User blog:Steven A. Lucas/Steven Lucas in The Loud House: Tricked Part Three (FANFIC)

Hello, once again. Steven Lucas here. Welcome to part three of my version of The Loud House Halloween Special, Tricked! As you may know from where we left off, both Hawk and Hank told me and the Louds the truth on why they came in the first place. This is considered a standalone sequel to The Loudest Yard. In this part of my version, I've added on of the harshest moments that I've wrote, it's where the Louds and I blamed Lincoln and Clyde. On the plus, I've added more scenes where Lucy called a family meeting and we teamed up to scare both Hawk and Hank from The Loudest Yard, just to make Lincoln and Clyde apologize for what they did. It also involves a montage of the Louds fixing the corn maze, making it more scarier, along with the help of the characters I've made up. Keep in mind, they are referenced from either characters from horror movies, or famous movie directors. I do not own the rights of the characters, the stories, and the show. It belongs to the creators, the owners, the writers, and the staff. Enjoy!

Tricked! (Part Three)

Originally Written by Sammie Crowley, Whitney Wetta, & Kevin Sullivan

Re-Written by Steven Lucas

[It starts from where we left of as the girls are closing up the maze.]

Lincoln: "Guys, what's going on? Why are the streets deserted, and why are you taking down your maze?"

Steven: There is nothing to talk about Lincoln, but look at our haunted corn maze, it’s ruined.

Lincoln: Why, what’s wrong?

Lucy: "Nobody showed up. All my work for nothing. Not a single scream. Sigh."

Clyde: "Nobody showed up? Why not?"

Lola: "Because two big stinkers came along and ruined everything!"

Lana: "Yeah! They TP'd all the trees and smashed all the Jack-O-Lanterns."

Lola: "And worst of all, they stole everybody's candy!"

Lisa: "And with the amount of candy I had, we're talking grand larceny."

[Lincoln and Clyde huddle up]

Clyde: "Two big stinkers? You don't think it was the guys we told to come here, do you?"

Lincoln: "No way, Clyde. There's plenty of big stinkers in our neighborhood."

Clyde: "True."

Lana: [anguished] "I'll never shake the sound of their big dumb laughs."

Clyde: "Wait. Didn't those guys have big dumb laughs?"

Lincoln: "Clyde, plenty of people have big dumb laughs."

Clyde: "True."

Lola: [vengeful] "And  I'll  never forget those creepy baby-faced masks!"

Clyde: "Wait. Didn't those guys-"

Lincoln: "Okay, Clyde, it was them."

Steven: And we've learned the truth before you guys came back.

Lincoln: Wait. How did you know?

Steven: Those two stinkers came here and destroyed the neighborhood, then they came by to us and said that you two are responsible for bringing them here and destroyed all the fun.

''[Then, his siblings and Rita pop up, and they’re angry towards Lincoln and Clyde. Lynn approaches to Lincoln and Clyde and takes off her mask.]''

Lynn: This is all your fault, Stink-oln!

Lincoln: Why me? All I wanted was those full-size candy bars.

Lola: [angry] Wait, that’s where you two went, while we split up!

Lincoln: No, it’s not what you think. Uh…

Steven: [upset] You and your friend went to Huntington Manor.

Lincoln: [aggravated] Steven! How did you know?

Steven: I saw your plan before you left.

Lincoln: Come on, I just wanted to have a best Halloween ever.

Lola: Don’t even talk to me, Halloween-ruining jerk.

Lincoln: But you’re my little twin sister.

Lana: Leave her alone.

Lucy: [upset] Yeah, and you did this.

[Then, the Loud family shouted at Lincoln and Clyde.]

Clyde: This is really bad, Lincoln.

Steven: I’m sorry, but I am very disappointed in you.

Lori: Nice job Lincoln, you and your best friend basically ruined Halloween.

Luna: Yeah, dude. We’re not proud for what you did.

Rita: Since those punks told the truth, Lincoln. You are in very big trouble, and I have no choice. But you are grounded for a month. Starting tomorrow, you clean up this mess, first thing in the morning.

Lincoln: But mom. Please I’ve buried the candy that no one can find. I didn’t mean to let them trash the neighborhood. I can still give them candy, just let me dig it out and give it out to them.

Steven: I’m sorry Lincoln, but you let us down. And you even let me down. But now it’s too late. Because my first Halloween is over.

Lucy: There goes my dream I’ve wanted.

Lincoln: Come on, me and Clyde can still fix this.

Steven: I’m sorry Lincoln. Just leave us alone for a while.

Lisa: "Ugh. All Hallow's Eve, street name Halloween, is clearly ruined."

''[The other sisters go back inside greatly upset of what happened. Lily crawls by sighing with despair.]''

Lincoln: [riddled with guilt] "This is all our fault, Clyde! We led those stinkers right to my street!"

Lincoln and Clyde: "We ruined Halloween!"

Lincoln: I can’t believe they grounded me. But worse, I’ll never see you again.

Clyde: "Why didn't Dr. Lopez tell me the pitfalls of looking out for me?"

Lincoln: "We gotta fix this, Clyde."

Clyde: "I'm with you. But how?"

Lincoln: "Well, we can't unsmash the Jack-O-Lanterns, and it's too late to get people to come to the maze. But we  can  get everybody's candy back."

Clyde: [scared] "From those two big scary guys who could twist us into human pretzels and dip us in a sauce of their choosing?"

Lincoln: "What choice do we have?"

Clyde: "I guess you're right. I hope at least it's honey mustard."

[The boys, now out of their costumes, are walking the streets.]

Lincoln: "First, we gotta find those guys. But it won't be easy. We don't even know where to start looking."

Clyde: [notices something] "How about that trail of candy wrappers?"

Lincoln: [sees said trail] "That should work."

[The boys follow the trail until a gust of wind blows the wrappers away.]

Lincoln: "No, our trail!"

Clyde: [shaking Lincoln vigorously] "What are we gonna do now?"

[Some familiar laughter goes off.]

Lincoln and Clyde: [gasp] "The big dumb laughs!"

[Hank and Hawk are eating candy and dragging their sacks down the path while tossing wrappers on the ground.]

Hank: "Pretty awesome booty, bro."

Hawk: "Thanks, bro. I've been doing squats."

Hank: "Not you, the candy."

Hawk: "Oh. Right."

[Lincoln and Clyde follow them to their hideout which is a treehouse.]

Clyde: "I don't know which is worse: the stealing or the littering?"

Lincoln: "We need a plan." [comes up with one] "I know! We train some squirrels to go in and attack them. While they're busy getting rabies, we grab the candy."

Clyde: "I like the wildlife approach, but I was thinking we get a beaver to chew down the tree."

Lincoln: "Or we hypnotize those guys so they fall asleep."

Clyde: "Or, building off of that, I put them to sleep by playing the lullabies my dads put on my phone." [takes out phone] "Of course, I'd have to put in earplugs so  I  don't fall asleep."

[While they're planning, some groaning is heard.]

Hawk: [queasy] "Ugh. I ate too much candy."

Hank: "Aw, you'd better not puke, 'cause that'll make me puke."

Hawk: "I think I'm just gonna pass out."

Hank: "Aw, dude, if you pass out, then I'll-"

[They thud and pass out]

Lincoln: "I think they just made a plan for us."

Clyde: [wearing earplugs] "WHAT?!"

Lincoln: [hushes him] "Shh!"

Clyde: [takes out plugs] "Sorry, I had my earplugs in."

''[Lincoln and Clyde climb up into the treehouse quietly and see Hawk and Hank are still asleep. Clyde notices that the sack is tucked near them. Lincoln quietly steps on a floorboard that creaks and freezes. Luckily, it doesn't wake up the stinkers and they switch out the sack with a stick to rest Hank's head on. They try to get the sack out through the door, but it's not wide enough. They notice a window and try to push the bag through, but something starts breathing heavily around Clyde.]''

Clyde: "Lincoln, stop breathing so hard. You're fogging up my glasses."

Lincoln: [under the sack] "Uh, Clyde, I'm down here."

''[The boys notice that the stinkers are awake now and ready to pummel them. The scene cuts to a pretzel to leave out the pummeling happening off-screen and changes to Lincoln and Clyde now as human pretzels in a dumpster, groaning in pain.]''

Clyde: "I guess the dipping sauce of their choosing was garbage."

Hawk: "All this butt kicking has worked up my appetite. Let's go finish off the candy."

Hank: "We'll see you doofuses next Halloween. And tell your neighbors no more dark chocolate. We're milk chocolate guys."

[They laugh and leave]

Lincoln: "Clyde, we can't let these guys ruin everybody's future Halloweens."

Clyde: "I know, but what are we gonna do? Next time, they might twist us into garlic knots. Or French crullers."

Lincoln: "Clyde, you're spiraling."

Clyde: "I know. I'd better do my deep breathing before I get a nosebleed." [pauses] "Inhale one..." [inhales] "...exhale two." [exhales]

Lincoln: [inspired] "Wait a minute. Nosebleed. Clyde, do you remember the first time we ran into them?"

[Flashback to that encounter]

Hank: "Watch where you're going, doofuses!"

[Clyde suddenly has a nosebleed.]

Hawk: "Ugh! Blood! I think I'm gonna barf!" [groans]

Hank: "Aw, don't barf! That'll make me barf!" ''[they both groan. End flashback.]''

Clyde: "I see where you're going there. Blood! That's their one weakness!"

Lincoln: "Exactly. And I know where there's plenty of it."

Clyde: [picks up a dirty soda cup and holds it below his nostrils.] "Okay, I'll start thinking of Lori."

Lincoln: "No no, Clyde. Not you." [takes out his phone and calls Lucy on her personal phone.]

Lucy: [answers] "You rang?"

Lincoln: "Lucy, how would you like to have your haunted maze after all?"

[Lucy emerges from her coffin and gives off a slight smile.]

[At the living room, Lucy called in a family meeting, except Lynn Sr., Steven comes in, looking very sad.]

Steven: This better be good.

Lucy: Ahem, now that everyone’s here. Lincoln called me…

[The family groaned.]

Lori: What is he going to do, TP our house again.

Lynn: Or even throw pumpkins at us.

Lucy: No, He called to fix his mistakes that he made. But he and I had a plan.

Steven: Really, what plan is he talking about?

Lucy: He wants us to remake the corn maze and scare those two big stinkers out of our neighborhood and take back the spirit of Halloween.

Lola: How are we going to scare them? They basically want to do is make fun of us.

Lisa: Yeah, and they’ll eat more candy than why they took mine.

Lucy: Come on guys, he’s doing this was to apologize to us. I know that he’d let those two stinkers ruin the fun, but we are not giving up. I’m not letting my Halloween to be the worst. And most importantly, I’m not given up on the fun, the screams, and the terror this holiday should be. Who’s with me.

''[Lucy takes her hand out. The Louds seem a bit nervous on her and Lincoln’s plan. Steven stands up, walks up to Lucy, takes his hand and joins in.]''

Steven: I’m in. Even though, I might’ve gone little harsh on him and Clyde. But we must make this my first and best Halloween ever. And we’re doing it right. Halloween isn’t over yet!

Lucy: Anyone else.

[Then everyone stand up and joins in.]

The Loud siblings and Rita: We’re in!

[Lucy looks up at her family and Steven, as they are ready that Halloween isn’t over yet.]

Lucy: [happy] Alright let’s do this.

Steven: All screams on three.

Everyone: One! Two! Three! [screams gleefully]

''[Then, we get a montage of Steven and the Loud family setting up the maze, making it even scarier. The music plays ‘Pet Cemetery’ by The Ramones. Steven calls his friends for help. They bring over pumpkins to make more jack-o-lanterns, while George and Lisa are making a bucket of fake blood, with a little help from Lucy.]''

Lucy: Needs a little more molasses.

''[He accepts her critique and adds molasses. Heather and Sidney are putting makeup effects on both Lori and Rita, with some fake blood and pale makeup.]''

Heather: You both look so beautiful and scary.

Lori: Thank you, Heather.

Rita: Aww. Thanks, girls.

Sidney: A dear friend of Steven, is a friend to all of you.

''[Outside of the house, Edgar and Alfred are setting up the lighting of the maze. Steven picks out two of Lola’s dresses to Lana and Lola, they nodded happily, he accepts it. Nigel makes two wooden coffins at about Lana and Lola’s sizes. Steven comes up to him and compliments him.]''

Steven: Good work Nigel.

''[Nigel smiles back and gives him a thumbs up. Victor and Billy are setting up Dr. Frankenstein’s lair, while Lisa and David are fixing the equipment, and David pulls the lever to test lightning emerges. Steven smiles and nods. Eli, Mary, and John set up the projections for the maze. Fred operates the fog machine around the maze. Steven, Lucy, and the Loud siblings’ smiles, knowing all the hard work they put together.]''

Steven: Yeah! [wolf howls]

[Lucy gets out her megaphone to make an announcement.]

Lucy: Okay everyone! Get into your costumes and get to your places.

Steven: That’s right! Now, let’s go scare those two Halloween-ruining, bone-breaking punks out of our neighborhood!

The Loud siblings: Yeah! [they raise their fists]

To be concluded...