User blog:AndrewBrauer/Whipped - Alternate Version

Here is my fanfic story Whipped, but done differently enjoy!

Whipped - Alternate Version

Script
(Opens with Lincoln walking up to his room exhausted and tired from the vacation as he falls face first onto his bed)

Lincoln: (yawns) Time to get some sleep, especially after what I just went through.

(The rest of the sisters except for Leni and Luna, watched over Lincoln falling asleep)

Lynn: Aww the poor guy is tired.

Lori: He literally needs to rest after what he did.

Lisa: Based upon the list of orders he did, he'll need about two days rest to recover.

Lana: Whether it was being chased by that bear.

Lola: Or being attacked by all those flies.

Lucy: Or getting scared by whatever was lurking in the dark.

Luan: And he didn't get to have any fun.

(The sisters then hear Leni and Luna laugh at them, as the sisters close Lincoln's bedroom door)

Lynn: What's so funny?

Luna: (laughs) Oh come on dudes, you're acting like den moms.

Leni: (laughs) Yeah! Lincoln deserved what he got, what he did to us was like way worse!

Lori: He took care of all ten of us while we all only took care of him, I don't see how that's...

Luna: (interrupts) It is fair, because we're girls and it's more of a big deal.

Leni: And Lincoln is just a stupid boy and boys are gross.

Lola: (annoyed) Don't be so mean!

Luna: Whatever, all I know is that I had the best vacation ever.

Leni: We should do it again!

Luan: But the vacation is over Leni.

Luna: So what? Without Lincoln being our whipping boy, the vacation would be so lame.

Lynn: (annoyed) Whipping boy?

Leni: Besides, Lincoln isn't so innocent he hasn't fully earned our forgiveness yet.

Lori: (annoyed) He's done enough!

Luna: No he hasn't, he made us his servants for a whole day!

Lana: (annoyed) While he was our servant for all ten of us for a whole week!

Leni: He also tried to have the best seat in the van!

Luna: And he filmed us each having an embarrassing moment and uploaded them online.

Leni: And he tried to get all of us out the door for school just so he can get his project to for his class!

Lucy: (to Leni) I don't see how that last one is selfish.

Leni: (to Lucy) Oh trust me it is!

Lola: But that was all in the past and we've forgiven him!

Luna: And he hardly did anything to earn our forgiveness.

Leni: So until we feel like he has earned our forgiveness, we should keep him as our servant.

Lori: (angry) No way!

Luan: (angry) You two are just big bullies and not nice!

Lynn: (angry) And we're not going through with your sick plan!

Luna: (grins) Oh yes you will, otherwise we'll tell Mom and Dad that you all forced us to go along with your plan to convince Lincoln to choose either Dairyland or Aloha Beach.

Leni: (grins) And Mom and Dad will like totally believe us!

(Suddenly, Lincoln's bedroom door opens as it shows Lincoln very angry)

Lincoln: (angry) So that's what you two think of me, as a stupid boy!?!?!?!?

Luna: (laughs nervously) No bro listen...

Lincoln: (angry) Don't "bro" me, you two are awful for actually thinking you would get away with a plan that cruel and evil! I could hear everything you said from my room and I'm not letting you get away with this! (to the other sisters) thanks for sticking up for me, I really love you guys for doing that.

Lynn: (Smiles) It's what sisters do.

Lori: (Smiles) And we love you so much.

(The sisters except for Leni and Luna hug Lincoln tightly smiling, as the parents walk upstairs noticing them)

Lynn Sr.: Something going on up here.

Lincoln: (to Lynn Sr.) Yeah, Leni and Luna had an evil plan to make me their servant after vacation.

Leni: That is not true!

Lola: Yes it is true, don't let their good girl looks fool you they're bullies on the inside!

Lynn: They are!

Rita: (angry) I can't believe you two would try and pull a stunt like that on your brother!

Lynn Sr.: (Angry) You're grounded for two weeks!

(Lynn Sr. and Rita storm downstairs as Lincoln and the other sisters approach Leni and Luna)

Lincoln: (angry) And I don't forgive you at all!

(Lincoln and the other sisters walk downstairs as Leni and Luna look down a little upset)

Luna: Way harsh dude.

LATER THAT DAY

(Lincoln was sitting on the couch with Lynn next to him watching tv)

Lincoln: I'm having such a fun time Lynn, you're the best sister ever.

Lynn: Well it was pretty obvious.

(Luna walked by them as Lincoln gave her a cold stare along with Lynn)

Luna: (sighs) Whatever.

(A week passed by as Lincoln hung out with all his sisters, especially Lynn, Lori, Lola and Lisa at the house. Everytime Leni or Luna passed by them, all of them gave the two cold stares and silence until they left the room. This had continued on even after Leni and Luna's punishment was over, Lincoln was not ready to forgive them for what they did to him as each day they grew more upset to the point that they cried themselves to sleep over how mean they were to their brother. After about a month, Lincoln returned home from school as he found Leni and Luna looking at him upset)

Lincoln: (groans) What do you two want?

(Leni and Luna got on their knees in front of Lincoln as they began crying)

Leni: (crying) Please forgive us Linky, we're so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry!!

Luna: (Crying) Yeah dude, we were so in the wrong and it was all our fault!

Leni: (Crying) You have earned our forgiveness long ago!!

Luna: (Crying) All we ask from you is your forgiveness!

(As the two continued to cry, Lincoln's eyes started to water as he bent down and hugged Leni and Luna tightly)

Lincoln: (crying) I do forgive you! It's all good!!

Leni: (sniffs) You mean it?

Lincoln: (sniffs) Yes of course I do!

Luna: (weakly smiles) Thanks Lincoln.

(The three continued to hug tightly and smile knowing that the whole thing was over)

The End

Trivia

 * I made this joke fanfic as a response to those hating on my story Whipped, I decided to take all your complaints and turn it into a parody of common Loud House fanfics as well as make it as an alternate version to Whipped so that I can show those who complained about it what I would do if I took your advice and wrote the story like this.