I pull things that seem off, are cliche, or have the potential to rub people the wrong way. Constructive criticism is absolutely essential when reviewing a fanfic unless the author actively rejects useful feedback. Lastly, I give a rating with a number from 0 to 10, with higher numbers being better scores. I also give a rank with one of the following: Z, F, D, C, B, A, and S. Once again, Z- is for if the author is barely even trying, and S+ is for the best fanfics.
Do yourself a favour and stop stalking Positron and harassing users just because you don't like their blogs. You already got yourself into trouble with staff before but now since Positron is a moderator, be respectful to him and others around you. Don't act like you're a victim when you clearly are not the victim because you are such a hypocritical user.
I know you were trying to help, but deleting them won't solve anything. When something appears on the internet, it's difficult to take them down. Especially since a Peeking Through the Fourth Wall roleplay featured both of them, and both were reviewed on a Fanfic Failure meme.
I aplologize if this sounds rude, but you really need to get over the Godsisters and Game Crashed. I'm sorry they upset you, but others were upset too and they have moved on. There are worse things in life than bad fanfics, and obsessing over them isn't going to help me, you, or anyone else.