User blog comment:Rageman82/Alternate Ending - Save the Date/@comment-32173189-20180603232313

I don't recall Ronnie Anne bullying him after Heavy Meddle, the reason for the sloppy joe in his pants was because they keeping their relationship a secret from everyone and Lincoln shot his mouth off in an attempt to further hide it without realizing that she was in the cafeteria at the time he said those things. Also I don't recall her he saying at anypoint in that episode that she was planning on making his life miserable or extorting him for money.

But onto the fic itself, it kind of wimpifies Lincoln (as do most rewrites of Save the Date tend to) since Lori and Bobby happen to overhear him giving up and they end up solving his problem for him, instead of Lincoln trying to solve the problem himself, which a part of his character. Sure his sisters do help, but they don't do everything for him and it's mostly advice.