Thread:AnimationFan15/@comment-24200891-20161204064354

Congratulations for writting what I discourage myself to write. You used even same reason I thought would be a good reason for Linc "turning on the dark side of the force". Nobody is more vengeanful than a person with broken heart. I like Lincoln finally getting his revenge on Lola for how she abused him.

I feel I couldn't bring myself to write again a hardcore story like White Hair Black Heart. I had in head bad thoughts so I wrote the 13th fanfic to get rid of them. Because the situation wouldn't be solved I changed it into a nightmare sequence. I wrote one the start that it doesn't really happen so nobody would think Lincoln is really such a jerk because of his complexes. However I wanted the story to be t-rated not r-rated so I skipped the worst parts, I spared details of how Linc made himself the only child. I also wrote "killed" instead of describing how he did it.

My 1st dark stories were in 8 HW stories, then I thought it's HW so I can allow myself for slightly darker tone so I wrote many of them creepy like Lola's power or Linc's transformation or Luna's coat or Luan made a living puppet.

Linc vs Lynn was written to express how I dislike Lynn for abusing Linc, I wanted to make him badass not afraid of violent solutions. However I didn't want him to cross moral event horizon in name of his vengeance.

I disliked Lola more back then so in Frigid Fever I made her a villain and let her know how bad it is to be villain because "noone loves you when you're evil". Her nightmare sequence was a metaphore of her evil side.

Responsibility Issues has a dark tone due to presented harsh reality issues like unhelpful strangers. There I wanted to show that even in harsh times family is all you can count on. Even if family love can face tests it shall not disappear.

Sinful night is dark because its a demon apocalypse with bad ending, I made it all a bad dream. The dreamers learned that magic is no solution and not to watch too many weird films before going to sleep.

I had a concept of dark story but more realistic than my 13th fanfic. However I discouraged myself because I realised I would hate Linc for becoming Kylo Ren. In this cancelled story Linc was supossed to join boys gang Mars Bros, who like Knights of Ren, they demand complete devotion, adopting new name and disowning old family to the new one. This gang is a  mysoginist  sect, where memebers have purpose of opressing girls. Linc would adopt name Max Mars and gain strength thanks to steroids and lose sanity because of indoctrination. Such selling his soul was supossed be caused by Lola destroying his relationship with Ronnie thanks to her mocking him about pony books. Linc also had enough of Lynn bullying him and Lori threatening him. I imagined how he fought and mauled Lynn and Lola. I imagined the sisters' reaction on his words "Lincoln Loud is not who I am. I am Max Mars of Mars Brotherhood." "I have a new family, no need for the old one." "You made clear I am not one of you, so I choosed to be one of them" "Why shall I go back? To live in your shadows again?" "As Nietzsche said if you go to a woman, don't forget the whip". However I couldn't bring myself to write it because Linc would become for what I would hate him and joining a girl hating sect because of bad relationship with sisters is worse than wrong. I thought it can be Lynn or Lola's nightmare but still it's even darker than white hair black heart because its more realistic,  