Thread:Gumball2/@comment-30953185-20180320003202/@comment-4618045-20180320004209

Broadly speaking, I found it quite alright. The story has a good sense of what it’s trying to parody (mean sisters, Lincoln throwing a fit, running away, the works) and for the most part I think it works fine as a story.

With that said, I think the story missed some opportunities. I think it would have been nice (and dare I say, funny) if at the beginning, it touches upon some of the unfair treatment Lincoln faces. Like you could have the sisters do the same thing and no one bats an eye, but the moment Lincoln does it, he becomes a pariah. It’s kinda like that episode of Simpsons where Homer gets banned from the bar for pulling the salt shaker prank even after his friends pulled far crueler pranks only to be met with laughter and good feelings

Overall, it’s pretty good and I think you should make more stories that focus exclusively on the characters within the show