Thread:BigFanofEntertainment/@comment-30953185-20170710023336/@comment-26302585-20170710030456

I just read it, and it was nice. However, there are a couple things I need to brig up. Why was Lincoln trying to argue with his sisters that he should be your only best friend? It kinda makes him look like a hypocrite, because he has another best friend, who is Clyde. Maybe you could add a line from Lincoln about him realizing and admitting how hypocritical he was being. Also, when Lincoln tells you "We're if we pressuring you to pick one of us as your best friend" You forgot the word "sorry" in that sentence. Lastly, I read in the triva that CircularBoat742 gave you to put spaces between line. Did he mean to space them twice? Because that's what it looks like. It's not bad, but it looks a little odd to me.

Just a question, does this story take place in the early days of you being friends with the Louds and before you and Leni were a couple? Because some of the dialogue makes it appear so.

Overall, it was pretty solid.