User blog comment:Weavillain/Fanfiction Spotlight: Worst Sister Ever?/@comment-4618045-20170818211447

I had the privilege of encountering this fic today during a lunch break (things for me are busy now). I was surprised to learn that this would be a multi-chapter story; the premise appeared to be a one shot at most. Regardless, I ended up hitting the Fav ad Follow button after finishing the first chapter.

I was simply blown away by how well Leni is written in this first chapter. While you do agree with me in that regard, I wouldn't say that Leni's lines are nonsensical. Even if Lori has to translate them, most of them do have a logic with them and it's clear that Leni does have some understanding of what's going on. If anything, it falls more on her own way of communication (which "Driving Miss Hazy" hinges on).

Overall, the thing I love most about the story (aside from Leni herself) is her relationship with Lori. The pair is my favorite to discuss and write about because I find it such a unique dynamic. I personally believe that those two are very close and share a lot of things with each other. It thrills me to see a writer not only presume this, but write it in a way where Lori and Leni are equals rather than a mother/daughter (mentally speaking, of course).

I think this story will inevitably become popular. It only came out today and it already has a decent following. I can't wait to see what happens next.

In terms of requests, I would have to say anything written by TerraZeal. All her stories are written in an AU where Leni is Lily's biological mother. I find her stories well written, creative, and provide a deep interpretation of central characters.