User blog:Harburton81/Fanfic Short - Brain Freeze

My second fanfic short. Commentary is acceptable and I hope you can enjoy.

Plot
(Lincoln and Lana are walking together on the footpath to Flip's Food & Fuel for a Flippy)

LINCOLN: Oh man, I can't wait to try a Flippy! - Lincoln said, excited - (to Lana) Are you?

LANA: You know me, big brother! - Lana agreed - When it come to Flippies, I'm down with it!

LINCOLN: Let's not Flip trick us again. - Lincoln mentions - He used me and Clyde for our jobs.

LANA: Or he conned us for all of our garage money. - Lana claims

(They went inside Flip's and find Flip drinking straight from the milk carton, Lincoln and Lana stares in confusion, Flip see's them and slowly put the milk back to the freezer)

FLIP: What can I do for ya? - Flip ask, nervous

LINCOLN: Two Flippies, pleases. - Lincoln said - One blue, one orange.

(Flip make their Flippies and head them to the duo, Lincoln and Lana each grab a bag of chips and each handed Flip $5, before heading back home with their snacks, they went inside and find Lisa, Luan, and Lola there)

LOLA: Hey, Lana. Hey, Linky. - Lola greeted - Where you to been?

LANA: We been at Flip's Food & Fuel and we each got a Flippy. - Lana said - Hope you don't have a brain freeze.

LINCOLN: I bet you get a brain freeze right after you gulp the whole thing. - Lincoln said

(Lincoln and Lana then bicker about it, Luan uses an air horn to stop their arguing)

LOLA: This sounds like a competition on our hands. - Lola said

LISA: I can finally test out my new ice potion. - Lisa said, joyful - Come with me.

(In the kitchen, Lana and Lincoln finish eating their chips and take their Flippies, Lisa puts her freeze potion in their Flippies and they begin glowing)

LISA: Okay, you two have one minute to drink these Flippies as fast as you can, with the potion I've added in your drinks. - Lisa explained - Whoever have a brain freeze first, loses.

LOLA: Just in case of cheating, Lana, take off your hat. - Lola chimes

(Lana then remove her hat and put it on the kitchen counter)

LUAN: Let's freeze things up! (laugh) - Luan joked - Get it? Get it?

LISA: Okay, are you two ready? - Lisa ask

(Lana and Lincoln hold their Flippies and nod to Lisa, she holds a stopwatch to keep time)

LISA: 3... 2... 1... drink! - Lisa called

(Lana and Lincoln both slurp their Flippies really fast as they can)

LUAN AND LOLA: Go! Go! Go! Go! - they both chant

(They finish drinking their Flippies and Lincoln hold his head in pain)

LINCOLN: BRAIN FREEZE! - Lincoln screamed

LANA: Yes! I won! I... (groans) - Lana groaned - Brain freeze!

(Their heads then suddenly frozen in a block of ice, Luan and Lola glances at Lisa)

LUAN: They're ''chilled out! ''(laughs) - Luan joked - But seriously, what happened?

LOLA: What was in that potion? - Lola ask

LISA: Very rare ice from Antarctica. - Lisa revealed

(They facepalms; Luan and Lola are using hair dyers to thaw out Lana and Lincoln, the ice finally melted and they hold their heads in pain)

LINCOLN: Oh, my head is frozen. - Lincoln laments

LANA: Achoo! - Lana sneezed - Uh oh.

(Later, Lincoln and Lana are wrapped around in blankets, Luan are taking their temperature, Lisa is putting hot towels on their heads, and Lola gives them bowls of soup, they eat their bowls of soup)

LINCOLN: At least we're cured of our brain freeze. - Lincoln said

LANA: Agreed. - Lana agreed

THE END