User blog comment:Weavillain/Fanfiction Spotlight: Louds vs Loud/@comment-32202721-20170822214039

Just got through with it... and I noticed a small error. In Chapter 5, Lynn said that the score stood at 13 to 4 in Luan's favor. But I was keeping track as I read the story, and I noticed that the Louds had pranked Luan five times, not four.

First, Lynn and Luna dragged her mattress outside while she was asleep (1), then they got her with the bucket of water (2), then Lisa replaced her toothpaste with Icy Hot (3), then Lincoln and Lucy sicced the bats on her (4), and then Lana got her with the shaken-up soda gag (5). The Louds should have had one more point than her at the end of the day.

But other than that, it was a joy to read. Leni coming through in the climax to equalize the score was just awesome; as soon as they tied her up to stop her from triggering any more traps, I knew the author would have her save the day in the end. And it works, because she actually gets the upper hand on Luan in a believable way that doesn't force her to act smarter than she is. Loved the ending, too, for the reasons you pointed out.