User blog comment:Metool Bard/Fanfiction: Lucy's Condolences/@comment-4618045-20180302164635

This is a pretty good story. It’s crazy to know this is your first story.

Don’t worry about the gravitas you mention above. This right here shows that what really defines a story is the characters. You have a decent grasp on all of them (especially Lucy). She likes dark and gloomy stuff and has built her identity and social circle around it, but she’s also a person with soft and mushy feelings. It’s good for her to learn that while being herself means embracing her dark and gloomy persona, those elements don’t strictly define her. She likes Rocky and she shouldn’t be afraid to show that side to her too.

Great job! I look forward to seeing you around