User blog comment:MrTyeDye/Fanfiction Review: Lincoln is Done/@comment-31647719-20170816202323/@comment-32202721-20170818022411

@Weavillain: Yeah, agreed. The plot summary I gave really doesn't do the fic justice in that regard. There are plenty of bafflingly awful moments in the story that I couldn't fit into the review. Like this one from Chapter 2, for instance:

''Luan was dressed as a mime, pretending to be locked up in a locked box in despair. She even cursed at herself saying "what have I done, or I just want my brother back." Over and over again.'' Ahem... MIMES DON'T TALK.