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We'll start here!:

Narrator: Previously on the Loud House...

(We see a flashback that shows the events from the previous fanfic.)

Lynn Sr.: (to his family; depressed) So, how's everyone's day going so far?

Rita: (to her husband; depressed) Honey, I think you know exactly how we're all feeling, and why.

Lynn Sr.: (sighs; depressed) Is this about Lincoln?

Loud Sisters and Rita: (depressed) Yeah.

Rita: (depressed) I think the right thing for us to do is go upstairs and apologize.

(Everyone glumly walks upstairs towards Lincoln's bedroom, but before one of them could knock on his door...)

BAM!

(After the door bursts opens, they all stand in shock at what's in front of them.)

All: (shocked) Lincoln?

Lincoln (Wretched): (apathetic) Lincoln Loud's not here anymore, it's Wretched now!

Luna: (nervous) What do you mean, dude?

Wretched: (smiles) What I mean, is that you're all looking at the new, and very much improved, me!

Rita: (devastated; nervous) But, honey, you've got to listen to us, we never meant for you to snap.

Lynn Sr.: (devastated; nervous) Son, please! We know what we did was wrong! You didn't deserve any of our criticism or judgement!

Wretched: (angrily) I'm done listening to all of you! You see that was always Lincoln's mistake. You say you don't mean it, but you just keep on doing the same thing, again, and again, and again! None of you seem to understand. You! Did! This! You always do this to Lincoln. Every day of his life, he's always had to suffer in some way. It doesn’t matter what it is, it just has to be something! He did whatever he could to make you all happy, to make you all feel better about your sad, miserable, pathetic lives! Without as much as getting anything in return. He always forgave you for what you did to him, and held no grudge. But when he made the slightest mistake, one that didn’t even matter, you all jumped at the opportunity without a second thought! You would manipulate him into doing whatever you wanted out of guilt! He couldn’t have the slightest thing, not even so much as a crumb, without you all to see how it fits your views! He could never do anything because he’s outnumbered. Even when he would do something to help, it didn’t matter because you would all find a way to turn it against him; And now thanks to you, he’s gone; He doesn’t exist anymore; Lincoln Loud is dead! Now, it’s just me! And I’ll do what he could never do, no matter who gets in my way! (smiles sinisterly) No strings, to hold me down. Cause now, I’m free! (walking back towards his bedroom) Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna get some shuteye; when I go to school tomorrow, I'm gonna be spreading the exact, same message at school!

Clyde: (to Wretched; nervously) Hey buddy, you okay?

Wretched: (to Clyde; frowning) I'm not your buddy anymore! (laughs) Sure, you might've backed Lincoln up then, but you'll just turn out like everyone else. That was always his mistake. Believing that there was anyone to trust. When in actuality, there is no one to trust! You. Don't. Care! You all never cared! If you did, then we wouldn't be here, now would we?! What you all did has serious consequences, and now you're suffering for it! (frowns) You all are so unbearably naive. You all think you can just walk all over Lincoln, and get away with it? (laughs maniacally) Everyone creates the thing they dread. So I'd suggest that you all stay outta my way, if you know what's good for ya!

POW!

(Lori gets punched right in the cheek, and is now lying unconscious on the floor.)

POW!

(Leni gets punched right in the eye, and is now lying unconscious with Lori on the floor as well.)

BAM!

(Luna gets hit in the head with her guitar.)

SNAP!

(He smacks Luan in the head with Mr. Coconuts; breaking in the process.)

SMACK!

(Lynn gets hit in the stomach with her baseball bat, and is now lying on the ground groaning in pain.)

PLOP!

(Lucy's head gets clogged in the toilet.)

WHIP!

(Lana is now tied up with Hops' tongue, and is dangling upside down. Then Wretched spins Lola around, and rips apart her dress. He stops her from spinning, and pulls up her panties to her head. Finally, he shoves her into the mud from Lana's side of the room.)

Wretched: (holding a plate of chocolate chip cookies) Cookies?

Lola: (starts taking a bite out of the cookie) Huh, this is really good, what's in these cookies?

Wretched:(smiles sinisterly) What was inside of them. (points off-screen)

(Lola sees all of her stuffed animals, and that all of the cotton in them was torn out. Lola then looks back at her cookie, which is revealed to have cotton inside. Cut to outside the Loud House where Lola screams in sheer horror at the top of her lungs. Her scream was so incredibly loud, that it echoes and scares the birds away.)

Wretched: (frowning) Trying to find a way to make me go away. Sorry to disappoint you, Poindexter, but that's not going to happen! If you think I'm going to drink this and go back to being my weak self again, then you've got another thing coming, Nerd! (smiles sinisterly) Hey, maybe you can test one of my experiments.

(He mixes one of the few chemicals left, and throws it at Lisa.)

BOOM!

(The chemicals caused an explosion that sended Lisa flying towards the wall.)

SPLASH!

(Wretched slams his father's own cooking right over his head, making him scream in pain.)

Lynn Sr.: (screaming) My eyes! They burn! (runs around screaming)

SLAM!

(He slams her face with a frying pan, which sends her crashing into Lynn Sr.)

Wretched: (to Mr. Grouse) I came to give you some of my dad’s lasagna.

Mr Grouse: (excited) Well, don’t just stand there. Give it to me!

(Wretched takes out the tray of lasagna and then…)

SLAM!

(He slams the tray of Lasagna into Mr. Grouse’s face.)

Wretched: (laughs; turns to the viewers) This is only the beginning, and you’re next.

(Just then the telephone rang. Lori then walks over to answer it.)

Lori: (picks up the telephone) Hello?

Bobby: (over telephone) Babe, I mean, Lori?

Lori: (surprised) Boo-Boo Bear! I haven't heard from you in a while!

Bobby: (over telephone; stern) Lori, this is serious. I want you to invite all of your friends and your sister's friends over to our apartment. I'll explain everything when you get there. Just do what I told you.

Lori: (rubbing her neck; unsure) Bobby says he wants all of us to invite all of our friends, and ourselves, over to his family's apartment. He literally sounded serious when he told me to do so.

(The family began to look at each other with worried expressions as the screen fades to black.)

Narrator: And now, this is where our story concludes.

(Cut to the Loud House where all of the sisters (sans Lily) were texting each and everyone of their friends on their phones as their parents look on with concerned expressions on their faces.) 