User blog comment:AnimationFan15/Fanfiction - Stop and Smell the Roses/@comment-26901681-20161029043931

I like how you added a did you know section again. There are some nice fun facts in there. I noticed that this fanfiction was shorter than your previous work but that is fine since you were able to get your point across that Lola didn't like this alternate reality. I also liked how there were only four sisters that ended up bothering Lola. I don't see a need of getting every sister involved. Overall it was great and I'm glad to see a fanfic where Lola is not considered as an antagonist for a change.