User blog comment:WNH74/(Fanfic) The Sister Role Reversal/@comment-6062841-20180811132842

It feels like theres a good concept here, but the execution does nothing with the scenes it gives us. The concept would be better tested inside of one fanfiction story, not a bunch of scenes, and the story can let the characters interact with the plot around them. There's possibility here, but beating up random characters with the mean sisters in small scenes and then the bystanders not really doing anything about said harrassment isn't it. It feels like a repeated joke throughout most of the scenes.

I did enjoy the No Such Luck Lynn and Lincoln scene, though. That was among the best that could be done for this chopped up scene concept, heh.