User blog comment:THELOUDHOUSEFANATIC/The Hospital/@comment-24200891-20160806064322

I enjoyed this story, Lincoln and Luna are my favorite characters. It;s heartwarming they watching the same tv shows, enjoying each other's company and saying in unision. Nice parody of Simpsons. Good for your first fanfiction.

However, we don't know who exacly says "If I knew you were gonna scream in my face for coming to get you, then I wouldn't have come at all." I know it's your style of writting but in dialogues I use more dashes to separate words of the characters and words of the narrator. For example

-NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! - Luna cried as well. - Now we can change the channel.