Thread:CircularBoat742/@comment-30953185-20170606004259/@comment-31323774-20170606012727

Yes I did, and for the most part, it was pretty good. There are some flaws tho (no offense). There's barely any spacing, so I bet it's gonna be hard to read for others and you're re-using lines from the actual episode, which is kinda bland. You did add some new stuff as well, like Lincoln getting into the accident with the van and being sent to the hospital. I don't mean those criticism in a rude way, but i'm just stating them so maybe it can help you with your future version of episodes