User blog comment:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Two Genders, Eleven Children/@comment-24669562-20170108073433

Comment on chapter 1, good story so far. Seems like a good continuation to "One of the Boys." And the girls teasing boys and how they talk about Lincoln and what he does, but not without Lincoln eavsdropping, and then getting his feelings hurt. This after just having a nightmare about having uncaring brothers, and they were uncaring and shame to them! I'd rather have Lincoln's sisters than his brothers, even if I was a girl! I would not survive with Lincoln's brothers!

When I read that Lincoln pulled Leni in, I was thinking of a hostage situation (from the Hey Arnold episode "Curly Snaps,") only this isn't such. But it was nice of Lincoln to let Leni talk and for Leni to comfort him. Was also nice of the girls to apologize for what they did.

All seemed calm until Lincoln mentioned about his brothers. Don't you just hate it when things calm down only to heat up again?! I do! Thankfully Lincoln explained. And after hearing the dream Lincoln had, the girls express themselves about their male counterparts and that they wouldn't do what their male counterparts did.

Was also nice of Lori to take Lincoln to the spa.

I like that in these fanfics, at least in some or most of the ones I read, Lincoln's sisters are given a softer side and are more caring toward Lincoln I almost want to say "Maybe you guys should be the writers of "The Loud House," but that wouldn't be nice or fair to those working on the Loud House, and I would hate for Savino and the other crew to say to me "Thanks for making us feel appreciated William!" sarcastically. Besides without them, we wouldn't have the Loud House and without The Loud House we wouldn't have fanfics or fan art! (Speaking of which, I hope when you get a chance you check out the fan art I just posted on a blog, if you want to.)

A little curious to see what else will happen.