User blog:0640carlos/The Death of Lincoln Loud

This fanfic is darker and this is how I thought about how the ending of "Requiem for a Loud" by UnderratedHero will be.

[The day has come, in the hospital where Lincoln lies on the bed with his family and close friends come to say their goodbyes. The doctor joins them]

Doctor: Lincoln, I think the time has come to say goodbye to the ones you loved.

[The girls started to cry as their brother begins to die. Lynn stayed behind from the group as she was very emotional because she believes that she was responsible for everything that happen. Lynn kicking the ball at Lincoln very hard cause one of his tumors was blocking an artery in his brain, which cause to be dislodge. Lincoln looks at his parents and they shed tears from their eyes]

Rita: *crying* I can't believed it. Our only son, dying from his brain dislodge.

Lynn Sr.: I know. I wish it wasn't true, but we can do anything now.

Lincoln: Mom? Dad?

Lynn Sr.: Yes Lincoln?

Lincoln: I just wanted to say I love you. I love you two for taking care for me.

Rita: *sniffs* We love you too Lincoln. *continues crying*

Lynn Sr.: Lincoln, I hope you have a good time in the afterlife.

Lincoln: Thank you.

[Lincoln hugs his parents. Lynn Sr. turn attention to his daughters including Clyde, Bobby, and Ronnie Anne]

Lynn Sr.: Everyone, it's time.

[Lori goes first. Her eyes was cover with mascara. She takes Lincoln's hand]

Lori: Lincoln... I never get a chance to say it, but.. I love you so much. I've been so mean and bossy to you. Because I was put an attention to my phone, I forgot about our love.

Lincoln: Lori, you don't to be. I know you're an oldest, but I knew you always have love to me and the others.

Lori: Oh Lincoln, I... I... *starts weeping* I don't you to leave! I don't care what the doctors say! I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU! *continues weeping*

WIP