User blog comment:MrAnimatedToon/Fanfiction - Gamers and Siblings/@comment-30458740-20180312042530

I really enjoyed this fanfic you wrote. ;-)

I've been a gamer for as long as I can remember, so I really liked the plot of this. Lincoln having more experience in gaming helped him actually beat Lynn at something for once. And then she tries but fails to learn how to play better at the arcade. The little fourth-wall-breaks you did were funny, and I like how you wrote Gwen. It was nice of her to teach Lynn how to play video games and the way she opened up how her own brother treated her was real sad. Their friendship is pretty sweet.

That part when Lynn was trying to get Lincoln to listen reminded of that bit in "White Hare". I'm glad that they both sat down and talked it out in the end and that they played again just for fun.