Thread:Veenster7/@comment-24200891-20161122061204/@comment-26901681-20161122062356

Concept number one reminds me a bit too much of The Great Louddoors because it is focusing on Linc and Lana being lost again. Sure it would just be the two of them this time, but I think you should try something different.

However I like the idea for your second concept. I think you mean avalanche instead of avalange. I like how the cast in the second concept is very unique. I would like to read a fan fiction with such contradicting personalities.