User blog comment:MysteriousMalice/The Loud House in: The Eyes (First fic on this site.)/@comment-32202721-20190620194523

On the positive side, I do like the idea of the fourth wall observers being a constantly looming presence throughout Lincoln's life. I could see that being the basis for a pretty compelling existential horror story. I also like the way he refers to his viewers as "the eyes", because good lord that's ominous.

On the negative side, the story gets sidetracked halfway through just to have him complain about No Such Luck and... I'll be honest, I'm not sure who the "Others" are supposed to be and I don't think I'm going to like the answer.