Thread:MrAnimatedToon/@comment-30953185-20180329031728/@comment-31647719-20180329145457

I think the story is fine as it is.

The only reason I changed Gamers and Siblings was because I felt Lynn was too ou of character, and because Weavillian was right about Gwen knowing too much about Lynn despite they just met that day.

But Darcy's Visit? I think it's fine the way it turned out to be. But I'll keep that in mind.