User blog:Harburton81/Fanfiction - Pool of Pity

My eleventh fanfic. Commentary is accepted. Credit goes to AnimationFan15 for the title and the photo.



Plot
(It starts on a sunny day in the backyard where all eleven siblings having a pool party with Lincoln pool from Linc or Swim, Lori and Lola, who both wearing sunglasses, are sunbathing, Lincoln, Leni, and Lynn are lounging in the pool, Lily and Lucy are applying sunblock on each other, Luan and Lana are playing volleyball, Lisa is checking her clipboard, and Luna is playing a steel drum)

LINCOLN: (to the viewers) Welcome to your typical pool party of the Loud House, there nothing like a refreshing dip in your own pool.

(Lynn splashes Lincoln with water, she laughs at him)

LINCOLN: With my sisters. - Lincoln finished - We always do stuff as a family.

LORI: (holding a plate of burgers) Okay, burgers are ready! - Lori announced

(The kids take theirs burgers and eating them)

LINCOLN: These burgers are great! - Lincoln happily said, enjoying his burger

LANA: You said it, bro! - Lana happily agreed, enjoying her burger

(They all finish their burgers and Lincoln starts walking back to his pool, but Luan grab his arm)

LUAN: Hey, bro! - Luan alarmed - You have to wait at least an hour before going back to swimming.

LENI: Yeah. - Leni agreed - You'll get a cramp if you do that.

LINCOLN: Like that gonna happen. - Lincoln said, disbelieved

(He jumps back on, just like his sisters said, he suffers from a cramp and drowns; They all gasp and run to the pool)

LORI: Lincoln! - Lori said worried - Oh no!

LOLA: He's hurt! - Lola said worried

LINCOLN: (in the water) Help me! - Lincoln screamed

(He passed out, while he floating helplessly in the water)

LENI: Someone help him! - Leni yells

(Lynn jump in the water and grabs Lincoln, who is knocked out, she pressed on his chest of couple of times and he coughs up water and woke up, much to the girls relief)

LYNN: Are you okay, little bro? - Lynn ask worried

LINCOLN: I think so. - Lincoln said

(Lincoln got up and see the pool of water, he screams and run away, much to the girls confusion)

LANA: What is with him? - Lana ask

(Lincoln is in his room, scared, a knock on the door is heard)

LINCOLN: (traumatized) C-Come in. - Lincoln said

(Lisa, Luna, and Lori came in)

LORI: Hey, buddy. - Lori said - We brought you a glass of water.

(Lori handed him a glass of water and Lincoln jumps away, making Lori drop the glass on the floor, spilling it)

LUNA: What with you, dude? - Luna questions

LINCOLN: I fear water now! - Lincoln admitted

(Luna and Lori looked at each other and laughed; Lisa was angry and slapped both of them)

LISA: This nothing to laughed at! - Lisa scolds - He has hydrophobia!

LUNA: Isn't that aquaphobia? - Luna questions

LORI: Same thing. - Lori quoted - Its the fear of water.

LISA: Duh! - Lisa said - Even Charles Darwin knows that!

(Luan hears this and she run to her room)

LUNA: We going to leave you alone, bro. - Luna said

(The three leave, Lincoln is sad; Sometime later, Lincoln is reading)

LUAN: I need your help on something! - Luan shouted

LINCOLN: (set down his book) Coming! - Lincoln answered

(Lincoln opens his door and a bucket of water fell on him, drenching Lincoln)

LUAN: (wearing her groucho glasses) Gotcha! - Luan joked - You got soaked!

(She laughs and Lincoln screams in terror and run back to his room;  Luan still laughs and received an angry glare from Luna)

LUNA: Not cool, sis. - Luna chastises

LUAN: I expect a bigger splash! - Luan said angry, then laugh

(Luna facepalms and it cuts to Lori's room when they, except for Lincoln, having a meeting)

LORI: Girls, after Lincoln suffer from a cramp, he has aquaphobia and/or hydrophobia. - Lori says

LOLA: You mean that fear of heights? - Lola questions

LISA: No, that arcophobia. - Lisa stated

LANA: Oh, that the fear of snakes. - Lana said

LISA: That ophidiophobia, Lana. - Lisa corrected

LILY: Cats? - Lily babbled

LISA: Ailurophobia. - Lisa said

LENI: Trees? - Leni ask

LISA: Dendrophobia. - Lisa said

LORI: Oh, its spiders. - Lori quoted

LISA: Arachnophobia. - Lisa said annoyed

LUAN: Its, clowns, is it? - Luan questions

LISA: Coulrophobia, Luan. - Lisa said, she mad

(The girls, sans Lisa, argue of what phobia Lincoln has and she gets enraged)

LISA: (booming) ITS WATER! - Lisa shouted in anger - IT THE FEAR OF WATER!

LORI: Whoa! - Lori says shocked - Chill, Lisa!

LISA: Lori, are you kidding me?! - Lisa angrily said - Hydrophobia and/or aquaphobia is the FEAR of water!

LUAN: We didn't know! - Luan protest

LUNA: You pranked him! - Luna pointed out

LORI: (use her shoe) Quiet! - Lori yells - Clearly, we need to help Lincoln get over his fear of water!

LENI: Yeah! - Leni said - We need to get over his fear of fish!

LISA: (livid) That ichthyophobia! - Lisa said enraged - You little...

(Lisa wants to attack Leni, but Lynn restrain her in time; In his room, Lincoln is sitting on his bed, he take a Muscle Fish comic and read it, only to scream and throw is away: A knock on his door is heard)

LINCOLN: (terrified) C-Come in. - Lincoln said

(Leni and Lana come into Lincoln room)

LANA: Hey, Lincoln. - Lana said - How you feel?

LINCOLN: I feel fine. - Lincoln said - Except for my fear of water.

LENI: You want to go to the mall with me and Lana? - Leni ask

LINCOLN: Sure, as long there is no water. - Lincoln said

(At the mall, Lincoln, Lana, and Leni, who are all carrying bags, are walking around)

LENI: Isn't this nice, huh Linky? - Leni ask

LINCOLN: Yeah. - Lincoln said - I'm starting to feel better and getting over my fear, a little bit.

LANA: That good to hear. - Lana praised

(At a food court. the three are eating burgers and fries)

LINCOLN: That was good. - Lincoln said

LANA: It is. - Lana said - You want me to buy you a soda?

LINCOLN: (terrified) No. - Lincoln said terrified

(The three all walk away from the food court and Leni trips, causing Lincoln to fall into a nearby fountain)

LANA: Lincoln, are you alright? - Lana ask

(Lincoln screamed; Its cuts to the three of them walking home, Lincoln is wrapped around a blanket)

LINCOLN: (shivering and mortified) So, cold. - Lincoln said - Water, everywhere.

(Lincoln sneeze and Leni feel his forehand with her hand)

LENI: OMG, you're sick! - Leni said worried

LANA: Oh great, first he fears water, now this?! - Lana brags

(Lana facepalms; A month has passed, Lincoln, who recovered from sickness, is in his room playing on his laptop, in Lori and Leni room, the girls are having another meeting)

LORI: Girls, Lincoln fear of water is getting much worse. - Lori announced

LUNA: Agreed. - Luna said - Most of it Luan fault.

LUAN: Liar! - Luan protest

LISA: You keep pranking him! - Lisa said - Lincoln is still enraged at that water balloon prank.

(Flashback to Lincoln walking out of his room, then a flurry of water balloons were launched at Lincoln, drenching him)

LUAN: (holding a sling shot) You got drenched! - Luan laughs

(Luan laughs and Lincoln screams and lock himself in his room; Cuts to the present)

LUAN: It was funny! - Luan pointed out

LANA: He hasn't come out of his room for 2 solid weeks! - Lana berated

LENI: He hasn't took a bath nor a shower! - Leni complains

(Flashbacks to Lincoln, wearing a towel, is "cleaning" himself with moist towelettes, Leni, wearing a towel as well, is standing there, completely shocked; Cuts back to the present, Leni shudders)

LENI: That was awful! - Leni said disgusted

LOLA: True! - Lola agreed, grossed out

(Lynn eagerly raises her hand)

LORI: Yes, Lynn? - Lori ask

LYNN: What if we take Lincoln to the beach? - Lynn said - And maybe, he'll over his hydrophobia/aquaphobia!

LORI: Great idea, Lynn! - Lori praised - Lets do this!

(It cuts to the beach where Lincoln, in his swimsuit, is wearing a blindfold, while Luan and Lynn, in their swimsuits, are guiding him)

LUAN: Watch you step. - Luan said because Lincoln almost fell on a rock

LINCOLN: Okay, what the surprise, girls? - Lincoln ask

LYNN: Okay, bro, take it off! - Lynn said

(Lincoln remove his blindfold to see the beach, more specifically, the ocean, he stands there, shocked)

LORI: C'mon, bro, lets have some fun! - Lori says eagerly

(Lincoln runs away, but Lynn tackles him and drag him through the sand)

LINCOLN: But I hate the beach! - Lincoln laments

LENI: No, you don't! - Leni protest

LINCOLN: I'm gonna see if Mom and Dad can take me home. - Lincoln said

LISA: They're gone now. - Lisa stated

(Much to Lincoln horror, they drove off, Lori sits on a beach blanket, pulls out a tanning mirror and sunbathe)

LORI: C'mon, Linky. - Lori said - You love this place, go have fun on the water.

(Lincoln sighs and he walk near the water and he touched it, he shrieks and run; Later, Lincoln is sulking in fear, Leni and Lana see's him and walk up to him)

LENI: What the matter? - Leni said - You been sitting here for an hour.

LINCOLN: It just, ever since I fear water. - Lincoln admitted - I been never doing stuff fun, like pool parties and beaches.

LANA: Don't be sad, bro. - Lana comforted - You'll get over your fear.

LINCOLN: Thanks, girls. - Lincoln thanked

LENI: C'mon, lets have fun outside of the water. - Leni suggested

(It shows Lincoln, Lana, and Leni are building sandcastles)

LINCOLN: Nice sandcastles. - Lincoln complimented

LENI: Thanks, yours too. - Leni responded

TO BE CONTINUED