User blog:007Jamesdean/Carol's Greatest Birthday

It starts in the Living Room. Everything in the house was all decorated in purple.

Me: This is gonna be so exciting guys. (To the Viewers) I'm sure you're all wondering why we're in the living room and everything is all decorated. Well today's a special day. It's Carol's Birthday and we set up a special birthday party for her.

Lincoln: That's right guys and Vince took Carol out of the house to avoid suspicion while we set everything up. We have lots of things set up for her. We have a great cake, games and the Redemption Squad is gonna put on a show for her.

Paige: It's gonna be awesome Linky.

Lilly: You said it Paige.

Vince: (Acting) I'm gonna walk up the door and open it now.

Me: They're here. Hide!

We hid in different spots.

Vince and Carol came in and he turned on the lights and we jumped out.

All: SURPRISE!!!!!

Carol: (Gasps in Excitement) OH WOW!

Lori: Happy Birthday Carol. (Hugs her)

Carol: Thank you guys! You all remembered!

Me: We wouldn't forget your birthday Carol.

Varie: That's right. Your birthday is important to us.

Leni: Totes. I planned everything for you.

Cody: It's gonna be awesome for you.

Carol: Oh thanks guys. You're the best.

Me: Well guys lets party!

We had great food and it was awesome. It was then time for presents.

Lynn Sr.: All right guys it's time for presents!

Carol: Oh boy!

The there was a huge stack of birthday presents on the table.

Carol: I don't know where to start.

Laney came up with her present first.

Laney: You can start with my present first Carol.

Carol: Thanks Laney.

Carol opened the present and it was a painting she made. The painting was a picture of Carol riding on King Ghidorah's back as she was travelling through the endless reaches of space.

Carol: Laney this is beautiful!

Laney: I painted it myself and J.D. helped me.

Carol: Oh thanks guys. (Hugs Laney)

Laney: You're welcome sis.

Me: Same here Carol.

Lisa: You can open mine next.

Carol opened Lisa's present and it was a special watch.

Lisa: It's a special multi-function watch I invented. It has over 1,212 functions and it will suit your everyday needs.

Me: That's spiffy.

Carol: That's fancy. Thank you Lisa.

Lisa: You're welcome.

Lana, Lola and Lila's: Open ours.

Lana's present was on a wagon.

Carol: Okay. I'll start with Lola's.

She opened her present and it was a make up set.

Carol: A make up set. I love these colors of purple! Thank you Lola.

Lola: You're welcome Carol.

Carol: Now for Lana's.

She opened Lana's present and it was an aquarium with beautiful fish.

Carol: Oh wow! It's an aquarium!

Lana: I picked out the fish and got you the supplies for it.

Carol: They are beautiful. Thank you Lana.

Lana: You're welcome.

Carol opened Lila's present and it was a necklace. It was a purple jewel necklace.

Carol: Lila this is beautiful!

Lila: I picked it out myself and figured it would be perfect.

Carol: Well thanks guys.

Lana, Lola and Lila: You're welcome Carol.

She hugged them.

Lynn: You can open mine next.

Carol: Okay Lynn.

Carol opened Lynn's present and it was an autographed Baseball signed by the entirety of the Detroit Tigers and the entirety of the Colorado Rockies.

Carol: An Autographed Baseball.

Me: Yep. Me and Lynn went to the Baseball Game. The Detroit Tigers and the Colorado Rockies were playing and Lynn caught a grand slam home run ball. We decided to have it autographed by both teams and give it to you for your birthday.

Lynn: That's right.

Carol: That's so cool! And that's perfect J.D. because you're from Colorado. Thanks guys.

Me: You're welcome Carol.

Lynn: Sure thing Carol.

Luan: My present is a joke. What did the grumpy birthday candle say at the party?

Carol: I don't know. What?

Luan: Birthdays burn me up. (Rimshot)

We all laugh.

Me: (Laughs) That was a good one Luan!

Eddy: (Laughs) That was awesome!

Carol: (Laughs) That was a good one Luan!

Luan: Thanks Carol.

Lucy: My present is a poem. It's called Carol.

Carol: Okay Lucy.

Maggie starts playing bongos.

Lucy: (Clears throat)

"Carol, an angel of incredible power, who can destroy villains from a tower. She has a heart of gold that can make bad guys go cold. She is the most amazing girl in town and her achievements are widely renowned. Carol"

We snap our fingers like at a poetry club.

Me: Great poem Lucy.

Carol: That was a great poem Lucy.

Haiku: Me and Lucy were working on it and Maggie provided the bongos.

Maggie gave her the thumbs up.

Me: It sounded like we were at a poetry club.

Carol: It sure did. Great job. Thank you Lucy.

Lucy: You're welcome Carol.

Leni: You can open mine next.

Carol: Okay Leni.

Leni's present was a purple plaid sleeveless trenchcoat.

Carol: Leni this is beautiful!

Leni: I made it with purple plaid fabric and sleeveless trench coats are totes trending now.

Carol: It's beautiful. I love it. Thank you Leni.

Leni: You're totes welcome Carol.

A montage of presents is shown. I gave Carol a light saber, Varie gave Carol a book on Water Magic, Cody gave Carol a book on Dark Magic, Aylene gave Carol a book of Dinosaurs, Hercules & Zoe gave her books on elemental magic, Lori gave Carol a gift card for the mall, Luna gave Carol a Violin and a CD from Mick Swagger, Sam gave her a book of some of her favorite songs, Shannon gave her a book of Light Magic and a CD from the Hex Girls, It was a really long list.

Rita: Wow! That's a lot of presents you guys got.

Vince: I've saved the best for last. Carol can you stand up please?

Carol: Sure Vince.

Carol did so.

Vince: Now Carol I have one more thing that will make your 18th birthday the best one ever. When I first met you I was immediately struck by Cupid's Arrow for you and it was the greatest feeling I've ever had. But now I want it to last forever.

Carol got the biggest shock of her life when Vince got on one knee and he had a beautiful purple diamond engagement ring and it was 18K yellow gold and it had pink, blue and white diamonds on it. Right in front of our eyes we saw Vince popping the question.

Vince: Carol Pingrey Loud, Will You Marry Me?

Carol: Oh Vincey. yes of course I'll marry you!

They hugged and kissed and we cheered wildly for them.

Me: (Sniffles) That was so beautiful!

Varie: I'm so happy for them!

Rachel: Me too!

Vince put the ring on her finger and it was the happiest moment ever for them.

Me: Way to go partner!

Vince: Thanks partner.

Megan: Way to go big bro!

Sarah: That was awesome!

Vince: Thanks sisters.

Megan and Sarah hugged him and Carol.

Starfire: Robin isn't it romantic?

Robin: it sure is Star.

Cyborg: It's about time.

Beast Boy: Yep. I'm happy for them.

Rita: (Voice Breaking) Oh Lynn isn't that the most wonderful sight ever?

Lynn Sr.: It sure is honey.

Me: All right. We have a show for you guys.

Lynn Sr.: Oh yeah. All right everyone it's showtime!

We sat in front of the stage.

Me: Now we have two songs being performed by our very own Redemption Squad. First of all Congratulations on the Future Newlyweds and we're looking forward to the future wedding.

Vince & Carol: Thanks J.D.

Me: You're both welcome. Now let the show begin.

The music played and the curtains rose up.

Maria: They say I'm trouble They say I'm bad They say I'm evil And that makes me glad

William: A dirty no-good Down to the bone Your worst nightmare Can't take me home

Elena: So I've got some mischief In my blood Can you blame me? I never got no love

Venom: They think we're callous A low-life hood We feel so useless

All: Misunderstood!

Maria and Elena: Mirror, mirror on the wall Who's the baddest of them all? Welcome to my wicked world, wicked world!

Chorus: I'm rotten to the core, core Rotten to the core I'm rotten to the core, core Who could ask for more? I'm nothing like the kid next, like the kid next door I'm rotten to the, I'm rotten to the I'm rotten to the core

Maria: Call me a schemer Call me a freak How can you say that? I'm just... unique! (turns into her water form)

William: What, me? A traitor? Ain't got your back? Oh, we're not friends What's up with that? (kisses Maria on the cheek, making her giggle)

Elena: So I'm a misfit So I'm a flirt I broke your heart? I made you hurt?

Venom: The past is past Forgive, forget The truth is You ain't seen nothing yet!

Maria and Elena: Mirror, mirror on the wall Who's the baddest of them all? Welcome to my wicked world, wicked world!

(Instrumental bridge)

Chorus: I'm rotten to the core, core Rotten to the core I'm rotten to the core, core Who could ask for more? I'm nothing like the kid next, like the kid next door I'm rotten to the, I'm rotten to the I'm rotten to the core

We cheered for the first song.

William: We have one last song to play for you all and congratulations Carol and Vince.

Carol: Thank you William.

William: You're welcome. Here we go.

Another song played.

Maria, Elena, William, & Venom: We got all the ways to be W-I-C-K-E-D We got all the ways to be W-I-C-K-E-D

Come on! Hey, hey, hey, hey Hey, hey, hey, hey Hey, hey, hey, hey Hey, hey, hey, hey

Maria: Crashing the party Guess they lost my invitation Friendly reminder Got my own kind of persuasion

Venom: Looks like this place could use A bit of misbehavior Happily ever after With a little flavor

William: We're bad to the bone With even worse intentions We're gonna steal the show And leave 'em all defenseless

Elena: A fairy tale life can be Oh-so overrated So raise your voices and Let's get it activated

Maria, Elena, William, & Venom: Long live havin' some fun We take what we want There's so many ways to be wicked With us evil lives on the right side of wrong There's so many ways to be wicked

Apple, apple Dip, dip Wanna try it? Tick, tick Take a bite Come on, be bold Change the way the story's told

Maria: This time the dark is Finally getting your attention

Elena: We're wicked by the book And class is back in session

William: You like it, steal it Gotta beat 'em to the treasure

Venom: A rite of passage Maria, Elena, William, & Venom: Bad just doesn't get much better

Long live havin' some fun We take what we want There's so many ways to be wicked With us evil lives on the right side of wrong There's so many ways to be wicked

Maria: Mother always knows best Elena: Show her, pass every test Venom: Hear her voice in my head William: Evil is the Maria, Elena, William, & Venom: Only real way to win

We got all the ways to be (Hey, hey, hey, hey) W-I-C-K-E-D William: Let's go! Maria, Elena, William, & Venom: We got all the ways to be (Hey, hey, hey, hey) W-I-C-K-E-D

Long live havin' some fun We take what we want There's so many ways to be wicked With us evil lives on the right side of wrong There's so many ways to be wicked

Cruel and unusual We're taking control There's so many ways to be wicked With us evil lives on the right side of wrong There's so many ways to be wicked

(Hey, hey, hey, hey) We got all the ways to be W-I-C-K-E-D We got all the ways to be W-I-C-K-E-D We got all the ways to be W-I-C-K-E-D We got all the ways to be So many ways to be wicked

We cheered wildly for them.

Me: That was awesome!

Lincoln: That was so cool!

Linka: It sure was!

Luna: Those songs were rockin'! Yeah!

Me: I have a great song for you guys. We're gonna show you a memory song from our halloween in 2016.

Carol: I heard you guys scared those meatheads Hawk and Hank with it.

Me: Bingo. This is how we did it.

Luna pulled out her organ and she was playing. My eyes were glowing red with bloodlust.

Luna and Me in a Diabolical voice:

"When darkness falls on the house of Loud

Around every corner, new terror abounds

You don't want to lose your head! Ha ha ha!"

You can run, but you can't hide

They know that you taste better alive

I don't think that they've been fed

In a long, long time

Every corner, every floor

Watch out, they ain't herbivores

Ghastly ghouls out for blood

Sorry, bud

You got tricked

You got tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got punked and pranked with a spooky twist

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Before you wet your pants, better get out quick

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Tricked, tricked, tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got...tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Beware of fangs and bloody fur

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">A Loud House chainsaw massacre

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">There's no chance that you'll get out

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Ghosts writing your eulogy

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Heads are rolling literally

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">So, who needs their mommy now?

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Spilling guts on the floor

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Clean up on aisle four

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Why you running off so soon?

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Sorry dude

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got punked and pranked with a spooky twist

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Before you wet your pants, better get out quick

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">Tricked, tricked, tricked

<p data-mce-style="text-align: center;" style="text-align:center;">You got...tricked

<p style="text-align:center;">[During the montage in the illusion, the Loud Sisters scare the stinkers with everything they throw at them. Luan brings Mr. Coconuts to life, Lisa and Lily act rabid, Lori acts like she's been feasting on Rita, Lynn turns on her chainsaw, Lola appears like a corpse, Lana acts as her ghost, Leni walks around blindly under her dress with Geo rolling in his ball with the fake head still on, Laney was stirring a monster filled pot and cackled like a real witch,

<p style="text-align:center;">Varie was in her dark side mermaid form and she terrified the stinkers by snarling and hissing and spraying the stinkers with water that smelled really horrible,

<p style="text-align:center;">I unveiled my surprise. I had my eyes covered by my hair and I start to change. I become a hideously gruesome and horrific monstrosity loaded with blood, guts, body parts, tentacles and more. I was a fusion of every single horrific monster from the movie THE THING! The monsters were from the 1982 and 2011 movies and the 2002 Video Game. Lightning flashed behind the monstrosity and flames from the Netherworld flickered around it and it scared the stinkers so bad that it made them soil their pants 3 times,

<p style="text-align:center;">and everything else in the maze terrifies them to the point where the sounds of their screams catches the attention of the other kids on the block and their screams also catch the attention of a nearby police car, and the stinkers run into Lucy who is blocking the exit]

Lucy: "The crimes you have committed this night shan't go unpunished. You reap what you sow."

[She slashes a rope with her scythe, dumping a bucket of fake blood on them, making them scream]

Hank: "Blood!"

Hawk: "I'm gonna puke!"

Hank: "If you're gonna puke, I'm gonna puke!"

A tentacle with a scary flesh flower covered in blood and slime appears in front of their faces and tentacles come out and slap their faces and the stinkers vomited all over the ground.

[As they run out screaming, Lucy gives a small smile of satisfaction]

Hank: [nauseous] "We're not...coming back here...again..."

[He and Hawk run off and a police car drives up and the officers come out]

Luna & Me: [finishing Luna's song] " You got...tricked. "

Officer Stacy: You two are under arrest.

We cheered wildly.

Me: Boy that was the most awesome Halloween ever.

Lori: It literally was.

Me: Oh Kate I'm sorry if I reopened old wounds because of everything you've been through down in Antarctica.

Kate: No it's all right J.D.

Me: I guess I should've warned you before we started.

Kate: Yeah but that was great how you scare them bad with everything I've been through.

Me: I watched both movies of The Thing and they were what I got the idea for it from.

Alice: (British Accent) What happened to her down there?

Me: She went through a very traumatic experience down in Antarctica and it was enough to scar her for life.

Alice: Oh no. I'm sorry Kate.

Kate: It's all right Alice. It was all a nightmare but I'm almost fully healed now.

Nora: Well that's a relief.

Lisa: Oh! I almost forgot. Siblings and friends. I have some great news for you all.

Me: What is it Lisa?

Lisa: I have managed to find a cure for Victor Fries' condition.

Me: That's great Lisa.

Lisa pulled out a glowing blue vial of a liquid.

Lisa: This is the antidote for his condition. It will reverse the effects that were done to him because of the Cryogenic Chemicals.

Me: Lets give it to him.

Lisa: Affirmative.

We went down to the basement and Lisa gave me an auto injector.

Lisa: You must give this to him in frigid temperatures J.D.

Me: Okay.

I put on my fur parka and knock on the door to his room.

Victor: Come in.

Me: Hello Victor.

Victor: Oh hello J.D.

Me: I have some great news for you. Lisa found the antidote to your condition.

Victor: She did?

Me: She did. It's in this auto injector.

Lisa came in and she had a fur parka on.

Lisa: Now this will cause excruciating pain as it takes effect.

Victor: Okay. Thanks for the warning.

Me: Are you ready Victor?

Victor: I am J.D.

Me: Okay.

Victor: What was all the cheering going on upstairs?

Me: It's Carol's birthday today.

Victor: I'm sorry I couldn't be there.

Me: Don't worry. If this antidote works you'll have time to catch up. We have to strap you down before we inject it.

Victor: Okay.

We did so and I had the Auto Injector on his arm.

Me: Here we go.

I injected the serum into him and it took effect right away as he was screaming in pain and he was thrashing around. My infrared vision showed that his body temperature was rising fast. It was already at 62 degrees.

Me: It's working!

The pain went away and Victor's skin returned to its normal color and my infrared vision showed that his temperature was back at 98.6 degrees for the first time in a while.

Me: How do you feel Victor?

Victor got up as we unstrapped him and he felt the stinging cold of the room.

Victor: It's really cold in here!

Me: It worked! He's cured! Way to go Lisa.

Lisa: Thank you J.D.

I put a fur park on him and we walked out and everyone gasped in shock as Victor was back to his normal self.

Me: It worked guys.

Nora: Oh Victor!

They hugged and it was a great moment. We cheered for them. Victor was back to his normal self.

Lily: I'm so happy for the both of you!

Victor: Thank you Lily.

Me: Lisa invented the Antidote and she's the one that cured him.

Victor: Yes. I am forever grateful to Lisa and all of you for working hard to cure me.

Lisa: You're welcome Victor.

Me: Now we can make sure that Ferris Boyle pays for his crimes.

Victor: That's right.

Me: Carol how would like to dish out some justice against him?

Carol: I would like that.

Carol went into her Ace Savvy Persona:

THE SWIFT QUATTRO

Carol: Time to deal out some justice!

Me: Lets get him!

We went out to Gotham and at GothCorp, Carol smashed in through the window and she was ready to fight.

Boyle: Who are you?

Carol: Someone you just made angry when you tried to kill Victor Fries.

Boyle: Fries? They're dead.

Carol: No. They're not dead. You left them to die but they survived and Victor tried to destroy you. We cured him of the pain you caused him and now you're gonna pay for ruining his life.

Boyle: We shall see!

Boyle pulled out a machine gun and Carol ran with super speed and she punched him in the face. She kicked the gun out of his hands and threw some kunai and pinned him to the wall.

Carol: You're gonna pay for your crimes Boyle.

Commissioner Gordon and Gotham P.D. came in.

Commissioner Gordon: Ferris Boyle you're under arrest for Fraud, Wire Fraud, Attempted Murder and Corruption. You're going away for good.

Boyle: You can't arrest me!

Me: Oh they can. Your finished Boyle. It's over for you.

Victor and Nora arrived.

Boyle: (Gasps in Shock) Victor? Nora? You're both alive!?

Victor: That's right and it was because of you that I became Mr. Freeze and it was thanks to J.D. and his friends and the Loud Siblings that they not only reunited us but also cured me of my condition.

Nora: You tried to kill us and that's something we can never forgive.

Commissioner Gordon: You're looking at a long prison sentence for your crimes. Take him away.

They did so.

Me: Great job Carol.

Carol: Thanks J.D.

Commissioner Gordon: Congratulations on catching him for us. J.D. told us everything that Boyle was doing and what he did to Victor and Nora.

Carol: Thanks Commissioner Gordon.

Commissioner Gordon: You're welcome and happy birthday and congratulations on the future wedding.

Carol: Thank you sir.

Ferris Boyle was sentenced to 150 years in Federal Prison without parole. He was also ordered to pay Victor and Nora $200,000,000,000.00 in restitution.

This was the best birthday for Carol Pingrey.

THE END

Another Fanfiction Complete.

NicoChan11 gave me the idea for Carol's Birthday Party and the songs from Disney's The Descendents. Thanks for that man. I wanted to include the idea of Vince proposing to Carol on her birthday as well as curing Victor Fries. Let me know what you all think.

See you all next time.