User blog comment:Metool Bard/Fanfiction: Serpentine Fright/@comment-32202721-20180420211550/@comment-34871403-20180421000614

Well, I was considering having her cry out in fear, causing her siblings to rush in and comfort her while she demeans herself for being a baby. However, seeing as most of the dialogue of this story takes place in Lola's head, it would've been very awkward to write. Besides, I liked the idea of her finding out that the thing she was so afraid of wasn't as scary as she imagined.