd Saiyan homeworld. There, we'll need to unify the Saiyans with one another and band together to brave the mighty storm that will hit the planet and try to end every last one of them. Along with that, once Teams 1 and 2 are done completing their jobs, we can bring help from both timelines and the Saiyans of the past and the old enemies of the Saiyans shall put aside their bitter greivances and unite against a common enemy. Together as one and fighting as one with our help, Frieza will fail like he did against Goku and his friends on Planet Namek and will be sent to the Underworld where he shall be treated to the same punishment he got in Dragon Ball Super after he met death once years ago, and twice more after his second run-in with Goku and Vegeta. Anyway, another idea to add should be making Chi-Chi and Bulma Saiyans through a simple blood transfusion of Goku's and Vegeta's blood so this way, they'll not only have the mighty powers they have and/or will have in the near future (thank you for Angel Vs Androids, by the way), they can also be able to stand shoulder to shoulder with their respective husbands and their respective sons. I got this nifty idea thanks to reading a Dragon Ball Super fanfic I found. Once done, we can merge the worlds to ours and we can gain allies in the form of the Saiyans and Tuffles. Anyway, that's all I can offer for the moment. Also, I read your latest chapter of Volcanic Trip and I can't believe you fought a Predator without your abilities. Man, that is hardcore. You managed to beat and even survive a deadly one on one with the galaxy's most formidable intergalactic bounty hunter. Boy, no wonder Cody earned the respect of the Yaujtas. You, my friend, are something amazing. Congrats, James. You rocked and I loved it. With nothing more to say here, I'll take my leave for now, but I'll be keeping my eyes open for when you upload the next part. See you around, J.D. Vince out.