Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-28872366-20160903214819/@comment-28872366-20160906042935

1. I honestly think Lincoln learning fencing from gaming is a good idea, the game failed on Leni because she thought she needed to recreate everything that happened in the game, but the game was unrealistic compared to actual driving. Lincoln being a good fencer because of the game is a good idea since a game about sword fighting involving pad movement like the sword is probably somewhat realistic compared to actual fencing, so I wouldn't change that.

2. If you don't want it to be inappropriate, maybe change Lynn's sighing to laughing.

3. Have Lincoln tell them that he's helping both of them, the girls pretend to be ok with it, but Lincoln is helping them individually, they try to convince him to quit helping the other.

I hope this helps at least a little.